模板 18 图表&图画作文
本节导航
本节导航：
模识板·01题 满型分解词读汇 真 题 分 析 + 关 模键板词 +0 考2 点满揭分秘 句型
模板03 满分作文
明·模板构建 答题模板 + 技巧点拨
模板01 满分词汇 模板02 满分句型
模板03 满分作文
·模板运用 真题示例 + 思路点拨 + 规范答题 + 举一反三
通
练·模板演练 最新模拟、预测考向
年份 卷别 体裁
2024 新高考I&II卷 告知信
全国甲卷 演讲稿
2023 新高考I&II卷 建议信
全国甲&乙卷 征文投稿
2022 新高考I卷I&II 邀请信
全国甲卷 征文投稿
全国乙卷 征文投稿
题型 真题示例 关键词
【2022年全国乙卷英语真题】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English
Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文
投稿，内容包括：
图表&图 考点关键词：
画作文 1. 学习活动状况描述； 图表、图画
2. 简单评论；3. 你的建议。
图表作文一般是对某个具体问题的调查或统计，常常反映出一个普遍的问题。考生在
描述内容时应过渡到普遍现象。
写作特点：需要介绍图表中见了什么，数据有什么变动，反映了哪些问题和趋势，并分析
问题或数据背后的原因, 结合自己的看法谈谈解决措施或给出观点。
写作特点：1. 审读图表，提炼要点；
2. 分析要点，确立主题；
3. 灵活运用横向对比，即描述数据的变化；纵向说明，反映出问题。
4. 谋篇成文，呈现亮点；
考点揭秘
图画作文也称看图作文。是高考英语书面表达常见的考查类型之一，也是最能体现考
生语言水平的一种写作模式。
命题特点：1.话题弘扬正确的价值观，体现中华优秀传统文化。
2. 材料贴近中学生的生活实际，充满时代气息。
3. 培养学生的逻辑思维能力和创新能力。
4.要点突出，细节清晰。
时态与人称：这种文体通常用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主。
写作类型：看图叙事、看图说理。
写作步骤：1. 审题定文体、人称和时态。整体把握图画，明确题目要求。
2. 归纳要点、扩充句子，描述细节内容。
3. 添加关联词和过渡句，连句成文。第一段 点明图表所反映的主题或引出话题，陈述图表主要信息。
第二段 分析图表展示内容的原因或进行评论，运用下表中逻辑关系词。
第三段 围绕主题展望未来或提出解决问题的方法、建议或希望等。
第一段 语言精炼、开门见山，简介何时何人经历的事件。
第二段 运用多种句式，和过渡词，按照时间或事件的发展顺序分层次展开要点。
第三段 归纳总结，有感而发，写出得到的体会或看法。
模板01 满分必备词块
chart/graph/table图表； account for占比......
percentage百分比; stable稳定的；
rapidly迅速地； sharply急剧的；
图表作文
dramatically戏剧性地； steadily稳定地；
短语
slightly稍微地； increase增加；
decline下降； do harm to对......有害；
be of benefit to对......有益；
顺序 First of all, Firstly/First; Secondly/Second，...； Finally， In the end, At last;
补充 What’s more; Besides; Furthermore; In addition; Moreover; not only...but also... ;
including;
转折 However; on the contrary; but; although; in spite of; on the one hand..., on the other
hand...; while;
因果 Thus; so; as; because; therefore; as a result; as a consequence of; on account of;
be interested in...对......感兴趣； take an active part in...积极参加......
图画作文 be crazy about...痴迷于......； be good at擅长于......；
短语
be poor at...某方面薄弱； be weak in...某方面薄弱；
succeed in...成功做某事； get 95 marks for...在考试中获得95分；
get an“A”in the exam考生得优； enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事；
enjoy a family trip to.享受全家旅游； go swimming/camping去游泳/露营；
have dancing lessons上舞蹈课； go for a picnic去野餐；
go for an outing去远足； have a party举办一场晚会；hold a sports meeting举办一场运动会； spend one’s time in .........度过时间；
模板02 满分句型
【满分句型模板之开篇“风头”句】
图表作文
1. A survey on whether ...has been conducted recently, aiming to...
一项关于是否……最近进行的调查，目的是为了.......
