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专题 02 道歉信 (应用文写作)
【考情分析】
年份 卷别 体裁 话题 内容
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信 学校生活 给外教提建议
2023 全国甲卷 投稿 历史文化 介绍中国历史人物
2023 全国乙卷 投稿 生活学习 假期习得新技能
2023 浙江卷 投稿 学校生活 写一篇报道“认识身边的植物”
2023 北京卷 建议信 学校生活 社团活动给出建议
2022 新高考I&II卷 邀请信 访谈 节目访谈
2022 全国甲卷 投稿 世界海洋日 保护海洋
2022 全国乙卷 投稿 调查结果 学习英语的状况
2022 北京卷 邀请信 社会科技 英语写作的线上交流
2022 浙江卷 邀请信 校园生活 邀朋友体验图书馆学习室
2021 北京卷 道歉信 校园生活 不能赴约道歉并建议再约
2016 全国新课标III卷 道歉信 人际交往 道歉并告知不能赴约的理由
【写作指导】
把握感谢信的写作框架。道歉信是指因为失约、损坏或弄丢别人的东西等,给别人带来了麻烦或损
失,给对方赔礼道歉时写的一种信件。其写作框架如下:
第一段:说明道歉的原因和写信的目的
第二段:具体阐述补救的措施
第三段:再次表达歉意并希望得到谅解
【素材宝库】
词汇积累之第一段1. I am writing this letter to convey/express my sincere apology to you for…
我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……
2. I would like to give you my apology for…
……向你道歉。
3. I am very sorry to say that…
表
我很抱歉……
4. I must apologize about (not) doing sth…
达
对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。
5. Please accept my sincere apology for…
谢
请接受我对于^的真诚道歉。
6. I am terribly/awfully/extremely sorry, but…
意
我很抱歉,但是……
词汇积累之第二段
1. Much to my regret, I was unable to .... And I wish that you will accept my apology.
令我非常遗憾的是,我不能……。我希望你能接受我的道歉。
1. I'm truly terribly sorry to tell you that.…., and I’m writing to express/convey my deepest
apology to you...
补
真的很抱歉告诉你……,我写信向你表达我深深的歉意。
2. I am writing to owe you an apology for being unable to...
救
我没能……,我写信向你道歉。
3. I apologize most sincerely for what I said that day. I didn't mean to hurt you.
措
我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。
4. Please forgive me for not being able to inform you.
施
请原谅我没能通知你。
5. I owe you an apology for being unable to help you.
我没能帮助你,应该向你道歉。
6. I am indeed sorry for what I said, but believe I had no intention to...
对于我说的话,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要......。
7. Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.
请原谅我说话欠妥。
8.I want you to know how bad we feel about it and to assure you that it will happen again.
我想让你知道我们有多难过,我向你保证这不会再发生了。
9.I feel you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me.
恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴,但是希望你能原谅我。10.I hope that this does not cause you too much inconvenience.
我希望这不会给你带来太多的不便。
11.If it is convenient for you, let's have another appointment to do sth.
如果方便的话,我们再约去做某事。
12.Would you mind if I change the appointment time?
你会介意我改变约会的时间吗?
13.By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week?
顺便说一下,我们在下周的某个时间一起吃晚饭好吗?
14.ls it possible that I make up for the loss by doing sth.?
可能让我做某事来弥补损失吗?
词汇积累之第三段
1. Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused .
对于造成的不便,我再次表示歉意。
2. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apologies.
再 我衷心希望你能理解我的处境,并接受我的道歉。
3. Please allow me to say sorry again
次 请允许我再次表示歉意。
4. I'm sorry for all the inconvenience.
道 我为引起的所有不便表示歉意。
5. Please accept my sincere apology once more for any inconvenience caused.
歉 对于由此造成的任何不便,请再次接受我真诚的歉意。
6. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
希望你们能够接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。
7. I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.
我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。
8. I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.
很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。
谚语积累1.
A faithful friend is hard to find.
