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高频话题12 德育培养
  年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025 年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who 
I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1
月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演
讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提
出推荐
提纲类
2024 年
新高考I
和II 卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China 为题的发言
稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1
月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做
饭
提纲类
2023 年
新高考全
国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得
的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1
月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022 年
新高考全
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
近五年考情分析
国卷
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1
月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021 年
新高考全
国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1
月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners 为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
提纲类
1. 通用词汇和句式
通用核心词汇
劳动教育
劳动教育:education on the hard-working spirit
劳动周:Labour Week
发起一项活动:launch a campaign
家务劳动:do housework / house chores
基本劳动能力:basic working capability
养成良好的劳动习惯:form good working habits
减轻父母的负担:reduce parents' burden
责任感:a sense of responsibility
珍惜劳动成果:cherish the fruits of labour
尊重劳动:respect labour
家庭与校
园美德
传统美德:traditional moral values / virtues
孝敬父母:respecting parents / show filial piety
尊师重教:respecting teachers and valuing education
以自我为中心:regard oneself as the "center"
语料表达
忽视父母:ignore one's parents
改善亲子关系:lead to a better parent-kid relationship
不文明现象:uncivilized phenomena
浪费食物:waste food
严重后果:serious consequences
社会责任
与公民意
识
文明城市:National Civilized City
生活质量:quality of life
缓解交通拥堵:ease traffic jams
呈现新面貌:take on a completely fresh look
节约粮食:save food / be thrift on food
打包剩菜:pack leftovers
光盘行动:clear the plate
网络不文明用语:uncivilized words online
身心健康:physical and mental health
健康的网络环境:a healthy Internet environment
生态道德
与生命关
怀
自然保护区:Nature Reserve
无限期关闭:permanently closed
有条件开放:conditionally open
敏感/脆弱的环境:sensitive / fragile / vulnerable environment
乱扔垃圾:throw litter about
垃圾分类:sort garbage
保护野生动物:protect wildlife
非法狩猎:illegal hunting
拒绝购买:say no to the purchase
未经许可:without permission
万能句式
劳动教育
活
动
目的
To strengthen education on the hard-working spirit, our school has 
launched a campaign called “Let's do housework”, through which 
students are supposed to acquire basic working capability and form good 
working habits.
为了加强对学生的劳动精神教育,我们学校发起了一场名为“让我
们做家务”的活动,旨在让学生通过此次活动获得基本劳动能力并
养成良好的劳动习惯。
个
人
收
获:
Doing housework not only helps reduce parents' burden but also 
helps us to develop a sense of responsibility.
做家务不仅有助于减轻父母的负担,也能帮助我们培养责任感。
活
动
We can benefit a lot from labour. Our awareness of labour can be 
developed, and we learn to cherish and respect the fruits of 
意义
people's work.
我们能从劳动中获益匪浅。我们的劳动意识能够得到培养,并且我
们学会了珍惜和尊重人们的劳动成果。
家庭与校
园美德
问
题
阐述
As most students today are the "only child" in their family, they 
often regard themselves as the "center", ignoring their parents.
由于现在的大多数学生是家中的“独生子女”,他们常常把自己视
为“中心”,从而忽视了父母。
活
动
效果
The "Respecting Parents" program has won praises from parents 
and, meanwhile, has led to a better parent-kid relationship.
这项“尊敬父母”活动赢得了家长们的赞誉,同时也带来了更好的
亲子关系。
提
出
建议
I suggest that the school post more noticeable slogans and make 
relevant rules to help students rid of those uncivilized behaviours.
我建议学校张贴更醒目的标语并制定相关规则,以帮助学生摆脱那
些不文明行为。
社会责任
与公民意
识
城
市
变化
The environment and people's quality of life have greatly improved 
since the campaign was launched.
自从该活动启动以来,环境和人民的生活质量都得到了巨大改善。
发
出
倡议
It is high time that we should contribute to environmental 
protection. Let's save food and do it from today!