2. The chart provides data about...
该图表提供了关于......
3. According to the charts, ...
根据图表显示，……
4. The number of smokers decreased from 25% in 1976 to 21% in 2000.
吸烟者的人数从1976年的25%下降到2000年的21%
5. As we can see from the graph above, great changes have taken place in...
正如我们从上面的图表中可以看到的，......
6. Actually, some factors always stand out on top of others, if we take closer look
into the issue.
实际上，如果我们仔细研究这个问题，一些因素总是最突出的。
7. Such phenomenon may be rooted in the following reasons.
这种现象可能源于以下原因。
8. There is a phenomenon that...
有一种现象是......
9. With the development of science and technology，...
随着科技的发展，......
10. with the booming of the economy
随着人民生活水平的显著提高；
11. As is clearly shown on the chart, the majority of the students surveyed...
从图表上可以清楚地显示出，大多数接受调查的学生。
12. It can easily be seen that the percentage of A and B is respectively...and...可以很容易地看出，A和B的百分比分别是……和……。
图画作文
1. Last Saturday, We invited a craftsman to show us how to make dough figurines.
上周六，我们邀请了一位工匠教我们如何制作面团小雕像。
2. Last Friday, the English was going on when suddenly our teacher, Miss Liu slippered
and fell off the stage.
上星期五，英语课始了，突然我们的老师刘老师从讲台台上摔了下来。
3. It can be seen from the pictures that ice in Arctic is disappearing fast and...
从图片上可以看出，北极的冰正在迅速消失。
4. As is depicted in the picture, a young man, reluctant to teach...
正如图中所描述的那样，一个年轻人，不愿教.....
5. As is shown in the pictures, some students helped clean up the rubbish on the ground to
beautify our surroundings, while others warmly showed the way to the children who lost their
way.
如图所示，一些学生帮助清理地上的垃圾，美化我们周围的环境，而另一些学生则热情
地给迷路的孩子们指路。
【满分句型模板之中间“猪肚”句】
图表作文
1. There are several reasons for...
有几个原因......。
2. Due to the dramatic change in people’s notions, they realize benefits of doing
part-time jobs.
由于人们观念的剧烈变化，他们意识到了做兼职的好处。
3. It goes without saying that...
毋庸置疑......。
4. Given the analyses above, it can be predicted that ...
根据以上的分析，我们可以预测......
5. Only in this way can we solve this problem properly.
只有这样，我们才能适当地解决这个问题。
6. However, those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning
websites only account for 18% and 12%.
然而，那些选择阅读英语书籍和访问英语学习网站的人只占18%和12%。图画作文
1. After the new teacher came into the classroom, we gave him warm welcome.
在新老师进入教室之后，我们热烈地欢迎他。
2. Impressed by what we did, we had photos taken with the craftsman.
我们所做的一切给我们留下了深刻的印象，我们和工匠拍了照片。
3. Meanwhile, two boys offered timely help.
与此同时，两个男孩及时提供了帮助。
4. At the beginning of the party, our monitor made a short speech.
聚会一开始，班长做了一个简短的发言。
【满分句型模板之结尾“豹尾”句】
图表作文
1.The bar chart describes significant changes in the...
该柱形图描述了……的最重要的变化。
2. From my perspective, ...
在我看来，......
3. From where I stand...I hold the point of view that...
从我所处的位置。我持有这个观点......
4. As far as I’m concerned, any way suits us best is a good choice.
就我而言，任何最适合我们的方式都是一个好的选择。
图画作文
1. What a meaningful day!
多么有意义的一天啊！
2. Only from this experience did I realize that it was a pleasure as well as our duty
to inherit our cultural treasures.
