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中考英语一轮复习 书面表达
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•绵阳）假定你是李华，请阅读你的外国网友Mike的邮件，并用英语回复，给他至少3条
建议并说明理由。词数100左右，首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To：Li Hua
From：Mike
Dear Li Hua，
Is everything going well with you？I have spent much time on my mobile phone these
days.I often watch videos or play online games.I know it's a waste of time and bad for my
eyes，but I just can't stop it.What should I do？Would you please give me some advice？
All the best，
Mike
To：Mike
From：Li Hua
Dear Mike，
______
Best wishes，
Li Hua
2．（2024•肇州县一模）你将参加学校英文报"Reading Changes My Life"主题征文活动，请根据以
下内容提示用英文从阅读习惯、阅读内容、阅读好处等方面来描述你的阅读历程和心得体会。
内容提示：
How often and how long do you read books？
What's your favorite book？And why？
How does reading change your life？
Something more about your reading journey.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60﹣80；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Changes My Life
I like reading and reading has changed my life.
_______
3．（2024•江汉区模拟）你校英语社团计划近期举办一次户外活动，社团外教Tony正在向学生征集
活动的内容和意义等有关意见。假设你是李明，请根据以下内容提示写一封邮件向 Tony阐述你
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的想法。内容提示
What outdoor activity do you like？
Why do you like it？
How will you organize this outdoor activity？ （when，where，what to do…）
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir，
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity.I'm writing to tell you some of my
opinions.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours，
Li Ming
4．（2024•闵行区一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写
一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
学校为下学期"Love English，Show Myself "的英语节活动，向全校师生征集活动建议，同时希
望师生利用寒假时间完成必要的活动准备。假设你是初三学生李华，请根据以下要求写一封邮件
给学校负责活动的王老师，邮件须包含以下内容：
①你是否会参加英语节的展示或比赛，并简述理由；
②请从下列四种选项中为初三年级挑选一种活动形式，说明原因并就寒假中初三学生参加该项活
动可做的准备，提出你的建议。
课本剧表演（text﹣based drama show） 影视配音（movie dubbing show）
歌唱比赛（singing competition） 演讲比赛（speech contest）
注意：
（1）邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
（2）照抄本卷语篇不得分。
______
5．（2024•头屯河区模拟）生活中不缺少美，我们每个人都要有一双善于发现美的眼睛，我们每个
人都要做生活的有心人，学校美育节即将来临，学校展开英语征文活动，请你用 The most
beautiful ________ in my heart.为题，写一篇文章投稿。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名+校名和地名；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数，词数在 80﹣120 之间；
（3）条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
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The most beautiful _______ in my heart
_____
6．（2024•海南）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容进行
回复。
Tom
tom@thinkmail.com
Dear Li Hua，
Hope everything goes well.I'm writing to ask you for help.My teacher asks me to do a survey
and write a report about how teenagers will choose their jobs in the future.Here are the
questions：
（1）What is your dream job in the future，a teacher，a doctor，an engineer or…？Why？
（2）What will you do to make your dream come true？
（3）Where are you going to work，in Hainan or other places？Why？
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Tom
注意：
（4）要点齐全，适当拓展；
（5）行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（6）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
（7）100词左右（文章开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom，
I'm so glad to receive your e﹣mail.Here are my answers to your questions.________
I hope my reply will be helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
7．（2024•浙江）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，
写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。
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注意：（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy，
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.______
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2024•宝山区一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情境，
写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
最近你学校的英语老师Johnson准备开设初三英语拓展课程。该课程有以下三个板块组成："实境
英语听说""英语报刊阅读"和"英语国家文化与风俗"。现在他正在征求同学们对英语拓展课程的意
见。
假如你是初三学生李华，请你阅读以下课程方案后给Johnson老师写一份邮件。邮件须包含以下
内容：你是否愿意参加该课程，简述你的理由；针对课程方案中的学习主题、活动安排或课时数
量提出1﹣2条改进建议，并说明理由。
（注意：（1）信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。（2）照抄阅
读语篇内容不得分。）
Johnson老师的英语拓展课程
学习主题 活动安排 课时数量
Learning Theme Activity Schedule Number of Lessons
实境英语听说 听写句子，口头交际 5
Real﹣life English Listening and Speaking
英语报刊阅读 阅读报刊，完成练习 3
Newspaper and Magazine Reading in
English
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英语国家文化与风俗 观看视频，书面介绍 1
Culture and Customs of English﹣speaking
Countries
Dear Johnson，
___________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
9．（2024•通辽）作为新时代的学生，我们应该注重全面发展，努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身
心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请根据下面提示，以"How to Be Good Students"为题目，写一篇英语短
文，谈谈如何做新时代的好学生。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。
（2）要包括图表中所给的提示信息并适当发挥。
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（4）不少于80词。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Be Good Students
As students in the new era（时代），we are supposed to develop fully._____
10．（2024•本溪三模）在成长过程中，总有一些事情让我们感到恐惧：或害怕昆虫，或害怕猛兽。
或害怕黑夜⋯⋯逃避不是长久之计，只有战胜它才是最好的办法。请根据你的经历谈谈你曾经恐
惧什么，为什么，你是如何战胜恐惧的，以及你战胜恐惧的感想。
要求：
（1）语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
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（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称（名人除外）；
（3）100词左右。
_______
11．（2024•河北模拟）一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。现你校
正在开展"以先进人物为榜样，立志做有为的新时代中国青年"为主题的征文活动。请你以"The
Hero in My Heart"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
提示： （1）Who is your hero？
（2）Why do you like him/her？
（3）How can you become a better man like him/her？
要求：（1）短文须包括提示中所给内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has a hero in the heart.___________
12．（2024•哈尔滨）假如你是第一中学的学生李平，你认识的英国外教Mr.Green的儿子David打算
到你的学校进行为期三年的初中学习。请你给David写一封信，告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得
有意义。
写作要点：
（1）对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校。
（2）向他介绍你的学校：
①学生友好；
②老师优秀；
③有多种课外活动。
（3）告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义（make one's junior high school life meaningful）。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear David，
I'm glad that you're coming to study in my school for 3 years.________
Best wishes!
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Yours，
Li Ping
13．（2024•南通）假如你是李华，将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为"A Friendly Smile"的交流分
享活动，谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事。请根据下面海报中的提示，写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly Smile
Tips for your sharing
•choose anything that happened in your class
•describe the story
•express your feelings
Please join us and share your story at 8：00 a.m.next Tuesday （June 25）at the Students'
Centre.
School English Club
注意：
（1）词数90左右，交流稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 9.Today I like to share a story that
happened in my class.__________
Do you often smile？Thank you!
14．（2024•徐州）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为"A famous person
in the history of Xuzhou"的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。
请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
注意：
（1）征文需包括以上三个要点；
（2）词数 90左右；
（3）征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词：苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
______
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15．（2024•钢城区二模）每个人的成长都离不开榜样的引领。榜样就在我们身边，他们可能是我们
的老师、朋友。假设你是李华，某英文报社发起了主题为"A good example around me"的征文活
动。你结合以下要点，写一篇英语小短文，介绍一下你身边的榜样，并谈一谈你对"何为榜样"的
看法。
（1）一件具体事例
（2）几点你的看法
注意： （1）词数：80﹣100 词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me.________________
16．（2024•枣庄）阅读下面短文，根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于
60，不多于80。
Camping is one of the most popular forms of outdoor activities.Now，most people are under
too much pressure and like going outdoors to relax.Other activities like hunting and fishing are
often connected with camping trips.
It's also a good idea to spend time with your family during a holiday.That will help you leave
some of the best memories with your family.Here are some things you have to consider before
your camping trip.
The first thing that you need to think about is deciding the camping place.For most people
who like camping，the best place to choose is the place that they haven't visited before.Of
course，food is another necessary thing to be considered.You'd better carry some convenient food
like cakes，nuts（坚果） and boiled eggs.When all the things are done，fun activities should be
planned.If your kids are old enough，activities like fishing and horse﹣ riding are goo to choose.
As soon as you get to your camping place，there will be a lot you will have to do，such a
putting up you r tent and laying your table and chairs.Lots of open space is perfect when you
want to let your kids ride their bicycles.
These are the ideas about having fun camping.Once you get ready for it，you don't need to
worry about anything.Go ahead and be a happy camper.
（1）What is camping？
（2）Why do most people like camping？
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（3）Which things should be planned before camping？
（4）What should you do when you reach the camping place？
（5）How can you be a happy camper？
17．（2024•湖北模拟）阳光学校成立了"心灵驿站"，在这里，同学们可以倾诉自己的烦恼与困惑，
也可以发表建议互相帮助，今天"心灵驿站"又发布最新公告了，看看你有什么好的建议吧!
Notic
e
Thanks for all your attention and help.Here are problems and worries we have collected
these days.
