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中考英语一轮复习 写作
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•德州）纸袋在生活中被广泛使用。学校英语社团要开展主题调研成果展示活动，请你根
据提示写一篇主题为"advantages and disadvantages of paper bags"的演讲稿，从不同角度辩证陈
述其优缺点并说明原因（除提示内容外，须各补充一条），并简要概括。
Points Sides & Reasons Conclusion（结论）
environment protecting
1.friendly to the
environment ； recycled
easily；2. ……
1.a waste of wood ；
cut trees；
2.……
experience of using
l.convenient to
carry；light and thin；
2. ……
1.not strong
enough to hold heavy
things；easy to break；
2……
要求：
（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
（3）80～100词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen.
We've done a survey on "advantages and disadvantages of paper bags" and collected different
ideas.
On the point of environment protecting，______
2．（2025•墨玉县） 假如你是 Alice，你有一个非常漂亮的房间，请你结合下面的提示，
以"My room"为题，向大家介绍一下你的房间。
物品 位置、颜色或数量
schoolbag on the chair
books in the schoolbag
a pair of shoes under the bed
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dog behind the door，black
pictures on the wall，four
要求：1.词数不少于60；
2.所写内容必须包括提示内容，可适当发挥。
My room
_______
3．（2025•徐汇区） Write an article of at least 60 words to describe your past experience
of trying a new thing. （请写一篇60字的文章来描述你过去的一段尝试一样新事物的经历）
Suggested questions：
What did you try？
How did you make it？
What did you learn from it？
4．（2025•安丘市模拟）成长的道路是漫长的，但是成长，有时只在一瞬间。那一刻，我们从懵懂
走向成熟，从脆弱走向坚强……三年的初中生活一定有那么一刻让你体会到了自己的成长。请
以"The Moment that Made Me Grow up"为题，用英语写一篇短文与大家分享你的故事与感受。
要点如下：
（1）What made you grow up？
（2）What have you learnt from it？
注意：
（1）词数80～100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
The Moment that Made Me Grow up
________
5．（2025•潮南区）作家列夫•托尔斯泰曾说："所谓人生，是一刻也不停地变化着的。"在你的生命
中有什么变化对你产生了重要影响呢？假设你们学校的英文校报正在进行主题征文活动，请你根
据以下提示及要求，以" The most important change in my life"为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：（1）你生活中最重要的变化是什么；
（2）你从这个变化中学到了什么。
要求：（1）紧扣主题、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
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The most important change in my life.Life is filled with changes.Some of them may have a
great influence on us.________
6．（2025•榆树市）迈克（Mike）过去英语成绩不太好，课堂上听不懂老师讲的内容、不会发音、
不会语法、爱睡觉、不交作业……，他甚至想放弃英语。但在老师和同学的帮助下，他决心努力
学习。现在他变化了许多，并且成了班上英语成绩优秀的学生。请以Never give up为题写一篇
短文，号召大家不要轻言放弃，要变问题为挑战，勇敢面对。
提示词：used to，be poor in，hand in，learn by，with the help of，top student
要求：
（1）语言流畅，规范
（2）包含提示内容，并作适当发挥
（3）内容完整，书写规范。
Never give up
________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2025•浑南区）习主席在谈到青少年体质时说，要文明其精神，野蛮其体魄。中考体考旨在促
进学生体育锻炼，提高身体素质，建立健康意识，培养健全人格。作为初三学生，你已经经历了
两年多的体育锻炼。现在学校校报英语栏目向大家发起征文，内容是在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事。
请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿。
要点：（1）体育锻炼的意义；
（2）体育锻炼的过程；
（3）关于体育锻炼的感悟。
注意：（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称
Exercise is something common but important.________
8．（2025•佛山）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将写作内容写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
假如你是李明，你下周准备参加学校的英语角，活动主题是谈论你尊敬的人，请你根据以下思维
导图内容提示写一发言稿。
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作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A person I respect（尊敬）
In our life，there are lot of people worth（值得） respecting.______
9．（2025•苏仙区）中国有很多传统节日，或是喜庆热闹，或是团圆相聚，或是寄托哀思。校刊设
置了一个英文专栏 Sharing Festivals.请你以"My Favorite Chinese Festival﹣﹣the Spring
Festival"为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
in the first lunar month；
clean the house；hang couplets；
set off fireworks；eat reunion dinner；
express wishes；give lucky money...
写作要点：
（1）When is the Spring Festival？
（2）How do people celebrate the festival？
（3）What's the meaning of this festival and how do you feel about it？.
写作要求：
（1）短文中必须包含提示中的写作要点，可适当发挥。
（2）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出不计入总词数）。
My Favorite Chinese Festival﹣﹣the Spring Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is_________
10．（2025•珠海）近月，"国潮"文化席卷珠海，无论是唐家古镇国庆期间的"大唐庙会".还是圆明新
园永不落菲"的中反药集市，亦或是校园里的汉服，吟诵古典诗词，写毛笔字等活动，处处彰显
有中国传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为 Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture的征文
活动，请你选择一种传统文化的形式，与一篇短文投稿。
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture 简介你最真欢的一种传统文化形式，比如书法
（calligraphy），剪纸 ，糖画 （sugar﹣painting），
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戏
你体验或者学习 该传统文化的经历
你的收获及感受。
注意：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80左
右。作文题目和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays，with the popularity of Chinese style，more people show great interest in traditional
Chinese culture
11．（2025•碑林区）假如你是李斌，第一次你取得了很大的进步。你们学校校刊英语专栏正在开展
以"How I've Changed"为主题的征稿活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，讲述你生活中的
重大改变。
In the past Now How to change
was not good at speaking English speak English very well listen to the tape every day
didn't dare to speak in front of the be confident take part in activities
class
didn't like sports like playing basketball my classmates help me
... ... ...
要求：
（1）所写内容应包含表格具体信息，亦可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
How I've Changed
______________________________________________________________________________
12．（2025•榆树市）你最喜欢的发明是什么？请简单介绍一下这个发明并说明你喜欢它的原因。要
求：语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
要点提示：
（1）你最喜欢的发明是什么；
（2）它有什么用途；
（3）你最喜欢它的原因是什么。
My favorite invention
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__________________________________________________________________________________
13．（2025•香洲区）春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。老师在我们的成长之路上扮演着无比重要
的角色。在你的初中生涯里，至今为止谁是最令你感激或印象深刻的老师？在学习或生活上 TA
给你带来了怎样的帮助和影响？请根据以下提示完成作文：
（1）What does he/she look like and what is he/she like？（appearance，personality）
（2）How did he/she help you？ （when，where，what，how）
（3）Express your gratitude（感谢之情） to him/her.
要求：1.字数80词以上；2.不可以在文中出现真实的身份信息；3.书写认真。
My _____ teacher
_____
14．（2025•杭锦后旗）假如你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数 80左右，可适当增加细节，
以使行文连贯。并将答案写在答题卡上相应的位置。
Dear Li Ping.
How are you？I hope you' re fine and not too busy!
I know you are good at learning English，can you tell me how do you learn English
well？And now I fall in love with Chinese Festivals.Can you tell me something about Spring
Festival？Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Peter
Dear Peter，
______
Yours，
Li Ping
15．（2025•惠州）假如你是Tom，你的父母已经去上海出差几天了，你一个人在家。请根据以下表
格内容提示，以"Home Alone for the First Time"为题，写一篇英文日记，记录你今天的生活。
表格如下：
你独自在家的原因 父母到北京出差几天
上午：做运动、整理房间、洗衣服
你今天的生活
中午：做简餐……
下午：做作业、玩游戏……
你此次经历的感悟 ……
作业要求：
（1）可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
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（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。日记的格式与标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
Home Alone for the First Time
________
16．（2025•四平）假如你是李军，你打算和父母去北京旅游，红星旅行社将为你们提供全程服务。
请你根据以下提示给红星旅行社的主管张先生（ Mr.Zhang）写一封电子邮件，咨询一下有关情
况。
提示：（1）旅行车上游客的数量；
（2）宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人间；
（3）宾馆附近是否有游泳池；
（4）饭菜是否可口、种类多样。
要求：词数90﹣100词（电子邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr.Zhang，
As a visitor，I'd like to ask you some questions.________
Yours，
Li Jun
17．（2025•麦积区）班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以"How to Be Happy"为主题，
写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。开头和结尾已经给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：
（1）短文应条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明。
（2）短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
（3）短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Good morning，everybody!