只有从这次经历中，我才意识到，继承我们的文化宝藏既是一种快乐，也是我们的责
任。
3. It was a meaningful day for all of us because we had done a good deed.
这对我们所有人来说都是有意义的一天，因为我们已经做了一件好事。
4. Never shall I forget the race.我
将永远不会忘记那次比赛。
5. Today is an unforgettable day for me, for it is the first time that I have takenpart in our school sports meeting and I have got the first place.
今天对我来说是难忘的一天，因为这是我第一次参加校运会并且取得了第一名。
6. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to
everyone.
从那以后，我一直铭记着这个教训：礼貌对待每个人。
7. Personally, everyone should and can do something like turning off electric.
就我个人而言，每个人都应该也可以做一些事情，比如关掉电动设备.
模板03 满分作文
【三段式满分作文模板一 】
As is shown in the chart, the percentage of A and B is
respectively________%and________%. Another ________%________.(描述图表信息)
As we all know, ________do much harm to________, even causing people to
________. At the same time, ________.In addition, ___________（分析图表所反映现象
带来的危害）How do we keep balance between ___________and____________？
As far as I’m concerned, I think we should_________. Do remember
that_____________. (提出具体建议，以避免上述现象带来的危害)
【三段式满分作文模板二 】
As is vividly shown in the picture,___.(描述图画内容)The picture/cartoon informs us
of the phenomenon that________________.(图画反映的现象) These may/might be several
factors contributing to/responsible for the phenomenon/problem.
To start with,________________. Secondly,________________.What's
more,________________. Last but not least,________________.(说明原因) In my opinion,
the government/the school/we should take measures to/something must be done
to________________.（应对措施）
Only in this way can the problem be really solved. / Only when everyone can do
so will our world become more and more beautiful.(解决问题的方法)【2022年全国乙卷英语真题】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom
为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学习活动状况描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
【答题思路】
第一段：描述调查结果
简要概述图表中关于课外英语学习活动的数据（如最受欢迎的活动及其参与比例）。
第二段：简单评论
1.分析这些活动对学生英语学习的帮助（如提高兴趣、增强实践能力等）。
2.指出可能存在的问题或不足。
第三段：提出建议
1.针对现状提出改进建议（如增加活动种类、提高参与度等）。
2.鼓励学生积极参与课外英语学习。
Learning English Beyond the ClassroomNowadays, with the growing popularity of smartphones and computers, an increasing
number of students are choosing to learn English beyond the classroom in various ways.
It can easily be seen that the percentage of students who choose listening to English songs
and watching English movies is respectively 65% and 50%. However, those choosing reading
English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
As far as I’m concerned, it is a disturbing trend. For students, what benefits most to their
study is reading English books. Because of their lack of self-discipline, they’re more easily
addicted to chatting online or playing games. It’s urgent for students themselves to improve their
self-discipline, and it’s also urgent for parents and teachers to strengthen the guidance.
【2024年全国甲卷英语真题】英语课要求做课堂展示, 请你根据所给图片，以Development
of Transport in China为题写一篇发言稿。
注意:
1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has an
enormous development.
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_______________________________________________________________________________【答题思路】
第一段：简要介绍中国交通发展的历史背景。
点明交通发展的巨大变化。
第二段：具体发展
1. 描述图片中展示的交通工具（如从马车到高铁、飞机等）。
2. 强调技术进步和基础设施建设的成就。
第三段：总结与展望
1. 总结交通发展对人民生活和经济的影响。
2. 展望未来交通发展的方向（如智能化、绿色出行等）。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today’s convenient transport, Chinese transport has seen enormous
development. Chinese transport has undergone remarkable transformations, giving the Chinese people access to
different ways of travelling.
Firstly, shared bicycles have emerged as a symbol of urban mobility, offering an affordable and green
alternative for short trips. Secondly, the introduction of high- speed trains has dramatically shortened travel times,
making intercity travel faster and more comfortable. Lastly, the proliferation of new energy vehicles underscores
China’s dedication to environmental sustainability, reducing reliance on fossil fuels. These developments illustrate
China’s journey towards a modern and efficient transportation network that balances convenience with
environmental responsibility.