●Have too much pressure：the coming exam，forget lots of English words，read slowly
● Have trouble with parents：can't understand me，always compare me with others
●Have no time for fun：too much homework，help with housework
Look forward to your advice!
Sunlight Middle School Station Agent
写作要求：
（1）选取公告中你能够帮助解决的问题给出建议（至少解决2个小问题）；
（2）注意关联过渡衔接，以使行文连贯；
（3）详略得当，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
（4）词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（5）文中不得出现个人真实姓名或校名等信息。
Dear friends，
It's normal to have trouble and problems in life，especially for middle school students.What
we can do is to face them bravely and solve them properly.Here are my suggestions for you.
______
The process of solving problems is also a journey of our self﹣improve﹣ment.Overcome
our own，then we can grow better.
Yours，
Warm Heart
18．（2024•湖北模拟）近年来，学习汉语言文化的热潮在各地涌现，作为新时代的青少年，学好母
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语，传承民族文化是一种使命。假设你是李华，你所就读的外国语学校也在举办"关爱母语"的主
题活动，请根据以下问题，以"We Should Learn Chinese Well"为题写一篇英文发言稿。
Why is young people's language competence becoming poorer nowadays？
What is changing young people's communication habits？
Why is it important to learn Chinese well？
What are your suggestions？
参考词汇：mother tongue（母语）Internet memes表情包
作文要求：
（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We Should Learn Chinese Well
Dear teachers and classmates，
_____________________________
Thank you for listening!
19．（2024•河南模拟）假如你是李华，将要主持学校专门为英国交换生举办的中国文化节。请你根
据以下思维导图的提示用英语写一篇欢迎辞。
A welcome speech 文化节的意义
文化节的时间、地点、活动等
祝文化节圆满成功
写作要求：1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A Welcome Speech
Ladies and gentlemen，
Welcome to our Chinese Culture Festival.
Thanks for your listening!
20．（2024•博山区三模）最近雾霾天气较多，这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境，保卫家园
是每个人的责任和义务。请你以"The Green Planet"为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文，分析一
下周围存在的环境问题，谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。
_______________________________
21．（2024•衡阳模拟）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。
为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学
生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，
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谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。
have labor classes（劳动课） learn living skills
take part in after﹣class activities plant trees，grow vegetables..
do housework clean up rooms，wash clothes..
your suggestions （1）...； （2）...；...
要求：
（1）文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；（2）80词左右； （3）适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hard﹣working spirit education came out recently in order to help more
students of different ages to get a hard﹣working spirit.___________________________
22．（2024•商南县模拟）上周是你校的劳动教育周，学校组织了一次"助农采摘"活动。请你根据以
下图示，给你的美国笔友David写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear David，
I am glad to tell you my experience on the Happy Farm._____
Li Hua
23．（2024•兰陵县四模）作为中学生，我们难免会遇到苦恼与问题。面对问题，你都是怎么处理的
呢？请以"How I face my trouble"为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你
面对苦恼的一次故事及对待苦恼与问题的态度和建议。
提示：
（1）What do you think of the difficulties in study or life？
（2）What do you usually do when you are in trouble？Tell a story about that.
（3）Share your idea about how teenagers should face trouble ？
参考词汇：overcome difficulties，in trouble，with courage，in half...
写作要求：
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（1）结合提示内容，选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名，姓名，地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于80词。
How I face my trouble
________
24．（2024•新疆三模）科学技术是第一生产力，创新是引领发展的第一动力。为了培养学生对科技
的兴趣，学校上周三上午10点在学校操场举办了科技节。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点
提示，用英语给你的笔友Tom写一封信，介绍一下本次科技节活动的开展情况。
要点：
（1）学生参加了多功能机器人模型制作比赛。
（2）一些学生还进行了科学实验操作。
（3）谈谈本次活动的感受。
要求：
（1）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
（2）紧扣主题及提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：科技节Science and Technology Festival；机器人模型制作比赛robot model﹣making
competition；科学实验scientific experiments
Dear Tom，
How is it going？I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter，I learned that you are interested
in the Science and Technology Festival in our school.Now let me tell you something about
it.________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
25．（2024•武都区模拟）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为
重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现
状进行分析并提出合理的建议。
Reasons
（1）much homework
（2）reading habit
（3）...
Advantages
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（1）knowledge
（2）colorful life
（3）...
Suggestions
（1）reading groups
（2）sharing experiences
（3）...
要求：
（1）包括提示中所有的写作要点；
（2）条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（3）稿件中不能出现真实人名和地名等；
（4）词数：80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
At present many students do little reading after class.Here are several reasons.
________________________
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中考英语一轮复习 书面表达
参考答案与试题解析
一．书面表达（共25小题）
1．（2024•绵阳）假定你是李华，请阅读你的外国网友Mike的邮件，并用英语回复，给他至少3条
建议并说明理由。词数100左右，首尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To：Li Hua
From：Mike
Dear Li Hua，
Is everything going well with you？I have spent much time on my mobile phone these
days.I often watch videos or play online games.I know it's a waste of time and bad for my
eyes，but I just can't stop it.What should I do？Would you please give me some advice？
All the best，
Mike
To：Mike
From：Li Hua
Dear Mike，
______
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；个人情况．
【答案】Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to short videos and games on your phone.You must
reduce the time you spend playing with your phone，as it will definitely have a significant impact
on your health and studies.In order to avoid such phenomena，I'd like to share with you some
practical advice on how to use cellphones properly.
Cellphone ， as is known to us ， serves as a tool ， offering us access to a better
life.Therefore，using it in an appropriate way does come first.We shouldn't be obsessed with
cellphone games or online chatting，which is not only a waste of time，but also a hazard to our
eyes.Instead，try to set cellphones aside.Only in this way，can we read more meaningful books and
get closer to beautiful nature.
I sincerely hope what I have mentioned above will make a big difference to you.Wish all of
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you a bright future!
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：
Cellphone，as is known to us，serves as a tool，offering us access to a better life.
译文：众所周知，手机是一种工具，为我们提供了更好的生活。
分析：这句话使用了as引导的非限制性定语从句。
高分句型二：We shouldn't be obsessed with cellphone games or online chatting，which is not
only a waste of time，but also a hazard to our eyes.
译文：我们不应该沉迷于手机游戏或网络聊天，这不仅浪费时间，而且对我们的眼睛也是一种危
害。
分析：这句话使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Mike，
I'm sorry to hear that you're addicted to short videos and games on your phone.You must
reduce the time you spend playing with your phone，as it will definitely have a significant impact
on your health and studies.In order to avoid such phenomena，I'd like to share with you some
practical advice on how to use cellphones properly.（话题）
Cellphone，as is known to us，serves as a tool，offering us access to a better life. 【高分句
型一】Therefore，using it in an appropriate way does come first. （合理使用手机，使之为学习、
生活服务）We shouldn't be obsessed with cellphone games or online chatting，which is not only a
waste of time，but also a hazard to our eyes. 【高分句型二】（避免沉溺于手机游戏或网络聊天
等）Instead，try to set cellphones aside.Only in this way，can we read more meaningful books and
get closer to beautiful nature.（放下手机，更多阅读书籍或走近自然）
I sincerely hope what I have mentioned above will make a big difference to you.Wish all of
you a bright future!（希望）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的
翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己
的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，
上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时
也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要
太少。
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2．（2024•肇州县一模）你将参加学校英文报"Reading Changes My Life"主题征文活动，请根据以
下内容提示用英文从阅读习惯、阅读内容、阅读好处等方面来描述你的阅读历程和心得体会。
内容提示：
How often and how long do you read books？
What's your favorite book？And why？
How does reading change your life？
Something more about your reading journey.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数60﹣80；标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Changes My Life
I like reading and reading has changed my life.
_______
【考点】说明文；学习．
【答案】
Reading Changes My Life
I like reading and reading has changed my life.Reading is a lifelong journey and plays an
important role in our life.It can not only open our minds but also make us get more useful
knowledge that we can't learn from school books.The more I read，the more thoughtful l will be.I
read books every day.I have been reading since the first grade of elementary school.My favorite
book is Journey to the West because the stories in the book are very interesting and I like the
bravery of Sun Wukong．I didn't use to read before.I spent much time listening to music，
watching TV or playing games.Finally I realized it was bad for me，so I took up reading.Reading
has made my life colorful and meaningful.I read books at least three times a week now
Let's start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!
