高频话题19 科技生活
年份
卷区
体裁
话题
命题形式
2025 年
全国一卷
建议信
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who
I am”两个选项做出选择
提纲类
全国二卷
咨询信
咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展
提纲类
浙江卷1
月
发言稿
发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演
讲稿
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议
提纲类
天津卷
推荐信
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提
出推荐
提纲类
2024 年
新高考I
和II 卷
告知信
分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历
提纲类
全国甲卷
发言稿
以Development of Transport in China 为题的发言
稿
图标类
北京卷
建议信
对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议
提纲类
天津卷
发言稿
“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿
提纲类
浙江卷1
月
征文投稿
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动
提纲类
上海卷
安慰信
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做
饭
提纲类
2023 年
新高考全
国卷
建议信
提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历,及从中获得
的体验和感受
提纲类
浙江卷1
月
报道
报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动
提纲类
北京卷
建议信
为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议
提纲类
天津卷
申请信
申请参加“中国工坊” 活动
提纲类
2022 年
新高考全
邀请信
邀请外教做访谈
提纲类
近五年考情分析
国卷
浙江卷
邀请信
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
邀请外国留学生一同体验
提纲类
浙江卷 (1
月)
回忆经历
回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节
提纲类
全国甲卷
征文投稿
世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛
提纲类
全国乙卷
征文投稿
英语学习方式图标的调查投稿
提纲类
北京卷
邀请信
邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流
提纲类
天津卷
视频文字稿
用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频
提纲类
2021 年
新高考全
国卷
征文投稿
庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿
提纲类
浙江卷
宣传稿
宣传学生国画作品展
提纲类
浙江卷 (1
月)
发言稿
欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞
提纲类
全国甲卷
咨询信
咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法
提纲类
全国乙卷
发言稿
以 Be smart online learners 为题的发言稿
提纲类
北京卷
道歉信
你因故不能赴约周末一起外出
提纲类
天津卷
征文投稿
介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方
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1.
通用词汇和句式
通用核心词汇
科技与老
年人生活
digital divide / information gap 数字鸿沟
the elderly / senior citizens / the older generation 老年人
tech-savvy 精通科技的
technologically challenged 对科技感到棘手的
intelligent products / smart devices 智能产品
user-friendly 易于使用的
elderly mode / senior version 老年模式/版本
voice control 语音控制
bridge the gap 弥合差距
科技与生
活方式变
革
reshape our daily lives 重塑我们的日常生活
a massive transformation 巨大的变革
double-edged sword 双刃剑
surf the internet 上网
online shopping / e-commerce 网购/电子商务
语料表达
mobile payment 移动支付
ride-hailing apps 网约车应用
big data 大数据
artificial intelligence (ai) 人工智能
未来科技
展望
smart homes 智能家居
automatic control 自动控制
energy-efficient mode 节能模式
integrated sensors 集成传感器
monitor health 监测健康
self-driving cars 自动驾驶汽车
virtual reality (vr) 虚拟现实
科技产品
与商业应
用
cutting-edge technology 尖端科技
high-quality product 高质量产品
a reasonable price 合理的价格
launch a new product 发布新产品
innovative functions 创新功能
go viral 迅速走红
marketing campaign 营销活动
科技使用
中的社会
问题
phubbers / people addicted to smartphones 低头族/沉迷手机的人
internet addiction 网瘾
distract from studies / work 使分心,无法专心学习/工作
a lack of sleep 睡眠不足
pose a threat to health 对健康构成威胁
privacy and data security 隐私和数据安全
social isolation 社交孤立
万能句式
开篇句式
With the rapid development of technology, our lives have undergone
tremendous changes. 随着科技的飞速发展,我们的生活发生了巨大的变化。
Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the impact of technology on our
daily routines. 如今,人们越来越关注科技对我们日常生活的影响。
It is an undeniable fact that technology has become an inseparable part of
our lives. 科技已成为我们生活中不可分割的一部分,这是一个不可否认的
事实。
论述句式
On the one hand, technology brings us great convenience; on the other
hand, it also creates some new challenges. 一方面,科技给我们带来了极大
的便利;另一方面,它也带来了一些新的挑战。