In short, China’s transport system is embracing innovation and eco-friendliness.
【2025届河南省郑州市中原区高三上学期模拟预测英语试题】学校英文报正在开展以 “Using fitness apps
to monitor health” 为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
学生使用健身应用程序监控健康的调查结果注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
Using fitness apps to monitor health
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One possible version:
Using fitness apps to monitor health
According to a recent survey, 33% of the students involved are currently using fitness apps to monitor their
daily steps, heart rate and body weight. 18% used them before, but now they don’t use them. Surprisingly, a
significant 45% have never used such technology, and 4% express uncertainty about it.
This data highlights a growing interest in health tracking technology, yet also indicates many remain hesitant
or unaware of its benefits. It’s crucial to recognize the potential of these apps in promoting overall well-being
through personalized tracking and goal setting.
For those who haven’t tried, I recommend exploring their features to understand how they can contribute to
better health management. Additionally, ongoing research can be done to rid misconceptions and encourage broader
adoption of the apps.Passage 1
【2025届重庆市重庆市九龙坡区育才中学校高三上学期一模英语试题】英语课要求做一个课堂展示，请你
根据所给图片，以 Sports and Fitness——The Weekly Exercise Duration of High School Students 为主题写一
篇发言稿。
内容包括：1.描述图表信息;
2.说明问题并提出解决方法。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to share with you some figures regarding the weekly exercise duration of high school
students.
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【答案】
Good morning, everyone!
Today, I’m honored to share with you some figures regarding the weekly exercise duration of high school
students. Illustrated in the chart is that 55% of students, making up the majority, exercise merely 0-2 hours weekly.
Meanwhile, 35% do it for 2-7 hours, with merely 10% spending over 7 hours on physical activities.
The figures are rather worrying. With students engaging in regular exercise as they should, maintaining
physical and mental well-being would become an achievable feat of crucial importance. But over half scarcely takeenough physical activities, potentially resulting in problems like obesity and stress, which may further affect study
focus.
To better the situation, schools and parents could encourage students to get involved in sports, perhaps by
organizing more activities. As students ourselves, we might also take minor actions, be it walking, cycling or
joining a team. Remember, a healthy body breeds a sharp mind. Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，要求考生根据所给图片，以Sports and Fitness——The Weekly
Exercise Duration of High School Students为主题写一篇发言稿。内容包括：描述图表信息以及说明问题并
提出解决方法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
同时：meanwhile→at the same time
仅仅： merely→only
令人担忧的：worrying→of concern
导致：result in →lead to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To better the situation, schools and parents could encourage students to get involved in sports, perhaps by
organizing more activities.
拓展句：To better the situation, it is advisable that schools and parents should encourage students to get involved
in sports, perhaps by organizing more activities.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Meanwhile, 35% do it for 2-7 hours, with merely 10% spending over 7 hours on physical
activities.（运用了with的复合结构）
【高分句型2】But over half scarcely take enough physical activities, potentially resulting in problems like
obesity and stress, which may further affect study focus.（运用了现在分词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语
从句）
Passage 2
【重庆市巴蜀中学校2024-2025学年高三上学期12月期中英语试题】学校英语报社正在开展以“Choose to
Eat, Eat to Choose”为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 调查结果描述；
2. 简单评论；
3. 你的建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose
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【答案】参考范文
Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose
A survey on food choices among our school pupils showed significant imbalances. Pupils consume less rice,
grains, fruits, and vegetables, accounting for just 20% and 18% of their diet, risking nutrient deficiencies. Fat and
sugar intake is alarmingly high at 45%, far above the recommended 9%. To address this, I propose the school
introduce more healthy food options and educate students on balanced diets. Raising awareness through campaigns
can help pupils make better food choices, ensuring a healthier lifestyle. By adjusting diets consciously, we pave the
way for improved well-being.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生根据图表中的调查结果，以“Choose to Eat, Eat to Choose”
为题，写一篇短文描述调查结果，进行简单评论，并提出个人建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
显著的：significant → notable/remarkable
处理：address → deal with/handle
建议：propose → suggest/advise
选择：option → choice2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A survey on food choices among our school pupils showed significant imbalances.