现在正是我们为环境保护贡献力量的时候了。让我们节约粮食,从
今天做起!
分
析
危
害
与
措
施
Uncivilized words online influence teenagers' physical and mental 
health. We should call for our classmates to keep away from such 
words and express ideas politely, contributing to a healthy Internet 
environment.
网络上的不文明用语影响青少年的身心健康。我们应当呼吁同学们
远离此类用语,并有礼貌地表达观点,从而为健康的网络环境做出
贡献。
生态道德
与生命关
怀
倡
议
背
景
与
目
的
Local authorities have denied the claim that Mount Qomolangma 
Nature Reserve was permanently closed. In order to protect the 
fragile environment there, we are supposed to take the following 
measures.
地方当局已否认了关于珠穆朗玛峰自然保护区被永久关闭的传言。
为了保护那里脆弱的环境,我们应该采取以下措施。
具
体
措施
When participating in outdoor activities, do not throw plastic bags 
or bottles about. It is better to sort them and collect them back to 
the city for proper treatment.
中文:参与户外活动时,不要随地乱扔塑料袋或瓶子。最好将它们
分类收集并带回城市进行妥善处理。
2. 实用范文片段
活动目的与意
义
In response to the national call for labor education, our school has launched the "Let's Do 
Housework" campaign. The primary objective of this initiative is not only to equip us with 
essential life skills but also to cultivate a profound respect for labor. Through hands-on 
experiences, we can truly appreciate the value of hard work and develop a stronger sense of 
responsibility towards our families.
为响应国家对于劳动教育的号召,我校启动了“让我们做家务”活动。这项举措的主要目
的不仅是让我们掌握必要的生活技能,更是为了培养我们对劳动的深厚尊重。通过亲身体
验,我们能真正体会到努力工作的价值,并培养对家庭更强烈的责任感。
个人收获与感
想
Tired as I was after a day of farm work, I felt an unprecedented sense of 
fulfillment. Planting vegetables and feeding animals taught me the intricacies of food production 
and made me more determined to reduce food waste. It was a vivid lesson that no textbook 
could ever provide.
中文:尽管在一天的农活后我很疲惫,但我感到一种前所未有的成就感。种植蔬菜和喂养
动物教会了我食物生产的复杂性,让我更加决心减少食物浪费。这是一堂任何教科书都无
法提供的生动课程。
描述现象与问
题
In an era dominated by digital communication, we, the younger generation, often find 
ourselves taking parents' care for granted. Some of us are so absorbed in our own world that we 
neglect to express gratitude, which has led to a growing emotional distance in some families.
中文:在一个以数字交流为主导的时代,我们年轻一代常常发现自己将父母的关爱视为理
所当然。我们中的一些人过于沉浸在自己的世界中,以至于忽略了表达感激,这导致了一
些家庭中情感距离的日益扩大。
提出建议与措
施
To bridge this gap, I propose that our school post more noticeable slogans advocating for 
respect and gratitude. Meanwhile, it is crucial that we students make a conscious effort 
to perform small acts of kindness, such as helping with housework or simply saying "thank you" 
more often.
中文:为了弥合这一隔阂,我建议学校张贴更醒目的标语来倡导尊重与感恩。同时,我们
学生有意识地做出努力至关重要,比如帮忙做家务,或者仅仅是更频繁地说“谢谢”。
1.(2025·四川·阶段考)假定你是李华,你的朋友Frank 询问你最近的情况。你校在教育部提倡的劳动教
育中,开展了 “Let's do housework”活动,请你给他回一份邮件,告诉他相关信息,邮件内容包括:
必背满分范文
1. 活动的目的;2. 活动的内容;3. 你的感想。
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 劳动教育: education on the hardworking spirit
Dear Frank,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Frank, 
I am so glad to hear from you and I am writing to tell you about my life. To strengthen education on the hard­
working spirit among students, our school has launched a campaign called “Let's do housework”. Students are 
supposed to acquire basic working capability and form good working habits through it.
