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专题11 书面表达精练精析15篇
1. 假设你的美国朋友Andy在微信中给你留言,询问你通常如何度过周末。请你根据下面表格中
的周末活动安排给他留言。要求:70词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
7:30 起床
8:00 吃早餐
上午
9:00 写作业
11:00 和朋友们游泳
2:00 和弟弟玩电脑游戏
下午
4:00 打扫房间
晚上 10:00 上床睡觉
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2.根据所给中文提示语,以"Saving the Earth''为题写一篇80字左右的段文。注意语句扩展,
意思连贯。段文开头已给出。
中文提示语:
1.任何保护环境已成为世界最大难题之一。
2.垃圾污染环境、损害健康,不要到处扔垃圾。
3.废水流到江里、湖里和田地里,污染农作物,杀死大量的鱼。
4.保持环境干净和整洁。我们只有一个地球,应该保护她,使我们的家园更加美丽。
所给词语:
pollute, harm, throw, rubbish, pour, try one's best ,How to protect the environment becomes…..
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3.地球是我们的家园,但是人们乱砍树木,乱扔垃圾,使我们的家园变脏,空气质量变差。我们
应该保护地球。请你根据以下提示,写一篇题为"How to protect the Earth"的短文。60词左右。
提示:①不随地扔垃圾;②种植更多的树木;③出行尽量骑自行车或坐公交车。
How to protect the Earth
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4.下周你校要组织全体学生去保利剧院听音乐会,你们班主任要求班长组织班上学生先进行
文明礼仪学习。假如你是班长,请写一篇90字左右的文章来宣讲good manners in a theater.
主要内容如下:
1.不要迟到,排队入场;
2.不四处走动,保持安静;
3.不使用闪光照相(flash photo),手机静音;
4.不吃东西,不乱扔拉圾。
注意:1.文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名。
2.内容可适当扩展。
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5.暑假即将来临,你打算外出旅行。那么你打算去哪里呢?请你根据下面的要点和要求,写
一篇英语短文,谈谈你的旅行计划。
1.要点:(1)你想和谁一起去哪里旅行?
(2)你怎样去哪儿旅行?
(3)那里的天气怎么样?你将带些什么物品?
2.要求:(1)语言表达准确,短文通顺连贯,书写规范整洁;
(2)根据提示适当发挥,不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
(3)100词左右。
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6.假如你寒假期间要去英国度假,请根据以下提示写一篇短文介绍你的旅行计划。
提示:
1. 2月16号坐飞机去伦敦;
2. 参观英国的伊丽莎白塔(Elizabeth Tower);
3. 给朋友买礼物;
4. ……
要求:
1. 包含所有提示内容,适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数。)
I will go to the U. K. for my winter holiday. ______________________________________________
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7.以My favourite outdoor activity为题,写一篇短文,字数在70词左右。
1. What outdoor activity are you interested in?
2. Why are you interested in it? ( at least two reasons ).
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My favourite outdoor activity
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8.假设你叫Sofia,暑假就要来啦!你是否有计划进行今年暑假的第一次旅行呢?请根据下面
的提示写一篇短文,向大家介绍一下吧!
1. 要点:
1)你打算去哪里?你要跟谁去?
2)你们想要怎么去?准备带什么去?
3)安排的有什么活动?记住旅行时要保证安全。
2. 要求:
1)文中不得出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
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2)词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! My name is Sofia. The summer holidays are coming.
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9.回想你一次难忘的旅行,请你以“An Unforgetful Trip”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下那次
行程,内容包括:
(l)When did you go? Who was with you?
(2)Where did you go? How did you go there?
(3)What did you do and see there? Did you enjoy yourself? Why?
要求:(1)字数110词左右(2)不要透露个人和学校信息
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10.作为一名中学生,你的业余生活丰富多彩吗?请根据下面的内容要点,以“My free time”
为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你的业余生活。
内容包括:
1. 你是一名中学生,学习忙碌但业余生活仍然丰富多彩。
2. 具体地谈谈你的业余生活,如做运动、看书、看电视、上网、做家务等,并简要说明你业
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余做这些事情的原因。
My free time
I am a middle school student. Though I'm busy with my lessons, my free time is still colourful.
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11.不同的人有不同的爱好,你的爱好是什么?请你以“My Hobby”为题,写一篇不少于70词的英
语短文。内容可适当发挥。
要求:句子通顺,语言流畅,标点符号运用正确。
My Hobby
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12.假如你上星期天参加英语俱乐部的活动,请按下面的提示,写一篇80词左右的文章。提示:
1.八点起床,然后吃完早餐,骑自行车到深圳图书馆。
2.看到很多人站在大树下,用英语谈论各种各样的事。
3.通过参加英语俱乐部,你学会了很多。如:交了很多朋友,提高了英语口语水平。
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13.假设你是林敏,看了下而海报之后想加入学校的English Club。诸根据下面提示完成下面的
申请信,不少于70词。开头与结尾己经给出,不计入总词数。可适当发挥。
English Club
Are you good at English listening and speaking?