For example, thanks to high-tech, we can... 例如,得益于高科技,我们可
以……
However, we cannot ignore the negative effects, such as... 然而,我们不能
忽视其负面影响,例如……
What's more, / Furthermore, / In addition, ... 此外,……
A case in point is that... 一个恰当的例子是……
结尾句式
In conclusion, while enjoying the benefits of technology, we should also be
aware of its potential drawbacks. 总之,在享受科技好处的同时,我们也应
意识到其潜在的缺点。
Therefore, it is crucial to use technology in a reasonable and responsible
manner. 因此,以合理且负责任的方式使用科技至关重要。
Only when we strike a balance between the virtual world and the real life
can we truly benefit from technology. 只有当我们在虚拟世界和现实生活之
间取得平衡时,我们才能真正从科技中受益。
2. 实用范文片段
科技利弊论述
Technology is a double-edged sword. On the positive side, it has made our lives more
convenient than ever. For instance, we can now shop, study, and socialize online without
leaving our homes. However, its overuse can lead to serious problems. Many people, especially
the youth, are so addicted to their digital devices that they neglect face-to-face
communication and physical activities, which may harm their mental and physical
health. 科技是一把双刃剑。从积极的一面来看,它让我们的生活变得比以往任何时候都
方便。例如,我们现在可以足不出户就在网上购物、学习和社交。然而,过度使用科技会
导致严重问题。许多人,尤其是年轻人,过于沉迷数字设备,以至于忽略了面对面的交流
和体育活动,这可能损害他们的身心健康。
解决措施建议
To address these issues, several measures can be taken. First and foremost, as individuals, we
should develop self-discipline and limit our screen time. It is advisable to engage in more
offline activities, such as reading books or doing sports. Moreover, tech companies should
take social responsibility by designing more user-friendly products for the elderly and
incorporating features that remind users to take a break. By working together, we can
create a healthier relationship with technology. 为了解决这些问题,可以采取几项措施。
首先且最重要的是,作为个人,我们应培养自律意识,限制屏幕使用时间。建议参与更多
线下活动,如阅读或运动。此外,科技公司应承担社会责任,为老年人设计更易用的产
品,并加入提醒用户休息的功能。通过共同努力,我们才能与科技建立更健康的关系。
必背满分范文
1.(2025·山东·质量检测)随着社会的快速发展,健康码、在线挂号、扫码点餐、网约车出行等数字化智
能化生活正在扮演着日益重要的角色。但有很多老年人并不能适应这样的变化。电视台现向市民们征集建
议,希望帮助“银发族”跨越“数字鸿沟”。假如你是实验中学的学生李华,请你结合以下调查数据,给
电视台回一封信,谈谈你的看法和建议。
身边的老年人是否有智能产品?
有的占63%
没有的占37%
有了智能产品的老年人是否能熟
练使用?
熟练使用的占58%
不熟练或不会使用的占42%
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数:不少于100 词。
Dear editors,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear editors,
Knowing that you are looking for some suggestions to help the elderly adapt to the digital and intelligent life, I
am writing to share my views.
According to the survey, 37% of the elderly do not have intelligent products, and only 58% of the elderly with
intelligent products can skillfully use them. In order to help the elderly, I suggest that mobile phone manufacturers
set up the “elderly mode” in the system to simplify the functions and retain only a few necessary functions. In
addition, app developers can also launch “elderly version” app to ensure minimum steps and voice control, which
can make it more convenient for the elderly to operate. Last but not least, young people can make time to teach the
elderly and let them integrate into the mobile Internet era as much as possible.
In a word, the elderly need more care and help which come from government departments and individuals.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份,就如何帮助老年人跨越“数字鸿沟”这一问题,
给电视台写一封建议信。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
适应:adapt to → adjust to / get used to
熟练地:skillfully → proficiently / with ease
简化:simplify → make...user-friendly
操作:operate → use / navigate
融入:integrate into → become a part of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:App developers can also launch “elderly version” app. This version ensures minimum steps and
voice control.