We do whatever we can after study like washing the dishes, tidying the room and doing the laundry. Doing 
housework not only helps reduce parents' burden but also helps us to develop a sense of responsibility. 
Yours, 
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Frank 写一封邮件,介绍学校开展的“Let's do 
housework”劳动教育活动,需包含活动目的、内容及个人感想。
【语言亮点解析】
1. 词汇积累
开展:launch → carry out, initiate
运动,活动:campaign → activity, program
获得:acquire → develop, gain
责任感:a sense of responsibility → responsibility
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Doing housework helps reduce parents' burden. It also helps us to develop a sense of 
responsibility.
拓展句:Doing housework not only helps reduce parents' burden but also helps us to develop a sense of 
responsibility. (使用“not only... but also...”并列结构,将两个简单句合并,使句子更紧凑,逻辑关系更突
出)
【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
To strengthen education on the hard-working spirit among students, our school has launched a campaign called 
“Let's do housework”.
句型剖析:此句开篇使用不定式 “To strengthen...” 作目的状语,直接、清晰地阐明了活动的核心目的。
这种开头方式在介绍活动、政策时非常有效,能迅速切入主题。
【高分句型2】
Students are supposed to acquire basic working capability and form good working habits through it.
句型剖析:此句使用 “be supposed to” 来阐述活动的预期目标,语气客观且正式。它清晰地指出了活
动希望学生达成的两个具体成果(获得能力、养成习惯),体现了活动的教育意义。
【高分句型3】
Doing housework not only helps reduce parents' burden but also helps us to develop a sense of responsibility.
句型剖析:此句是全文的亮点,用于阐述个人感想。“not only... but also...” 的并列结构,有力地总结了
参与家务劳动带来的双重积极影响,由表(减轻负担)及里(培养责任感),有效地升华了主题。
2.(2025·宁夏·月考)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Kevin 想了解你校最近举行的“劳动周”相关活动。
请给他写封邮件,内容 包括:
1.活动时间;
2.活动内容(如:校园环境美化、校内垃圾分类等);
3.活动意义.
参考词汇:Labour Week 劳动周
注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Kevin,
I feel extremely delighted to tell you that our school held some relevant activities during the Labour Week.
The Labour Week started on June 10th and lasted for five days, when we held various activities. To beautify 
our school, we planted trees that are definitely good for our physical and mental well-being. Moreover, it's a 
wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus cleaner and more fascinating. There was 
also a labor knowledge competition.
As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be developed. Besides, 
we learnt to cherish and respect the fruits of peoples work.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你的英国朋友Kevin 写封邮件告诉他你校最近举行的“劳
动周”相关活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴:be happy to=feel delighted to
各种各样的:various → a variety of
此外:moreover →in addition
迷人:charming →fascinating.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:As for the significance, we can benefit a lot undoubtedly. Our awareness of labour can be 
developed..
拓展句:As for the significance, we can not only benefit a lot undoubtedly but also can develop our 
awareness of labour.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The Labour Week started on June 10th and last for five days, when we held 
various activities.这句话运用了when 引导的时间状语从句。
[高分句型2] Moreover, it's a wonderful idea to sort garbage in an eco-friendly way, making our campus 
cleaner and more fascinating.这句话运用了现在分词作状语的结构。
3.(2025·湖南·月考)最近你校开展"尊敬父母"活动,请你根据提示写一篇英文报道,向英语校报投稿。
要点如下,
1.孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德; 
2.独生子女的问题∶以自我为中心;
3.学校制定尊敬父母的"十条规定"; 
4. 家长和学生的反应。
注意∶
1.词数 80 左右,题目和开头已为你写好;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 
Respecting Parents Program
A program called "Respecting Parents" has been started in our school recently,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Respecting Parents Program
A program called "Respecting Parents" has been started in our school recently, urging students to follow a list 
of ten "Dos", including remembering parents' birthdays, and greeting parents on their returning home. Showing 
respect for parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values.However,as most students today are the "only 
child" in their family, they often regard themselves as the "center", ignoring their parents. So far, the program has 
won praises from parents. Meanwhile, students also think highly of it as it has led to a better parent- kid 
relationship in their family.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李平的身份,为校报写一篇关于“尊敬父母”活动的英文
报道,需涵盖传统美德、独生子女问题、学校规定及各方反应。
【语言亮点解析】
1. 词汇积累
敦促,力劝:urging → encouraging, calling on
美德:moral values → virtues
认为自己是:regard themselves as → see themselves as
忽视:ignoring → overlooking
赞扬:won praises from → been highly praised by
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Students also think highly of the program. It has led to a better parent-kid relationship.