【分析】【高分句型一】
It can not only open our minds but also make us get more useful knowledge that we can't learn
from school books.它不仅可以打开我们的思维，还可以让我们获得更多有用的知识，而这些知识
是我们从书本上学不到的。
not only...but also...不仅……而且……，固定搭配。
【高分句型二】
Reading has made my life colorful and meaningful.读书使我的生活丰富多彩，富有意义。
动名词作主语的用法。
【解答】
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Reading Changes My Life
I like reading and reading has changed my life.（点题） Reading is a lifelong journey and
plays an important role in our life.It can not only open our minds but also make us get more
useful knowledge that we can't learn from school books.【高分句型一】The more I read，the more
thoughtful l will be. （阅读的好处） I read books every day.I have been reading since the first
grade of elementary school.My favorite book is Journey to the West because the stories in the book
are very interesting and I like the bravery of Sun Wukong．I didn't use to read before.I spent
much time listening to music，watching TV or playing games.Finally I realized it was bad for
me，so I took up reading.（我对阅读的看法） Reading has made my life colorful and meaningful.
【高分句型二】（阅读如何改变我的生活） I read books at least three times a week now.
Let's start reading now.And let it become a part of our life!（号召）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
3．（2024•江汉区模拟）你校英语社团计划近期举办一次户外活动，社团外教Tony正在向学生征集
活动的内容和意义等有关意见。假设你是李明，请根据以下内容提示写一封邮件向 Tony阐述你
的想法。内容提示
What outdoor activity do you like？
Why do you like it？
How will you organize this outdoor activity？ （when，where，what to do…）
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数100词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir，
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity.I'm writing to tell you some of my
opinions.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours，
Li Ming
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】Dear sir，
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity.I'm writing to tell you some of my
opinions.I like climbing mountains with my classmates.We can enjoy the beauty of nature.We can
also make friends and help each other on the way.
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To make the activity more interesting，I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th.Since it's
a little far，we'd better meet at the school gate at 7：30 a.m.and go there by bus.We can collect
some history stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them together.It'll be nice if
we can try some local food for lunch there.In the afternoon，we can pick up the rubbish to protect
the environment.Then we can go home at 4：30 p.m.We're sure to have great fun.I propose we
will schedule the hike very successfully.
Hope my suggestions help.
Yours，
Li Ming
【分析】【高分句型一】
To make the activity more interesting，I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th.为了让活动
更有趣，我希望在6月25日去东山。
To make the activity more interesting不定式作目的状语。
【高分句型二】
It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there.如果我们能在那里吃些当地食物就太
好了。
if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】Dear sir，
I'm happy to hear there will be an outdoor activity.I'm writing to tell you some of my
opinions.I like climbing mountains with my classmates.（喜欢什么活动）We can enjoy the beauty
of nature.We can also make friends and help each other on the way.（为什么喜欢）
To make the activity more interesting，I hope to go to East Mountain on June 25th.【高分句
型一】Since it's a little far，we'd better meet at the school gate at 7：30 a.m.and go there by
bus.We can collect some history stories about the famous mountain so that we can share them
together.It'll be nice if we can try some local food for lunch there.【高分句型二】In the
afternoon，we can pick up the rubbish to protect the environment.Then we can go home at 4：30
p.m.（具体的计划）We're sure to have great fun.I propose we will schedule the hike very
successfully.（更多内容）
Hope my suggestions help.（希望）
Yours，
Li Ming
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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4．（2024•闵行区一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写
一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
学校为下学期"Love English，Show Myself "的英语节活动，向全校师生征集活动建议，同时希
望师生利用寒假时间完成必要的活动准备。假设你是初三学生李华，请根据以下要求写一封邮件
给学校负责活动的王老师，邮件须包含以下内容：
①你是否会参加英语节的展示或比赛，并简述理由；
②请从下列四种选项中为初三年级挑选一种活动形式，说明原因并就寒假中初三学生参加该项活
动可做的准备，提出你的建议。
课本剧表演（text﹣based drama show） 影视配音（movie dubbing show）
歌唱比赛（singing competition） 演讲比赛（speech contest）
注意：
（1）邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
（2）照抄本卷语篇不得分。
______
【考点】书信类；学校生活．
【答案】Dear Mr Wang，
I will participate in the English festival presentation because I really enjoy learning English.I
think singing competitions are a very good choice.We can learn our favorite songs on our own
during holidays to practice singing.We can not only improve our learning level，but also relax
ourselves by singing.I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I think singing competitions are a very good choice.我认为歌唱比赛是一个非常好的选择。I
think +宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.我希望我的建议对您有所帮助。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Mr Wang，
I will participate in the English festival presentation because I really enjoy learning English.
（我会参加英语节的展示和理由）I think singing competitions are a very good choice. 【高分句型
一】We can learn our favorite songs on our own during holidays to practice singing.We can not
only improve our learning level，but also relax ourselves by singing.（我挑选一种活动形式，说明
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原因并就寒假中初三学生参加该项活动可做的准备，提出我的建议）I hope my suggestions are
helpful to you.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
5．（2024•头屯河区模拟）生活中不缺少美，我们每个人都要有一双善于发现美的眼睛，我们每个
人都要做生活的有心人，学校美育节即将来临，学校展开英语征文活动，请你用 The most
beautiful ________ in my heart.为题，写一篇文章投稿。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名+校名和地名；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数，词数在 80﹣120 之间；
（3）条理清楚，语意连贯，字迹工整。
The most beautiful _______ in my heart
_____
【考点】其他应用文写作；日常生活．
【答案】
The most beautiful teacher in my heart
The most beautiful teacher in my heart is my math teacher.
She is a patient and knowledgeable person who helped bring out the best in me.When I was
in Grade 7，I first found math was not easy.Learning that ，she helped me find out the problems
I couldn't understand and taught me patiently until could solve them little by little on my own.She
even gave me changes to help others with math problems，which made me more confident.
It is my math teacher who has changed me a lot those years.In my eyes，she is the most
beautiful teacher in the world.I just want to be a math teacher like her in the future.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
When I was in Grade 7，I first found math was not easy.当我七年级的时候，我第一次发现数
学不容易。
when引导一个时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】：
I just want to be a math teacher like her in the future.我只是想将来成为像她一样的数学老师。
want to do sth表示想做某事。
【解答】
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The most beautiful teacher in my heart
The most beautiful teacher in my heart is my math teacher.（引出话题）
She is a patient and knowledgeable person who helped bring out the best in me.When I was
in Grade 7，I first found math was not easy.【高分句型一】Learning that ，she helped me find
out the problems I couldn't understand and taught me patiently until could solve them little by little
on my own.She even gave me changes to help others with math problems，which made me more
confident.（具体介绍她的事迹）
It is my math teacher who has changed me a lot those years.In my eyes，she is the most
beautiful teacher in the world.I just want to be a math teacher like her in the future.【高分句型
二】（感受）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6．（2024•海南）假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom给你写了一封电子邮件。请根据邮件内容进行
回复。
Tom
tom@thinkmail.com
Dear Li Hua，
Hope everything goes well.I'm writing to ask you for help.My teacher asks me to do a survey
and write a report about how teenagers will choose their jobs in the future.Here are the
questions：
（1）What is your dream job in the future，a teacher，a doctor，an engineer or…？Why？
（2）What will you do to make your dream come true？
（3）Where are you going to work，in Hainan or other places？Why？
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Tom
注意：
（4）要点齐全，适当拓展；
（5）行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
（6）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名；
（7）100词左右（文章开头和结尾句已给出，不计入总词数）。
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Dear Tom，
I'm so glad to receive your e﹣mail.Here are my answers to your questions.________
I hope my reply will be helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；计划与愿望．
【答案】Dear Tom，
I'm so glad to receive your e﹣mail.Here are my answers to your questions.It is my dream job
to be a great scientist.
I decide to choose to be a scientist for not only my endless interest on science but also the
development of our country.Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety
problem is a fantastic inspiration to me.I want to be a scientist like him to make our country
stronger and stronger.
In order to make my dream come true，I'll make up my mind to study hard.I'll put more
effort on science learning and never give up.I'm going to do lots of experiments and read news.I'll
keep my love for science no matter what difficulties I'll face.
As for my working place，I'm going to work in Hainan，because Hainan is my hometown
where I grow up.I make a decision to devote myself to its development.I love my hometown and
I'm willing to stay here.
I hope my reply will be helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety problem is a fantastic
inspiration to me.袁隆平为解决食品安全问题做出了巨大贡献，这对我来说是一个巨大的鼓舞。
who引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
As for my working place，I'm going to work in Hainan，because Hainan is my hometown
where I grow up.至于我的工作地点，我将在海南工作，因为海南是我的家乡，我在那里长大。
because引导的原因状语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
I'm so glad to receive your e﹣mail.Here are my answers to your questions.It is my dream job
to be a great scientist.（是什么）
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I decide to choose to be a scientist for not only my endless interest on science but also the
development of our country.Yuan Longping who has made a big difference to solve the food safety
problem is a fantastic inspiration to me.【高分句型一】I want to be a scientist like him to make
our country stronger and stronger.（理由）
In order to make my dream come true，I'll make up my mind to study hard.I'll put more
effort on science learning and never give up.I'm going to do lots of experiments and read news.I'll
keep my love for science no matter what difficulties I'll face.（如何实现）
As for my working place，I'm going to work in Hainan，because Hainan is my hometown
where I grow up.【高分句型二】I make a decision to devote myself to its development.I love my
hometown and I'm willing to stay here.（在哪儿工作和理由）
I hope my reply will be helpful.