拓展句：A survey on food choices among our school pupils revealed that there were significant imbalances in their
dietary habits.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Pupils consume less rice, grains, fruits, and vegetables, accounting for just 20% and 18% of
their diet, risking nutrient deficiencies. (运用了现在分词accounting for作后置定语和现在分词risking作结果
状语)
[高分句型2] To address this, I propose the school introduce more healthy food options and educate students on
balanced diets. (运用了不定式作目的状语和省略连词that的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] Raising awareness through campaigns can help pupils make better food choices, ensuring a healthier
lifestyle.(运用了动名词短语作主语和现在分词短语作结果状语)
Passage 3
【广东省深圳市桃源居中澳实验学校等校2024-2025学年高三上学期期中联考英语试题】下列表格内容为
某市2005年与2015年人们度假方式的情况比较，请按表格内容写一篇100词左右的短文，并对度假方式
发生变化的原因加以简要评析。
年度 2005 2015 原因
境外旅
11% 22% 收入增加
游
海边度
38% 31% 海水污染
假
爬山野
11% 34% 回归自然
营
The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015.
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【答案】 The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 2005 to 2015. The table shows that a
greater number of people spent their holidays traveling abroad in 2015. The rate of 2015 (22%) doubled that of2005 (11%). We are sure that the number will further increase for Chinese people’s incomes continue to rise, and
more and more people can afford journeys abroad.
At the same time, the seaside attracted a lot of people. However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2005
to 31% in 2015, the reason for which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted. The polluted seaside is likely
to drive more visitors away.
The year 2015 witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and camping. The rate
of 2015 was three times higher than that of 2005. The reason is that more and more people are eager to get close to
nature. It is not only beneficial to their health but also to their peace of mind.
In conclusion, with the improvement of living conditions, people are not satisfied with the basic demand. We
travel farther than before, and we pay more attention to the life quality.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，要求考生分析表格内容，并对人们度假方式发生变化的原因加以
简要评析。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
同时：at the same time→meanwhile
吸引：attract→appeal to
稍微：slightly→a bit/a little
渴望做：be eager to do…→desire to do…
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：The rate of 2015 was three times higher than that of 2005.
拓展句：The rate of 2015 was three times as high as that of 2005./ The rate of 2015 was three times the height of
that of 2005.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, the rate slightly dropped from 38% in 2005 to 31% in 2015, the reason for
which lies in the fact that sea water is being polluted.(使用了“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】The year 2015 witnessed a sharp increase in the number of people who went climbing and
camping. (使用了who引导定语从句)
Passage 4
【河南省部分名校2024-2025学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题】假定你是李华，你所在的兴趣小组对中
学生使用“搜题软件”的情况进行了调查研究。请为校英文报写一篇文章，内容包括：
1. 调查结果 （如图所示）
2. 分析原因；使用者3. 你的感想。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】 Recently, our interest group conducted a survey on the use of question-solving apps among
high school students. The results are astonishing: about 60% of students admit to frequently relying on these apps
for homework assistance.
The reasons behind this trend are diverse. Facing heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are
drawn to quick solutions. These question-solving apps offer them a rapid means to tackle academic challenges.
Additionally, the excessive expectations from society and family are partly to blame for this phenomenon.