The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
_______
That's what I want to share with you.Thank you!
18．（2025•郸城县）假如你是李华，上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对，你立刻喜欢上了乡村音乐。
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请你根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1）乡村音乐的特点；
（2）乡村音乐的好处；
（3）你今后的计划。
写作要求：
（1）文中须包含要点提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数 100 左右。
参考词汇：fall in love with 爱上；tiredness 疲劳
______
19．（2025•东港市）最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是"弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国
传统佳节"。请你以"My Favorite：Chinese Festival"为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
内容提示：
（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；
（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；
（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
要求：
（1）词数：80～90 词；
（2）字迹工整，书写规范，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
______
20．（2025•寻甸县）在学校"探寻中华传统文化"英语综合实践活动中，你班对"元宵节""端午
节"和"中秋节"三个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究，经过探究与实践，你们收集了一些信息与资
料（见下表）
假设你是李华，请选择其中一个节日，用英语写一篇短文，在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研
究成果进行交流。
Project：Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject the Lantern the Dragon Boat the Mid﹣
Festival Festival Autumn Festival
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Information History •about 2，000 •about 2，000 years centuries
（What we've years
learned）
Time • the 15th day of • the 5th day of the May the fifth in
the first lunar fifth lunar month Chinese lunar
month calendar
Celebrations • riddle （谜语） • boat races • Admire the
games moon
•…
•…
Food Tangyuan/yuanxiao •zongzi mooncakes
… … …
注意：
（1）短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：80～100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates，
I'm very happy to share our research with you.The subject we've chosen is _____.
That's all.Thank you!
21．（2025•大名县）假如你是李华，收到了好友Peter的邮件。请阅读并回复。
Subject：change & festival
Hi there，Li Hua!
How are you？I hope you're fine and not too busy!
Well，it has been a while since I got your message last time.I really want to know if you
have changed a lot as a new 9th grader.So could you tell me one of your biggest changes？The
biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese festivals.Can you tell me how you
spent your Mid﹣Autumn Festival this year？Write to me soon.
Yours，
Peter
注意：（1）词数80个左右（给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）；
（2）不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Dear Peter，
You asked about my biggest change，_________
Yours，
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Li Hua
22．（2025•长春）为了提升学生英语学习的兴趣，学校将于11月2日下午1：30在学校礼堂举办
英语演讲比赛。请全体同学准时参加、不要迟到，不要大声喧哗、并保持卫生。请根据下面要点
和要求，用英道写一封不少于40词的通知。
要点：
（1）表达清楚信息：
（2）说明情况。
要求：要点齐全；表达通顺：简洁得体。
Notice
_________
23．（2025•郧西县）你在浏览网页的时候，看到一个题为"How I have changed in the middle
school"的帖子。下面跟帖很多，你回忆久久，也分享了自己的故事。
By ： Better Future on 25/10 8 ： 00 PM
#1
#How I have changed in the middle school#
Since we are nine grader，we have changed
a lot compared to what we looked like on
our first day to the middle school.I guess
there must be many differences.You can talk
whatever you want ， such as your
appearance，your personality，your learning
skills，your habits and so.
要求：
（1）你的分享至少包含通知中提到的两项（黑体部分）；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
24．（2025•中山区）假如你是李辉，你校校报正开展以" My hero"为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根
据下表所给信息，写一篇英语短文介绍"芯片之母"黄令仪先生的生平事迹，并向校报投稿。
Fact Box
Huang Lingyi— Mother of China's Chip
2023 Die on April 20th
2010s Fight on the front line of scientific research
2001﹣2002 Join Loongson's research group and develop the first Chinese CPU chip
1990s Return to China and devote to the design of integrated circuits（集成电路）
1989 Go to the US for further study
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1955﹣1960 Study in Huazhong University and Tsinghua University
1936 Be born in Guangxi
参考词汇：admire...for...因……而钦佩……；be honoured as...被誉为……；
make a contribution to...为……做出贡献
注意：
（1）文中必须包含所给的要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：80—100。
25．（2025•东川区） 你最喜欢的科目是什么？请根据以下思维导图，以"My Favorite
Subject"为题为校园专栏写一篇英语短文。
要求：（1）短文内容必须包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
（2）50词左右。
My Favorite Subject
___________________
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中考英语一轮复习 写作
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•德州）纸袋在生活中被广泛使用。学校英语社团要开展主题调研成果展示活动，请你根
据提示写一篇主题为"advantages and disadvantages of paper bags"的演讲稿，从不同角度辩证陈
述其优缺点并说明原因（除提示内容外，须各补充一条），并简要概括。
Points Sides & Reasons Conclusion（结论）
environment protecting
1.friendly to the
environment ； recycled
easily；2. ……
1.a waste of wood ；
cut trees；
2.……
experience of using
l.convenient to
carry；light and thin；
2. ……
1.not strong
enough to hold heavy
things；easy to break；
2……
要求：
（1）语言通顺，要点齐全，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
（3）80～100词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning，ladies and gentlemen.
We've done a survey on "advantages and disadvantages of paper bags" and collected different
ideas.
On the point of environment protecting，______
【考点】演讲稿；环境保护．
【答案】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen.
We've done a survey on "advantages and disadvantages of paper bags" and collected different
ideas.
On the point of environment protecting，they are friendly to the environment and they are
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recycled easily.They can also be recycled.But they also have disadvantages.To make more paper
bags，we need to cut down more forests.They also waste more wood.They are also relatively
expensive.In my life，I often carry things in paper bags.They are more convenient to carry.They
are also lighter and thinner.When we use them to carry things，it will be more dignified.But
sometimes they're not strong enough to hold heavy things.They are also very easy to break.Of
course，if they encounter a lot of water，they can't hold anything.
【分析】【高分句型一】
They can also be recycled.它们也可以回收利用。被动语态。
【高分句型二】
Of course，if they encounter a lot of water，they can't hold anything.当然如果它们遇到了大量
的水，就不能装东西了。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Good morning，ladies and gentlemen.
We've done a survey on "advantages and disadvantages of paper bags" and collected different
ideas.
On the point of environment protecting，they are friendly to the environment and they are
recycled easily.They can also be recycled.【高分句型一】But they also have disadvantages.To make
more paper bags，we need to cut down more forests.They also waste more wood.They are also
relatively expensive.（环保） In my life，I often carry things in paper bags.They are more
convenient to carry.They are also lighter and thinner.When we use them to carry things，it will be
more dignified.But sometimes they're not strong enough to hold heavy things.They are also very
easy to break.Of course，if they encounter a lot of water，they can't hold anything.【高分句型二】
（经历）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2．（2025•墨玉县） 假如你是 Alice，你有一个非常漂亮的房间，请你结合下面的提示，
以"My room"为题，向大家介绍一下你的房间。
物品 位置、颜色或数量
schoolbag on the chair
books in the schoolbag
a pair of shoes under the bed
dog behind the door，black
pictures on the wall，four
要求：1.词数不少于60；
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2.所写内容必须包括提示内容，可适当发挥。
My room
_______
【考点】说明文；家庭生活．
【答案】
My room
My name is Alice.This is my room.Look!A pair of shoes is under the bed.Can you see my
schoolbag？Yes.It's on the chair.And my books are in it.Can you see a dog？It's behind the
door.It's a black dog.Where are the pictures？They are on the wall.I have four pictures.It's a
beautiful room.I like it.
