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作文2 高级句式写作与衔接词
句式升级之感叹句
第一步：先写一个普通的句子
She is a beautiful girl. 她是一个美丽的女孩。
第二步：从be 动词开始切分，切分成 She is/ a beautiful girl. 把she is 放到句末：
a beautiful girl she is!
第三步：在句子前面加上how 或者what，形名相连用what，形名不相连用
how： What a beautiful girl she is!
She is /beautiful.------beautiful/she is!------How beautiful /she is!
The boy is /smart.-----smart/the boy is------How smart the boy is!
They are/ good teachers.----- good teachers/they are-----What good teachers they are!
句式升级之so that 句式
第一步：先写一个中文的句子，类似于下面的句式：
我努力学习是为了有一天实现我的梦想。
第二步：分成两个简单句子来写。我努力学习+我能够实现我的梦想（注意，这
两个句子都要有主语）
I study hard + I can make my dream come true.
第三步：在两个句子中间加上so that
I study hard so that I can make my dream come true.
练习：
我很早出发是为了我能够赶上第一班汽车。
我努力工作是为了我能买更多的苹果。
我努力学习是为了我能找到好工作
句式升级之one of +最高级+名词复数
第一步：先写一个中文的句子，类似于下面的句式：
Lily 是我最亲密的朋友之一。
第二步：找出名词 friends、找出最高级the closest。
第三步：先翻译“最亲密的朋友之一”------ one of the closest friends
第四步：加上前面的部分 lily is ------ lily is one of my closest friends.
翻译练习：
黄河是中国最长的河流之一。
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成都是世界上最美丽的城市之一。
杰克是最勇敢的男孩之一。
作文衔接
第一段开头：
引出话题：Recently, the topic of______ has attracted people’s concern
举例：Recently, the topic of learning habits has attracted people`s concern.
最近关于学习习惯的话题引起了大家的注意。
Recently, the topic of traditional Chinese festivals has attracted people’s concern.
最近，关于中国传统节日的话题引起了大家的注意。
Recently, the topic of Double Reduction Policy (双减政策）has attracted people’s
concern
最近，关于双减政策的话题引起了大家的注意。
其他引出话题的衔接句型：
It`s said\reported that……据说，据报道
As we all know……众所周知
Nothing is more important than the fact that……没有什么比…更重要了
第一段的末尾，怎么引出第二段：
Here are some suggestions about······以下是关于……的建议
Some details/suggestions about……are as follows. 一些关于…….的细节如下
Generally, the advantages/reasons are as follows. 通常来说，优点、原因有以下几
点
举例：
Here are some suggestions about learning habits……
Some details about traditional Chinese festivals are as follows.
Some details about Double Reduction Policy (双减政策）are as follows.
关键词语：
suggestions 建议/details 细节/disadvantages 缺点/advantage 优点/reasons 原因/
information 信息
第二段：语句之间的衔接：
In the first place/to start with/to begin with/first of all 首先
Furthermore/in addition/what’s more/moreover 其次
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What’s better/worse on one hand, one the other hand------for one thing, for another
一方面····另一方面······
In the end 最后、last but not least 最后但是同样重要的是······
举例：
I can express myself freely in English. I have participated in several similar
activities. English is one of the best ways to know more.
First of all, I can express myself freely in English. In addition, I have participated in
several similar activities. Last but not least, English is one of the best ways to know
more.
第二段：语句之间的衔接:
表示转折：but/however/nevertheless(然而）/even though/In spite of（尽管）
表示因果：as a consequence 结果/as a result 结果/as a result of 由于/therefore/as a
consequence of 由于
举例：
As a consequence of (由于) his hard work, he was admitted to Nanjing University.
由于他的努力学习，他被南京大学录取了。
He didn’t study for the exam, as a consequence (结果), he failed.
他没有为考试去学习，结果是，他失败了。
He’s the best teacher, even though (尽管) he has the least experience.
尽管他的经验最少，但是他是最好的老师。
第二段：语句之间的衔接：
表达自己的观点：from my point of view/in my opinion/as far as I am concerned 在
我看来
最后总结:in conclusion(总的来说）/in summary/all in all
举例：
In conclusion, walking is a cheap, safe, enjoyable, and readily available form of
exercise.
综上所述，散步是一种廉价、安全、有趣而又随时可以开展的运动形式。
From my point of view, TV is the cause of the declining interest in school and the failure
of our entire educational system.
在我看来，电视是导致（学生）对学校的兴趣下降和我们整个教育系统失败的
原因。
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As far as I am concerned, it is high time to take measures to address this problem. 我
认为现在必须采取措施来解决这一问题。
Let’s Protect Asian Elephants (让我们一起来保护亚洲象）
______ Asian elephants used to be seen everywhere in the forests of China.
_____Now they are endangered.
______ People have cut down forests. They lost their homes. ______Some people
kill them for their ivory, which makes them nearly die out. It is important for us to
protect Asian elephants._______ We should build more nature reserves for them.
______We must stop people from killing them and buying their ivory. As the saying
goes, “No buying, no killing.” ________We are supposed to pass a law to protect them.
_________ We must try our best to protect them.
Let’s Protect Asian Elephants(让我们一起来保护亚洲象）
Recently
, the topic of Asian elephants has attracted people’s concern.
( 引出话
题） Asian elephants used to be seen everywhere in the forests of China. However,
Now they are endangered. The reasons are as follows
. ( 引出下文的原因）
First of all, (第一点) People have cut down forests. Therefore, They lost their
homes. What’s worse,(第二点) Some people kill them for their ivory, which makes
them nearly die out. From my point of view, (第三点) It is important for us to protect
Asian elephants. Here are some suggestions about protecting Asian elephants.
( 引出
下文的建议
) To start with (第一点), We should build more nature reserves for them.
In addition (第二点), We must stop people from killing them and buying their ivory.
As the saying goes, “No buying, no killing.” Last but not least, (第三点) We are
supposed to pass a law to protect them.
In conclusion (最后总结), We must try our best to protect them.
