三晋卓越联盟2025 届高三5 月质量检测卷英语试题B
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Being helpful is a virtue, but sometimes being too enthusiastic can backfire (文
章主题已经给出). It is a lesson I learned the hard way last summer (让我想到了歌词).
The night before the summer holiday, it was raining cats and dogs. But I wasn't
bothered because Justin, Wendy, Crystal and I were texting each other about our
upcoming trip to Niagara Falls. Everybody was so engaged in brainstorming ideas
about what to bring along.
Justin came up with a brilliant idea
. He suggested that we assign roles to
each one of us.Since I
was known for
being careful and helpful
(我的性格特点，为后文埋下伏笔), I
was given the “babysitter” role looking after everyone(现在分词做后置定语).
During the trip, I took my duty seriously. On the way, I collected trashes and
guided them into every single rest station like a helpful babysitter. As Wendy and I
were lining up for
the washroom
, I noticed a little girl got pushed out of the line, so I
let her stand in front of me( 非常符合人物特点). When we all got back to the car, Wendy
praised me as a kind-hearted babysitter for anyone, which made me feel very
proud of myself.
Then I saw Crystal holding something that looked like a sun hat. Justin asked
Crystal what it was, but I didn't catch Crystal's answer clearly(交代冲突的伏笔). It seemed
that she mentioned she was making
a birthday gift
for her mother
.
When we arrived at our hotel, it was already six in the evening( 时间间隙). Since no
one was hungry, we decided to rest and get ready for the next day's adventure.
However, I was too excited to fall asleep and decided to go to Crystal's room. When
we listened to music together, Crystal kept weaving( 编织) the thing she had been
working on in the car. After a while, Crystal fell asleep.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I thought I could help her finish the sun hat.
Paragraph 2: But the next morning, Crystal stormed into my room.
三晋卓越联盟2025 届高三5 月质量检测卷英语试题B
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Being helpful is a virtue, but sometimes being too enthusiastic can backfire. It is a
lesson I learned the hard way last summer.
The night before the summer holiday, it was raining cats and dogs. But I wasn't
bothered because Justin, Wendy, Crystal and I were texting each other about our
upcoming trip to Niagara Falls. Everybody was so engaged in brainstorming ideas
about what to bring along.
Justin came up with a brilliant idea, He suggested that we assign roles to each one
of us.Since I was known for being careful and helpful, I was given the “babysitter”
role looking after everyone.
During the trip, I took my duty seriously. On the way,I collected trashes and
guided them into every single rest station like a helpful babysitter. As Wendy and I
were lining up for the washroom, I noticed a little girl got pushed out of the line, so I
let her stand in front of me. When we all got back to the car, Wendy praised me as a
kind-hearted babysitter for anyone,which made me feel very proud of myself.
Then I saw Crystal holding something that looked like a sun hat. Justin asked
Crystal what it was, but I didn't catch Crystal's answer clearly, It seemed that she
mentioned she was making a birthday gift for her mother.
When we arrived at our hotel, it was already six in the evening, Since no one was
hungry, we decided to rest and get ready for the next day's adventure. However, I was
too excited to fall asleep and decided to go to Crystal's room, When we listened to
music together,Crystal kept weaving(编织) the thing she had been working on in the
car. After a while, Crystal fell asleep.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I thought I could help her finish the sun hat.
Paragraph 2: But the next morning, Crystal stormed into my room.