【分析】【高分句型一】
And my books are in it.我的书在里面。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
They are on the wall.它们在墙上。on the wall在墙上。
【解答】
My room
My name is Alice.This is my room.Look!A pair of shoes is under the bed.Can you see my
schoolbag？Yes.It's on the chair.And my books are in it.【高分句型一】Can you see a dog？It's
behind the door.It's a black dog.Where are the pictures？They are on the wall.【高分句型二】I
have four pictures.It's a beautiful room.I like it.（我的名字叫爱丽丝。这是我的房间。看！床下有一
双鞋。你能看到我的书包吗？对。它在椅子上。我的书在里面。你能看见一只狗吗？它在门后面。
这是一只黑狗。照片在哪里？它们在墙上。我有四张照片。这是一个漂亮的房间。我喜欢它。）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2025•徐汇区） Write an article of at least 60 words to describe your past experience
of trying a new thing. （请写一篇60字的文章来描述你过去的一段尝试一样新事物的经历）
Suggested questions：
What did you try？
How did you make it？
What did you learn from it？
Las t month ， I tried cooking a new recipe for homemade pizza.Firs t ， I gathered al l the
necessary ingredients ， including dough ， cheese ， tomato sauce ， and various toppings.I followed
an online tutorial closely ， ensuring that each step was executed properly.Although I made a few
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mistakes ， the pizza turned out delicious.From this experience ， I learned the importance of
patience and carefully following instructions when trying something new.It was a rewarding and
enjoyable process.I think I will keep trying new things in the future .
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】 Last month，I tried cooking a new recipe for homemade pizza.First，I gathered
all the necessary ingredients，including dough，cheese，tomato sauce，and various toppings.I
followed an online tutorial closely，ensuring that each step was executed properly.Although I
made a few mistakes，the pizza turned out delicious.From this experience，I learned the
importance of patience and carefully following instructions when trying something new.It was a
rewarding and enjoyable process.I think I will keep trying new things in the future.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Although I made a few mistakes，the pizza turned out delicious.虽然我犯了几个错误，但比萨饼
结果很好吃。
although 虽然，引导让步状语从句，不能和but连用。
【高分句型二】
I think I will keep trying new things in the future.我想我以后会继续尝试新的东西。
keep doing sth.继续干某事，固定用法。
【解答】 Last month，I tried cooking a new recipe for homemade pizza.（尝试的事物）
First，I gathered all the necessary ingredients，including dough，cheese，tomato sauce，and
various toppings.I followed an online tutorial closely，ensuring that each step was executed
properly.Although I made a few mistakes，the pizza turned out delicious.【高分句型一】（尝试
的过程）From this experience，I learned the importance of patience and carefully following
instructions when trying something new.It was a rewarding and enjoyable process.（学到的东
西）I think I will keep trying new things in the future.【高分句型二】
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求根据提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间．
写作时要结合提示问题进行陈述。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过
渡。要求语法正确，语句通顺。
4．（2025•安丘市模拟）成长的道路是漫长的，但是成长，有时只在一瞬间。那一刻，我们从懵懂
走向成熟，从脆弱走向坚强……三年的初中生活一定有那么一刻让你体会到了自己的成长。请
以"The Moment that Made Me Grow up"为题，用英语写一篇短文与大家分享你的故事与感受。
要点如下：
（1）What made you grow up？
（2）What have you learnt from it？
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注意：
（1）词数80～100；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
The Moment that Made Me Grow up
________
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】
The Moment that Made Me Grow up
Everyone has experienced a moving moment，and I'd like to share mine with you.
I still remember that it was a rainy day.I failed an exam，so I felt very sad.And I didn't bring
an umbrella.It rained harder and harder.It seemed that it was laughing at me.Suddenly，the rain
disappeared.When I looked up，I saw a big umbrella and a smiling face of my best friend.He
looked at me and said， "An exam doesn't mean anything.Believe in yourself." His words really
touched my heart and cheered me up.I thought I could learn from mistakes.Failure is the mother of
success.That moment really made me grow up.
From then on，I have worked harder and made great progress.I always believe in myself and
never give up.I am thankful to my best friend forever.
【分析】[高分句型一】：
Everyone has experienced a moving moment，and I'd like to share mine with you.每个人都经历
过一个感人的时刻，我想和你分享我的。
would like to do sth表示想做某事。
【高分句型二】：
When I looked up，I saw a big umbrella and a smiling face of my best friend.当我抬头看时，
我看到一把大伞和我最好的朋友的笑脸。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【解答】
The Moment that Made Me Grow up
Everyone has experienced a moving moment，and I'd like to share mine with you.【高分句型
一】（开门见山，愿与大家分享感动人的瞬间，从而引出话题）
I still remember that it was a rainy day.I failed an exam，so I felt very sad.And I didn't bring
an umbrella.It rained harder and harder.It seemed that it was laughing at me.Suddenly，the rain
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disappeared.When I looked up，I saw a big umbrella and a smiling face of my best friend.【高分
句型二】He looked at me and said， "An exam doesn't mean anything.Believe in yourself." His
words really touched my heart and cheered me up.I thought I could learn from mistakes.Failure is
the mother of success.That moment really made me grow up.（详细陈述成长的故事）
From then on，I have worked harder and made great progress.I always believe in myself and
never give up.I am thankful to my best friend forever.（表达感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2025•潮南区）作家列夫•托尔斯泰曾说："所谓人生，是一刻也不停地变化着的。"在你的生命
中有什么变化对你产生了重要影响呢？假设你们学校的英文校报正在进行主题征文活动，请你根
据以下提示及要求，以" The most important change in my life"为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：（1）你生活中最重要的变化是什么；
（2）你从这个变化中学到了什么。
要求：（1）紧扣主题、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范；
（2）80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The most important change in my life.Life is filled with changes.Some of them may have a
great influence on us.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；日常生活．
【答案】
The most important change in my life
Life is filled with changes.Some of them may have a great influence on us.Now I would like
to talk about the most important change in my life.
I used to live at home with my family.My parents looked after me well and I didn't have to
do anything else except study.Everything was going fine until I was sent to a boarding school.
Living at school requires me to do chores on my own.It was so difficult for me at first that I
cried many times.With the help of my teachers and roommates，I kept trying and learning.Now，
I'm able to take good care of myself.I have learned the importance of independence now.My
parents are proud of me for my independence.I think this important change will be of great help to
my future life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I used to live at home with my family.我过去和家人住在家里。
used to do sth.过去常常干某事，固定用法。
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【高分句型二】
I think this important change will be of great help to my future life.我觉得这个重要的改变对我
以后的生活会有很大的帮助。
think认为，后接宾语从句。
【解答】
The most important change in my life
Life is filled with changes.Some of them may have a great influence on us.Now I would like
to talk about the most important change in my life.（引入话题）
I used to live at home with my family.【高分句型一】My parents looked after me well and I
didn't have to do anything else except study.Everything was going fine until I was sent to a
boarding school.（以前的状况）
Living at school requires me to do chores on my own.It was so difficult for me at first that I
cried many times.With the help of my teachers and roommates，I kept trying and learning.Now，
I'm able to take good care of myself.（现在的变化）I have learned the importance of independence
now.My parents are proud of me for my independence.I think this important change will be of
great help to my future life.【高分句型二】（感悟）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求根据提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间．
写作时要结合提示问题进行陈述。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过
渡。要求语法正确，语句通顺。
6．（2025•榆树市）迈克（Mike）过去英语成绩不太好，课堂上听不懂老师讲的内容、不会发音、
不会语法、爱睡觉、不交作业……，他甚至想放弃英语。但在老师和同学的帮助下，他决心努力
学习。现在他变化了许多，并且成了班上英语成绩优秀的学生。请以Never give up为题写一篇
短文，号召大家不要轻言放弃，要变问题为挑战，勇敢面对。
提示词：used to，be poor in，hand in，learn by，with the help of，top student
要求：
（1）语言流畅，规范
（2）包含提示内容，并作适当发挥
（3）内容完整，书写规范。
Never give up
________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】倡议书；学习．
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【答案】
Never give up
Mike used to be a poor in his English.He couldn't understand what the teacher said.He
couldn't pronounce well，and he often felt sleepy in class.Sometimes he didn't hand in his
homework.He even wanted to give up.But with the help of his teachers and classmates，he has
improved a lot and he find learning English by joining the English club is a good way to study
English.Now he does well in all his subjects，and he has become one of the top students in his
class.So when we have problems，we should never give up easily.Instead，we should change the
problems into challenges，and face them bravely.
