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专题12 书面表达
NO.1 2022·江苏·盱眙
你的朋友Sandy是一名英国的交换生，也是野生动物俱乐部的一名成员，请以“My friend Sandy”为题，
用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
包括以下要点：
1. 外貌：长直发，总是面带微笑。
2. 爱好：喜欢旅行，曾游览过许多名胜；着迷于DIY……
3. 是野生动物俱乐部的一名成员，知道大熊猫现在濒临危险，数量越来越少，想出了两点措施来保护大熊
猫……
My friend Sandy
I have a friend called Sandy. She is an exchange student from the
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My friend Sandy
I have a friend called Sandy. She is an exchange student from the UK. She has long straight hair and always
smiles.
She likes traveling and has visited many places of interest. She is crazy about DIY. She can do a lot of things
herself.
She is a member of the wildlife club. She knows that giant pandas are now in danger and the number is getting
smaller and smaller. She came up with two ways to protect pandas. We should not cut down trees. Don’t throw food
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when visiting pandas in panda museums. Everyone should help protect the giant pandas.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，以“My friend Sandy”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文介绍一下朋
友Sandy。
2.写作指导：本文主要以第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。文章第一段介绍Sandy的个人
特征，她的外貌和性格等；第二段介绍Sandy的爱好；第三段描述她是野生动物俱乐部的一名成员，为保
护大熊猫提出了什么措施。最后要检查要点是否齐全，有无语法错误等。
NO.2 2021·湖北武汉
Anna是你们班的外籍同学，每个周末你都和她一起参观许多名胜古迹，请根据下列提示写一篇短文，
描述你的朋友Anna及你们上周日的活动。80个词左右。要点如下：
1.她13岁，来自澳大利亚。中等身高的她，有着一头长长的金黄色卷发。
2.她学习刻苦，乐于助人，和身边的人相处融洽。
3.她非常喜欢中国文化和美食，最喜爱的是饺子。
4.上周日天气晴朗，我们坐公交去了绿道。她骑了马，我搭了帐篷，都很开心。
5.我们看见一些孩子在放风筝。这是一次有趣的出行。
提示词 get along with [v.]与某人相处；the Greenway [n.]绿道；trip[n.]出行
Anna is a foreign student in our class. We visit many places of interest every weekend. Let me share
something about her and our last weekend.
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【参考范文】
Anna is a foreign student in our class. We visit many places of interest every weekend. Let me share
something about her and our last weekend. She is a 13-year-old girl. She comes from Australia. She is of medium
height with long curly blonde hair. She always studies hard. She is glad to help others, so she gets along well with
others. She loves Chinese culture and food, and her favorite food is dumplings.
It was sunny last Sunday. We went to the Greenway by bus. She rode a horse, and I put up a tent. We saw
some children flying kites. We had a good time. It was an interesting trip.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求描述与外籍同学Anna上周日的出行，短文包括介绍Anna的个人的信息和喜好及游
玩的经过。
2.写作指导：本文用第三人称写作，介绍Anna的个人的信息和她的喜好用一般现在时，介绍游玩的经过用
一般过去时。书写时要注意一般现在时、单三形式的正确使用和过去式的拼写。文句表达力求语法准确、
逻辑清楚。
NO.3 2021·广东·广州市黄广中学
五一节快到了，假如你是Jill，现在正和你的朋友们谈论假期做一些有意义的事情及理由。下面表格是
你们谈论的内容。请根据提示写一篇文章，80词以上，可适当发挥。（文章开头已经给出，不计入总词
数）
Persons Things Reasons
妈妈平时工作忙，照顾家很辛苦，让妈妈
Lisa 帮妈妈做家务
放松一下!
树能净化空气，美化环境；为我们提供很
Eric 植树
多东西!
Jill …… 1-2点
提示词：五一节 May DayMay Day is coming soon.
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May Day is coming soon. My friends and I are making our plans for it. Lisa wants to help her mother do the
housework. Because her mother is busy with her work. She thinks it’s a good way for her mom to relax. Eric wishes
to plant trees, because trees can purify the air and beautify the environment. They can also provide us with many
things! As for me, I’m ready to do some volunteer work in the old people’s home. I want to cheer them up, and
helping them also makes me feel happy.