拓展句:App developers can also launch “elderly version” app which ensures minimum steps and voice
control.
(使用which 引导的定语从句,将两个简单句合并,使句子结构更紧凑,逻辑关系更清晰。)
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
“Knowing that you are looking for some suggestions to help the elderly adapt to the digital and intelligent life, I
am writing to share my views.”
句型分析:此句开头使用了现在分词短语“Knowing that...”作原因状语。这种开头方式直接、地道,开
门见山地交代了写信的缘由,比“I am writing because I know that...”更简洁、高级。
【高分句型2】
“In addition, app developers can also launch ‘elderly version’ app to ensure minimum steps and voice control,
which can make it more convenient for the elderly to operate.”
句型分析:此句运用了“which”引导的非限制性定语从句。这个从句对主句提出的建议进行了补充说明,
解释了开发“老年版”应用所能带来的直接好处,使建议的可行性和价值更加突出。
2.(2025·陕西·月考)近年来,科技的高速发展给人们的生活带来了巨大的改变。假设你是李华,有意参
加你校将举办的 TECH TALK 活动。请以 "Technology and Lifestyles"为题,写一篇演讲稿,内容如下:
1. 科技的重要性
2. 举例说明科技对人类生活的积极影响
3. 你对科技应用的态度
注意:词数 80 字左右。
Ladies and gentlemen,
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【范文】
Ladies and Gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. I am delighted to speak on the topic of "Technology and Lifestyles" at the TECH TALK event.
The development of technology has brought a massive transformation to our lives.
Technology has impacted our lives in so many areas, including healthcare, communication, and transportation.
For example, medical technology has advanced treatments, allowing us to save more lives. Communication
technology enables us to connect across the globe, further expanding our horizons. Additionally, transportation
technology has made travel more efficient and cost -effective.
However, in spite of its many advances, technology has some limitations and negative impacts. Over-
dependence on technology can create social and personal problems, such as addiction and mental issues.
To conclude, technology plays a critical role in society, and we must use it wisely and responsibly. We must
utilize the benefits of technology while also being mindful of its potential negative consequences. By working
together, we can create a healthier and more sustainable future.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以"Technology and Lifestyles"为题写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
保护:protection → conservation
实施:carry out → implement
非法的:illegally → unlawfully
宏伟的:magnificent → splendid
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:People have hunted them illegally. This is the main reason for their small population.
拓展句:People have hunted them illegally, which is the main reason for their extremely small
population.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
"Shockingly, no wild South China Tiger has been found today, with only 30 to 80 still living in captivity."
(使用with 复合结构作状语,简洁地补充说明了现状,增强了句子的信息密度)
【高分句型2】
"People have hunted them illegally for their skins and furs, which is the main reason for their extremely small
population."
(运用which 引导的非限制性定语从句,清晰地揭示了盗猎与种群数量减少之间的因果关系)
3.(2025·广西·月考)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了以“创意校园,科技校园”为主题的第15 届校
园科技节。请你为校报写一篇英文报道,内容包括:
1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 词左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The 15th Campus Science Festival of Our School
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【范文】
The 15th Campus Science Festival of Our School
Aiming to encourage students to take an interest in science, our school held the 15th Campus Science Festival
last Sunday. With its theme “Creative Campus, Scientific Campus”, the festival went off with a bang.
Exhibition boards were set up showcasing the critical significance of science to human survival and prosperity,
as well as China’s progress in scientific development. The Science Workshop appealed to a number of students
where they had the chance to get involved in different experiments. What’s more, a classroom-decoration
competition was held which was truly excellent and showed off students’ creative talent.