【分析】【高分句型一】
He couldn't understand what the teacher said.他听不懂老师说的话。He couldn't understand+宾语
从句。
【高分句型二】
So when we have problems，we should never give up easily.Instead，we should change the
problems into challenges，and face them bravely.相反，我们应该把问题变成挑战，勇敢地面对它
们。when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】
Never give up
Mike used to be a poor in his English.He couldn't understand what the teacher said.【高分句
型一】He couldn't pronounce well，and he often felt sleepy in class.Sometimes he didn't hand in
his homework.He even wanted to give up.But with the help of his teachers and classmates，he has
improved a lot and he find learning English by joining the English club is a good way to study
English.Now he does well in all his subjects，and he has become one of the top students in his
class.So when we have problems，we should never give up easily.Instead，we should change the
problems into challenges，and face them bravely.【高分句型二】（迈克过去英语很差。他听不懂老
师说的话。他发音不好，上课时经常感到困。有时他不交作业，甚至想放弃。但在老师和同学的帮
助下，他进步了很多，他发现加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法。现在他所有科目都考得很好，
他已经成为班上最优秀的学生之一。所以当我们遇到问题时，我们永远不应该轻易放弃。相反，我
们应该把问题变成挑战，勇敢地面对它们。）
【点评】是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕表格内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间．
写作时要结合表格内容对Tom过去和现在的情况进行陈述，之后给出自己的看法和建议，看法和
建议需要自主发挥．在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
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7．（2025•浑南区）习主席在谈到青少年体质时说，要文明其精神，野蛮其体魄。中考体考旨在促
进学生体育锻炼，提高身体素质，建立健康意识，培养健全人格。作为初三学生，你已经经历了
两年多的体育锻炼。现在学校校报英语栏目向大家发起征文，内容是在体育锻炼中的拼搏故事。
请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文投稿。
要点：（1）体育锻炼的意义；
（2）体育锻炼的过程；
（3）关于体育锻炼的感悟。
注意：（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称
Exercise is something common but important.________
【考点】其他应用文写作；文娱体育．
【答案】 As we all know，good health plays the most important role in our life.So it is
very important for us to take exercise.Not only can exercise build up our body but also it can
help us form a good living habit.Besides，it is a good way to relax ourselves in our free time.
As a middle school student，I achieved a satisfactory result in the physical education test for
more than two years' exercise.In order to make full of time，I chose to get up early and then
went to school.In the cold winter，I have ever wanted to give up and stay in bed.But I finally
persuaded myself to insist on running every morning.
Now I feel proud of myself.Just as a saying goes "Rome was not built in a day"，your hard
﹣working will be rewarded one day.If you keep exercise，you'll have a strong body.I hope
everyone can get away from illness.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
Besides，it is a good way to relax ourselves in our free time.此外，这是一个在我们休闲时间放
松自己的好方式。
a good way to do sth做某事的好方法。
【高分句型二】：
Now I feel proud of myself.现在我为自己感到骄傲。
feel proud of 为……感到自豪。
【解答】 As we all know，good health plays the most important role in our life.So it is
very important for us to take exercise.Not only can exercise build up our body but also it can
help us form a good living habit.Besides，it is a good way to relax ourselves in our free time.
【高分句型一】（体育锻炼的意义）
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As a middle school student，I achieved a satisfactory result in the physical education test for
more than two years' exercise.In order to make full of time，I chose to get up early and then
went to school.In the cold winter，I have ever wanted to give up and stay in bed.But I finally
persuaded myself to insist on running every morning.（体育锻炼的过程）
Now I feel proud of myself.【高分句型二】Just as a saying goes "Rome was not built in a
day"，your hard﹣working will be rewarded one day.If you keep exercise，you'll have a strong
body.I hope everyone can get away from illness.（关于体育锻炼的感悟）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2025•佛山）请根据要求完成短文写作，并将写作内容写在答题卡对应题目的答题位置上。
假如你是李明，你下周准备参加学校的英语角，活动主题是谈论你尊敬的人，请你根据以下思维
导图内容提示写一发言稿。
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数 80 左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A person I respect（尊敬）
In our life，there are lot of people worth（值得） respecting.______
【考点】演讲稿；人物介绍．
【答案】
A person I respect（尊敬）
In our life，there are lot of people worth（值得） respecting.Zhang Guimei is one of
them.She is also the person I respect most.Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang in June，
1957.After she graduated from the college，she became a teacher in Yumnan.She is selfless and
works hard.During her teaching career，she found it difficult for the girls to have education，
especially those who were poor.So she decided to donate all of her own savings to help these poor
girls to finish education.Although she has serious illnesses，she still works at least 15 hours a
day.She has helped more than 1，800 girls from poor families achieve their university dreams.That's
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why people respect her.
As a student，I look up to her very much，and I learn to be helpful from her.She is the
greatest teacher I have ever seen.I'd like to be a teacher like her when I grow up.
【分析】【高分句型一】
During her teaching career，she found it difficult for the girls to have education，especially
those who were poor.在她的教学生涯中，她发现女孩们很难接受教育，尤其是那些穷人。who引
导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
Although she has serious illnesses，she still works at least 15 hours a day.管她身患重病，但她
仍然每天至少工作15个小时。Although引导的让步状语从句。
【解答】
A person I respect（尊敬）
In our life，there are lot of people worth（值得） respecting.Zhang Guimei is one of
them.She is also the person I respect most.Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang in June，
1957.After she graduated from the college，she became a teacher in Yumnan.She is selfless and
works hard.（基本信息） During her teaching career，she found it difficult for the girls to have
education，especially those who were poor.【高分句型一】So she decided to donate all of her own
savings to help these poor girls to finish education.Although she has serious illnesses，she still
works at least 15 hours a day. 【高分句型二】She has helped more than 1，800 girls from poor
families achieve their university dreams.That's why people respect her.（理由）
As a student，I look up to her very much，and I learn to be helpful from her.She is the
greatest teacher I have ever seen.I'd like to be a teacher like her when I grow up.（影响）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2025•苏仙区）中国有很多传统节日，或是喜庆热闹，或是团圆相聚，或是寄托哀思。校刊设
置了一个英文专栏 Sharing Festivals.请你以"My Favorite Chinese Festival﹣﹣the Spring
Festival"为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
in the first lunar month；
clean the house；hang couplets；
set off fireworks；eat reunion dinner；
express wishes；give lucky money...
写作要点：
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（1）When is the Spring Festival？
（2）How do people celebrate the festival？
（3）What's the meaning of this festival and how do you feel about it？.
写作要求：
（1）短文中必须包含提示中的写作要点，可适当发挥。
（2）80词左右（标题和开头都已给出不计入总词数）。
My Favorite Chinese Festival﹣﹣the Spring Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is_________
【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
My Favorite Chinese Festival﹣﹣the Spring Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring
Festival.
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country.It is in the first lunar month.Before the
Spring Festival，we often clean the house and hang couplets.Our family get together.We always eat
reunion dinner at my grandparents' home.I always eat a lot of delicious food，such as dumplings
and fish.We set off fireworks at night .The elderly often give children lucky money.My parents
usually go shopping with me.We buy some nice clothes for ourselves.We often watch TV at home
and sometimes read books.Sometimes，we greet other people on the phone to express wishes.
The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it's the beginning of a new
year.I'm always happy at the Spring Festival.
