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英文作文变高级的 3 个方法
《普通高中英语课程标准》中明确表示：写作部分主要考查学生的写作能力，其中包括
写作的流利性、准确性和得体性。
高考英语书面表达第五档(21~25 分)的评分标准：
1. 覆盖所有内容要点；
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇；
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；
4. 具备较强的语言运用能力；
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
从课程标准的要求以及书面表达的评分标准不难看出，要写出高分作文,考生除了要保
证内容要点完整外，还要保证语言具有多样性，学会恰当运用高级词汇、句式以及衔接
词，为文章增加亮点。
这些亮点能够体现考生的语言运用能力，帮助考生提高书面表达的得分档次。
技法一：高级词汇，摆脱俗套
攻略一：摒弃笼统表达，细化描写。
笼统词具有较强的概括性，考生相对熟悉，但具体词能形象地描述事物或反映细腻的感
情色彩变化，使表达更出彩。
例 1：That's a very wonderful movie.
wonderful 比较笼统，可以选用更为具体的词：
instructive 有教育意义的
1moving/touching 令人感动的
enlightening 具有启发性的
攻略二：多用高级表达，短语优先。
恰当地选用一些贴切、地道的高级表达对提高书面表达的得分档次至关重要。所以考生
不妨考虑在文章中使用较高级的表达，充分展现自己的语言功底。
1. 校园生活
能够做某事：be able to do sth.
升级表达：
be capable of doing sth.
be competent to do sth.
努力做某事：try to do sth.
升级表达：
spare no effort to do sth.
strive/ endeavor to do sth.
某人必须要做的事情：something sb. must do
升级表达：a must for sb.
试图做某事：try to do sth.
升级表达：
attempt/seek to do sth.
make an attempt to do sth.
参加：join in, take part in
升级表达：
participate in
2get involved in
attend
engage in
2. 动作行为
记住：remember
升级表达：keep/bear in mind that...
面对，面临：face
升级表达：
be faced with
meet with,
encounter
意识到：know, realize
升级表达：
be aware of/that
be conscious of
come to realize
重视：value
升级表达：
attach great importance to
take sth. seriously
参观：visit
升级表达：
pay a visit to
go to... for a visit
3某人想到某：sb. think(s) of sth.
升级表达：
sth. occur(s) to/strike(s) sb.. sb.
come(s) up with sth.
3. 人际关系
向某人道歉：say sorry to sb.
升级表达：
make an apology to sb.
apologize to sb.
因某事感激某人：thank sb. for sth.
升级表达：
be grateful to sb. for sth.
express one's gratitude to sb. for sth.
遇见：meet
升级表达：
come across
encounter
run into
鼓励某人：encourage sb.
升级表达：cheer sb. up
支持：support
升级表达：be in favor of
向某人求助：ask sb. for help
升级表达：turn to sb. for help
44. 修饰形容
不同种类的：different kinds of
升级表达：
a wide range of
a variety of
various
varieties of
大量的，很多：a number of, a lot of
升级表达：
a considerable number of
an overwhelming majority of
large quantities of
scores of
dozens of
countless
numerous
对...有益：be useful to，be good for
升级表达：
be of great benefit to
do good to
be beneficial to
.....组成：be made up of
升级表达：
consist of
be composed of
5疲惫不堪：be tired
升级表达：
be worn out
feel exhausted
5. 陈述事实
几天前：a few days ago
升级表达：the other day
大家公认：people think that...
升级表达：it's acknowledged/accepted/ believed that...
实际上：actually
升级表达：as a matter of fact
谈及：talk of/about, mention
升级表达：
refer to
speak of
when it comes to
显然：clealy
升级表达：apparently , obviously
应该：should
升级表达：be supposed to
技法二：句式丰富，彰显文采
6作文中出现过多的简单句会给人单调乏味之感，句子与句子之间的关系也会显得松散；
而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。
考生要想写出一篇优秀的作文，需要适当地运用较高级的语法结构，这样可以使文章结
构更紧凑，语言更丰富，表达更出彩。
攻略 1：以事/物开头，使表达更地道
恰到好处地使用被动句以及一些以事/物开头的句子，会使语篇连贯性更强、结构更紧
凑、重点更突出、表达更地道，如：
例 2：I thought of an idea when I read the article. 我读这篇文章时有了个想法。
升级表达：A good idea occurred to/hit/struck me when I read the article.
攻略 2：以非主语开头，增加表现力
多使用非主语成分开头的句子不但能使写作句式多样化，而且能有效地向阅卷老师展示
自己的语言功底。
1. 介词短语置于句首
例 3：You need to hand in a report together with your innovations , and you must
explain your idea and what materials you have used.
升 级 表 达 ： Along with your wonderful innovations, you need to hand in a
report explaining how the idea occurred to you and what materials you have
used.
2. 使用独立主格结构/with 复合结构
7例 4：As time goes by, more and more people begin to realize the importance
of protecting the environment.
升 级 表 达 ： With time going by, more and more people begin to realize the
importance of protecting the environment.
攻略三：巧用副词和形容词，生动形象
在写作中，考生可将副词置于句首增强文章的连贯性或用以强调、彰显句子的感情色彩，
也可以将形容词置于句首或句末，增强情绪感染力，使句子更生动形象。
例 5：Unfortunately, my grandpa caught a serious cold several days ago due to
climate change and he is still in hospital now.