Our holiday is sure to be very meaningful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，根据表格所给信息，介绍各自的五一计划，注意要点齐全，可适当增
加细节。
2.写作指导：本文采用第一人称和第三人称；时态使用一般现在时。文章分为两段式：第一段介绍朋友们
和自己的五一计划。第二段总结。在写作时要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.4 2021·广东·广州外国语学校
母爱情深，母爱无价；学会感恩，学会回报。2021年5月9日将是今年的母亲节，初一年级将举办以
“My mother”为题的英语征文活动，借此机会，给母亲表达你的情意。请你根据以下提示，写一篇不少于
80词的英语短文，介绍自己的母亲和你们的真情故事。
提示：
1. 个人情况基本介绍：年龄、工作、容貌、能力和爱好；
2. 母亲为“我”的付出；
3. “我”将如何回报母亲（至少两点）。
写作要求：
1. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，可作适当发挥；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
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3. 80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my
mother.______________________________________________________________________________________
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My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of
medium build with long black hair. She is warm-hearted. She is a teacher in a middle school. She likes singing and
dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She does a lot for me in my life. She buys whatever I need for my study. On weekends, she often takes me to
the park to enjoy nature so that I can have a good rest after studying. She cooks delicious and healthy food for me.
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college.
I’ll buy her beautiful clothes to make her look young. I will take her to visit places of interest.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求以“My mother”为题完成一篇短文，表达对母亲的情意，内容包括：介绍母亲的年
龄、工作、容貌、能力和爱好，陈述母亲在自己成长中的付出，最后讲述自己将来如何回报母亲。
2.写作指导：本文用第三人称书写，介绍母亲的年龄、工作、容貌、能力和爱好，叙述母亲在自己成长中
的付出用一般现在时，讲述自己将来如何回报母亲用一般将来时。书写时要紧扣主题，做到中心突出，内
容完整连贯。
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NO.1 2021·湖北武汉
假如你是Tom, 你有一个好朋友叫Tony, 请根据下面要点介绍Tony。
1. 与家人现居武汉。能说英语和一点中文；
2. 短发大眼睛中等身高。常穿运动鞋喜欢踢足球；
3. 上周末去乡下看望了爷爷奶奶每天钓鱼，喂鸡很有趣；
4. 他很喜欢吃中国菜觉得中国食物很美味；
5. 表达一至两点你对tony的评价和看法。
注意：1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数：60-80；
3. 内容连贯不要逐条翻译；
4. 短文的开头已给出不计入总词数。
参考词汇： live居住 sports shoes运动鞋 Chinese dishes中国菜
Tony is my good friend.
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Tony is my good friend. He lives in Wuhan with his family and can speak English and a little Chinese. He has
short hair, big eyes and medium height. He often wears sports shoes and likes playing football.
Last weekend, he went to the countryside to visit his grandparents. Every day, he fished and fed chickens.
He felt very interested. He likes Chinese food very much. Now he is eating dumplings in the restaurant. Hot dry
noodles and Wuchang Fish are famous snacks in Wuhan.
Welcome to Wuhan.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。内容是根据下面要点介绍Tony，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐
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全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：文章采用三段式，时态主要以一般现在时为主。人称主要为第三人称。第一段介绍的外貌；
第二段介绍他上周末的活动以及武汉的小吃；第三段是邀请来武汉旅游。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写
错误。
NO.2 2022·河北·石家庄市
假设你是李丽，早上出门前和妈妈吵了一架，放学回家后你发现家里没有人，而餐桌上放着你最爱吃
的菜，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你的所做所想。
提示：
提示词：hug 拥抱
注意：
1. 表达正确，语句通顺
2. 短文必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
3. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
I argued with my mother this morning.