拓展句:Students also think highly of the program, as it has led to a better parent-kid relationship. (使用
“as”引导原因状语从句,将两个简单句合并,清晰地解释了学生给予好评的原因,使句子逻辑更紧密)
【点睛之笔】
【高分句型1】
A program called "Respecting Parents" has been started in our school recently, urging students to follow a list of 
ten "Dos"...
句型剖析:此句开篇极为出色。使用过去分词短语 “called...” 作后置定语修饰program,信息紧凑。更
精彩的是,使用现在分词短语 “urging...” 作伴随状语,在介绍活动的同时,直接引出其具体举措,一举
两得,极大地提升了句子的信息密度和语言效率,是新闻报道的经典开头方式。
【高分句型2】
However, as most students today are the "only child" in their family, they often regard themselves as the "center", 
ignoring their parents.
句型剖析:此句逻辑关系清晰。“However” 承上启下,形成转折。“as” 引导原因状语从句,解释了
“以自我为中心”这一现象的成因。句末的现在分词短语 “ignoring...” 作自然的结果状语,生动地描绘
了“以自我为中心”带来的具体表现。整个句子层层递进,分析透彻。
【高分句型3】
Meanwhile, students also think highly of it as it has led to a better parent-kid relationship in their family.
句型剖析:此句巧妙运用了 “A as B” 的结构(A 称赞它,因为B),清晰地揭示了因果关系。“think 
highly of” 是表达“高度评价”的地道短语。此句不仅报告了事实(学生好评),更深入揭示了其背后的
积极影响(改善关系),提升了报道的深度和价值。
4.(2025·河北·阶段考)假定你是校英文报主编。9 月10 日是一年一度的教师节。 为了弘扬尊师重教的
传统美德,校报准备开设“我最喜爱的老师”专栏。请写一则征稿启事,内容包括:
1. 征稿目的:
2.稿件内容:
3. 投稿要求。
注意:
1. 词数应为80 左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Contributions Wanted
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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School Newspaper
September 1st
【范文】
Contributions Wanted
Teachers’ Day falls on September 10th annually. To promote the traditional virtue of respecting teachers and 
valuing education, we’re to launch a new column My Favourite Teacher.
Everyone is welcome to write articles about your favourite teacher, including a brief introduction and an 
unforgettable memory. Besides, your contributions are expected to be within 300 words. Please send your 
contributions to Room 401 in the Art Building or email them to Englishcolumn@163.com before September 7th.
We expect to read stories between you and your teachers. (84 words)
School Newspaper
September 1st
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为校报“我最喜爱的老师”专栏写一则征稿启事。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
每年:every year→annually
启动:start→launch
简短的:short→brief
不超过:no more than→within
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To promote the traditional virtue of respecting teachers and valuing education, we’re to launch a 
new column My Favourite Teacher.
拓展句:We’re to launch a new column My Favourite Teacher, whose aim is to promote the traditional 
virtue of respecting teachers and valuing education.