攻略四：活用非谓语，精简表达
1. 运用非谓语动词(短语)整合简单句，提升表达
考生可以利用非谓语动词(短语)对两个甚至两个以上的简单句进行整合，使句子更加简
洁、凝练，表达更高级。
例 6：It's widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique cultures.
They range from calligraphy to folk dances and local operas.
升级 表达： It's widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique
cultures, ranging from calligraphy to folk dances and local operas.
2. 运用非谓语动词(短语)简化复合句，精炼语言
在表达复杂含义的时候，常常用到复合句，句子有时会较长，考生可以利用非谓语动词
(短语)对复合句进行简化，使语言更精练。
8例 7：When I saw a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled
her back.
升级表达：Seeing a car running towards her, I reached my hand out and pulled
her back.
攻略五：巧用三大从句，丰富结构
1. 运用定语从句，让表述更丰满
例 8：This semester our school offers many optional courses to the students and
each of them appeals to many students.
本学期我们学校为学生提供了许多选修课，每一门都吸引了很多学生。
升 级 表 达 ： This semester our school offers many optional courses to the
students, each of which appeals to many students.
2. 运用名词性从句，让表述更具体
例 9：Her daughter satisfied all the admissions requirements. She was satisfied
with the result. 她的女儿符合所有录取条件,她很满意。
升级表达：She was satisfied with the result that her daughter satisfied all
the admissions requirements.
3. 运用状语从句，让逻辑更清晰
例 10：The task is tough. But there is no doubt that we will overcome all the
difficulties and succeed.这项任务是艰巨的。但是毫无疑问,我们会克服所有的困难
并取得成功。
9升级表达：No matter how tough/However tough the task is, there is no doubt that
we will overcome all the difficulties and succeed.
攻略六：套用提分句式，升级表达
1. 运用强调句，突出重点
例 11：I didn't calm down until my head teacher patted me on the shoulder.直
到校长拍了拍我的肩膀,我才平静下来。
升级表达：It was not until my head teacher patted me on the shoulder that I
calmed down.
运用强调句 可以加强语气，突出所表达的情感态度或者突出某些人扣或事件。
2. 运用倒装句，以示强调
例 12：We got to the farm and then started to plant trees.我们到了农场,然后开
始种树。
升级表达：Hardly had we got to the farm when we started to plant trees.
恰当地使用例装句能够使文章句式更手富，重点更鲜明。
3. 运用虚拟语气，表达看法
例 13：Your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in English.
你无私的帮助让我在英语方面取得了如此大的进步。
升级表达： Had it not been for your selfless assistance, I couldn't have
made such great progress in English.
虚拟语气可以用来传递强烈的情愿，表达说话人的心理和真实感受。
104. 运用省略形式，避免累赘
例 14：If I'm given the job, I'm sure to be a good guide.
升级表达：If given the job, I'm sure to be a good guide.
如果我得到了这份工作，我一定会成为一名好向导。
略形式可以避免重复，使句子简洁紧凑、信息突出。
5. 运用感叹句，传递情感
例 15：I was happy to be one of the members in your team.
升级表达：How happy I was to be one of the members in your team !
我很高兴成为你们团队的一员。
感叹句可将说话人的情感更加强更地表达出来，使描述更生动。
技法三：结构清晰，浑然天成
结构混乱、逻辑不清是写作失分的一个重要原因。
写作时要注意句子内部、句与句之间、段与段之间的连贯性和逻辑性，可以用过渡表达
把文章的不同部分巧妙地连接在一起。
这样，文章会更加连贯、自然和紧凑，段落或文章的脉络也会更清晰，中心思想也会更
明确。
攻略：牢记常用过渡表达
考生可以根据意思和作用来选取合适的过渡表达，常用的过渡表达归纳如下：
111. 段落起始的过渡表达:
generally speaking
to begin/start with
first of all
in the first place
as we know
as is known to all
as is shown in
2. 段落结尾进行总结的过渡表达：
to sum up
in conclusion
in a word
in summary
all in all
3. 时间顺度的过渡表达：
first/second/third
(soon)afterwards
meanwhile
finally
at first/at last
in the beginning/in the end
subsequently
eventually
5. 解释说明的过渡表达：
in fact
as a matter of fact
in other words
namely to put it differently
126. 表示因果的过渡表达：
considering that
owing to
due to
because
therefore
as a result
consequently
thereby
thus
so
7. 表示强调的过渡表达：
Certainly
Indeed
above all
Surely
to tell (you) the truth
8. 表示递进或补充的过渡表达：
in addition
also
moreover
what's more
besides
to make matters worse
worse still
more/most importantly
last but not least
additionally
139. 举例或例举的过渡表达：
for example
for instance
such as
... be as follows
10. 表示让步或转折的过渡表达：
but/however/though/yet
11. 表示比较或对比的过渡表达：
like/unlike
in the same way
similarly
in contrast
whereas
instead/instead of
while
12. 表示观点的过渡表达：
personally
from my perspective
in my opinion
I'm fully convinced that
as I see it
as far as I'm concerned
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