1. 读后续写类型分析及构思布局
类型：生活经历类（因过度热心导致的反转故事）
构思思路：
主题：热心助人需适度，过度干预可能适得其反。
布局：
第一段（承接伏笔）：主角试图帮Crystal 完成太阳帽，但因技术不精导致错
误。
第二段（冲突爆发）：Crystal 发现帽子被毁，愤怒质问，主角意识到“过度帮
助”的后果。
框架提炼：
段落
内容要点
衔接原文的关键点
1
主角主动帮Crystal 织帽子，
但因不熟练弄错步骤
承接Crystal 织帽子的伏笔及
“babysitter”角色
2
Crystal 发现帽子被毁，冲突
爆发，主角反思
呼应“being too enthusiastic can
backfire”主题
续写注意事项：
承接原文：
保留“babysitter”人设（如用“I couldn’t resist helping”体现热心）。
引用Crystal 织帽子的细节（如“the half-finished sun hat”）。
设计技巧：
加入动作和心理描写（如“my fingers fumbled with the threads”）。
结尾点题（如“I finally understood the lesson”）。
2. 故事山模式及原文分析
阶段
原文内容
续写对应点
开端
四人计划旅行，主角被赋予“babysitter”角
色
维持角色一致性
发展
主角热心帮助他人（如让小女孩插队）
延续帮助行为至织帽子
高潮
Crystal 织帽子伏笔
主角弄坏帽子引发冲突
结局
给你来设计了
Crystal 愤怒，主角醒悟
关键分析表：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句/伏笔
人物刻画
主角热心但冒失
“I was known for being careful and
helpful”
情感层次
自豪→尴尬→懊悔
“made me feel very proud of myself”
关键情节点
Crystal 织帽子
“she was making a birthday gift for her
mother”
语言特色
口语化，多用动作描写
“lining up for the washroom”
心理描写
主角的兴奋与骄傲
“too excited to fall asleep”
动作描写
主角让小女孩插队
“let her stand in front of me”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句/伏笔
环境描写
暴雨夜烘托紧张感
“raining cats and dogs”
隐含主题
过度热心可能坏事
“being too enthusiastic can backfire”
情感转折
从帮助的喜悦到弄坏帽
子的恐慌
续写需体现愤怒与反思
伏笔与冲突点
Crystal 的帽子是生日礼
物
续写中帽子被毁是关键冲突
隐含线索
Crystal 对帽子的重视
“kept weaving the thing”
解决方案：
冲突解决：主角道歉并协助修复帽子，或Crystal 接受其好意但指出界限。
主题升华：通过对话点明“帮助需尊重他人意愿”。
3. 动作、心理、环境描写推荐英文例句及翻译
动作描写（Action Descriptions）
1. She fumbled with the threads, trying to mimic Crystal’s neat stitches.
（她笨拙地摆弄着线，试图模仿Crystal 整齐的针脚。）
2. My fingers trembled as I attempted to weave the sun hat.
（我的手颤抖着，试图编织那顶太阳帽。）
3. I carefully tucked the ruined hat under the pillow, hoping she wouldn’t
notice.
（我小心翼翼地把弄坏的帽子塞到枕头下，希望她不会发现。）
4. Crystal stormed into the room, her face flushed with anger.
（Crystal 怒气冲冲地闯进房间，脸气得通红。）
5. She snatched the hat from my hands, her eyes widening in shock.
（她从我手中一把夺过帽子，震惊地睁大了眼睛。）
6. I hesitantly reached out to fix the mess I had made.
（我犹豫地伸出手，想弥补自己造成的混乱。）
7. Her hands flew to her mouth as she gasped in disbelief.
（她难以置信地倒吸一口气，双手捂住嘴。）
8. Justin stepped between us, trying to calm the situation.
（Justin 挡在我们中间，试图平息局面。）
9. I hung my head in shame, unable to meet her gaze.
（我羞愧地低下头，不敢直视她的目光。）
10. She clutched the ruined gift tightly, her knuckles turning white.
（她紧紧攥着被毁坏的礼物，指节都发白了。）
心理描写（Psychological Descriptions）
1. A wave of guilt washed over me as I realized my mistake.
（意识到自己的错误时，一阵内疚感涌上心头。）
2. My heart pounded in my chest, fearing her reaction.
（我的心砰砰直跳，害怕她的反应。）
3. I couldn’t shake off the feeling that I had crossed a line.
（我无法摆脱那种越界了的感觉。）
4. Pride swelled in my chest when Wendy praised me earlier.
（当Wendy 早些时候表扬我时，我心中涌起一阵自豪。）
5. Doubt crept into my mind—had I really helped or just made things worse?
（怀疑悄悄爬上心头——我真的帮了忙，还是把事情搞得更糟了？）
6. I bit my lip, unsure whether to confess or keep silent.
（我咬着嘴唇，不确定是该坦白还是保持沉默。）
7. A sinking feeling told me this wouldn’t end well.
（一种不祥的预感告诉我，事情不会有好结果。）
8. Regret gnawed at me as I watched her disappointment.
（看着她失望的样子，悔恨啃噬着我的心。）
9. I desperately searched for words to explain myself.
（我拼命寻找解释的话。）
10. A mix of embarrassment and frustration churned inside me.
（尴尬和沮丧交织在我心里。）
环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）
The rain hammered against the windows, mirroring the tension in the room.
（雨点猛烈地敲打着窗户，映衬着房间里的紧张气氛。）
The dim hotel room felt suffocating after the argument.