Personally, using these apps moderately as a learning tool is wise, rather than allowing them to spoil our
critical thinking and problem-solving skills. After all, learning is not merely about finding answers; it’s about
understanding knowledge, which is essential for our long-term personal growth.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，要求考生根据图表分析调查结果、产生这种结果的原因，并发表
感想。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
令人惊讶的：astonishing→surprising
依赖：rely on→depend on
压力：pressure→stress
处理：tackle→handle
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Facing heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions.拓展句：Because they face heavy academic pressure and tight schedules, students are drawn to quick solutions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The results are astonishing: about 60% of students admit to frequently relying on these
apps for homework assistance. (使用了动名词短语作宾语)
【高分句型2】After all, learning is not merely about finding answers; it’s about understanding knowledge, which
is essential for our long-term personal growth. (使用了动名词分别作主语和宾语、which引导非限制性定语从
句)
Passage 5
（2023·黑龙江齐齐哈尔·统考二模）某英语网站正在开展以“Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?”为
题的讨论。请你根据下图跟帖，内容包括：
1. 图片描述；
2. 简单评论。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?
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【答案】
Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?
Undoubtedly, this picture has reminded me of a phenomenon that cannot be ignored: A lot of children need to
be paid to do housework.From my point of view, children should not be misled to believe that everything always has a return. Instead,
measures should be taken to encourage them to believe that housework itself can be the reward because it is not
only a way to show their love to their families, but also helps them to become responsible persons in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。题目要求考生根据图片内容，围绕“Should Children Be Paid to Do
Housework?”的主题发表帖子，需要描述图片内容，并作简单的评论。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
毫无疑问：undoubtedly→ unquestionably/there is no doubt that/ there is no denying that
忽视：ignore→neglect/disregard
在我看来：from my point of view→in my opinion/from my perspective,/as far as I am concerned
相反：instead→rather/ alternatively
采取措施：take measures→take action/ take steps
鼓励：encourage→inspire/ motivate
展示：show→display/exhibit/demonstrate
2. 句式拓展
同义句转写
原句：Undoubtedly, this picture has reminded me of a phenomenon that cannot be ignored: A lot of children need
to be paid to do housework.
同义句：Undoubtedly, this picture has reminded me of an unignorable phenomenon that a lot of children need to
be paid to do housework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Undoubtedly, this picture has reminded me of a phenomenon that cannot be ignored: A
lot of children need to be paid to do housework.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】From my point of view, children should not be misled to believe that everything always has a
return.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型3】Instead, measures should be taken to encourage them to believe that housework itself can be the
reward because it is not only a way to show their love to their families, but also helps them to become responsible
persons in the future.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、because引导的原因状语从句）
Passage 6
【2024届山东省济宁市高三下学期三模考试英语试题】4月22日为世界地球日。你在某国际网站上看到下
面两张图片。请你用英语在留言板上发一个帖子, 内容包括：
1. 图片简介；2. 个人感想。
Earth Day
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】范文
On World Earth Day, I came across two powerful images on an international website. One portrays our
planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and
generous blessings.
The powerful images set me thinking. Obviously, the planet’s tears symbolize the harm caused by human
activities, such as deforestation, pollution, and climate change. Yet, our generous Earth, the ultimate giver of gifts,
makes us feel guilty for not fully appreciating and safeguarding its generosity. These images awakens a sense of
guilt and an urgent need to protect the earth.
It’s high time that we banded together to preserve and restore our Earth. By embracing sustainable practices,
minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the
way for a sustainable future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图片内容写一个关于地球日的帖子。
【详解】1.词汇积累显然：obviously→apparently
紧急的：urgent→pressing
遇到：come across→encounter
表达：express→extend
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by contrast, showcases
Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
拓展句：One portrays our planet shedding tears, which expresses its sorrow while the other one, by contrast,
showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings.
【点睛】[高分句型1] One portrays our planet shedding tears, expressing its sorrow while the other one, by
contrast, showcases Earth’s continuous and generous blessings. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] By embracing sustainable practices, minimizing our carbon footprint, and advocating for
environmentally responsible policies, we are bound to pave the way for a sustainable future. (运用了动名词作宾
语)
Passage 7
（2023·陕西西安·陕西师大附中校考二模）假设你是光明中学高三（1）班的学生李华，今天学校组织了消
防演习。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英语日记，叙述整个演习过程，并谈谈自己的感想。
注意：（1）日记的开头已为你写好；
（2）词数100词左右；（3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
This morning, our school held a fire drill.