The Science Festival has proved to be a huge success. Not only has it broadened our scientific knowledge, but
also it has stimulated our creativity and enthusiasm in science.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校报写一篇英文报道,报道上周日学校举办的以“创意校
园,科技校园”为主题的第15 届校园科技节。内容包括:
1.活动目的;2.活动内容;3.活动反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
对……感兴趣:take an interest in→be interested in
吸引:appeal to → attract
参与:get involved in→participate in
热情:enthusiasm→passion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With its theme “Creative Campus, Scientific Campus”, the festival went off with a bang.
拓展句:The festival, whose theme was “Creative Campus, Scientific Campus”, went off with a bang.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The Science Workshop appealed to a number of students where they had the chance to
get involved in different experiments.(运用了where 引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only has it broadened our scientific knowledge, but also it has stimulated our creativity and
enthusiasm in science.(运用了not only…but also…的部分倒装)
4.(2025·湖南·月考)你校正在举行主题为“Hi-tech in My Life”的英语作文比赛,请你结合自身经历
写一篇短文参赛,谈谈新科技带来的变化。
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
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【范文】
Hi-tech in My Life
It is a great honor for me to deliver a speech concerning "Technology and Life". With the rapid
development of technology,its influences on our daily lives are everywhere.
Thanks to high-tech,we can stay connected with friends and families,no matter where they are.
We can easily access information,and even order food and groceries with a few taps on our mobile
phones. However,technology also brings negative influences. With the constant exposure to the screens,
our eyes get tired. What's worse,there is always a concern about privacy and data security.
Despite these drawbacks,I think technology's positive impacts outweigh the negative ones. So,we
need to use technology in a way that maximizes its benefits while minimizing its harm.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以"Technology and Life"为题写一篇英文短文参加校英文报
举行的征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
迅速的,快的:rapid→fast
由于,因为:thanks to →owing to
无论哪里:no matter where→wherever
虽然,尽管:despite→in spite of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite these drawbacks,I think technology's positive impacts outweigh the negative ones.
拓展句:Although it has these drawbacks,I think technology's positive impacts outweigh the negative
ones.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a great honor for me to deliver a speech concerning "Technology and Life".
(运用了动词不定式作真正主语it 作形式主语的用法)
【高分句型2】So,we need to use technology in a way that maximizes its benefits while minimizing its
harm.(运用了that 引导的定语从句)
5.(2025·江苏·阶段检测)假定你是李华,学校“未来科技兴趣小组”的成员。请你根据以下要点及关键
词为校英文报写一篇短文,从两个方面介绍未来智能家居。要点如下:
1. 智能控制(自动控制家电;节能模式;贴心服务);
2. 定期健康检查(检测健康状况:智能床铺;智能马桶)
注意:1. 写作词数应为80 左右;
2. 开头部分已写好,不计入词数;
3. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
In the not-too-distant future, we will be living in smart homes.
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【范文】
In the not-too-distant future, we will be living in smart homes.
Intelligent Controls
In the future, we will be using advanced technology every day for automatic control of just about everything
in our home. The future home will use integrated sensors to tell when you leave home each morning, and then go
into an energy-efficient mode all by itself. Your home will also learn your daily routine and preferences, so
everything will be ready for you.
Regular Health Checks
In addition, your smart home will be monitoring your health for you every day. Your bed, for example, will
record how well you sleep every night. It will also be checking your body weight. Smart toilets will be keeping
constant track of your health as well.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为"未来科技兴趣小组"成员,为校英文报写一篇关于未来
智能家居的短文。
【详解】1.词汇积累
先进的:advanced → cutting-edge / sophisticated
自动的:automatic → self-operating
节能的:energy-efficient → energy-saving
监测:monitoring → keeping track of / watching over
持续的:constant → continuous / ongoing
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Your home will learn your daily routine. Everything will be ready for you.
拓展句:Your home will also learn your daily routine and preferences, so everything will be ready for
you.
(使用so 连接结果状语从句,清晰地展示了智能家居学习用户习惯与提供贴心服务之间的因果关系)
【点睛】
【高分句型1】"The future home will use integrated sensors to tell when you leave home each morning,
and then go into an energy-efficient mode all by itself."
