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雅思真题大作文-同意与否类-128

雅思真题大作文-同意与否类-128
Some people think the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, there is much debate about which school subjects deserve greater financial support from the government. Some people believe that science education should receive more public funding than other subjects to facilitate national development. I partially agree with this view.
On the one hand, it is justifiable to fundscience education, as science plays a pivotal role in contemporary society, covering multiple fields including medicine, the economy and agriculture. For example, without scientific advances, it would be more difficult to upgradehealthcare facilities and boost economic and agricultural output.
On the other hand, science alone cannot tackle all the challenges that people face in the modern world. Other subjects are equally vital and merit adequate public investment. The first and foremost example is physical education (PE), which helps students recognise the value of regular exercise and keep a balanced lifestyle. As the saying goes, a sound mind in a sound body. A society can hardly thriveif its citizens lack good health. Besides, subjects such as art and literature nurture creativity and cultural identity, which are also essential for a well-rounded society. These qualities help people build social cohesion and preserve a nation's cultural heritage.
In conclusion, while science plays a vital role in raising healthcare standards, boosting the economy and lifting agricultural output, other subjects also have a part to play and are equally significant. It is particularly important for governments to adopt a balanced and practical approach, prioritising science education while attaching importance to other disciplines.

高分词句

🔹 Introduction 开头段

  1. much debate about 关于…… 存在诸多讨论
  2. deserve greater financial support 值得更多财政支持
  3. public funding 公共资金(替换 money)
  4. facilitate national development 促进国家发展
  5. partially agree with this view 在一定程度上同意该观点

🔹 Body 1 支持段(科学教育)

  1. it is justifiable to do sth …… 是合理的
  2. play a pivotal role in 在…… 起到至关重要的作用
  3. contemporary society 当代社会
  4. cover multiple fields 涵盖多个领域
  5. scientific advances 科学进步
  6. without …, it would be more difficult to… 没有……,将会更难……(含蓄虚拟,高分语法模板)
  7. upgrade healthcare facilities 升级医疗设施
  8. boost economic and agricultural output 提升经济与农业产量

🔹 Body 2 让步段(其他学科)

  1. science alone cannot tackle all the challenges 单凭科学无法解决所有难题
  2. merit adequate public investment 值得充足的公共投入(merit = deserve,高分替换)
  3. a prime example 一个典型例子(可替换 the first and foremost example)
  4. recognise the value of regular exercise 认识到规律运动的价值
  5. keep a balanced lifestyle 保持均衡健康的生活方式
  6. A sound mind in a sound body. 健康的身体孕育健全的心智(谚语)
  7. thrive (v.) 繁荣、蓬勃发展
  8. nurture creativity and cultural identity 培养创造力与文化认同感
  9. a well-rounded society 全面发展的社会
  10. build social cohesion 建立社会凝聚力
  11. preserve a nation’s cultural heritage 保护一个国家的文化遗产

🔹 Conclusion 结尾段

  1. play a vital role in 在…… 方面发挥重要作用
  2. raise healthcare standards 提升医疗水平
  3. lift agricultural output 提高农业产量
  4. have a part to play 发挥作用
  5. adopt a balanced and practical approach 采取均衡且务实的方案(折中作文万能句)
  6. prioritise … 优先重视……
  7. attach importance to 重视(替换 pay attention to)
  8. disciplines (n.) 学科(替换 subjects,学术词)


✅ 万能句型(直接背诵仿写)

  1. There is much debate about which… deserve greater financial support from the government. 关于哪些…… 值得政府投入更多资金,人们存在诸多争论。
  2. …plays a pivotal role in contemporary society, covering multiple fields including… …… 在当代社会至关重要,涵盖包括…… 在内的诸多领域。
  3. Without …, it would be more difficult to … 倘若没有……,想要…… 会更加困难。
  4. …merit adequate public investment. …… 值得充足的公共资金投入。
  5. It is important for governments to adopt a balanced approach, prioritising … while attaching importance to … 政府应当采取均衡策略,优先发展…… 同时重视……

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