文档内容
One possible version:
Dear Lisa,
How is everything going? My school is going to hold a traditional Chinese art festival next
week. Knowing that you are quite interested in Chinese art I’m writing to invite you to attend it.
The art festival will be held from 8 a.m to 5 p.m.next Friday in the school hall which will cover
a wide range of appealing activities. You can enjoy beautiful Chinese paintings and calligraphy
works in the festival.There are also some hands-on activities like paper cutting and painting
Peking Opera facial masks.I’m sure you’ll like it.
Will you be available that day? Looking forward to your early reply
Yours, Li Hua英语试题读后续写评分标准及流程
一、写作思路
1. 基本情节
前文大意：
退伍军官Tim Robinson 独自在海边散步，不小心踩到水草滑倒在地，摔伤了腿。不幸
的是，他既没有带手机，也无人可以求救。他利用之前的部队知识进行自救，经过多次不
懈的尝试只能选择爬行，并利用手电筒发出求救信号，终于得到远方的回应。
续写思路：
结合原文，由续写第一段首句 “Tim finally got a response from the distance”可以预
测续写第一段主要内容：是谁给Tim做出回应？是如何回应的？又是如何救助Tim的？
（此处可以有对话——询问状况，动作——实施first aid以及情感描述）。
由第二段首句“Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought.” 可以预测：是
Tim的妻子发现了他发出的求救信号，并做出反应（用手电筒回应或者大喊，打急救电话，
实施急救）。
结合原文及续写第二段首句“Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought.”
可以预测续写第二段主要内容: 妻子发现Tim伤情严重，（此处需要对伤情展开适度描述
——身体状况糟糕）。幸运的是，救护车及时赶到，Tim得到了及时的救助。故事结尾突
出主题：Tim把部队所学生存技巧应用于实践中以及Tim面对困难时的坚强意志。
2. 续写要点（建议）：
第一段：
关键字：是谁给Tim做出回应？是如何回应的？又是如何救助Tim的？
建议：注意两人之间的互动，情感、对话等细节描写
第二段：
关键字：伤情严重，救助及时，意志坚强。
建议：对伤情展开适度描述，强调自救知识或生存技巧的重要性，突出故事主题。
3. 参考范文
One possible version:
Tim finally got a response from the distance. He was excited to see a torch flashing
back. It was his wife shining the torch in response to his signal. Thankfully his wife
knew something must have been wrong and went looking for her husband. She kept
moving toward her husband, shining her light. All the while, Mrs. Robinson called for
help. As they got closer to each other she waited anxiously for help to arrive. She had
no idea how hurt her husband actually was.
Tim’s condition was worse than Mrs. Robinson thought. Tim’s broken leg hurt
increasingly worse and was at risk of infection. He needed medical care immediately.
Luckily, the ambulance finally showed up. After checking his leg, the medical workers
couldn’t believe what he had put himself through. This man had crawled such a long
distance after suffering such a wound. If it hadn’t been for his training in the army, he
might not have made it. He’ll carry his cell phone with him at all times now.