（争吵过后，昏暗的酒店房间让人感到窒息。）
Morning sunlight streamed through the curtains, contrasting with the heavy
mood.
（晨光透过窗帘洒进来，与沉重的心情形成鲜明对比。）
The hum of the air conditioner filled the awkward silence.
（空调的嗡嗡声填补了尴尬的沉默。）
Outside, the bustling streets of Niagara Falls seemed worlds away.
（外面，尼亚加拉瀑布热闹的街道仿佛远在另一个世界。）
The faint scent of fabric from Crystal’s weaving lingered in the air.
（Crystal 编织时留下的淡淡布料气味仍在空气中萦绕。）
The distant roar of the waterfall added to the surreal atmosphere.
（远处瀑布的轰鸣声增添了超现实的氛围。）
Shadows stretched across the room as evening fell.
（夜幕降临，阴影在房间里延伸。）
The soft rustling of fabric was the only sound in the quiet room.
（布料轻微的沙沙声是安静房间里唯一的声音。）
A chilly draft seeped through the window, making me shiver.
（一阵冷风从窗户渗入，让我打了个寒颤。）
4. 常见单词的高级替换词 & 场景分类
1. "Help"（帮助）
Assist（正式，强调合作）
Aid（紧急或正式帮助）
Support（长期支持）
Facilitate（促进，使更容易）
Pitch in（口语，一起帮忙）
2. "Angry"（生气的）
Furious（暴怒）
Livid（气得脸色发青）
Enraged（极度愤怒）
Seething（强忍怒火）
Outraged（因不公而愤怒）
3. "Sad"（悲伤的）
Devastated（极度伤心）
Heartbroken（心碎的）
Crestfallen（沮丧的）
Despondent（绝望的）
Gloomy（忧郁的）
4. "Fix"（修理/解决）
Mend（修补关系或物品）
Rectify（正式纠正）
Amend（修正错误）
Remedy（补救）
Patch up（临时修复）
5. "Happy"（高兴的）
Elated（狂喜）
Ecstatic（极度兴奋）
Thrilled（非常激动）
Overjoyed（非常开心）
Gleeful（幸灾乐祸的快乐）
常见搭配
Take one’s duty seriously（认真履行职责）
Backfire on someone（适得其反）
Storm into a room（怒气冲冲地闯进房间）
Fall asleep（入睡）
Be engaged in（专注于）
Line up for（排队等候）
Make a mess of（搞砸）
Cross a line（越界）
Gnaw at someone（折磨某人）
Patch things up（修复关系）
可积累的生词短语
短语/单词
词
性
词义
近义词
反义词
例句
Backfire
v.
适得其
反
Rebound, Fail
Succeed
His plan to surprise
her backfired when
she got angry.
Fumble
v.
笨拙地
处理
Bumble,
Mishandle
Handle
skillfully
She fumbled with the
keys and dropped
them.
Seething
adj.
强忍怒
火的
Fuming, Livid
Calm
He was seething after
the argument.
Devastated
adj.
极度伤
心的
Heartbroken,
Crushed
Joyful
She was devastated by
the bad news.
Patch up
v.
修补
（关
系）
Mend, Repair
Break
They managed to
patch up their
friendship.
5. Possible Answers(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream, I suddenly came up
with an idea. I couldn’t let her hard work go to waste, so I quietly picked up the
unfinished sun hat and started weaving it myself. As I worked(状从), I felt a surge of
pride, thinking that I was being helpful(宾从). However, my excitement soon turned
into anxiety when I realized I had no idea(状从) how to finish the delicate design(同位
从). I tried my best, but the more I worked, the more frustrated I became. The sun
hat didn't look anything like the beautiful piece Crystal had been weaving(定从). My
hands trembled as I thought about what she might say when she woke up(状从+宾从).
Would she be upset? Would she even notice? Despite these worries, I continued,
hoping that my effort would somehow make up for the interruption(宾从).
Paragraph 2: Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation, I was awakened by a
shake the next morning. "What did you do to my sun hat?" she asked, her voice
groggy(adj.柔弱无力，摇摇晃晃). I felt a wave of embarrassment flood over me as I
realized my attempt to help had gone horribly wrong(状从). "I tried to finish it for you,"
I mumbled. Crystal smiled, though it was clear that the hat looked far from perfect(状
从). "Well, I appreciate your effort, but next time, please just let me do it." I nodded,
feeling ashamed but also relieved that she wasn't angry(宾从). The experience
taught me a valuable lesson about patience and the importance of not overstepping
boundaries. I learned that sometimes, the best way to help is by stepping back and
letting others do what they do best(宾从).