【点睛】[ 高分句型1]To promote the traditional virtue of respecting teachers and valuing education, 
we’re to launch a new column My Favourite Teacher.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2]Besides, your contributions are expected to be within 300 words.(运用了一般现在时的被动语
态)
5.(2025·江苏南京·月考)针对校园浪费粮食的现象,学校将举行以“节约粮食”为主题的倡议活动。假
定你是学生会主席,请你代表学生会给全体同学写一封倡议书,内容如下:
1. 活动的意义;
2. 具体的做法;
3. 呼吁从我做起,节约粮食。
注意:
1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellow students,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students' Union
【范文】
Dear fellow students,
Being thrift on food is a Chinese traditional virtue. More importantly, in the time of pandemic and natural 
disasters, saving food is of vital significance for a country with 1.4 billion people.
The school is to launch a campaign against food waste. Banners will be put up to advocate saving food. As for 
us students, please don’t order food that we can’t finish. Furthermore, let’s remind each other to clear the plate all 
the time or pack leftovers home.
Remember, every grain comes after hard toil. Let’s save food and do it from today!
The Students' Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封以“节约粮食”为主题的倡议书,呼吁全体同学从我
做起,节约粮食。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时
结构:总分法
     总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1. 活动的意义;
2. 具体的做法;
3. 呼吁从我做起,节约粮食。 
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be thrift on;a Chinese traditional virtue;put up;remind sb. to do sth.
第三步:连词成句
1. Being thrift on food is a Chinese traditional virtue. 
2. Banners will be put up to advocate saving food.
3. let’s remind each other to clear the plate all the time or pack leftovers home.
 (根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。)
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, 
Last but not least
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but 
(also), including, also
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (从句), In spite of + n/doing, On 
the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 
5 表换一种方式表达:In other words, that is to say,
6.表进行举例说明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing 
7.表陈述事实:In fact, frankly speaking
8.表选择:either…or…,or
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整,结构严谨,要点全面,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。
作者在范文中使用了主从复合句,如please don’t order food that we can’t finish 这句话中用了that 引
导的定语从句;使用了非常好的短语,如be thrift on,put up,remind sb. to do sth.等,为文章增色不少;
并注意了句子的衔接,如More importantly,Furthermore。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的
驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
6.(2025·广西·调研考)随着社会的发展和互联网的普及,许多不文明用语也在网上流传开来。假定你是
李华,最近学校网站正在征集英文建议,请你就“网络不文明用语”话题写一篇英文博客,内容要点如下:
1. 现状;2. 危害;3. 意见建议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Keep away from uncivilized words online
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Keep away from uncivilized words online
With the development of society, more and more people become lost in the Internet and like chatting online. 
As a result, lots of uncivilized words come into being, which influences teenagers’ physical and mental health.
As high school students, it is high time that we should take measures to solve the problem. First of all, what 
we should do is to call for our classmates and friends to keep away from uncivilized words and express our ideas 
politely, contributing to a healthy Internet environment. In addition, it is of great significance to report this problem 
to the government to ask for some help, which is a definitely effective method.
Let’s work together to create a better network atmosphere. You are welcomed to make any comment below.
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“网络不文明用语”这一话题,为学校网站撰写一篇英文
博客。
【详解】
词汇积累
沉迷:become lost in → be addicted to
导致:come into being → arise / emerge
影响:influence → affect / have an impact on
呼吁:call for → appeal to
方法:method → approach / solution
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We should call for our classmates and friends to keep away from uncivilized words. This will 
contribute to a healthy Internet environment.
拓展句:What we should do is to call for our classmates and friends to keep away from uncivilized 
words and express our ideas politely, which will contribute to a healthy Internet environment. (运用了
which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As a result, lots of uncivilized words come into being, which influences teenagers' physical 
and mental health. (运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句,对主句内容进行补充说明)
[高分句型2] First of all, what we should do is to call for our classmates and friends to... (运用了what
引导的主语从句,使句式更富变化)
7.(2025·湖北荆州·月考)你校英语广播台校园评论栏目,以 “New Era, New Student”为题征文,号
召大家发现校园里的不文明现象,你打算投稿,内容包括:
1. 你的发现;
2. 你的建议。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
New Era, New Student
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
New Era, New Students
Admittedly, we generations are in a new era when the world is undergoing major changes unseen in a century. 