(运用了"when"引导的时间状语从句和"and"连接的并列谓语,生动地描绘了智能家居的自动化运作场景)
【高分句型2】"In addition, your smart home will be monitoring your health for you every day."
(使用将来进行时"will be monitoring",强调了未来智能家居持续、主动的健康监测功能,比一般将来时
更具画面感和持续性)
6.(2025·河南·月考)最近,某科技公司推出一款新型5G 手机(Smart Mobile Phone 9),请你为该款
手机写一篇英语广告,内容包括:
1.手机的功能;
2.手机的特点;
3.适用人群。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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【范文】
Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9
Smart Mobile Phone 9 will make your life smarter in an all-round way!
Besides the general functions as a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet
wherever you are by using the 5G. It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.
Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry. What’s more, it is a high-quality
product sold at a reasonable price.
【导语】
本文是一篇应用文。要求考生为一款新型5G 手机撰写一篇英语广告。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
全面的:in an all-round way → comprehensively / thoroughly
功能:functions → features / capabilities
理想的:ideal → perfect / excellent
合理的价格:a reasonable price → an affordable price / great value
高质量的:high-quality → top-notch / premium
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It also serves as a laptop. You can surf the Internet wherever you are by using it.
拓展句:It also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the
5G.
(使用“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句,将两个句子有机结合起来,使描述更连贯,并突出了
5G 的核心卖点。)
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
“ Besides the general functions as a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet
wherever you are by using the 5G.”
句型分析:此句采用了“Besides..., ...also...”的递进结构,巧妙地展示了手机功能的强大与跨界(从手机
到笔记本电脑)。后半句的“with which”定语从句和“wherever”引导的地点状语,极大地增强了语言
的感染力,生动地描绘出随时随地高速上网的自由场景,极具诱惑力。
【高分句型2】
“It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.”
句型分析:此句运用了“so...that...”结果状语从句,清晰地建立了产品特性(智能)与用户利益(适合奔
波中的职场人士)之间的强关联。句末的“who”引导的定语从句精准地定义了目标用户群体,使广告投
放更具针对性。
7.(2025·重庆·月考)假设你是李华,你在美国夏令营认识的朋友Mike 给你来信说他最近沉迷于电脑难
以控制。请你给他回一封信,告诉他网瘾可能会导致成绩下降、健康状况恶化、损害家庭关系等问题,并
提出一些建议。
参考词汇:沉溺于be/become addicted to 网瘾:Internet addiction
Dear Mike,
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【范文】
Dear Mike,
I am glad to hear from you. As your close friend, I’d like to talk about the harm of Internet addiction to you as
I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.
As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our
life will be greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example,your grades may go down and your
health will be going from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your
family.
So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some
meaningful books and do some physical exercise.I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以朋友李华的身份,给一位沉迷于电脑的美国朋友Mike 写一封回信,指出
网瘾的危害并提出建议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
收到…的来信:hear from you → receive your letter
影响:affected → influenced / impacted
恶化:go from bad to worse → deteriorate
摆脱:got rid of → overcame / broke away from
有意义的:meaningful → valuable / worthwhile
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I feel worried. I know that you have wasted lots of valuable time.
拓展句:I feel worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games.
(使用“to know that...”不定式短语作原因状语,将两个简单句合并,使表达更简洁,情感流露更自
然。)
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
“As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be
greatly affected if we are addicted to it.”
句型分析:这两句话构成了一个完美的论证段落。第一句使用“As we know”开头,先客观承认互联网
的积极价值,立论公允。第二句用“However”强势转折,并通过“if”引导的条件状语从句,清晰地指出
了过度使用的后果。这种先扬后抑的写法,使得后续对危害的阐述更具说服力,而非简单的说教。
【高分句型2】
“So I think it is high time that you got rid of the bad habit.”