【分析】【高分句型一】
My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring
Festival.我最喜欢的中国节日是春节，因为我在春节有很多乐趣。because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it's the beginning of a new
year.春节对我们中国人来说是最重要的，因为它是新一年的开始。形容词最高级句型；because引
导的原因状语从句。
【解答】
My Favorite Chinese Festival﹣﹣the Spring Festival
My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival because I have lots of fun at the Spring
Festival.【高分句型一】
The Spring Festival is a popular holiday in our country.It is in the first lunar month.（名称、
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时间）Before the Spring Festival，we often clean the house and hang couplets.Our family get
together.We always eat reunion dinner at my grandparents' home.I always eat a lot of delicious
food，such as dumplings and fish.We set off fireworks at night .The elderly often give children
lucky money.My parents usually go shopping with me.We buy some nice clothes for ourselves.We
often watch TV at home and sometimes read books.Sometimes，we greet other people on the
phone to express wishes.（庆祝方式）
The Spring Festival is the most important for us Chinese because it's the beginning of a new
year.【高分句型二】I'm always happy at the Spring Festival.（感受及喜爱它的原因）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2025•珠海）近月，"国潮"文化席卷珠海，无论是唐家古镇国庆期间的"大唐庙会".还是圆明新
园永不落菲"的中反药集市，亦或是校园里的汉服，吟诵古典诗词，写毛笔字等活动，处处彰显
有中国传统文化的魅力。你校英文报正在组织题为 Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture的征文
活动，请你选择一种传统文化的形式，与一篇短文投稿。
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture 简介你最真欢的一种传统文化形式，比如书法
（calligraphy），剪纸 ，糖画 （sugar﹣painting），
戏
你体验或者学习 该传统文化的经历
你的收获及感受。
注意：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名、地点和学生的真实姓名。2.语句连贯，词数80左
右。作文题目和开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays，with the popularity of Chinese style，more people show great interest in traditional
Chinese culture
【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays，with the popularity of Chinese style，more people show great interest in traditional
Chinese culture.My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy，which has a long history and
has influenced many people.
I started to learn calligraphy when I was eight years old.At first，it was challenging to use
the brush to write Chinese characters.My wrist would ache after holding the brush for a long
time.Fortunately，with the help of my teacher，I gradually improved.Now，I can write spring
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couplets for my family every year.It makes me proud.
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me.I become more patient and careful thanks to
years of practice.I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional Chinese culture.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Fortunately，with the help of my teacher，I gradually improved.幸运的是，在老师的帮助下，我
逐渐有所进步。
fortunately幸运地，副词，修饰整个句子。
【高分句型二】
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me.学书法对我影响很大。
动名词短语作句子主语的用法。
【解答】
Spreading Traditional Chinese Culture
Nowadays，with the popularity of Chinese style，more people show great interest in traditional
Chinese culture.My favorite traditional Chinese culture is calligraphy，which has a long history and
has influenced many people.（阐述自己最喜欢的传统文化）
I started to learn calligraphy when I was eight years old.At first，it was challenging to use
the brush to write Chinese characters.My wrist would ache after holding the brush for a long
time.Fortunately，with the help of my teacher，I gradually improved.【高分句型一】Now，I can
write spring couplets for my family every year.It makes me proud.（阐述个人体验该传统文化的经
历）
Learning calligraphy has a great influence on me.【高分句型二】I become more patient and
careful thanks to years of practice.I also feel honored to be able to pass down this traditional
Chinese culture.（阐述个人的收获及感受）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求根据提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间．
写作时要结合提示问题进行陈述。在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过
渡。要求语法正确，语句通顺。
11．（2025•碑林区）假如你是李斌，第一次你取得了很大的进步。你们学校校刊英语专栏正在开展
以"How I've Changed"为主题的征稿活动，请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，讲述你生活中的
重大改变。
In the past Now How to change
was not good at speaking English speak English very well listen to the tape every day
didn't dare to speak in front of the be confident take part in activities
class
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didn't like sports like playing basketball my classmates help me
... ... ...
要求：
（1）所写内容应包含表格具体信息，亦可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数不少于70，开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
How I've Changed
______________________________________________________________________________
【考点】说明文；个人情况．
【答案】
How I've Changed
My English has improved a lot and I can speak English very well now.In the past，I was not
good at speaking English.I didn't dare to speak in front of the class.I didn't like sports at all.I used
to come to school late.To speak English very well，I listened to the tape every day.Now，I am
confident by taking part in activities.I like playing basketball because my classmates helped
me.They help me and encourage me to do better.With the help of my teacher，I am never late for
school again.
These changes have made me feel more confident and happy.
【分析】【高分句型一】
I used to come to school late.我过去上学经常迟到。
used to do sth过去常常做某事。
【高分句型二】
I like playing basketball because my classmates helped me.我喜欢打篮球，因为我的同学帮助我。
because引导原因状语从句。
【解答】
How I've Changed
My English has improved a lot and I can speak English very well now.In the past，I was not
good at speaking English.I didn't dare to speak in front of the class.I didn't like sports at all.I used
to come to school late.【高分句型一】（过去）To speak English very well，I listened to the tape
every day.Now，I am confident by taking part in activities.I like playing basketball because my
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classmates helped me. 【高分句型二】They help me and encourage me to do better.With the help
of my teacher，I am never late for school again.（现在）
These changes have made me feel more confident and happy.（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2025•榆树市）你最喜欢的发明是什么？请简单介绍一下这个发明并说明你喜欢它的原因。要
求：语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺。
要点提示：
（1）你最喜欢的发明是什么；
（2）它有什么用途；
（3）你最喜欢它的原因是什么。
My favorite invention
__________________________________________________________________________________
【考点】说明文；兴趣爱好．
【答案】
My favorite invention
With the development of science and technology，many new inventions have come into our
life.Among of them，my favorite invention is the intelligent mobile phone.
It makes it easier for people to communicate with others.People often chat with them through
e﹣mails and QQ.Though a lot of people find some bad effects the intelligent mobile phone has on
us，I think as long as we use it properly，the intelligent mobile phone must be beneficial to us.
As a student，the intelligent mobile phone helps me a lot.With it，I can find lots of
information I need .I can read books，know the latest news and watch movies.I can play games or
listen to music when I am tired.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It makes it easier for people to communicate with others.它使人们更容易与他人交流。
It makes it+形容词 for sb to do sth.使某人做某事是……的。
【高分句型二】
I can play games or listen to music when I am tired.当我累的时候，我可以玩游戏或听音乐。
when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】
My favorite invention
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With the development of science and technology，many new inventions have come into our
life.Among of them，my favorite invention is the intelligent mobile phone.（最喜欢的发明是什么）
It makes it easier for people to communicate with others.【高分句型一】People often chat
with them through e﹣mails and QQ.Though a lot of people find some bad effects the intelligent
mobile phone has on us，I think as long as we use it properly，the intelligent mobile phone must
be beneficial to us.（有什么用途）
As a student，the intelligent mobile phone helps me a lot.With it，I can find lots of
information I need .I can read books，know the latest news and watch movies.I can play games or
listen to music when I am tired.【高分句型二】（我最喜欢它的原因是什么）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2025•香洲区）春蚕到死丝方尽，蜡炬成灰泪始干。老师在我们的成长之路上扮演着无比重要
的角色。在你的初中生涯里，至今为止谁是最令你感激或印象深刻的老师？在学习或生活上 TA
给你带来了怎样的帮助和影响？请根据以下提示完成作文：
（1）What does he/she look like and what is he/she like？（appearance，personality）
（2）How did he/she help you？ （when，where，what，how）
（3）Express your gratitude（感谢之情） to him/her.
要求：1.字数80词以上；2.不可以在文中出现真实的身份信息；3.书写认真。
My _____ teacher
_____
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】
My English teacher
Of all the teachers，the teacher who left the deepest impression on me is my English
teacher，Miss Chen.She is a beautiful woman with long straight hair and bright eyes.She is tall
and thin.She is kind，patient，and strict.She is so humorous that she makes her classes full of fun
and laughter.When I was in grade eight，I had difficulties in learning English grammar.She always
asks me questions patiently in class.Miss Chen used to explain the grammar rules to me patiently
after class by using vivid examples and easy﹣to﹣understand language.Thanks to her help，I
gradually mastered the difficult grammar points and my English grades improved gradually.I am
quite grateful to Miss Li.I will always remember her kindness.