With great changes come new challenges and responsibilities. To better coping with these, we yet need to sweep 
away all the uncivilized phenomena in our school first.
Unaware of its value, some students take it for granted to waste food. Besides, in the library, certain students 
speak or talk aloud, disturbing and annoying others. Little as the matters seem to be, we cannot afford to overlook 
the serious consequences they will bring. So I suggest that the school post more noticeable slogans and make 
relevant rules to help students rid of those uncivilized behaviours.
As students in the new era, I sincerely hope that we can become a better us to make contributions to the 
society.
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇以“New Era, New Student”征文,给校英语广播台
校园评论栏目投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
处理:cope with→deal with
此外:besides→what’s more
后果:consequence→result
建议:suggest→advise
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To better coping with these, we yet need to sweep away all the uncivilized phenomena in our 
school first.
拓展句:We yet need to sweep away all the uncivilized phenomena in our school first so that we could 
better cope with these.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Admittedly, we generations are in a new era when the world is undergoing major 
changes unseen in a century.(运用了when 引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]So I suggest that the school post more noticeable slogans and make relevant rules to help 
students rid of those uncivilized behaviours.(运用了虚拟语气和不定式作状语)
8.(2025·福建莆田·月考)假如你是某中学学生会主席李津。请结合最近网上广为流传的“珠峰大本营将
无限期关闭”的消息以及官方最新“珠穆朗玛峰自然保护区将继续有条件开放,依法合规的登山活动仍可
进行”的回应,以学生会身份,用英文在学校英文周刊上写一封倡议书,号召大家做文明登山者,关爱珠
峰脆弱的自然环境。内容须包括:
☆ 不乱扔垃圾,注意垃圾分类。
☆ 保护动植物,拒绝买卖野生动物制品。
☆ 未获登山许可,不要擅自前往。
注意:
⑴ 请使用规范英语,词数不少于100 词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
⑵ 可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯 。
参考词汇:珠穆朗玛峰自然保护区Mount Qomolangma Nature Reserve
Dear Schoolmates,
Local authorities have recently denied the claim that Mount Qomolangma Nature Reserve was permanently 
closed. Meanwhile the government has called on everyone’s attention to the present situation. 
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Thank you!
The Students’ Union
【范文】
Dear Schoolmates, 
    Local authorities have recently denied the claim that Mount Qomolangma Nature Reserve was permanently 
closed. Meanwhile the government has called on everyone’s attention to the present situation. In order to protect 
the sensitive environment there, we are supposed to take the following measures.
    Firstly, when participating in outdoor activities, do not throw plastic bags or bottles about. It is better to sort them 
and collect them back to the city for proper treatment. Secondly, take good care of the wildlife. In case of illegal 
hunting or selling, say no to the purchase or report it immediately. Thirdly, you can not go inside the reserve to 
climb the mountains without permission. 
In a nutshell, it is high time that we should contribute to the protection of Mount Qomolangma National Nature 
Reserve. Please join us to get the nature reserve better and better!
Thank you!
The Students’ Union
【导读】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会主席的身份,结合官方新闻,为学校英文周刊写一
封关于文明登山的倡议书。
【详解】
词汇积累
否认:denied → refuted
号召:called on → appealed to
敏感的:sensitive → fragile / vulnerable
参与:participating in → taking part in
许可:permission → authorization
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Do not throw plastic bags or bottles about. This behavior damages the environment.