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream, I suddenly came up
with an idea. I couldn’t let her hard work go to waste, so I quietly picked up the
unfinished sun hat and started weaving it myself. As I worked(状从), I felt a surge of
pride, thinking that I was being helpful(宾从). However, my excitement soon turned
into anxiety when I realized I had no idea(状从) how to finish the delicate design(同位
从). I tried my best, but the more I worked, the more frustrated I became. The sun
hat didn't look anything like the beautiful piece Crystal had been weaving(定从). My
hands trembled as I thought about what she might say when she woke up(状从+宾从).
Would she be upset? Would she even notice? Despite these worries, I continued,
hoping that my effort would somehow make up for the interruption(宾从).
Paragraph 2: Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation, I was awakened by a
shake the next morning. "What did you do to my sun hat?" she asked, her voice
groggy(adj.柔弱无力，摇摇晃晃). I felt a wave of embarrassment flood over me as I
realized my attempt to help had gone horribly wrong(状从). "I tried to finish it for you,"
I mumbled. Crystal smiled, though it was clear that the hat looked far from perfect(状
从). "Well, I appreciate your effort, but next time, please just let me do it." I nodded,
feeling ashamed but also relieved that she wasn't angry(宾从). The experience
taught me a valuable lesson about patience and the importance of not overstepping
boundaries. I learned that sometimes, the best way to help is by stepping back and
letting others do what they do best(宾从).
语法加分点分析:
倒装句:
o
“Suddenly came up with an idea” – 强调了突如其来的灵感。
o
同义词/替换: “came up with” → “thought of”, “suddenly” → “all of a sudden”
复杂句：
o
“I couldn’t let her hard work go to waste, so I quietly picked up the unfinished
sun hat...”
o
搭配: “go to waste” – 浪费；“picked up” – 捡起；“unfinished” – 未完成
的；
o
替换词: “let” → “allow”, “quietly” → “softly”
条件句：
o
“Would she be upset?” – 假设语气，表现担忧。
o
同义词: “upset” → “disappointed,” “angry”
情感描写：
o
词汇: "anxiety," "pride," "frustrated," "embarrassment," "ashamed," “relieved”
o
例句: “I felt a surge of pride” (通过“surge”来强调情感的强烈变化)
动作描写：
o
词汇: "trembled," "tried my best," "continued," "picked up," "finished"
o
例句: “My hands trembled” (表现动作的细节，通过“trembled”突出情感的
内心冲突)
Version 3：
Paragraph 1: Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream, I suddenly came up
with an idea. Instead of just waiting around for the morning, I decided to make the
most of the quiet time. I walked over to her side, carefully avoiding making any
noise(非谓语动词做伴随动作), and picked up the half-finished sun hat. As I began to
weave(状从), I felt a sense of purpose. For a moment, everything seemed to slow
down. I wasn’t sure whether Crystal would appreciate my gesture(宾从), but the more
I worked, the more confident I became. Each time I placed the yarn(n.纱线), I
imagined how proud she would be(宾从) when she saw the finished product(状从). My
hands moved faster, fueled
by the excitement of surprising her with something
meaningful(非谓语动词做原因状语). But as I reached the final stages(状从), I realized that I
had no idea how to complete it properly(宾从+宾从). Despite my best efforts, the hat
still looked incomplete.
Paragraph 2: Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation, I was awakened by a
shake the next morning. “What happened to my hat?” she asked, looking confused(非
谓语动词做伴随动作). I stammered, “I tried to help finish it for you.” She looked at the hat,
and her expression softened. “It’s not what I expected(表从), but I can tell you really
tried. Thanks for the effort.” I felt a mixture of guilt and pride. Even though the
result wasn’t perfect(状从), I knew that my intention had been to help(宾从). Crystal,
with her usual kindness, assured me that she wasn’t upset(宾从). “Next time, though,
just ask if you’re unsure(宾从),” she said with a gentle smile. I nodded, appreciating
her understanding and realizing that the true value of helping lies in knowing when
to ask for guidance(非谓语动词做伴随动作+宾从).