Now is your chance!
Activities: Watch English movies; Learn English songs;
Hold English talent show.
Time: Every Tuesday, Thursday 6:30—8:00 p.m.
Come on and join us! Please write to Miss Pei!
内容要点提示:
1.Why do you want to join the English Club?
2. Which activity do you like best in the club?
3. What else do you want to do in the club?
Dear Miss Pei,
I’m Lin Min. I’m glad to see the poster in our school.
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I’m looking forward to your answer soon.
Yours,
Lin Min
14.你最喜欢哪个季节?为什么?请以“My favourite season”为题写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢
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的季节。
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15.请你根据下面的内容提示,以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题,写一篇关于中秋节的文章。
60词左右,可以适当发挥。 提示:
1. 中秋节(Mid - Autumn Festival)在秋天,那时天气不太热也不太冷,非常凉爽;
2. 中秋节那天我们全家一起吃月饼(mooncake)和水果,晚上赏月;
3. 玩花灯(play lanterns)是非常有趣的;
4. 小孩子最开心,可以玩游戏,提着漂亮的灯笼到处(here and there)跑。
The Mid-Autumn Festival
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参考答案
1.例文
Hello, Andy. I’m busy on weekends. I usually get up at 7:30 in the morning. I have breakfast at 8:00.
Then I do my homework at 9:00. At 11:00, I go swimming with my friends. In the afternoon, I have many
things to do. I play computer games with my brother at 2:00. I clean the room at 4:00. In the evening, I
often go to bed at 10:00.
My weekend is quite full for me, but I’m happy.
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【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇材料作文,主语叙述周末的活动安排。在写作时应承接短文开头,具体介绍
所做的事情及时间。
2.例文点评:例文采用二段式;用第一人称来叙述事情;时态采用一般现在时为主,语言简洁,语
义明了,叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点:
短语:get up;have breakfast;go swimming;play computer games;clean the room;go to bed。
句型:I’m busy on weekends.(主系表结构);I have breakfast at 8:00.(简单句);be full for sb.。
2.例文
Saving the Earth
How to protect the environment becomes one of the biggest problems in the world. We can find the
rubbish not only pollutes our environment but also harms people's health. So we should not throw rubbish
onto the ground. Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers, the lakes and the fields. It can pollute
plants, sometimes it can kill lots of fish.We must keep our environment clean and tidy. We have only one
earth. We must try our best to protect her, and make our home more beautiful.
【详解】
题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们根据所给中文提示语,以“Saving the Earth”为题写一篇80字左右
的段文。题目中列出了四个要点,并提供了一些参考词汇,学生们的作文中应将这些要点以及参考
词汇都包括在内,可根据表达需要进行拓展,使文意更加丰富。
写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应用一般现在时、第一人称叙述。写作时应注意英语句式的表达习
惯和结构,写完整的句子,以简单句结构为基础,传播并列句、复合句、非谓语动词等高级句式的
使用,同时注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯、表达流畅。
3.How to protect the Earth
The Earth is our home, and we should protect it. We should stop polluting our Earth and try to make it
clean. There are many ways to protect the Earth. First, I think we should not throw away rubbish
everywhere. Second, I think we should plant more trees. Trees can make the air clean and make the world
beautiful. Third, we should try to ride bikes or take buses. I think we should try our best to protect the
Earth.
【详解】
题干解读:这是一篇说明文写作题, 题目为How to protect the Earth,通过分析可知时态用一般现
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在时,人称以第一人称单复数形式的口吻来叙述。文章首先介绍地球是我们的家园,我们应该保护
它。然后介绍通过哪些举措来保护它。
例文点评:短文紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,同时注意准确运用时态,语言的表述应
该符合语法的结构。造句符合英语的表达习惯。为了使文章更通顺完整,用上了适当的连接词。使
用了first,second,third等使文章增色不少。文章层次清楚,内容饱满,表达流畅。
高分亮点:
短语: stop polluting;try to make it clean; There are many ways to; throw away rubbish
everywhere;plant more trees; make the world beautiful; try to ride bikes or take buses;try our best
to protect
there be句型:There are many ways to protect the Earth.;宾语从句:I think we should not throw away
rubbish everywhere.
4.例文:
Good manners in a theater
Our school will organize all the students to Poly theater to enjoy a concert. Good manners are very
important in our life, there are many cases that are required us to behave well. Many people judge you
according to your manners, especially make a first impression. Good manners mean good behaviour in
social communication. So we must have good manners in a theater. For example, we don’t be late and we
must queue for admission. We don't walk around and we must keep quiet. We mustn’t use flash photo and
we must keep the mobile phone mute. We mustn’t eat or throw rubbish.