拓展句:When participating in outdoor activities, do not throw plastic bags or bottles about, as they can 
cause severe damage to the fragile ecosystem. (运用了as 引导的原因状语从句)
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Local authorities have recently denied the claim that Mount Qomolangma Nature Reserve 
was permanently closed. (运用了that 引导的同位语从句,具体解释“claim”的内容)
[ 高分句型2] In a nutshell, it is high time that we should contribute to the protection of Mount 
Qomolangma National Nature Reserve. (运用了虚拟语气句型“it is high time that...”,表达了采取行动
的紧迫性和必要性)
9.(2025·山西·月考)假定你是李华,上周日参加了学校组织的农场劳动,请用英语写一封信,向你的新
西兰笔友David 介绍活动的情况,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;
2.活动内容;
3.收获。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
I am writing to share with you my experience on the farm last week.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear David,
I am writing to share with you my experience on the farm last week. At 8: 00 a.m. last Sunday, my classmates 
and I gathered at the school gate and cycled to a farm. On our arrival, the farm workers gave us a warm welcome, 
and we started to plant crops and vegetables under their guidance. Then we joined them in preparing lunch. After 
lunch, the head of the farm gave us a talk about fantastic changes in the countryside. Tired as we were, we did have 
a great day and learned a lot.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,上周日参加了学校组织的农场劳动,请用英语写一封
信,向你的新西兰笔友David 介绍活动的情况。
【解析】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 介绍同学们的听说训练情况;
2. 希望提供更有效的学习方法;
3. 询问对方的意向。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
share with;at the school gate;On our arrival;gave us a warm welcome;under their guidance;joined 
them in;in the countryside
第三步:连词成句
1. At 8: 00 a.m. last Sunday, my classmates and I gathered at the school gate and cycled to a farm. 2. On our arrival, 
the farm workers gave us a warm welcome, and we started to plant crops and vegetables under their guidance. 
3. After lunch, the head of the farm gave us a talk about fantastic changes in the countryside.
4. Tired as we were, we did have a great day and learned a lot.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)(供参考)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but 
(also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while 
others…,as for, so…that… 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result 
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I am writing to share with you my experience on the farm last week.句中动词不定式作目
的状语。
[高分句型2] On our arrival, the farm workers gave us a warm welcome, and we started to plant crops 
and vegetables under their guidance.句中使用并列连词and 连接的并列句。
[高分句型3] Tired as we were, we did have a great day and learned a lot.句中as 是连词,意思是“尽
管”,引导让步状语从句。
10.(2025·甘肃白银·阶段考)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Mike 听说你的家乡成功地创建了全国文明城
市(National Civilized City), 城市面貌发生了很大的变化,来信询问相关情况。请根据以下要点给他回信。
内容包括:
1.感谢来信;
2.城市变化;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mike,
Thank you for your letter asking about my home city’s success in establishing a National Civilized City. I’m 
more than delighted to share some information with you.
The environment and people’s quality of life have greatly improved since the campaign was launched. Old 
streets are widened or even rebuilt, which eases traffic jams. In addition, we have more parks, where people take a 
walk and exercise regularly.
You can’t imagine the city takes on a completely fresh look. I really love it and hope you can pay a visit 
someday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国朋友Mike 写封回信,介绍自己家乡成功地创建了全
国文明城市(National Civilized City)之后的变化。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 感谢来信;
2. 城市变化;
3. 你的感受。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
ask about sth.; be delighted to do; share sth. with sb.; people’s quality of life; take a walk; take on a look; pay a visit 
to
第三步:连词成句
1. Thank you for your letter asking about my home city’s success in establishing a National Civilized City. 
2. I’m more than delighted to share some information with you.
3. The environment and people’s quality of life have greatly improved since the campaign was launched.
4. We have more parks, where people take a walk and exercise regularly.
5. You can’t imagine the city takes on a completely fresh look. 
6. I really love it and hope you can pay a visit someday.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系: In addition
2.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句)(供参考)
3.表因果关系:Because, As, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Thank you for your letter asking about my home city’s success in establishing a National 
Civilized City. (现在分词作定语)
[高分句型2] The environment and people’s quality of life have greatly improved since the campaign 
was launched. (since 引导的时间状语从句)