益友难得。
2. A father is a treasure, a brother is a comfort, but a friend is both.
父亲是财富,兄弟是安慰,朋友兼而有之。
3. A friend in court is better than a penny in purse.
患难朋友才是真朋友。
4. Fire is the test of gold, adversity of friendship.
烈火试真金。
5. A candle lights others and consumes itself.
蜡烛照亮别人,却毁灭了自己。
万能写作模板
Dear Jim,
I’m terribly sorry for my not being able to attend the Chinese paper-cutting show in the Folk Art
Museum on Saturday morning as I have promised. _____________________________(我写信向你表示诚挚
的道歉).
__________________________________(我不能参加的原因是因为我叔叔从美国来) on Saturday morning.
_____________________________ (因此), my family are going to the airport to meet him, and then
we will have a family dinner together. _______________________(你介意吗) if I suggest we enjoy the
show on Sunday morning?
Hopefully, ___________________________________(这次变化不会给你带来态度麻烦).
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【 高考真题】
1.(2021·北京·高考真题)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你
因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend. I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit
my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was suddenly admitted to the hospital. I hope the change won’t cause
you too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning? If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at the school gate at 9: 00.
Please let me know what time suits you best. I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowers
together.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国好友Jim写一封电子邮件,就因故不能赴约而致歉并
建议再约。
【详解】1.词汇积累
通知:tell→inform
除此之外:in addition→besides
适合:fit→suit
有空的:available→free
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In addition, next Saturday, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park. Then we can go to see the flowerstogether.
拓展句:In addition, there will be a flower show in Beihai Park next Saturday, when we can go to see the flowers
together.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend.(运用了that引导的宾语
从句)
[高分句型2] I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside, who was
suddenly admitted to the hospital. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(2016·全国·高考真题)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________
【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to
attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.
If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I
should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给留学生朋友Bob写封邮件,因不能如约去书店而道歉,说
明原因,并另约时间。
【详解】1.词汇积累导致:cause→result in
选择:select→choose/elect
大门:gate→portal/main entrance
出发:set out→start off
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books.
拓展句:In order to have more time to read and select books, we can set out early .
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. (运用了
that引导宾语从句)
【高分句型2】 If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. (运用了If 引导的条件句)
【 名校模拟题提升练】
1.(2023·天津·高三校考)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,你的泰国朋友Taralah于三周前给你发电子邮
件,询问你寒假里的打算,但你因准备期中考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1.道歉并解释未及时回信原因;
2.你假期的打算(做兼职导游、旅行、做志愿者等)
3.邀请对方来津过年。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Taralah,
I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately , because I was so
occupied with the final exams.
As for the coming winter holiday, l will first do a part-time job in a fast-food restaurant. Not only will I earnsome money but I will also gain some social experience through it. During the Spring Festival, I will visit my
relatives with my parents and travel with my friends in the nearby scenic spots. This way, I can relax myself and
appreciate the scenery of my home city.
How about your plan? I sincerely invite you to come to Tianjin for the New Year.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给泰国朋友Taralah写一封邮件,说明未及时回信的原因并介
绍自己寒假里的打算以及邀请他来津过年。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常:terribly→extremely
因为:because→since
附近的:nearby→surrounding
欣赏:appreciate→admire
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:During the Spring Festival, I will visit my relatives with my parents and travel with my friends in the nearby
scenic spots.
拓展句: During the Spring Festival l will visit my relatives with my parents, after which I will travel with my
friends in the nearbyscenic spots.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Im terrbly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately,
because I was so occupied with the final exams.(运用了which引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only will earm some money but I will also gain some social experience through it.(运用了not
only ..but also...的并列结构)
2.(四川成都·高三校联考开学考试)假如你是交流生Jim,收到李华邀请你去听二胡音乐会的来信,你
非常高兴,但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封道歉信,信中要点包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Li Hua,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jim
【答案】
Dear Li Hua,
I'm pleased to receive your invitation to attend the Erhu concert, for I'm really fond of Chinese traditional
music, especially played on the Erhu. To my regret, I can't go with you. I have to express my apology to you.
This Saturday evening,I have made an appointment with my Chinese teacher. As you know, I have some
difficulty with written Chinese. He promised to communicate with me, giving some instructions on how to learn it
well. So I'm really sorry for that. Nevertheless, I hear there's another similar Erhu performance on Sunday. If it's
convenient for you, can we make it on Sunday afternoon?