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇给材料作文,假设你是班长,写篇文章给学生宣讲文明礼仪的重要性及在剧
院听音乐会时的注意事项。主要写作要点包括:不要迟到,排队入场;不四处走动,保持安静;不
使用闪光照相,手机静音;不吃东西,不乱扔拉圾。
2.写作指导:根据材料内容可知,本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,人称主要为第一人称。写作时
应注意将题目中所有要点都表达出来,不能遗漏,可根据表达需要进行适当的拓展。还应注意英语
句式的结构和表达习惯,写完整的句子,可以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句的使用,使
句式多变。同时注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
5.例文:
Summer holiday is coming. I’d like to visit Beijing with my parents. Because there are so many places
of interest in Beijing, such as Tian’anmen Square, Summer Palace, the Great Wall and so on. Beijing is also
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famous for Beijing Roast Duck. It must be very delicious. I’ll taste it.
We will leave for Beijing on July 10th and stay there for about one week. It’s sunny and warm in
summer in Beijing, so we’ll take T-shirts and dresses. We’ll go there by train. On the train, we can listen to
music, play games or read books. I think it’ll be a pleasant trip.
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于材料文写作,暑假即将来临,你打算外出旅行,根据题目提示内容,写一
篇英语短文,谈谈你的旅行计划。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态以一般将来时为主;第一段介绍自己和谁一起
去哪里旅行;第二段介绍旅行时间,出行方式,以及出行所带物品等。保证条理清晰,行文连贯。
6.例文
I will go to the U. K. for my winter holiday. I will take a plane to London with my parents on February
16. I plan to visit Elizabeth Tower and I will take photos there. Britain’s Got Talent is a famous show and
I’ll watch it. I also plan to go shopping and buy some gifts for my friends in London. I think I will have
great fun there.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示要点,写一篇英语短文介绍一下自己寒假期间打
算去英国度假的旅行计划,包括时间、乘坐的交通工具、参观的地方等;注意要点要齐全,可适当
发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般将来时。写作时要认真审题,
根据提示的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以
围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符
合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
7.例文
My favourite outdoor activity
I like playing football, cycling and traveling, but traveling is my favourite outdoor activity.
I travel twice a year with my parents. I have visited many places of interest, such as Disney, Yu
Garden, the Great Wall and so on. I think traveling can open a new world for me, I can learn a lot of local
culture and history. I can also enjoy much delicious food. Do you like it?
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我最喜欢的户外活动”为题,写一篇短文。
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2.写作指导:本文采用第一人称,时态采用一般现在时为主。分为两段式:第一段引出主题;第二
段介绍自己喜欢旅行的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
8.例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Sofia. The summer holidays are coming. I am going to have a holiday
with my parents in Hainan. We will stay there for one week. We will go there by plane, and it will take us
three hours to get there. We will take sunglasses, swimwear and other anti-sunburn powder in order to
prevent the sunshine. We will go swimming, enjoy the sunshine and taste delicious seafood. We can also
visit some places of interest. What’s more, we will pay more attention to our safety. We hope we can have a
good time there!
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己的暑假计划。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般将来时,人称采用第一人称。分别要介绍自己打算去哪里,打算和谁一
起去,要带什么东西以及去到那的活动都有哪些。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
9.例文
An Unforgetful Trip
Last month, I went on a trip to Sanya, Hainan. I went there by train with my parents. It took about 12
hours to get there.
On the first day, we walked around the city. It was quite a beautiful place. The sky was blue and the air
was nice and clean. We all enjoyed the beautiful views. People there were friendly too. On the second day,
we visited one of the most famous beaches and some museums. Then we enjoyed ourselves in a famous
theme park. We did some shopping on the third day. Mum and I bought a lot of things. After that, we had a
big dinner in a seafood restaurant.
My trip to Sanya seemed short and tiring, but we really had a fantastic time there.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“An Unforgetful Trip”为题,结合提示问题进行写作,
注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般过去时。作文要分别介绍什么时候去的,和
谁去的,去了哪里,怎么去的,在那里做了什么,看到了什么以及是否玩得开心。要保证语言连贯,
无语法和拼写错误。
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10.例文:
My free time
I am a middle school student. Though I'm busy with my lessons, my free time is still colourful.After
school I usually do some sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy
and study better. And I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give
us much knowledge that we can't learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my free
time. Sometimes I watch TV. I find it's a good way to relax myself. Besides, I often help my parents with
the housework on weekends.
I really enjoy myself in my free time.