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7．（2024•浙江）假如你是李华，你的英国好友Candy暑期将来中国游学。请根据以下相关信息，
写一封邮件，向她推荐一所合适的学校。
注意：（1）邮件需包含所选学校至少两点相关信息，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（3）词数80左右；邮件的首尾和第一句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Candy，
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.______
Yours，
Li Hua
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【考点】书信类；学校生活．
【答案】Dear Candy，
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.I suggest that you should come to my
school.My school is in the countryside，so the air here is very fresh.There is a new sports center
in our school.You can do your favorite sports here，such as playing basketball，table tennis and so
on.Our school also has many local art clubs，such as paper cutting club，Chinese knot club and so
on.You can have a better understanding of Chinese traditional art and culture.Finally，the food in
our school also has a lot of our Chinese traditional food.I'm sure you'll like it here.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
I suggest that you should come to my school.我建议你应该来我的学校。I suggest that+宾语从
句。
【高分句型二】
I'm sure you'll like it here.我相信你一定会喜欢上这里的。I'm sure+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear Candy，
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.I suggest that you should come to my
school.【高分句型一】My school is in the countryside，so the air here is very fresh.There is a
new sports center in our school.You can do your favorite sports here，such as playing basketball，
table tennis and so on.Our school also has many local art clubs，such as paper cutting club，
Chinese knot club and so on.You can have a better understanding of Chinese traditional art and
culture.Finally，the food in our school also has a lot of our Chinese traditional food.（选择的学校
和理由） I'm sure you'll like it here.【高分句型二】
Yours，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
8．（2024•宝山区一模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情境，
写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）
最近你学校的英语老师Johnson准备开设初三英语拓展课程。该课程有以下三个板块组成："实境
英语听说""英语报刊阅读"和"英语国家文化与风俗"。现在他正在征求同学们对英语拓展课程的意
见。
假如你是初三学生李华，请你阅读以下课程方案后给Johnson老师写一份邮件。邮件须包含以下
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内容：你是否愿意参加该课程，简述你的理由；针对课程方案中的学习主题、活动安排或课时数
量提出1﹣2条改进建议，并说明理由。
（注意：（1）信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。（2）照抄阅
读语篇内容不得分。）
Johnson老师的英语拓展课程
学习主题 活动安排 课时数量
Learning Theme Activity Schedule Number of Lessons
实境英语听说 听写句子，口头交际 5
Real﹣life English Listening and Speaking
英语报刊阅读 阅读报刊，完成练习 3
Newspaper and Magazine Reading in
English
英语国家文化与风俗 观看视频，书面介绍 1
Culture and Customs of English﹣speaking
Countries
Dear Johnson，
___________
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；学习．
【答案】Dear Johnson，
I am very willing to participate in your course.Because my English grades are not very
good，I want to improve my English grades and level through your course.I suggest adding an
activity to learn to sing English songs.Because I believe that this not only enhances our interest in
learning English，but also allows us to relax appropriately in our spare time.At the same time，I
also hope to increase the number of class hours for Culture and Customs of English speaking
Counties，as I want to learn more about their culture.I hope my suggestion can be adopted.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
Because I believe that this not only enhances our interest in learning English，but also allows
us to relax appropriately in our spare time.因为我相信这不仅能提高我们学习英语的兴趣，还能
让我们在业余时间适当放松。I believe that+宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
I hope my suggestion can be adopted.希望我的建议能被采纳。I hope+宾语从句。
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【解答】Dear Johnson，
I am very willing to participate in your course.Because my English grades are not very
good，I want to improve my English grades and level through your course.（愿意参加该课程和理
由） I suggest adding an activity to learn to sing English songs.Because I believe that this not
only enhances our interest in learning English，but also allows us to relax appropriately in our
spare time. 【高分句型一】At the same time，I also hope to increase the number of class hours
for Culture and Customs of English speaking Counties，as I want to learn more about their culture.
（建议）I hope my suggestion can be adopted.【高分句型二】
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
9．（2024•通辽）作为新时代的学生，我们应该注重全面发展，努力成为品德高尚、乐学善思、身
心健康、兴趣广泛的人。请根据下面提示，以"How to Be Good Students"为题目，写一篇英语短
文，谈谈如何做新时代的好学生。
要求：
（1）语句通顺，逻辑清晰，书写规范。
（2）要包括图表中所给的提示信息并适当发挥。
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名。
（4）不少于80词。（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）
How to Be Good Students
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As students in the new era（时代），we are supposed to develop fully._____
【考点】说明文；教育．
【答案】
How to Be Good Students
As students in the new era，we are supposed to develop fully.The 21st century is a time full
of challenges and chances.It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new
era.Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.
First，we should love motherland as well as our family.We should be honest and helpful.We
must keep our promise and be thankful to people who have helped us.We should be friendly to our
classmates.Second we should study hard and be creative.We should think about carefully.We should
help other sand learn from each other.Third，we should build up our health.And we should think
about questions carefully.We should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind
healthy.We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.It can make us feel
happy and confident.
As long as we work hard，we will be excellent middles school students.
【分析】【高分句型一】
It is important for us to know how to be good students in this new era.
句子用了固定句型：It is+形容词+for sb to do sth，意为"对某人来说做某事是……的"。
句意：在这个新时代，我们知道如何做一个好学生是很重要的。
【高分句型二】
As long as we work hard，we will be excellent middle school students.
句子用as long as"只要"引导条件状语从句。
句意：只要我们努力学习，我们就会成为优秀的中学生。
【解答】
How to Be Good Students
As students in the new era（时代），we are supposed to develop fully.The 21st century is a
time full of challenges and chances.It is important for us to know how to be good students in this
new era.【高分句型一】Today I'm glad to share my ideas about how to be good students.（引出话
题）
First，we should love motherland as well as our family.We should be honest and helpful.We
must keep our promise and be thankful to people who have helped us.We should be friendly to our
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classmates.Second we should study hard and be creative.We should think about carefully.We should
help other sand learn from each other.Third，we should build up our health.And we should think
about questions carefully.We should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind
healthy.We should also do housework frequently and learn to be independent.It can make us feel
happy and confident.（具体阐述如何成为一名好学生）
As long as we work hard，we will be excellent middles school students.【高分句型二】（总
结）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10．（2024•本溪三模）在成长过程中，总有一些事情让我们感到恐惧：或害怕昆虫，或害怕猛兽。
或害怕黑夜⋯⋯逃避不是长久之计，只有战胜它才是最好的办法。请根据你的经历谈谈你曾经恐
惧什么，为什么，你是如何战胜恐惧的，以及你战胜恐惧的感想。
要求：
（1）语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称（名人除外）；
（3）100词左右。
_______
【考点】记叙文；日常生活．
【答案】 Everyone has his or her own fears.No matter how big or small it is，learning how
to overcome it is especially important.As for me，a short girl who rarely exercises，running the
800 meters has been my biggest fear for the past two years.
The PE course's final examination requirement is to finish an 800﹣meter race in 3 minutes
and 28 seconds.I was so scared and unconfident as my best record was 5 minutes.With the
pressure，every time I started to run，my legs were heavy and sore as if they had been filled with
lead.But thankfully ， my PE teacher comforted me and helped me make a detailed training
plan.From then on，I kept running every day whether it was sunny or rainy.Gradually I got used
to it and developed it into my regular habit.My fear of running was gone.
Now，my fear of running has gone.As the old saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a
way."What we fear is fear itself.No obstacle is impossible to break through if we put our hearts
into it.