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【参考范文】
I argued with my mother this morning. I was so angry that I left home and went to school. When I got home, I
found no one at home and my favorite dish was left on the table. I feel so sorry for my mother, I shouldn’t have
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quarreled with her. So I decided to do the housework to show my regret. When my mother came home at night, I
said I was sorry, and my mother forgave me. We hugged each other in joy.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片和提示内容描述今天的经历和自己的感受；注意要点齐
全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般过去时。作文要描述发生了什么，自己是怎么处理
的，有什么感受。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
NO.3 2022·全国
当你感到生活枯燥乏味时，当你沉溺于悲伤时，当你感到眼前的一切不再新鲜时，去旅游吧！单独出
发或是结伴而行，旅游总能带给你不同的体会。请你以“ I Like Traveling ”为题，写一篇短文，说一说旅
行的意义。
要求：观点明确，语句通顺，逻辑清晰。不少于60个词。
提示词：world 世界；scenery 风景；top 顶部；town 城镇
I Like Traveling
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I Like Traveling
When our life becomes dull and boring, we want to change, but have no way to do it, maybe traveling is the
best way. As I fell in love with traveling, things began to change. I can travel around the world, climb mountains or
visit a small town when I’m sad. And along the way, people who move on to the next journey tend to become more
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and more optimistic.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“ I Like Traveling ”为题，写一篇关于旅行意义的作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。写作时重点叙述旅行给自
己带来的不同体会以及旅行的意义何在。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误，条理清晰。
NO.4 2021·全国
请根据下面的提示以“My English teacher” 为题， 写一篇60词左右的短文介绍你的英语老师。
提示：
1. 外表：长得很好看，高高瘦瘦的，一头乌黑的长发，脸上总是挂着微笑。
2. 课堂：她的课堂很有趣，她总是开展各种各样的游戏；她还给我们讲笑话，逗我们笑。
3. 与学生的关系：她对我们的学习要求很严格；她总是很耐心、很友善，在我们有困难的时候总是鼓励我
们、支持我们。
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Gina is my favourite teacher. She teaches us English. She looks very beautiful. She is tall and thin with long
black hair. She always smiles at everyone.
I like her classes very much. Her classes are very interesting because she often uses lots of games in her
teaching. Besides, she often tells jokes to us and makes us laugh.
She is very strict about our studies. She is also kind and patient. She always encourages us and gives us
support when we are in trouble. So she gets on well with us. I like Gina very much.
【解析】
1.题干解读：题目要求以“My English teacher”为题，根据提示内容写一篇短文，介绍英语老师的外貌长相，
课堂，以及和学生的关系。可适当发挥。
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2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主，根据题目要求，可分三段式论述，
第一段描述英语老师的长相，第二段描述老师的课堂情况，第三段叙述师生关系。保证论述完整，条理清
晰。
NO.5 2022·全国
假设国庆节期间你打算与你的家人去北京旅行，请根据表格内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，介
绍一下你们的行程安排。
注意：短文的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
时间 行程安排
10.2 坐飞机去北京，上午10:30到达，下午欣赏京剧
10.3 上午去爬长城，下午去颐和园游玩并拍照
10.4 购物并品尝美食
10.5 乘火车返回
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______________________________________I’m looking forward to the trip and I’m sure we’ll have a good time
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I am planning to visit Beijing during the National Day holiday with my family. We’ll get there by air at 10: 30
a m, on October 2, and we can enjoy Beijing opera in the afternoon. We are going to climb the Great Wall on the
morning of October 3, and then visit the Summer Palace in the afternoon. We can take photos there. On October 4,
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we will do some shopping and try some delicious food. On the fifth of October, we will go back home by train.
I’m looking forward to the trip and I’m sure we’ll have a good time there.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求写一篇英语短文介绍国庆假期的行程安排；要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般将来时；采用第一人称口吻；可采用2段落格式，第一段：介绍4天具体
的行程安排；第二段：表达自己对假期的期待。写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
NO.6 2022·全国
你们班这周正在讨论在家应该养什么宠物。下表中是你及你们班部分同学最喜欢养的宠物，请你根据
所给内容，用英语写一篇短文，对此进行简单描述。
人物 喜欢的宠物 原因
Kitty 兔子 长长的耳朵很可爱
Simon 金鱼 不惹麻烦，不需要喂太多食物
Tom 猫 安静、友好，不用担心伤到别人
我 …… ……
要求：
1. 短文须包括上表中的所有要点，可适当发挥，使文章通顺、流畅；
2. “我”一栏请自由发挥1—2句；
3. 词数80左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。We’re talking about what pet we can keep at home.
Different people have different ideas.
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【参考范文】
We’re talking about what pet we can keep at home. Different people have different ideas.
Kitty likes rabbits best, because she thinks rabbits’ long ears are really lovely. She likes them very much.
Simon likes to keep goldfish at home, because they don’t make any trouble and he doesn’t need to feed them too
much. Tom loves cats, because cats are very quiet and friendly, and he doesn’t need to worry that his pet cat will
hurt others. I love parrots, so I have a parrot at home. My parrot can sing and I have fun teaching him to speak.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目是一篇记叙文写作。开头已给出。在写作时，要承接开头；按要求根据表格内容来叙
述每一人最喜欢养的宠物及其喜欢的原因。
2.写作指导：本文应用第三人称来描述同学们最喜欢养的宠物，第一人称来描述自己喜欢养的宠物；时态
采用一般现在时态；在写作时，描述要一一对应，包含表中的所有要点，把其最喜欢养的宠物及原因要清
晰完整地写出，保证文章通顺，条理清晰。
NO.7 2022·全国
你喜欢吃蛋糕吗？有没有自己动手做过呢？请根据以下内容描述一下它的制作过程。
(1) 打三个鸡蛋到一个玻璃碗中；
(2) 加入几块黄油；
(3) 加入500克面粉（flour）；
(4) 加入一些糖和3瓶牛奶；
(5) 搅拌均匀；
(6) 放入微波炉（microwave oven）加热5分钟。
要求：1. 语言通顺，条理清晰，无语法及拼写错误；
2. 70词左右，文章开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
First, get all the ingredients ready for it.