句型分析:此句运用了“it is high time that...”这一经典虚拟语气句型。这个句式用来提出建议时,带有
一种“事不宜迟、刻不容缓”的紧迫感,比直接说“You should...”更能触动对方,体现了作为朋友的关
切和担忧之情。
8.(2025·安徽合肥·质量检测)现在越来越多的人成为低头族(People who can’t help checking their
phones all day are known as phubbers. Phubbing tends to involve not only the young people, but also
the elderly.),如何引导低头族抬头?你们班在英语课上举行了以“拒为低头族”为主题的演讲。假设你是
学生李华,请你写一篇80 词左右的演讲稿。
要点如下:
1. 你周围有低头族吗?他们成为“低头族”的原因。
2. 成为“低头族”给学习和生活带来的影响。
3.就如何“拒为低头族”提一些建议。
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【范文】
Good morning, everyone!
Nowadays, we can see many people are watching their mobile phones in subway, restaurants, elevators, roads
and so on. There is no denying that people who like the mobile phone are concerned about its attractive functions.
Phubbers can’t stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening to music and even taking photos by using the
mobile phone. Moreover, some people have less time to relax themselves. They make use of the time when they are
on the way to school or other places to play mobile games.
However, phubbing disturbs not only our study but also our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste lots of time
playing cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in class. Other people also complain they are
disturbed when phones ring in classrooms. On the other hand, it can lead to health problems. For instance, using a
mobile phone on the sofa can cause back and neck pain.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we threw away the mobile phone and raised our heads up. Do
cherish everything around us and appreciate the scenery ahead of us. What’s more, we should do more exercises
and take part in real-life activities. In a word, only when we use the mobile phone reasonably, can we realize the
happiness of life.
That’s all. Thank you!
【导语】
本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份,在英语课上撰写一篇以“拒为低头族”为主题的演讲稿。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
低头族:phubbers → people addicted to their phones
吸引人的功能:attractive functions → appealing features
抱怨:complain → grumble / express dissatisfaction
导致:lead to → result in / contribute to
合理地:reasonably → wisely / in a moderate way
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Some people have less time to relax themselves. They make use of the time to play mobile
games. This time is when they are on the way to school.
拓展句:Moreover, some people have less time to relax themselves, so they make use of the time when
they are on the way to school or other places to play mobile games.
(使用“so”连接结果状语从句,并将“when”引导的定语从句嵌入其中,清晰地揭示了“没时间”与
“利用碎片时间玩手机”之间的因果关系,句子结构紧凑,逻辑性强。)
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
“However, phubbing disturbs not only our study but also our life.”
句型分析:此句使用了“not only... but also...”的并列结构,作为一个强有力的主题句,承上启下。它清
晰地概括了“低头”行为危害的两个主要方面,为下文的详细阐述(一方面影响学习,另一方面危害健
康)提供了清晰的框架。
【高分句型2】
“As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we threw away the mobile phone and raised our heads up.”
句型分析:此句运用了“As far as I am concerned”来引出个人观点,并使用“it is high time that + 过
去式”的虚拟语气句型。这个句式表达了“早该做某事了”的强烈紧迫感,极具号召力,非常适合在演讲
稿中用来提出核心倡议。
【高分句型3】
“In a word, only when we use the mobile phone reasonably, can we realize the happiness of life.”
句型分析:结尾句采用了“Only when..., can...”的部分倒装结构。这种句式通过将“only+状语”前置,
起到了强调条件的作用,使“合理使用手机”这一建议的重要性更加突出,结尾铿锵有力,发人深省。
9.(2025·福建·月考)假如你是李华,你的外国网友Jack 沉迷于手机游戏不能自拔,写信向你求助,请你
给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.表示理解与关心;
2.分析手机游戏可能存在的不良影响;
3.提出具体建议。
注意:addiction to 对……的瘾
1.词数80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
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Best Wishes!
Yours
【范文】
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from addiction to mobile phone games. Actually, it is commonly seen
that more and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone games, which distract them from studies. Besides, it
causes a lack of sleep, posing a threat to their health.