I believe we' ll have another chance. Have a nice day!
Yours,
Jim
【分析】这是一篇应用文。假如考生是交流生Jim,收到李华邀请你去听二胡音乐会的来信,你非常高
兴,但是你因故不能同去。请你用英文给他写封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累(
高兴的:pleased→glad
说出席,参加:attend→take part in
在……上有困难:have some difficulty with→have some trouble with
向某人道歉:express my apology to→apologize to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:He promised to communicate with me, giving some instructions on how to learn it well.拓展句:He promised to communicate with me, giving some instructions on how we could learn it well.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As you know, I have some difficulty with written Chinese. (运用了as引导的非限制性定
语从句)
[高分句型2] He promised to communicate with me, giving some instructions on how to learn it well. (运用了现
在分词作伴随状语)
3.(·福建厦门·高二厦门一中校考期中)假定你是李华,在上一封信中你邀请Dr. Brown担任你校即将举
行的英语演讲比赛评委。但是,由于学校工作安排,调整了比赛时间和比赛地点。请再给Dr. Brown写一封
信,主要内容包括:
1.为临时变动道歉;
2.告知确定的时间和地点;
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Dr. Brown,
I'm writing to apologize for the change of the schedule and place for the English Speech Contest. I’m sorry for
the inconvenience it might have caused.
Due to some unexpected tasks assigned to our school, our president has to make a new arrangement and here
is the latest information. The English Speech Contest is finally scheduled to be held at 7:30 p.m. on June 30th in the
school lecture hall.
Your presence will be greatly appreciated since you are the most popular foreign teacher in our school.
Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给担任学校即将举行的英语演讲比赛评委Dr. Brown写一封
信,告诉他由于学校工作安排,调整了比赛时间和比赛地点。
【详解】词汇积累
由于:owing to=due to
意想不到的:uncontemplated=unexpected
演讲:speech=lecture
非常:very→greatly
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I'm writing to apologize for the change of the schedule and place for the English Speech Contest.
拓展句:I'm writing to apologize for changing of the schedule and place for the English Speech Contest.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry for the inconvenience it might have caused. (运用了定语从句)
[高分句型2] Due to some unexpected tasks assigned to our school, our president has to make a new arrangement
and here is the latest information. (运用了过去分词做定语)
4.(2023·重庆·高三重庆八中校考阶段练习)假定你是李华,上周末在回家的途中,把外教 Mr.
Thompson 借给你的一本诗集弄丢了。现在请你给 Mr. Thompson 写一封道歉信,要点如下:
1. 解释并表达歉意;
2. 提出解决的办法;
3.再次道歉并请求原谅。
参考词汇:诗集 poetry collection
注意:1.词数80 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Thompson,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua【答案】
Dear Mr. Thompson,
I am writing to extend my sincerest apologies regarding the regrettable incident that occurred last weekend,
where I unintentionally lost the poetry collection you lent me.
Fully aware of the emotional value and significance of the book to you, I deeply regret the inconvenience and
disappointment my actions may have caused. In an earnest effort to correct the situation, I have retraced my route
and conducted a thorough search, yet, unfortunately, I have thus far been unable to recover it. Nevertheless, I am
more than willing to remedy this loss by personally purchasing a brand-new copy of the exact edition, or
alternatively, by buying any book of your preference as compensation.
Once again, I sincerely apologize for my oversight and any trouble caused, and I hope you can find it in your
heart to forgive me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr. Thompson写一封道歉信,解释一下把诗集弄丢并
表达歉意,同时提出解决的办法并请求原谅。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发生:occur →happen
执行:conduct →carry out
不幸地:unfortunately →unluckily
购买:purchase →buy
2.句式拓展
形容词作状语变状语从句
原句:Fully aware of the emotional value and significance of the book to you, I deeply regret the inconvenience
and disappointment my actions may have caused.