【分析】【高分句型一】
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Of all the teachers，the teacher who left the deepest impression on me is my English teacher，
Miss Chen.在所有的老师中，给我留下最深印象的老师是我的英语老师陈老师。
who引导定语从句。
【高分句型二】
When I was in grade eight，I had difficulties in learning English grammar.当我在八年级的时候，
我在学习英语语法方面有困难。
when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】
My English teacher
Of all the teachers，the teacher who left the deepest impression on me is my English
teacher，Miss Chen.【高分句型一】（介绍英语老师）She is a beautiful woman with long straight
hair and bright eyes.She is tall and thin.She is kind，patient，and strict.She is so humorous that
she makes her classes full of fun and laughter.（是什么样的人）When I was in grade eight，I had
difficulties in learning English grammar. 【高分句型二】She always asks me questions patiently in
class.Miss Chen used to explain the grammar rules to me patiently after class by using vivid
examples and easy﹣to﹣understand language.Thanks to her help，I gradually mastered the difficult
grammar points and my English grades improved gradually. （她是如何帮助我的）I am quite
grateful to Miss Li.I will always remember her kindness.（向她表示感谢）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2025•杭锦后旗）假如你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并回复。词数 80左右，可适当增加细节，
以使行文连贯。并将答案写在答题卡上相应的位置。
Dear Li Ping.
How are you？I hope you' re fine and not too busy!
I know you are good at learning English，can you tell me how do you learn English
well？And now I fall in love with Chinese Festivals.Can you tell me something about Spring
Festival？Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours，
Peter
Dear Peter，
______
Yours，
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Li Ping
【考点】书信类；中华文化与传统．
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear from you!I'm fine.To learn English well，I often listen to English songs and
watch English movies which help improve my listening and speaking skills.Additionally，I keep a
vocabulary notebook to review new words daily.Regarding Chinese festivals，Spring Festival is the
most important in China.Families get together，have a big dinner，set off fireworks and give red
envelopes It's a time of joy and celebration.I hope you can experience it someday.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
To learn English well，I often listen to English songs and watch English movies which help
improve my listening and speaking skills.为了学好英语，我经常听英文歌曲和看英文电影，这有
助于提高我的听力和口语技能。which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
I hope you can experience it someday.我希望有一天你能体验到它。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
I'm glad to hear from you!I'm fine.To learn English well，I often listen to English songs and
watch English movies which help improve my listening and speaking skills.【高分句型一】 （学习
英语的建议）Additionally，I keep a vocabulary notebook to review new words daily.Regarding
Chinese festivals，Spring Festival is the most important in China.Families get together，have a big
dinner，set off fireworks and give red envelopes It's a time of joy and celebration. （中国节日）I
hope you can experience it someday.【高分句型二】
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2025•惠州）假如你是Tom，你的父母已经去上海出差几天了，你一个人在家。请根据以下表
格内容提示，以"Home Alone for the First Time"为题，写一篇英文日记，记录你今天的生活。
表格如下：
你独自在家的原因 父母到北京出差几天
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上午：做运动、整理房间、洗衣服
你今天的生活
中午：做简餐……
下午：做作业、玩游戏……
你此次经历的感悟 ……
作业要求：
（1）可在表格内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
（2）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。日记的格式与标题已经给出，不计入总词数。
Home Alone for the First Time
________
【考点】日记；日常生活．
【答案】
Home Alone for the First Time
Today，both of my parents went on a business trip to Beijing for a few days，and I was
alone these day.My parents left early this morning，and I got up soon after they left.I was a little
excited to be free.After breakfast，I cleaned the room and washed my clothes.I also did some
exercise.Soon it is nearly 12 o'clock.I cooked lunch and ate it quickly.I had a rest and did my
homework.At about 5 o'clock in the afternoon，I finished my homework.Then I watched TV.I also
played some games.At that time，I missed my parents very much.This is my first time to be at
home alone.I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big boy.
【分析】【高分句型一】
My parents left early this morning，and I got up soon after they left.我父母今天早上走得很早，
他们走后我很快就起床了。after引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I really felt proud of myself and thought I was a big boy.我真的为自己感到骄傲，以为自己是
个大男孩。and表并列。
【解答】
Home Alone for the First Time
Today，both of my parents went on a business trip to Beijing for a few days，and I was
alone these day.（独自在家的原因）My parents left early this morning，and I got up soon after
they left. 【高分句型一】I was a little excited to be free.After breakfast，I cleaned the room and
washed my clothes.I also did some exercise.Soon it is nearly 12 o'clock.I cooked lunch and ate it
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quickly.I had a rest and did my homework.At about 5 o'clock in the afternoon，I finished my
homework.Then I watched TV.I also played some games. （今天的生活）At that time，I missed
my parents very much.This is my first time to be at home alone.I really felt proud of myself and
thought I was a big boy.【高分句型二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
16．（2025•四平）假如你是李军，你打算和父母去北京旅游，红星旅行社将为你们提供全程服务。
请你根据以下提示给红星旅行社的主管张先生（ Mr.Zhang）写一封电子邮件，咨询一下有关情
况。
提示：（1）旅行车上游客的数量；
（2）宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人间；
（3）宾馆附近是否有游泳池；
（4）饭菜是否可口、种类多样。
要求：词数90﹣100词（电子邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr.Zhang，
As a visitor，I'd like to ask you some questions.________
Yours，
Li Jun
【考点】书信类；旅游景点．
【答案】Dear Mr.Zhang，
As a visitor，I'd like to ask you some questions.Could you please tell me how many visitors
there will be on the bus？Will it be crowded？Then I wonder if we can stay in a room with a
big window for three people.We can enjoy the scenery through the window.And is there a
swimming pool near the hotel where we can swim to keep cool？Finally，could you please tell me
if the hotel will serve many kinds of delicious food？I would like to thank you for telling
me.Please write to me soon.
Yours，
Li Jun
【分析】【高分句型一】
Then I wonder if we can stay in a room with a big window for three people.那么我想知道我们
是否可以住在一个有大窗户的房间里，住三个人。if引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
Finally，could you please tell me if the hotel will serve many kinds of delicious food？最后，
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你能告诉我这家酒店是否会提供多种美味的食物吗？if引导的宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr.Zhang，
As a visitor，I'd like to ask you some questions.Could you please tell me how many visitors
there will be on the bus？（旅行车上游客的数量）Will it be crowded？Then I wonder if we can
stay in a room with a big window for three people.【高分句型一】（宾馆是否有带大窗户的三人
间）We can enjoy the scenery through the window.And is there a swimming pool near the hotel
where we can swim to keep cool？（酒店附近有游泳池吗？）Finally，could you please tell me if
the hotel will serve many kinds of delicious food？【高分句型二】（最后，你能告诉我这家酒店是
否会提供多种美味的食物吗？）I would like to thank you for telling me.Please write to me soon.
Yours，
Li Jun
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
17．（2025•麦积区）班级将举办英语演讲比赛，请根据思维导图，以"How to Be Happy"为主题，
写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。开头和结尾已经给出（不计入总词数）。
要求：
（1）短文应条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明。
（2）短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
（3）短文应包括全部信息，可围绕主题适当发挥。
Good morning，everybody!
The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
_______
That's what I want to share with you.Thank you!
【考点】演讲稿；日常生活．
【答案】Good morning，everybody!
The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
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First of all，we should have life aims.When we have life aims，we can be clear about what
to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life.
Next，we must keep healthy.Without good health，we will have nothing.So we should have
good life habits and try our best to take exercises every day.
Finally，we ought to be ready to help others.When we help those in trouble，we can get
much happiness.
I believe if we do so，we can have a happy life.