Therefore, to avoid it, I recommend you to manage your time wisely and responsibly. The less time you spent
on online gaming, the less likely it is you will be addicted. Moreover, if I were you, I would prefer to engage with
family and friends outdoors rather than sit on the couch looking down at your phone.
I do hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. Looking forward to your good news.
Best Wishes!
Yours
【导语】
本文是一篇应用文。要求考生以朋友李华的身份,给沉迷于手机游戏的外国网友Jack 写一封回信,提供建
议。
【详解】
1. 词汇积累
遭受...之苦:suffering from → struggling with / bothered by
使分心:distract → take one's attention away from
对...构成威胁:posing a threat to → harming / damaging
明智且负责任地:wisely and responsibly → in a smart and responsible manner
参与:engage with → interact with / spend time with
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:More and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone games. This phenomenon is common.
These games distract them from studies.
拓展句:Actually, it is commonly seen that more and more teenagers get crazy about mobile phone
games, which distract them from studies.
(使用“it is commonly seen that...”主语从句陈述普遍现象,并用“which”引导的非限制性定语从句即
时点出游戏的危害,使句子结构紧凑,信息密度高。)
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
“Besides, it causes a lack of sleep, posing a threat to their health.”
句型分析:此句使用了现在分词短语“posing a threat to their health”作自然的结果状语。这种结构比用
“and”连接两个动词或另起一句更显书面化和高级,流畅地揭示了睡眠不足对健康的直接危害。
【高分句型2】
“The less time you spent on online gaming, the less likely it is you will be addicted.”
句型分析:此句运用了“The+比较级..., the+比较级...”的句型,表示“越…就越…”。这个句式精炼而富
有哲理,清晰地揭示了减少游戏时间与降低成瘾概率之间的正向关系,具有很强的说服力。
【高分句型3】
“Moreover, if I were you, I would prefer to engage with family and friends outdoors rather than sit on the couch
looking down at your phone.”
句型分析:此句采用了虚拟语气“if I were you, I would...”来提出建议,显得非常委婉和体贴,避免了
生硬的指教。同时,句中“prefer to... rather than...”的对比结构,鲜明地提出了一个更健康的生活方式选
择,具体而可行。
10.(2025·安徽·调研考)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter 得知你所在的城市有家餐馆推出“大人放下
手机,为 儿童免单”的服务。对此他很感兴趣,想了解具体情况,请回信告知。内容包括:
1. 为何推出这样的服务:
2. 如何免单。
注意:1. 词数80 左右;
2. 开头、结尾已经给出。
Dear Peter,
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Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in the new service of the restaurant in my city, I am writing to give you some
information. Seeing many diners lost in their own smartphones rather than talking with their family, the boss of the
restaurant feels sad and wants to solve the problem. During lunch time, when people come to the restaurant, the
diners will be given the chance to put their phones inside a "no phone zone" box. As a reward for giving up their
devices, the children can eat for free.
This is the new service. Next time you come here, we will go there to experience it in person.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Peter 写信,告诉他“大人放下手机,为 儿童免单”的服
务的详细情况。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1.介绍为何推出这样的服务:
2. 讲述如何免单。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
be interested in; rather than;come to;for free;in person
第三步:连词成句
1.Knowing that you are interested in the new service of the restaurant in my city, I am writing to give you some
information.
2.Seeing many diners lost in their own smartphones rather than talking with their family, the boss of the restaurant
feels sad and wants to solve the problem.
3.During lunch time, when people come to the restaurant, the diners will be given the chance to put their phones
inside a "no phone zone" box.
4.As a reward for giving up their devices, the children can eat for free.
5.This is the new service.
6.Next time you come here, we will go there to experience it in person.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参
考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also),
including,(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one
hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考)
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result (供参考)
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing that you are interested in the new service of the restaurant in my city, I am writing
to give you some information. (现 分词作状语,that 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] During lunch time, when people come to the restaurant, the diners will be given the chance to put
their phones inside a "no phone zone" box.(when 引导时间状语从句)