拓展句:BecauseI am fully aware of the emotional value and significance of the book to you, I deeply regret the
inconvenience and disappointment my actions may have caused.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to extend my sincerest apologies regarding the regrettable incident that
occurred last weekend, where I unintentionally lost the poetry collection you lent me.(运用了that引导的定语从
句,where引导的非限制性定语从句,省略that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Once again, I sincerely apologize for my oversight and any trouble caused, and I hope you can find
it in your heart to forgive me.(运用了省略that引导的宾语从句,和过去分词作后置定语)5.(2022·广东东莞·高三校考阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的朋友Sarah曾邀请你参加她下个星期四的生
日晚会,可是弟弟生病了,需要人照看,不能去参加。请根据以下要点给他写一封道歉信。
1.表达歉意;
2.解释原因;
3.提出弥补的办法。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sarah,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sarah,
I’m indeed very sorry that I won’t attend to your birthday party as I was planned before.
As for the sudden change, I have to admit it has an unavoidable reason. My little brother are being sick for days.
So it is necessary for him to be cared. I am responsible for looking after him while my parents are working.
Therefore, I have to stay to accompany him that day. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive my
absence.
Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeing at this weekend? I do long for a pleasant chat with you
and give the present to you.
It is much to my regret that I miss the chance of such a happy get-toghther. Once again, please accepte my
secere apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生向朋友Sarah写一封道歉信。【详解】1. 词汇积累
出席,参加:attend → take part in
承认:admit → concede
原因:reason → cause
必需的:necessary → essential
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I do long for a pleasant chat with you and give the present to you.
拓展句:I do long for a pleasant chat with you and give the present to you, which stands for my best wish to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
As for the sudden change, I have to admit it has an unavoidable reason. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】
It is much to my regret that I miss the chance of such a happy get-toghther.(运用了it作形式主语)
6.(2023上·湖南·高三湖南师大附中校考阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的外教老师 David 与你约定每周
六晚上一次口语课,但是你身体有不适的症状,按照规定要居家隔离,因此,请你给 David写一封道歉
信,
内容包括:
1.表达歉意;
2.说明理由;
3.提出补救方案。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________
【答案】
Dear David,
I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday as scheduled.Recently, I’m not feeling well and required to stay at home according to the rules. However, I am very fond of
your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to
be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the video.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and
accept my apology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教老师David写一封道歉信,因自己身体不适需要居家
隔离而不能按照原定计划上口语课进行道歉,并提出补救方案。
【详解】1.词汇积累
确实、非常:indeed→terribly
喜欢:be fond of→be keen on
弥补:make up for→compensate for
机会:chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:However, I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons. So I’m wondering
whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review through the
video.
拓展句:However, because I am very fond of your classes and would like to make up for the lost lessons, I’m
wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the chance to learn and review
through the video.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the oral class this Saturday as
scheduled.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】So I’m wondering whether it’s possible for the lesson to be recorded and if so, I may have the
chance to learn and review through the video.(运用了whether引导的宾语从句和if so结构的省略句)
7.(2023·全国·高三专题练习)假设你是高二学生陈伟,昨天,你和你的外籍同桌Bob关于用集体班费给
灾区捐款这一问题发生了一些小争执,请你按照以下要求给他写一封道歉信。
1. 表达自己的歉意;
2. 阐述道歉的原因(至少2条);
3. 表达自己的友好之情,提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Bob,
I am writing to express my regret at the unpleasant argument between us yesterday. I felt so sorry for what 1
did and said yesterday. I donated all the money to the students in the flooded area without discussing the plan with
you.
I could have dealt with it differently. But when I handed in the money, you happened to be away from school
and later I didn't explain it to you in an appropriate way. What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the
collection, which hurt you so much.
Now I want to take back what I said. Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday, and I'd like
you to try to understand my situation. I hope our friendship will last long.