【分析】 【高分句型一】
As the old saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a way."俗话说："有志者，事竟
成。"引用谚语。
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【高分句型二】
No obstacle is impossible to break through if we put our hearts into it.只要我们用心，没有过不
去的坎。if引导的条件状语从句。
【解答】 Everyone has his or her own fears.No matter how big or small it is，learning how
to overcome it is especially important.As for me，a short girl who rarely exercises，running the
800 meters has been my biggest fear for the past two years.（谈谈我曾经恐惧什么，为什么）
The PE course's final examination requirement is to finish an 800﹣meter race in 3 minutes
and 28 seconds.I was so scared and unconfident as my best record was 5 minutes.With the
pressure，every time I started to run，my legs were heavy and sore as if they had been filled with
lead.But thankfully ， my PE teacher comforted me and helped me make a detailed training
plan.From then on，I kept running every day whether it was sunny or rainy.Gradually I got used
to it and developed it into my regular habit.My fear of running was gone.（我是如何战胜恐惧的）
Now，my fear of running has gone.As the old saying goes，"Where there is a will，there is a
way." 【高分句型一】What we fear is fear itself.No obstacle is impossible to break through if we
put our hearts into it. 【高分句型二】（战胜恐惧的感想）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
11．（2024•河北模拟）一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。现你校
正在开展"以先进人物为榜样，立志做有为的新时代中国青年"为主题的征文活动。请你以"The
Hero in My Heart"为题，用英语写一篇短文。
提示： （1）Who is your hero？
（2）Why do you like him/her？
（3）How can you become a better man like him/her？
要求：（1）短文须包括提示中所给内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；
（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has a hero in the heart.___________
【考点】其他应用文写作；人物介绍．
【答案】
The Hero in My Heart
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Everyone has a hero in the heart.Yan Ning is a hero in my heart.she was born in Jinan，
Shandong.Yan Ning，45 years old，has been one of the top scientists in the world.And she is the
founder of Shenzhen Academy of Medical Sciences.I like her because she is a dream
follower.When she was a little girl，she dreamed of being a scientist.To achieve her dream，she
experienced a lot of difficulties.But she never gave up her dream.Instead，she worked hard to fight
for it.From her，I learned that the key to success is hard work.No pains，no gains.I will study
hard and become a scientist like Yan Ning in the future.As long as I take action，I'm sure my
dream will come true one day.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When she was a little girl，she dreamed of being a scientist.当她还是个小女孩的时候，她就梦
想成为一名科学家。
when当……时候，引导时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
As long as I take action，I'm sure my dream will come true one day.只要我采取行动，我相信
我的梦想总有一天会实现。
as long as只要，引导条件状语从句；come true实现，固定短语。
【解答】
The Hero in My Heart
Everyone has a hero in the heart.Yan Ning is a hero in my heart.（点题）she was born in
Jinan，Shandong.Yan Ning，45 years old，has been one of the top scientists in the world.And she
is the founder of Shenzhen Academy of Medical Sciences.I like her because she is a dream
follower. （喜欢的原因）When she was a little girl，she dreamed of being a scientist.【高分句型
一】To achieve her dream，she experienced a lot of difficulties.But she never gave up her
dream.Instead，she worked hard to fight for it.From her，I learned that the key to success is hard
work.No pains，no gains.I will study hard and become a scientist like Yan Ning in the future.As
long as I take action，I'm sure my dream will come true one day.【高分句型二】（怎样成为自己
喜欢的英雄）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
12．（2024•哈尔滨）假如你是第一中学的学生李平，你认识的英国外教Mr.Green的儿子David打算
到你的学校进行为期三年的初中学习。请你给David写一封信，告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得
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有意义。
写作要点：
（1）对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校。
（2）向他介绍你的学校：
①学生友好；
②老师优秀；
③有多种课外活动。
（3）告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义（make one's junior high school life meaningful）。
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。
（4）至少80词。
Dear David，
I'm glad that you're coming to study in my school for 3 years.________
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ping
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】Dear David，
I'm glad that you're coming to study in my school for 3 years.I'm sure you'll like your
school.Our school is a great place with lots of friendly students，excellent teachers，and all kinds
of fun activities.
In order to make your middle school life meaningful，first I suggest joining some clubs.You
can find some friends there who have the same interests as you.Secondly，when you meet with
difficulties，you should ask your teacher or friends for help in time.Last but not least，you should
study hard and arrange your time wisely.I hope my advice is helpful to you.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ping
【分析】【高分句型一】
You can find some friends there who have the same interests as you.你可以在那里找到一些和你
有共同爱好的朋友。who引导的定语从句。
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【高分句型二】
I hope my advice is helpful to you.希望我的建议对你有所帮助。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear David，
I'm glad that you're coming to study in my school for 3 years.I'm sure you'll like your school.
（对他说你相信他会喜欢你的学校）Our school is a great place with lots of friendly students，
excellent teachers，and all kinds of fun activities.（向他介绍你的学校）
In order to make your middle school life meaningful，first I suggest joining some clubs.You
can find some friends there who have the same interests as you. 【高分句型一】Secondly，when
you meet with difficulties，you should ask your teacher or friends for help in time.Last but not
least，you should study hard and arrange your time wisely.I hope my advice is helpful to you.【高
分句型二】（告诉他如何使他的初中生活过得有意义）
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ping
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
13．（2024•南通）假如你是李华，将参加学校英语社团举行的主题为"A Friendly Smile"的交流分
享活动，谈谈班级里与微笑有关的故事。请根据下面海报中的提示，写一篇交流稿。
A Friendly Smile
Tips for your sharing
•choose anything that happened in your class
•describe the story
•express your feelings
Please join us and share your story at 8：00 a.m.next Tuesday （June 25）at the Students'
Centre.
School English Club
注意：
（1）词数90左右，交流稿开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（2）交流稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 9.Today I like to share a story that
happened in my class.__________
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Do you often smile？Thank you!
【考点】其他应用文写作；人物介绍．
【答案】 Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 9.Today I like to share a story
that happened in my class.
One day，our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day.Everyone was
worried，except for Tom.He was always confident and had a smile on his face.When the test
started，I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck.I looked around and saw Tom still
smiling.His smile was like a ray of sunshine，making me feel less nervous.After the test，I asked
him how he could be so calm.He said， "A smile can make everything better.When you smile，
you feel more confident and you can think more clearly." His words made me realize the power of
a smile.
Since then，I have tried to smile more often.When I meet difficulties，I smile and tell myself
to be brave.When I see my classmates，I smile to show my friendliness.A smile can really make a
difference.
Do you often smile？Thank you!
【分析】【高分句型一】
One day，our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day.一天，我们的老
师宣布第二天要进行数学测试。that引导的宾语从句。
【高分句型二】
When I see my classmates，I smile to show my friendliness.当我看到我的同学，我微笑以示我
的友好。When引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】 Hello，everyone!I'm Li Hua from Class 1，Grade 9.Today I like to share a story
that happened in my class.
One day，our teacher announced that there would be a math test the next day.【高分句型一】
Everyone was worried，except for Tom.He was always confident and had a smile on his face.When
the test started，I found the questions very difficult and I was stuck.I looked around and saw Tom
still smiling.His smile was like a ray of sunshine，making me feel less nervous.After the test，I
asked him how he could be so calm.He said， "A smile can make everything better.When you
smile，you feel more confident and you can think more clearly." His words made me realize the
power of a smile.
Since then，I have tried to smile more often.When I meet difficulties，I smile and tell myself
to be brave.When I see my classmates，I smile to show my friendliness. 【高分句型二】A smile
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can really make a difference.
Do you often smile？Thank you!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
14．（2024•徐州）假定你是徐州的一名九年级学生李华。你校英文报正组织题为"A famous person
in the history of Xuzhou"的征文活动，你选择的人物是苏轼（1077—1079年间任徐州知州）。
请结合以下要点写一篇英语短文，参加征文活动。
注意：
（1）征文需包括以上三个要点；
（2）词数 90左右；
（3）征文中不得泄露个人信息。
提示词：苏堤 Su Causeway 黄楼 Huanglou Pavilion
______
【考点】其他应用文写作；人物介绍．
【答案】
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi，also known as Su Dongpo，was a famous poet，writer，and politician in ancient
China.He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have
been admired for centuries.Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou，especially，are important and have left
a lasting influence on the city.
The construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion，which helped to
control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.Su Shi also discovered coal in the area.Besides
his achievements，Su Shi was a famous poet.Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a period of great
creativity，and his works reflect his love for the city and its people.When Su Shi eventually left
Xuzhou，the people were very sad.
Su Shi continued to create through his works，the buildings he helped build，and the
memories of the people he moved.He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou，and
his contributions to the city will never be forgotten.
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【分析】【高分句型一】
The construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion，which helped to
control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.著名的苏堤和黄楼亭的建造，有助于控制洪水，
保护徐州人民。which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
When Su Shi eventually left Xuzhou，the people were very sad.当苏轼最终离开徐州时，人们非
常难过。when引导的时间状语从句。
【解答】
A famous person in the history of Xuzhou
Su Shi，also known as Su Dongpo，was a famous poet，writer，and politician in ancient
China.He is widely regarded as one of the greatest poets in Chinese history and his works have
been admired for centuries.Su Shi's contributions to Xuzhou，especially，are important and have left
a lasting influence on the city.