That's what I want to share with you.Thank you!
【分析】【高分句型一】
When we help those in trouble，we can get much happiness.当我们帮助那些有困难的人时，我
们可以得到很多快乐。When引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I believe if we do so，we can have a happy life.我相信如果我们这样做，我们可以有一个幸福
的生活。I believe+宾语从句。
【解答】Good morning，everybody!
The topic I want to talk about today is"How to Be Happy".The following are my suggestions.
First of all，we should have life aims.When we have life aims，we can be clear about what
to do every day and live a busy and meaningful life.（生活目标）
Next，we must keep healthy.Without good health，we will have nothing.So we should have
good life habits and try our best to take exercises every day.（健康生活）
Finally，we ought to be ready to help others.When we help those in trouble，we can get
much happiness.【高分句型一】（帮助他人）
I believe if we do so，we can have a happy life.【高分句型二】
That's what I want to share with you.Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．（2025•郸城县）假如你是李华，上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对，你立刻喜欢上了乡村音乐。
请你根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1）乡村音乐的特点；
（2）乡村音乐的好处；
（3）你今后的计划。
写作要求：
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（1）文中须包含要点提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（3）词数 100 左右。
参考词汇：fall in love with 爱上；tiredness 疲劳
______
【考点】说明文；兴趣爱好．
【答案】 My name is Li Hua.Last month I took part in a country music party.It interested
me greatly.I fell in love with the country music at once.In my opinion，country music sounds
so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily.Sometimes，it can help to remove worries
and tiredness.After a day's busy study or work，if you listen to some country music，it can
reduce the tiredness amazingly.I plan to study country music in my free time as much as
possible.I'll listen to more country music，and make it part of my life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
In my opinion，country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily.在我
看来，乡村音乐听起来很轻柔，优美，它可以很容易地净化我的思想。
so...that...如此……以至于……
【高分句型二】
After a day's busy study or work，if you listen to some country music，it can reduce the
tiredness amazingly.在一天忙碌的学习或工作之后，如果你听一些乡村音乐，它可以惊人地减少
疲劳。
if引导条件状语从句。
【解答】 My name is Li Hua.Last month I took part in a country music party.It interested
me greatly.I fell in love with the country music at once.（点题）In my opinion，country music
sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily.【高分句型一】（乡村音乐的特点）
Sometimes，it can help to remove worries and tiredness.After a day's busy study or work，if
you listen to some country music，it can reduce the tiredness amazingly.【高分句型二】（乡村
音乐的好处）I plan to study country music in my free time as much as possible.I'll listen to
more country music，and make it part of my life.（今后的计划）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．（2025•东港市）最近，某英文报刊正在举办征文活动，主题是"弘扬中华传统文化，畅谈中国
传统佳节"。请你以"My Favorite：Chinese Festival"为题，写一篇英语作文，为本次活动投稿。
内容提示：
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（1）简单介绍你最喜欢的传统节日：名称及时间等；
（2）讲述该节日有哪些主要庆祝方式：食物及活动等；
（3）说说你对这个节日的感受及喜爱它的原因。
要求：
（1）词数：80～90 词；
（2）字迹工整，书写规范，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
My Favorite Chinese Festival
______
【考点】说明文；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know，there are many traditional festivals in China．Among them，I like the
Spring Festival best．It comes in January or February． （名称和时间）It is a time for family
members to get together．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all family members enjoy different
kinds of food，such as dumplings and fish．【高分句型一】We also watch the Spring Festival
Gala and stay up late，hoping to have a new start in the following year．（食物和活动）
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness，but also the importance of
home and family．（感受及喜爱它的原因）【高分句型二】
【分析】【高分句型一】
On the eve of the Spring Festival，all family members enjoy different kinds of food，such as
dumplings and fish．在除夕夜，所有的家庭成员享受不同种类的食物，如饺子和鱼．
different kinds of 各种各样的
such as例如
【高分句型二】
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness，but also the importance of
home and family．春节不仅能让我们感受到爱和幸福，也能让我们感受到家和家庭的重要性．
not only…but also…不但…而且…
make sb +形容词，使某人…
【解答】
My Favorite Chinese Festival
As we all know，there are many traditional festivals in China．Among them，I like the
Spring Festival best．It comes in January or February． （名称和时间）It is a time for family
members to get together．On the eve of the Spring Festival，all family members enjoy different
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kinds of food，such as dumplings and fish．【高分句型一】We also watch the Spring Festival
Gala and stay up late，hoping to have a new start in the following year．（食物和活动）
The Spring Festival can not only make us feel love and happiness，but also the importance of
home and family．（感受及喜爱它的原因）【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
20．（2025•寻甸县）在学校"探寻中华传统文化"英语综合实践活动中，你班对"元宵节""端午
节"和"中秋节"三个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究，经过探究与实践，你们收集了一些信息与资
料（见下表）
假设你是李华，请选择其中一个节日，用英语写一篇短文，在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研
究成果进行交流。
Project：Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject the Lantern the Dragon Boat the Mid﹣
Festival Festival Autumn Festival
Information History •about 2，000 •about 2，000 years centuries
（What we've years
learned）
Time • the 15th day of • the 5th day of the May the fifth in
the first lunar fifth lunar month Chinese lunar
month calendar
Celebrations • riddle （谜语） • boat races • Admire the
games moon
•…
•…
Food Tangyuan/yuanxiao •zongzi mooncakes
… … …
注意：
（1）短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息，并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数：80～100，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear classmates，
I'm very happy to share our research with you.The subject we've chosen is _____.
That's all.Thank you!
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【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】Dear classmates，
I'm very happy to share our research with you.The subject we've chosen is the Lantern
Festival.We've collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library
and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2，000 years.It's celebrated on the 15th day of the
first lunar month.People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games.Small gifts
are usually offered when they get right answers.It's a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step，we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles.This will
help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That's all.Thank you!
【分析】【高分句型一】：
Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers.当他们得到正确答案时，通常会赠送
小礼物。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】：
This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.这将有助于我们更好地理解节日
的意义。
help sb do sth表示帮助某人做某事。
【解答】Dear classmates，
I'm very happy to share our research with you.The subject we've chosen is the Lantern
Festival.We've collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library
and watching a lantern show.（引出话题）
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2，000 years.It's celebrated on the 15th day of the
first lunar month.People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games.Small gifts
are usually offered when they get right answers.【高分句型一】It's a tradition to eat tang yuan on
this special day.（根据表格提示具体阐述研究成果）
As for the next step，we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles.This will
help us understand the meaning of the festival better.【高分句型二】（介绍下阶段计划）
That's all.Thank you!（结束语）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
21．（2025•大名县）假如你是李华，收到了好友Peter的邮件。请阅读并回复。
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Subject：change & festival
Hi there，Li Hua!
How are you？I hope you're fine and not too busy!
Well，it has been a while since I got your message last time.I really want to know if you
have changed a lot as a new 9th grader.So could you tell me one of your biggest changes？The
biggest change for me is that I fall in love with Chinese festivals.Can you tell me how you
spent your Mid﹣Autumn Festival this year？Write to me soon.