【详解】
题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们以“My free time”为题,介绍自己的业余生活。题目中罗列了具体
的写作提纲,学生们可以此为依据,丰富具体内容,组织语言,用正确的英语表达出来。
写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称叙述。文章中应将题目中的所有要点
都包括在内,不能遗漏,可以根据表达需要对细节进行拓展,使文章丰富、完整。注意英语句式结
构的特点,不要逐词翻译,应使用正确的句式进行表达,以简单句为基础,穿插并列句、复合句等
高级句式。同时注意上下文的衔接,使文章意思连贯,表达流畅。
11.例文
My Hobby
My hobby is singing. Singing is fun and it makes me feel proud.
Singing can help me relax, and it can also help me improve my accent. Singing makes me happy when
I'm sad. Singing can make me excited when I'm sleepy. I am always singing, because I believe singing can
share each other's joy and sadness in our lives. Singing is just like the salt in my life-without it, my life will
be tasteless.
I believe everyone has his or her own hobby. And a hobby can not only develop our minds but also
add more fun to our lives.
【详解】
1.题干解读:这是一篇命题作文,以 My hobby为题写一篇关于自己爱好的文章,题给出的材料较
为简略,需要自己发挥想象力。动笔前应先认真阅读材料,围绕所给材料组织内容,确定主要短语,
句式等问题。写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
2.例文点评:通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称,时态为一般现在时态,这
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方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词。
3.高分亮点:
短语:my hobby;make sb. do ;feel proud.;help me improve my accent;his or her own hobby.;
句型:I believe everyone has his or her own hobby.; And a hobby can not only develop our minds but
also add more fun to our lives.(not only…but also….)
12.例文:
Last Sunday morning, I got up at 8:00 and then had breakfast. After that, I went to Shenzhen Library
by bike. When I got there, I saw a lot of people standing under a big tree. They talked about all kinds of
things in English because they were interested in English.
I learnt a lot from the English Club. For example, I made many friends here and improved my spoken
English. I hope you can join this club, too.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文属于记叙文写作,按照题干中的要点提示叙述上星期天参加英语俱乐部的经历。
要求按照时间发展顺序,对时间、地点及内容等进行正确叙述。
2.写作指导:文章以第一人称、一般过去时为主,注意主谓一致问题;写作时注意要点齐全,语句
通顺有条理。
13.例文
Dear Miss Pei,
I’m Lin Min. I’m glad to see the poster in our school. I want to join the English Club because I like
English very much. But I’m not good at listening and speaking. I hope to have more chances to improve
them.
There are so many helpful activities in the club, among which watching English movies is my
favourite. It can not only make me relaxed, but also improve my English skills. What’s more, I still hope
there will be more activities. Reading English books is good. Can the club provide us with some English
books? Besides, it will be wonderful if we can have some chances to talk to foreigners or make friends with
them.
I’m looking forward to your answer soon.
Yours,
Lin Min
【详解】
1.题干解读:本篇要求依据题干的海报,写一封申请加入英语俱乐部的申请书。内容包括:陈述自
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己想要加入英语俱乐部的原因;在俱乐部里想要参加的活动;提出自己的想法——还想要在俱乐部
做什么。
2.写作指导:本篇用一般现在时写作。书写应分层次、有条理地说明自己加入俱乐部的原因、想要
参加的活动,讲述自己的想法(还想在俱乐部做什么)。书写时要注意信息点是否表达全面,适当
使用连词使文章有整体性、连贯性。
14.参考范文:
My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. Because the weather isn’t too hot or too cold, and there is cool wind
every day. When the leaves fall from the tree, the view will be very beautiful. The Mid-Autumn Day is in
autumn. All of my family members often have dinner together, we often enjoy ourselves on that day.
【详解】
1. 题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。题目要求是根据提示要点,请你以“My favourite season”为题,
介绍你最喜欢的季节,并说明喜欢的原因。
2.写法指导:本文主要时态为一般现在时,人称以第一人称展开介绍,写作时,首先要介绍自己最
喜欢的季节;然后阐述喜欢的原因;文章要紧扣题目要点,内容要完整,表述要准确,语言的表述
要符合语法结构,造句要符合英语表达习惯。
15.例文:
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China which is in autumn.
At that time, the weather is not too hot or too cold. It is very cool. On that day our family have
mooncakes and fruit together. And we often enjoy the moonlight at night. It is interesting for us to play
lanterns. The children are the happiest. They can play games and run here and there with the beautiful
lanterns.
【详解】
题干解读:该题目属于介绍类文章,以“The Mid-Autumn Festival”为题,写一篇关于中秋节的文章。
题干中已经给出了具体要点,切记要写出所有要点,但是不能逐句翻译,可以恰当的使用一些句型
和连词使上下文逻辑清楚,条理分明。
写作指导:本文应该以一般现在时为主,注意动词三单形式。采用两段式写作:第一段简单介绍中
秋节的重要性;第二段根据要点提示重点写中秋节的相关事项。
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