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【答案】
This morning, our school held a fire drill.
We were listening to the teacher attentively in the math class when we heard the fire alarm from the speaker on
the wall. The teacher stopped teaching immediately and instructed us to exit the classroom in order. When we got
into the passageway, we found we were surrounded by smoke everywhere. It was choking and our tears ran down.
We students bent down, covered our mouth with handkerchiefs, and ran downstairs rapidly into the open on the
playground, just as we had been taught before.
When we came back to our classroom, we students gave a summary of this fire drill. I think fire disasters are
often seen on TV and read about in the newspaper. We should know the skill to escape from a fire in case of
emergency.
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇记叙文，要求考生写一篇英语日记，叙述整个消防演练过程，并谈谈自己的
感想。
【详解】1.词汇积累
立刻：immediately→instantly
指导：instruct→guide
经常：often→frequently
应该：should→be supposed to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It was choking and our tears ran down.
拓展句：It was choking, which made our tears run down.
【点睛】[高分句型1]
We were listening to the teacher attentively in the math class when we heard the fire alarm from the speaker on the
wall. (运用了固定句型)
[高分句型2]When we got into the passageway, we found we were surrounded by smoke everywhere. (运用了when引导时间
状语从句和省略了that的宾语从句)
Passage 8
（2023·新疆·统考一模）请根据图片内容和要求用英语写一篇短文。
内容要求：
1. 描述画面（守株待兔）；
2. 概述其寓意；
3. 谈谈个人感想。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇： stump 树桩
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【答案】
In the picture, a man is staying by a stump waiting for hares to come and dash themselves against it.
Legend has it that a farmer was one day working in the fields when he saw a hare bump into a stump
accidentally and break its neck. From then on, he gave up farming and simply sat by the stump waiting for more
hares to come and run into it. However, there is no such thing as something for nothing. It’s also foolish of those
who don’t work through their own efforts, but still want to be rewarded.
We should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. It’s hard work that pays off.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生根据图片内容和要求用英语写一篇短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
意外地：accidentally→by chance
从那时起：from then on→since then
放弃：give up→abandon
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In the picture, a man is staying by a stump waiting for hares to come and dash themselves against it.
拓展句：In the picture, a man is staying by a stump, who is waiting for hares to come and dash themselves against
it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It’s also foolish of those who don’t work through their own efforts, but still want to be
rewarded.（运用了who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】It’s hard work that pays off.（运用了强调句型）
Passage 9
（2023·福建三明·统考三模）最近你在互联网上看到一幅漫画。作为一名高三学生，你深有感触，决定向
学校英文报投稿，内容包括：
1. 漫画反映的现象；
2. 你的看法。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
With Gaokao approaching, many senior three students feel quite stressed, unwilling to spare time for sports.
I can well understand them and appreciate their devotion to their studies a lot. However, they just ignore the
important role sports play. In fact, doing sports regularly benefits us in various ways. First, sports give us valuable
practice in building up our bodies. Besides, by working out regularly, we’ll keep refreshed, thus improving our
study efficiency.
Therefore, I’m convinced that we should strike a balance between study and relaxation so that we can get well
prepared for our future physically and mentally.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于看图作文。最近你在互联网上看到一幅漫画。作为一名高三学生，你深有感
触，决定向学校英文报投稿，内容包括：漫画反映的现象；你的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有压力的：stressed→pressured
忽视：ignore→neglect
各种各样的：various→a variety of
此外：Besides→In addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With Gaokao approaching, many senior three students feel quite stressed, unwilling to spare time for sports.
拓展句：With Gaokao approaching, many senior three students feel quite stressed, who are unwilling to spare time
for sports.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Besides, by working out regularly, we’ll keep refreshed, thus improving our study
efficiency.(运用了现在分词作结果状语)
[高分句型2] Therefore, I’m convinced that we should strike a balance between study and relaxation so that we can
get well prepared for our future physically and mentally.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和so that引导的状语从句)