Yours,
Chen Wei
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作,要求你给同桌Bob写一封道歉信,表达歉意,阐述道歉原因并表达友好之
情。
【详解】1.词汇积累
歉意:apology→regret
合适的:suitable→appropriate
撤回:withdraw→take back
冲动的:hotheaded→impulsive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Please accept my apology for being so impulsive yesterday.拓展句:Please accept my apology, for I was so impulsive yesterday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I could have dealt with it differently. (could have done,运用了虚拟语气)
[高分句型2] What was worse, I said that you didn't care about the collection, which hurt you so much. (综合运用
状语从句、宾语从句和非限制性定语从句)
8.(2022年四川·成都外国语学校高三期中)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Bob,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Bob,I'm writing to express my sincere apologies to you for not going to the bookstore with you at our
appointed time. I’m sorry for the inconvenience it may cause you.
The reason why I won’t be available at that time is that my grandfather felt ill suddenly
yesterday and now he is in hospital. My family are taking turns to take care of him in the hospital. So
I have to stay with him that day. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies. Meanwhile,I would
appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another date. If it’s convenient for you, shall we meet at
8:00 am next Saturday? If not, please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best.
Sorry again for the inconvenience caused.
Yours,
Li Hua
(习作点评)
1. 格式正确,语言流畅,用词准确,使用了不少高级句型和短语。
2. 结构完整,开篇点题。所用语言非常委婉,表达出了诚意。所用句型不单一,长短句相
结合。
3. 必背句式:
(1) the inconvenience it may cause you.
(2) The reason why I won’t be available at that time is that my grandfather feit ilI'll
本句主语为the reason为先行词,why引导定语从句,that引出名词性从句充当表语从句。
(3) I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another...
(4) 本句使用it充当形式宾语,if引导真正的宾语从句,表示委婉的经典句型。
(5) Sorry again for the inconvenience caused.句中caused为过去分词充当后置定语。
9.(2022年江苏省高邮市教育局高三考试)
假如你是李华,与朋友Smith约好了本周末去高邮市博物馆,因故不能赴约,请给他写封道歉信,内
容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Smith,
I’m writing to sincerely apologize for not being able to accompany you to Gaoyou Museum this weekend.
My headmaster informed me that we would participate in a voluntary activity to help create a civilized city,
which is so important that I don’t want to miss it. That is the reason why I won’t be available at that time. If it’s
convenient for you, we can make it next weekend, or let me know what time suits you best.
Please allow me to say sorry again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,与朋友Smith约好了本周末去高邮市博物馆,因故不
能赴约,请给他写封道歉信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
道歉:apologize for→make an apology for
参加:participate in→take part in
重要的:important→vital
真诚地:sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m writing to sincerely apologize for not being able to accompany you to Gaoyou Museum this weekend.
拓展句:I’m writing to sincerely apologize because I won’t be able to accompany you to Gaoyou Museum this
weekend.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m writing to sincerely apologize for not being able to accompany you to Gaoyou Museum
this weekend. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] My headmaster informed me that we would participate in a voluntary activity to help create a
civilized city, which is so important that I don’t want to miss it. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)10.(2022年江苏·高三专题考试)
假如你是李华,你约好昨天去公交车站接你的英国朋友Dylan,然后一起去公园。但你却迟到了,他有些
生气,没有等到你就离开了。请用英语给他写一封道歉信,内容如下:
1.认错,道歉,解释原因;
2.许诺以后一定守时;
3.请求原谅。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dylan,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Dylan,
I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
I was supposed to pick you up at the bus station at 10 a.m. But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy
traffic into consideration. As a result, I unfortunately got caught up in a terrible traffic jam and failed to arrive there
on time. However, it shouldn’t be my excuse and you have every right to be angry with me.
I promise that anything like this won’t happen once again. Again, I am excessively sorry about what have
happened. I would truly appreciate it if you could kindly forgive me and I will definitely turn over a new leaf in the
future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向自己的朋友道歉,因为自己没有遵守约定按时接他,
并承诺以后一定守时。
【详解】1.词汇积累表达:convey→ express
真诚:sincere → genuine
应该:be supposed to → should
非常:excessively→ extremely/very
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you for not being punctual yesterday.
拓展句:I am writing to convey my sincere apology to you because I was not punctual yesterday.
【点睛】【高分句型1】But so careless was I that I forgot to take the busy traffic into consideration.(运用了
that引导的结果状语从句和倒装句,即表语前置时,用倒装)
【高分句型2】Again, I am excessively sorry about what have happened.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)