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First, get all the ingredients ready for it. We need three eggs, several pieces of butter, half a kilo of flour, some
sugar and three bottles of milk. We also need a spoon, a glass bowl and a microwave oven. Next, break the eggs
into the glass bowl, put several pieces of butter and the flour into the bowl and add some sugar and the milk. Then
mix them all up. Finally, put the bowl into the microwave oven and turn it on to heat for 5 minutes. The cake is
ready and we can enjoy it.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，描写制作蛋糕的过程，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当
的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；多用祈使句介绍；在
介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
NO.8
没有规矩不成方圆。每个人的生活都离不开规矩的约束。 你的家里有什么规矩呢？ 你是如何看待这些规
矩的呢？假如你叫 Tina，请根据内容提示以“My family rules”为题 写一篇英文短文。要求 60 词以上。
内容提示：
1. 不能晚回家；
2. 必须早睡早起；
3. 周一到周五不能看电视，玩电脑游戏；
4. 不能吃太多垃圾食品（junk food）。
【参考范文】
My family rules
Every family has its own rules. My family also has rules. Now, let me show you some of my family rules.
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Firstly, I can’t come back home late, because it’s dangerous for young girls to come back home late. Secondly, I
must go to bed and get up early before 6:30 every day, because I have to read English before going to school.
Thirdly, I can’t watch TV or play computer games from Monday to Friday. It’s not good for my study. Fourthly, I
can’t eat too much junk food. It’s not good for my health. The rules are very boring, but I know they are good for
me.
【解析】
题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要把给出的规矩具体写出，最后做出总结。
例文点评：例文采用一段式，用第一人称来叙述规矩的内容，时态采用一般现在时为主，描述规矩时，详
细具体，逻辑性强，条理清晰。
高分亮点：
短语：its own rules；come back home late；get up early；from Monday to Friday。
句型：Every family has its own rules；it’s dangerous for young girls to come back home late。
NO.9
每个人都有自己的兴趣爱好。假如你叫李明，最喜欢游泳，请根据下面的内容提示， 以“My favourite
hobby”为题写一篇作文，向大家介绍一下你最喜欢的爱好游泳。
要求：60 词左右，可适当发挥。
内容提示：
1. 爱好：游泳；
2. 时间：六岁开始游泳；
3. 喜欢原因：使人放松、有益于身体；
4. 地点：通常和好朋友在游泳池游泳，一周一次；
5. 梦想：将来想成为一名游泳运动员。
【参考范文】
My favourite hobby
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Hello, everyone! My name is Li Ming. As we all know, everybody has his own hobby. So do I and my
favourite hobby is swimming. I remember that I start to swim at the age of six. I think it is good for my health to go
swimming. Also, going swimming can make me feel relaxed after studying for a long time. As a result, I usually go
swimming with my good friends once a week in the swimming pool. Idream of being a swimming athlete in the
future after working hard.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，要求按照提示要点写一篇介绍兴趣爱好的作文。题目已经给出写作要
点。在写作中注意包含所有要点，注意时态问题以及衔接连贯。
2. 例文点评：例文很好地介绍了兴趣爱好。开篇很好地引出了写作主题。文章要点包含完整，时态运用正
确，描述现在的事情用一般现在时。语篇衔接连贯，条理清晰，逻辑清楚。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：as we all know；at the age of six；be good for；make me feel relaxed；as a result；once a week；dream
of doing；
句型：so do I；I remember that+从句；
【点睛】
进行材料作文写作时，注意包含题目要求的要点。梳理好清楚的逻辑顺序，把给出的要点有机地整合在一
起，保持条理清晰。可以适当使用连词，比如，also，as a result等使语篇更加衔接连贯。要学会根据写作
内容选择不同的时态。写完作文之后仔细检查，看是否存在语法、拼写等错误以及字数是否足够。平常多
积累短语、句型，写作时使用可锦上添花。
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