Yours，
Peter
注意：（1）词数80个左右（给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数）；
（2）不得出现真实的人名、校名等。
Dear Peter，
You asked about my biggest change，_________
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；中华文化与传统．
【答案】Dear Peter，
You asked about my biggest change，I used to be short，but now I'm very tall.I used to like
playing computer games，but now I like sports.The Mid﹣Autumn Festival is one of the most
important traditional festivals in China．It falls on August 15th of the lunar calendar every year．
People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion．They often give best wishes to each
other at this special time．On this day people usually go back home to get together，enjoying a
large meal with their family.This year's Mid Autumn Festival，my parents and I spent it at my
grandparents' home.We make zongzi and watch dragon boat races.In the evening，we watch the
moon and eat moon cakes outside the house.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
The Mid﹣Autumn Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China．中秋节是
中国最重要的传统节日之一。one of the +形容词最高级+名词复数，表示最…之一。
【高分句型二】
People believe that the full moon is a symbol of reunion．人们相信满月是团圆的象征。这是一
个宾语从句，People believe是主句，后面的是宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Peter，
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You asked about my biggest change，I used to be short，but now I'm very tall.I used to like
playing computer games，but now I like sports. （我的变化）The Mid﹣Autumn Festival is one of
the most important traditional festivals in China．【高分句型一】It falls on August 15th of the
lunar calendar every year．（中秋节的时间） People believe that the full moon is a symbol of
reunion．【高分句型二】They often give best wishes to each other at this special time．On this
day people usually go back home to get together，enjoying a large meal with their family.This
year's Mid Autumn Festival，my parents and I spent it at my grandparents' home.We make zongzi
and watch dragon boat races.In the evening，we watch the moon and eat moon cakes outside the
house.（如何过的中秋节）
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
22．（2025•长春）为了提升学生英语学习的兴趣，学校将于11月2日下午1：30在学校礼堂举办
英语演讲比赛。请全体同学准时参加、不要迟到，不要大声喧哗、并保持卫生。请根据下面要点
和要求，用英道写一封不少于40词的通知。
要点：
（1）表达清楚信息：
（2）说明情况。
要求：要点齐全；表达通顺：简洁得体。
Notice
_________
【考点】通知类；学校生活．
【答案】
Notice
An English speech contest will be held in the school auditorium at 1：30 p.m.on November
2.All students are requested to attend on time.Don't be late，and keep the meeting discipline.Don't
make noise and keep clean.
【分析】【高分句型一】
An English speech contest will be held in the school auditorium at 1：30 p.m.on November 2.
英语演讲比赛将于11月2日下午1：30在学校礼堂举行。
句子是一般将来时的被动语态。
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【高分句型二】
Don't be late，and keep the meeting discipline.不要迟到，保持纪律。
句子是一个祈使句，否定形式在句首加don't。
【解答】
Notice
An English speech contest will be held in the school auditorium at 1：30 p.m.on November 2.
【高分句型一】All students are requested to attend on time.Don't be late，and keep the meeting
discipline.【高分句型二】Don't make noise and keep clean.
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
23．（2025•郧西县）你在浏览网页的时候，看到一个题为"How I have changed in the middle
school"的帖子。下面跟帖很多，你回忆久久，也分享了自己的故事。
By ： Better Future on 25/10 8 ： 00 PM
#1
#How I have changed in the middle school#
Since we are nine grader，we have changed
a lot compared to what we looked like on
our first day to the middle school.I guess
there must be many differences.You can talk
whatever you want ， such as your
appearance，your personality，your learning
skills，your habits and so.
要求：
（1）你的分享至少包含通知中提到的两项（黑体部分）；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，标题已给出，不计入总词数。
【考点】其他应用文写作；个人情况；学校生活．
【答案】 I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student.And I have changed a
lot during these years.
On one hand，I wasn't good at learning English at first.When my English teacher learnt about
that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as possible.Soon I
made great progress and became interested in English.
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past.But with the help of the
teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free.And now I can run very fast and I'm
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also good at playing basketball like other boys.So I'm tall and strong now.
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and
classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When my English teacher learnt about that，she taught me how to memorize new words and to
read as many passages as possible.当我的英语老师了解到这些，她教我怎么记新单词并让我尽可
能地多读短文。
句中"When my English teacher learnt about that"为时间状语从句，句中短语有："learn about 了
解"、"as…as possible 尽可能地……"。
【高分句型二】
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past.另一方面，过去我太虚弱了
而不能多做运动。
句中使用短语有"on the other hand 另一方面"、"too…to…太……而不能……"。
【解答】 I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student.And I have changed
a lot during t she taught me how to memorize new words and to read as many passages as
possible.【高分句型一】Soon I made great progress and became interested in English.（学习的
变化）
On the other hand，I was too weak to do much exercise in the past.【高分句型二】But with
the help of the teachers and classmates，I do exercise whenever I am free.And now I can run very
fast and I'm also good at playing basketball like other boys.So I'm tall and strong now.（外貌和兴
趣爱好的变化）
Thanks to the middle school life，I have changed so much!Thanks to the teachers and
classmates，I have learnt so much!Never will I forget the valuable middle school life.（表达感恩）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
24．（2025•中山区）假如你是李辉，你校校报正开展以" My hero"为主题的英语征文比赛。请你根
据下表所给信息，写一篇英语短文介绍"芯片之母"黄令仪先生的生平事迹，并向校报投稿。
Fact Box
Huang Lingyi— Mother of China's Chip
2023 Die on April 20th
2010s Fight on the front line of scientific research
2001﹣2002 Join Loongson's research group and develop the first Chinese CPU chip
1990s Return to China and devote to the design of integrated circuits（集成电路）
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1989 Go to the US for further study
1955﹣1960 Study in Huazhong University and Tsinghua University
1936 Be born in Guangxi
参考词汇：admire...for...因……而钦佩……；be honoured as...被誉为……；
make a contribution to...为……做出贡献
注意：
（1）文中必须包含所给的要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：80—100。
【考点】其他应用文写作；人物介绍．
【答案】
My hero
In my heart，Huang Lingyi is a great hero.She was born in Guangxi.She studied in Huazhong
University and Tsinghua University from 1955 to 1960.She went to the US for further study in
1989.She returned to China in1990.She joined Loongson's research group and developed the first
Chinese CPU chip.She fought on the front line of scientific research in 2010.She died on April
20，2023.She is honoured as "Mother of China's Chip" and made a great contribution to
China.She is our pride.We admire her for her excellence in study.We have to learn from her.We
should study hard and contribute our share to the construction of our motherland.
【分析】【高分句型一】
We have to learn from her.我们必须向她学习。
have to必须，不得不。
【高分句型二】
We should study hard and contribute our share to the construction of our motherland.我们应该努
力学习，为祖国的建设贡献自己的一份力量。
and表并列。
【解答】
My hero
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In my heart，Huang Lingyi is a great hero.（引出话题）She was born in Guangxi.She studied
in Huazhong University and Tsinghua University from 1955 to 1960.She went to the US for further
study in 1989.She returned to China in1990.She joined Loongson's research group and developed
the first Chinese CPU chip.She fought on the front line of scientific research in 2010.She died on
April 20，2023.（具体介绍她的生平）She is honoured as "Mother of China's Chip" and made a
great contribution to China.She is our pride.We admire her for her excellence in study.We have to
learn from her. 【高分句型一】We should study hard and contribute our share to the construction
of our motherland.（情感）【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
25．（2025•东川区） 你最喜欢的科目是什么？请根据以下思维导图，以"My Favorite
Subject"为题为校园专栏写一篇英语短文。
要求：（1）短文内容必须包含所给信息，可适当发挥；
（2）50词左右。
My Favorite Subject
___________________
【考点】说明文；兴趣爱好．
【答案】
My Favorite Subject
In my school，we study a lot of subjects ，like Chinese，math，English，physics，
chemistry.But my favorite subject is English.Miss Liu is my English teacher.I have an English class
every day.I think it's very interesting to speak another language with people and English is also
easy.I always study English by watching English movies，but sometimes，I learn by reading
magazines.I think it's very useful to study English on this way!
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think it's very interesting to speak another language with people and English is also easy.我认
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为和别人说另一种语言很有趣，英语也很容易。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
I think it's very useful to study English on this way!我认为用这种方式学习英语非常有用！I
think+宾语从句。
【解答】
My Favorite Subject
In my school，we study a lot of subjects ，like Chinese，math，English，physics，
chemistry.But my favorite subject is English.（喜欢的学科）Miss Liu is my English teacher.（老
师）I have an English class every day.（上课时间）I think it's very interesting to speak another
language with people and English is also easy.【高分句型一】（容易学习英语）I always study
English by watching English movies，but sometimes，I learn by reading magazines.I think it's very
useful to study English on this way!【高分句型二】
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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