语法加分点分析:
非谓语动词短语：
o
“Instead of just waiting around for the morning” – 使用非谓语动词短语表示对
比，突出行动。
o
同义词: “waiting around” → “lingering”
定语从句：
o
“I picked up the half-finished sun hat, which was lying on the floor.”
o
同义词/替换: “which was lying” → “that was left”
强调句式：
o
“It was my intention to help.” – 用强调句表达情感并突出了行动的动机。
o
同义词: “It was my intention” → “I truly wanted”
情感描写：
o
词汇: "guilt," "pride," "confidence," "softer"
o
例句: “I felt a mixture of guilt and pride.” (通过“mixture”来呈现情感的复杂
性)
动作描写：
o
词汇: "carefully avoiding," "walked over," "moved faster," "stammered,"
"nodded"
o
例句: “I carefully avoided making any noise” (细致描写动作，强调小心谨慎)
Version 4：
Paragraph 1: Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream, I suddenly came up
with an idea. It was clear that she had worked so hard on the sun hat(主语从句), and I
didn’t want her efforts to be wasted. Quietly, I picked up the half-finished project
and began to weave. As I did so(状从), I felt a rush of excitement. I wanted to surprise
her, but at the same time, I felt a bit nervous. Was I doing it right? Would it look as
good as the original? My hands moved quickly, but I kept second-guessing every
stitch I made(定从). The more I tried to rush, the more frustrated I became. Despite
my determination, the hat was far from what I had imagined(宾从). Still, I couldn’t
give up. I worked harder, determined to finish it(adj 做补语) before she woke up(状从).
Paragraph 2: Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation, I was awakened by a
shake the next morning. “Why did you try to finish it?” she asked with a puzzled
look. I felt my cheeks flush with embarrassment. “I thought I could help(宾从),” I
mumbled. Crystal glanced at the hat, and then at me. “I appreciate your effort, but
next time, just let me do it,” she said kindly. Though her words were gentle(状从), I
felt a sense of regret. I had meant to be helpful, but in the end, I learned that
sometimes, the best way to help is by not interfering. I promised myself that I would
ask for guidance(宾从) when needed(状从省略), instead of jumping into something I
didn’t fully understand(定从).
语法加分点分析:
虚拟语气：
o
“Would it look as good as the original?” – 使用虚拟语气表达对未来不确定的
担忧。
o
同义词: “look as good” → “turn out as good”
过去分词做状语：
o
“Determined to finish it before she woke up” – 过去分词做状语表示目的。
o
同义词: “determined” → “committed”
反身代词加强语气：
o
“I felt myself growing more frustrated” – 强调情绪的逐渐加剧。
o
同义词: “felt” → “sensed,” “growing” → “becoming”
情感描写：
o
词汇: "excitement," "nervous," "regret," "embarrassment"
o
例句: “I felt a rush of excitement.” (通过“rush”突出情感的突然涌现)
动作描写：
o
词汇: "picked up," "moved quickly," "kept second-guessing," "flush with
embarrassment"
o
例句: “I felt my cheeks flush with embarrassment.” (通过“flush”加强情感的表
现)
5. 读后续写积累语料
动词短语替换:
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“decided to” → “chose to,” “opted to”
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“tried to” → “attempted to,” “made an effort to”
情感词汇替换:
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“excited” → “thrilled,” “overjoyed”
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“nervous” → “anxious,” “uneasy”
常见短语替换:
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“make up for” → “compensate for,” “atone for”
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“let me do” → “allow me to do,” “permit me to do”
One possible version (官方)
Seeing Crystal fall quickly into her dream, I suddenly came up with an idea. I thought
that I could help her to finish the sun hat, like a babysitter, and it would be a total surprise for
her the next morning. So without hesitation, I took her hat, and walked out of her room as
quietly as an ant. I was so focused on making it look nice that I didn’t even notice how much
time had passed(宾从). At about 11:30 pm, I finally finished it and put it in Crystal’s room quietly. I
couldn’t wait to see Crystal’s smiling face the next morning. I was very exhausted, so I fell asleep
the second my head landed on my pillow(状从).
Instead of receiving Crystal’s appreciation, I was awakened by a shake the next morning. I
quickly opened my eyes and saw Crystal standing beside my bed, her face red with anger(独立
主格). She started yelling at me. Before she finished her first sentence(状从), I interrupted her
and told her that I’d helped her finish the sun hat(宾从). Just at that moment, tears ran out of
her eyes like a spring. She shouted angrily that it was not supposed to be as sun hat, but a
basket for her mother’s birthday(宾从). She said I ruined everything she’d planned(宾从+定从). I
felt so guilty and realized that being overly enthusiastic indeed caused trouble sometimes(宾从).