The construction of the famous Su Causeway and the Huanglou Pavilion，which helped to
control flooding and protect the people of Xuzhou.【高分句型一】Su Shi also discovered coal in
the area.Besides his achievements，Su Shi was a famous poet.Su Shi's time in Xuzhou was a
period of great creativity，and his works reflect his love for the city and its people.When Su Shi
eventually left Xuzhou，the people were very sad.【高分句型二】（著名的苏堤和黄楼亭的建造，
有助于控制洪水，保护徐州人民。苏轼也在该地区发现了煤炭。除了他的成就，苏轼还是一位多产
的诗人。苏轼在徐州的时代是一个富有创造力和生产力的时期，他的作品反映了他对城市和人民的
热爱。当苏轼最终离开徐州时，人们非常难过。）
Su Shi continued to create through his works，the buildings he helped build，and the
memories of the people he moved.He is remembered as a hero and a cultural icon in Xuzhou，and
his contributions to the city will never be forgotten.（苏轼在徐州的遗产通过他的作品、他帮助建造
的建筑和他所感动的人的记忆得以延续。他作为英雄和文化偶像在徐州被人们铭记，他对这座城市
的贡献永远不会被遗忘。）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
15．（2024•钢城区二模）每个人的成长都离不开榜样的引领。榜样就在我们身边，他们可能是我们
的老师、朋友。假设你是李华，某英文报社发起了主题为"A good example around me"的征文活
动。你结合以下要点，写一篇英语小短文，介绍一下你身边的榜样，并谈一谈你对"何为榜样"的
看法。
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（1）一件具体事例
（2）几点你的看法
注意： （1）词数：80﹣100 词左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me.________________
【考点】说明文；人物介绍．
【答案】
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me.My classmate Wang Fan is one of them.
It was a rainy day.Hurrying to return home ， everyone seemed to forget to do the
cleaning.Seeing this，Wang Fan stayed and started to sweep the floor quietly.I felt surprised
because he wasn't on duty!But he just said he was glad to do something for us.Moved by his
words，I thought I should care more about others and the class.
Good examples are not far away from us.They are just common people who do common
things.These things my be small but necessary and meaningful.Good examples always have
something for us to learn from and warm others in their own way.
【分析】【高分句型一】：
Hurrying to return home，everyone seemed to forget to do the cleaning.每个人都急于回家，似
乎忘记了打扫卫生。forget to do sth表示忘记做某事。
【高分句型二】：
Moved by his words，I thought I should care more about others and the class。被他的话打动了，
我想我应该多关心别人和班级。句子中thought后面跟一个宾语从句。
【解答】
A good example around me
There are many good examples around me.My classmate Wang Fan is one of them.（介绍要介
绍的榜样是谁）
It was a rainy day.Hurrying to return home，everyone seemed to forget to do the cleaning.
【高分句型一】Seeing this，Wang Fan stayed and started to sweep the floor quietly.I felt surprised
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because he wasn't on duty!But he just said he was glad to do something for us.Moved by his
words，I thought I should care more about others and the class.【高分句型二】（介绍具体的事
情）
Good examples are not far away from us.They are just common people who do common
things.These things my be small but necessary and meaningful.Good examples always have
something for us to learn from and warm others in their own way.（表达自己的看法）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
16．（2024•枣庄）阅读下面短文，根据问题提示，尽可能用自己的话写出大意总结。词数不少于
60，不多于80。
Camping is one of the most popular forms of outdoor activities.Now，most people are under
too much pressure and like going outdoors to relax.Other activities like hunting and fishing are
often connected with camping trips.
It's also a good idea to spend time with your family during a holiday.That will help you leave
some of the best memories with your family.Here are some things you have to consider before
your camping trip.
The first thing that you need to think about is deciding the camping place.For most people
who like camping，the best place to choose is the place that they haven't visited before.Of
course，food is another necessary thing to be considered.You'd better carry some convenient food
like cakes，nuts（坚果） and boiled eggs.When all the things are done，fun activities should be
planned.If your kids are old enough，activities like fishing and horse﹣ riding are goo to choose.
As soon as you get to your camping place，there will be a lot you will have to do，such a
putting up you r tent and laying your table and chairs.Lots of open space is perfect when you
want to let your kids ride their bicycles.
These are the ideas about having fun camping.Once you get ready for it，you don't need to
worry about anything.Go ahead and be a happy camper.
（1）What is camping？
（2）Why do most people like camping？
（3）Which things should be planned before camping？
（4）What should you do when you reach the camping place？
（5）How can you be a happy camper？
【考点】说明文；日常生活．
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【答案】 Camping is one of the most popular forms of outdoor activities.Most people like
camping because they are under too much pressure.Before camping，you need to think about the
camping place.Food is another necessary thing.When all the things are done，fun activities
should be planned.When you reach the camping place，you should put up your tent and lay
your table and chairs.Once you get ready for it，you don't need to worry about anything.
【分析】【高分句型一】
Most people like camping because they are under too much pressure.大多数人喜欢露营是因为他
们承受了太多的压力。
because引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
When you reach the camping place，you should put up your tent and lay your table and chairs.
当你到达露营地时，你应该支起帐篷，摆好桌子和椅子。
when引导时间状语从句。
【解答】 Camping is one of the most popular forms of outdoor activities. （野营是什么）
Most people like camping because they are under too much pressure.【高分句型一】（为什么大
多数人喜欢露营） Before camping，you need to think about the camping place.Food is another
necessary thing.When all the things are done，fun activities should be planned.（露营前应该计
划哪些事情） When you reach the camping place，you should put up your tent and lay your
table and chairs. 【高分句型二】 （到达露营地后该做什么）Once you get ready for it，you
don't need to worry about anything.（怎么能成为一个快乐的露营者）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
17．（2024•湖北模拟）阳光学校成立了"心灵驿站"，在这里，同学们可以倾诉自己的烦恼与困惑，
也可以发表建议互相帮助，今天"心灵驿站"又发布最新公告了，看看你有什么好的建议吧!
Notic
e
Thanks for all your attention and help.Here are problems and worries we have collected
these days.
●Have too much pressure：the coming exam，forget lots of English words，read slowly
● Have trouble with parents：can't understand me，always compare me with others
●Have no time for fun：too much homework，help with housework
Look forward to your advice!
Sunlight Middle School Station Agent
写作要求：
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（1）选取公告中你能够帮助解决的问题给出建议（至少解决2个小问题）；
（2）注意关联过渡衔接，以使行文连贯；
（3）详略得当，条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
（4）词数：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（5）文中不得出现个人真实姓名或校名等信息。
Dear friends，
It's normal to have trouble and problems in life，especially for middle school students.What
we can do is to face them bravely and solve them properly.Here are my suggestions for you.
______
The process of solving problems is also a journey of our self﹣improve﹣ment.Overcome
our own，then we can grow better.
Yours，
Warm Heart
【考点】书信类；日常生活．
【答案】Dear friends，
It's normal to have trouble and problems in life，especially for middle school students.What
we can do is to face them bravely and solve them properly.Here are my suggestions for you.
First，you should make a proper plan for your study and try to find your own ways of
studying.Second，make the best use of your time and try to find time to relax，such as doing
some exercise，listening to light music and going for a walk and so on.Third，you should
understand your parents and help your parents do some housework，such as sweeping the floor，
washing clothes，take out the trash and so on.You should learn to take care of yourself.Why not
communicate more with your parents when you feel nervous？They may help you feel better.Please
spend more time with your parents，you can take a walk after meals with your parents.
The process of solving problems is also a journey of our self﹣improve﹣ment.Overcome our
own，then we can grow better.
Yours，
Warm Heart
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【分析】【高分句型一】
First，you should make a proper plan for your study and try to find your own ways of
studying.首先，你应该为你的学习制定一个适当的计划，并尝试找到自己的学习方式。and表并
列。
【高分句型二】
Please spend more time with your parents，you can take a walk after meals with your parents.
请多花点时间和父母在一起，你可以在饭后和父母一起散步。祈使句。
【解答】Dear friends，
It's normal to have trouble and problems in life，especially for middle school students.What
we can do is to face them bravely and solve them properly.Here are my suggestions for you.
First，you should make a proper plan for your study and try to find your own ways of
studying. 【高分句型一】Second，make the best use of your time and try to find time to relax，
such as doing some exercise，listening to light music and going for a walk and so on.Third，you
should understand your parents and help your parents do some housework，such as sweeping the
floor，washing clothes，take out the trash and so on.You should learn to take care of yourself.（关
于没有时间放松的建议） Why not communicate more with your parents when you feel nervous？
They may help you feel better.Please spend more time with your parents，you can take a walk
after meals with your parents. 【高分句型二】（和父母相处的建议）
The process of solving problems is also a journey of our self﹣improve﹣ment.Overcome our
own，then we can grow better.
Yours，
Warm Heart
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
18．（2024•湖北模拟）近年来，学习汉语言文化的热潮在各地涌现，作为新时代的青少年，学好母
语，传承民族文化是一种使命。假设你是李华，你所就读的外国语学校也在举办"关爱母语"的主
题活动，请根据以下问题，以"We Should Learn Chinese Well"为题写一篇英文发言稿。
Why is young people's language competence becoming poorer nowadays？
What is changing young people's communication habits？
Why is it important to learn Chinese well？
What are your suggestions？
参考词汇：mother tongue（母语）Internet memes表情包
作文要求：
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（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
（2）语句连贯，词数80个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
We Should Learn Chinese Well
Dear teachers and classmates，
_____________________________
Thank you for listening!
【考点】演讲稿；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
We Should Learn Chinese Well
Dear teachers and classmates，
Nowadays，many young people's language competence is getting poorer.One reason is that we
spend too much time on the Internet，where Internet memes and short messages have become our
way of communicating.These often lack proper grammar and depth.Our communication habits are
changing.Instead of reading books or writing letters，we prefer quick texts and videos.This fast﹣
paced life is affecting our language skills.Learning Chinese well is important.It helps us understand
our roots，appreciate ancient literature，and communicate with our elders.
My suggestions are：read more books，especially classical ones；and join language clubs to
practice speaking and writing.Let's value our mother tongue and make it shine!
Thank you for listening!
【分析】【高分句型一】
One reason is that we spend too much time on the Internet，where Internet memes and short
messages have become our way of communicating.
翻译：一个原因是我们在互联网上花了太多时间，网络表情包和短信已经成为我们的交流方式。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的表语从句与where引导的定语从句巧妙结合。
【高分句型二】
Learning Chinese well is important.
翻译：学好汉语很重要。
分析：句子中应用了以动名词作主语的用法。
【解答】
We Should Learn Chinese Well
Dear teachers and classmates，
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Nowadays，many young people's language competence is getting poorer.One reason is that we
spend too much time on the Internet，where Internet memes and short messages have become our
way of communicating.【高分句型一】These often lack proper grammar and depth.（说明语言能力
越来越差的原因）Our communication habits are changing.Instead of reading books or writing
letters，we prefer quick texts and videos.This fast﹣paced life is affecting our language skills.（介
绍是什么改变了交流习惯）Learning Chinese well is important.【高分句型二】It helps us
understand our roots，appreciate ancient literature，and communicate with our elders.（说明学好汉
语的原因）
My suggestions are：read more books，especially classical ones；and join language clubs to
practice speaking and writing.Let's value our mother tongue and make it shine!（给出建议）
Thank you for listening!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
19．（2024•河南模拟）假如你是李华，将要主持学校专门为英国交换生举办的中国文化节。请你根
据以下思维导图的提示用英语写一篇欢迎辞。
A welcome speech 文化节的意义
文化节的时间、地点、活动等
祝文化节圆满成功
写作要求：1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
A Welcome Speech
Ladies and gentlemen，
Welcome to our Chinese Culture Festival.
Thanks for your listening!
【考点】其他应用文写作；中华文化与传统．
【答案】
A Welcome Speech
Ladies and gentlemen，
Welcome to our Chinese Culture Festival.This festival is not only a good chance for us to
learn Chinese culture，but also a platform to show students' talent.The culture festival is on June
12th.In the morning，there will be many stalls to show Chinese calligraphy，paper cutting and so
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on in the playground.In the afternoon，we will invite some craftsmen to give talks about traditional
Chinese culture in the library.In the evening，we can enjoy different shows at the art center，
including folk dance，Yu Opera，and so on.
Wish the festival a success!I believe that you will enjoy it.
Thanks for your listening!
【分析】【高分句型一】
In the morning，there will be many stalls to show Chinese calligraphy，paper cutting and so on
in the playground.
翻译：早上，操场上会有很多摊位展示中国书法、剪纸等。
分析：句子中应用了固定句型there will be，表示"将会有"。
【高分句型二】
In the evening，we can enjoy different shows at the art center，including folk dance，Yu
Opera，and so on.
翻译：晚上，我们可以在艺术中心欣赏不同的表演，包括民间舞蹈、豫剧等。
分析：句子中应用了现在分词作伴随状语的用法。
【解答】
A Welcome Speech
Ladies and gentlemen，
Welcome to our Chinese Culture Festival.This festival is not only a good chance for us to
learn Chinese culture，but also a platform to show students' talent.（说明意义）The culture festival
is on June 12th.（介绍时间）In the morning，there will be many stalls to show Chinese
calligraphy，paper cutting and so on in the playground.【高分句型一】In the afternoon，we will
invite some craftsmen to give talks about traditional Chinese culture in the library.In the evening，
we can enjoy different shows at the art center，including folk dance，Yu Opera，and so on.【高分
句型二】（介绍地点与活动安排）
Wish the festival a success!I believe that you will enjoy it.（表达祝福）
Thanks for your listening!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
20．（2024•博山区三模）最近雾霾天气较多，这是人类破坏环境造成的结果。保护环境，保卫家园
是每个人的责任和义务。请你以"The Green Planet"为题写一篇不少于100词的英语短文，分析一
下周围存在的环境问题，谈一下保护环境的主张和做法。
_______________________________
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【考点】说明文；环境保护．
【答案】
The Green Planet
Now our environment is becoming worse and worse.More and more people have realized the
importance of protecting the environment.It's our duty to protect our earth.In my daily life，I
always turn off the lights when I leave a room.While I am washing my hair，I usually turn off
the shower.Besides，if I want to go shopping，I always take my own reusable bags instead of
using plastic bags.I have decided to do more things to protect our earth，such as recycling books
and paper，stopping using paper napkins and stopping riding in cars.It's good for us to ride bikes
or walk to school.I always throw litter into the bin.I will make an effort to keep our public places
clean.We can also plant more trees to improve the air around us.
In a word，I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort
we make，it does make a difference.Let's take action now!
【分析】【高分句型一】
In my daily life，I always turn off the lights when I leave a room.在我的日常生活中，我离开
房间时总是关灯。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
It's good for us to ride bikes or walk to school.骑自行车或步行上学对我们有好处。it is adj for
sb to do的句型。
【解答】
The Green Planet
Now our environment is becoming worse and worse.More and more people have realized the
importance of protecting the environment.It's our duty to protect our earth.In my daily life，I
always turn off the lights when I leave a room.【高分句型一】While I am washing my hair，I
usually turn off the shower.Besides，if I want to go shopping，I always take my own reusable
bags instead of using plastic bags.I have decided to do more things to protect our earth，such as
recycling books and paper，stopping using paper napkins and stopping riding in cars.It's good for
us to ride bikes or walk to school.【高分句型二】I always throw litter into the bin.I will make an
effort to keep our public places clean.We can also plant more trees to improve the air around us.
In a word，I think one thing we should keep in mind is that no matter what a small effort
we make，it does make a difference.Let's take action now!
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
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21．（2024•衡阳模拟）近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。
为此，国家印发了《中共中央国务院关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。作为中学
生的你对此深表赞同，请结合自身的体会，就如何培养劳动精神，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，
谈谈你的体会，给出至少两条建议。
have labor classes（劳动课） learn living skills
take part in after﹣class activities plant trees，grow vegetables..
do housework clean up rooms，wash clothes..
your suggestions （1）...； （2）...；...
要求：
（1）文中不能出现真实校名和姓名；（2）80词左右； （3）适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：短文的开头已为你写出，不计入总词数。
A guideline on hard﹣working spirit education came out recently in order to help more
students of different ages to get a hard﹣working spirit.___________________________
【考点】说明文；教育．
【答案】 A guideline on hard﹣working spirit education came out recently in order to help
more students of different ages to get a hard﹣working spirit.
Doing housework is very important for us students.A guideline on hardworking spirit education
came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit．As a
middle school student，I welcome it warmly．Firstly，we should have hardworking spirit classes to
learn some living skills at school every week．Secondly，we can take part in after﹣class activities
such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real﹣world work experience．Also，we
need try to do some housework at home，like cleaning up rooms，washing clothes or cooking
some dishes．We can also go to the park to clean up and do volunteer activities to protect the
environment.In school，we can also help teachers with some activities within our abilities，such as
sweeping the floor，wiping the blackboard，etc.Above all，we could form good working habits and
value the importance of working hard through our experience．
In a word，the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up．
【分析】高分句型一：
Also，we need try to do some chores at home，like tidying rooms，washing clothes or cooking
some dishes.另外，我们还需要在家里做些家务，比如整理房间、洗衣服或做饭。句子中 need to
do sth表示需要做某事。
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高分句型二：
In a word，the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.总之，艰苦
奋斗精神教育是必要的，它有助于我们的成长。句子中help to do sth表示有助于做某事。
【解答】 A guideline on hard﹣working spirit education came out recently in order to help
more students of different ages to get a hard﹣working spirit.
Doing housework is very important for us students.A guideline on hardworking spirit education
came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.（引出话
题） As a middle school student，I welcome it warmly.Firstly，we should have hardworking spirit
classes to learn some living skills at school every week. （劳动课）Secondly，we can take part in
after﹣class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real﹣world work
experience. （课外活动）Also，we need try to do some housework at home，like cleaning up
rooms，washing clothes or cooking some dishes.（要点3）【高分句型一】We can also go to the
park to clean up and do volunteer activities to protect the environment.In school，we can also help
teachers with some activities within our abilities ， such as sweeping the floor ， wiping the
blackboard，etc.（建议）Above all，we could form good working habits and value the importance
of working hard through our experience.（如何培养劳动精神）（要点 4）In a word，the
hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.【高分句型二】（结束语）
【点评】这是一篇提纲作文，题目要求围绕提示内容写作，命题既有限制又给予学生发挥的空间。
在写作中要综合运用所学知识，适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡。
22．（2024•商南县模拟）上周是你校的劳动教育周，学校组织了一次"助农采摘"活动。请你根据以
下图示，给你的美国笔友David写一封电子邮件，分享本次活动的过程和感受。
要求：
（1）参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear David，
I am glad to tell you my experience on the Happy Farm._____
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Li Hua
【考点】书信类；教育．
【答案】Dear David，
I am glad to tell you my experience on the Happy Farm.Last Friday，my classmates and I
went to the farm.It is far from the city centre and it took us two hours to get there.We saw lots
of sheep，cows and rabbits on the farm.What's more，many oranges were hanging from the
branches.We picked fruits and collected vegetables.The farmers there taught us how to milk the
cow.At the end of the day，we sang and danced together.
In a word，we had a good time there.I will never forget this experience.I hope to take part in
this kind of activities.
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
It is far from the city centre and it took us two hours to get there.它离市中心很远，我们花了
两个小时才到那里。and表并列。
【高分句型二】
In a word，we had a good time there.总之，我们在那里玩得很开心。In a word总之。
【解答】Dear David，
I am glad to tell you my experience on the Happy Farm.Last Friday，my classmates and I
went to the farm.（时间和地点）It is far from the city centre and it took us two hours to get
there.【高分句型一】We saw lots of sheep，cows and rabbits on the farm.What's more，many
oranges were hanging from the branches.We picked fruits and collected vegetables.The farmers there
taught us how to milk the cow.At the end of the day，we sang and danced together.（活动）
In a word，we had a good time there.【高分句型二】I will never forget this experience.I
hope to take part in this kind of activities.（感受）
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
23．（2024•兰陵县四模）作为中学生，我们难免会遇到苦恼与问题。面对问题，你都是怎么处理的
呢？请以"How I face my trouble"为题，根据以下要求与提示，用英语写一篇短文，具体描述你
面对苦恼的一次故事及对待苦恼与问题的态度和建议。
提示：
（1）What do you think of the difficulties in study or life？
（2）What do you usually do when you are in trouble？Tell a story about that.
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（3）Share your idea about how teenagers should face trouble ？
参考词汇：overcome difficulties，in trouble，with courage，in half...
写作要求：
（1）结合提示内容，选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
（2）语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
（3）文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（校名，姓名，地名等）；
（4）词数：不少于80词。
How I face my trouble
________
【考点】说明文；日常生活．
【答案】
How I face my trouble
In my opinion，difficulties in study or life are like stones on the road.They may trip me up，
but they also help me grow stronger.When I'm in trouble，I usually choose to face it with
courage.One time，I struggled with a math problem for hours.I felt frustrated，but I didn't give
up.I asked my teacher for help and practiced more.Finally，I overcame difficulties.This experience
taught me that with courage and effort，problems can be solved in half the time if we face them
bravely.
I think that teenagers should face trouble bravely.Don't be afraid to ask for help.Remember，
every problem has a solution，and every challenge is an opportunity to learn and grow.
【分析】【高分句型一】
When I'm in trouble，I usually choose to face it with courage.
翻译：当我遇到麻烦时，我通常选择勇敢地面对它。
分析：句子中应用了when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I think that teenagers should face trouble bravely.
翻译：我认为青少年应该勇敢地面对困难。
分析：句子中应用了that引导的宾语从句。
【解答】
How I face my trouble
In my opinion，difficulties in study or life are like stones on the road.They may trip me up，
but they also help me grow stronger.（表达看法）When I'm in trouble，I usually choose to face it
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with courage.【高分句型一】（介绍遇到问题时做的事情）One time，I struggled with a math
problem for hours.I felt frustrated，but I didn't give up.I asked my teacher for help and practiced
more.Finally，I overcame difficulties.This experience taught me that with courage and effort，
problems can be solved in half the time if we face them bravely.（描述经历）
I think that teenagers should face trouble bravely.【高分句型二】Don't be afraid to ask for
help.Remember，every problem has a solution，and every challenge is an opportunity to learn and
grow.（说明青少年应该如何面对苦恼）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
24．（2024•新疆三模）科学技术是第一生产力，创新是引领发展的第一动力。为了培养学生对科技
的兴趣，学校上周三上午10点在学校操场举办了科技节。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点
提示，用英语给你的笔友Tom写一封信，介绍一下本次科技节活动的开展情况。
要点：
（1）学生参加了多功能机器人模型制作比赛。
（2）一些学生还进行了科学实验操作。
（3）谈谈本次活动的感受。
要求：
（1）文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
（2）紧扣主题及提示，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
（3）词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：科技节Science and Technology Festival；机器人模型制作比赛robot model﹣making
competition；科学实验scientific experiments
Dear Tom，
How is it going？I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter，I learned that you are interested
in the Science and Technology Festival in our school.Now let me tell you something about
it.________
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【考点】书信类；科普知识与现代技术．
【答案】Dear Tom，
How is it going？I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter，I learned that you are interested
in the Science and Technology Festival in our school.Now let me tell you something about it.
The Science and Technology Festival was held on the playground last Wednesday.It began at
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10 in the morning.At the festival ， some students took part in the robot model﹣ making
competition.Many of their robots，which were the most wonderful part of the festival，drew
people's attention.These robots were in the shape of lovely animals，such as rabbits，monkeys and
dogs.They did some simple tasks like cleaning the floor and throwing away rubbish.What's more，
some other students carried out scientific experiments.I was surprised and glad to feel the beauty of
technology.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【分析】【高分句型一】
The Science and Technology Festival was held on the playground last Wednesday.
翻译：上周三在操场上举行了科技节。
分析：句子中应用了一般过去时的被动语态的用法。
【高分句型二】
Many of their robots，which were the most wonderful part of the festival，drew people's
attention.
翻译：他们的许多机器人是节日中最精彩的部分，吸引了人们的注意。
分析：句子中应用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
How is it going？I'm glad to hear from you.From your letter，I learned that you are interested
in the Science and Technology Festival in our school.Now let me tell you something about it.（点
明主题）
The Science and Technology Festival was held on the playground last Wednesday.【高分句型
一】It began at 10 in the morning.At the festival，some students took part in the robot model﹣
making competition.Many of their robots，which were the most wonderful part of the festival，
drew people's attention.【高分句型二】These robots were in the shape of lovely animals，such as
rabbits，monkeys and dogs.They did some simple tasks like cleaning the floor and throwing away
rubbish.What's more，some other students carried out scientific experiments.（介绍活动的开展情
况）I was surprised and glad to feel the beauty of technology.（表达感受）
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly，
Li Hua
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
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清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
25．（2024•武都区模拟）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为
重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现
状进行分析并提出合理的建议。
Reasons
（1）much homework
（2）reading habit
（3）...
Advantages
（1）knowledge
（2）colorful life
（3）...
Suggestions
（1）reading groups
（2）sharing experiences
（3）...
要求：
（1）包括提示中所有的写作要点；
（2）条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
（3）稿件中不能出现真实人名和地名等；
（4）词数：80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
At present many students do little reading after class.Here are several reasons.
________________________
【考点】说明文；学习．
【答案】 At present many students do little reading after class.Here are several reasons.First
of all，most students have too much homework to do.Some students haven't developed reading
habit.They prefer to spend their free time watching TV or the Internet.However，reading actually
has many advantages.It can not only increase our knowledge，improve our thinking，but also
make us have a colorful life.
Here are my suggestions to share with everyone.We can form reading groups，read whole
English books together，and then share experiences with each other.Let's start reading today and
enjoy the fun of reading!
【分析】【高分句型一】
However，reading actually has many advantages.
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翻译：然而，阅读实际上有很多好处。
分析：句子中应用了以动名词作主语的用法。
【高分句型二】
Let's start reading today and enjoy the fun of reading!
翻译：让我们从今天开始阅读，享受阅读的乐趣吧!
分析：句子中应用了以let+动词原形开头的祈使句。
【解答】 At present many students do little reading after class.Here are several reasons.First
of all，most students have too much homework to do.Some students haven't developed reading
habit.They prefer to spend their free time watching TV or the Internet.（说明原因）However，
reading actually has many advantages.【高分句型一】It can not only increase our knowledge，
improve our thinking，but also make us have a colorful life.（说明好处）
Here are my suggestions to share with everyone.We can form reading groups，read whole
English books together，and then share experiences with each other.Let's start reading today and
enjoy the fun of reading!【高分句型二】（给出建议）
【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，
清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
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