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强化练(三十一) 应用文写作(2) (限时：35 分钟)
Ⅰ.作文升档
(2021·浙江1月)
假定你是李华，下周有新西兰学生访问你校，你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。 请为此写
一篇发言稿，内容包括：
1．表示欢迎；
2．介绍活动安排；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
学生习作
Dear guests，
①First of all，please allow me to express a warm welcome to our dear guests on behalf of
the school.
②As planned，during your stay at our school，we will first give you a tour of our
school.③Then，you can visit the English corner to talk with our classmates and promote our
friendship.④Besides，our classes are worthy of being attended，because you can appreciate the
differences between Chinese and western teaching methods.⑤Finally，our Chinese host families
will provide the opportunity for you to experience a different culture and try some delicious，
traditional Chinese food.
⑥We wish you a happy time at our school.
我来提升档次
作文升档第一步 让词汇高级亮丽
利用高级词汇升级文中黑体词汇
1．dear→________________________
2．plan→________________________
3．besides→______________________
4．finally→_______________________
5．happy→________________________
作文升档第二步 让句式丰富多变
按要求升级句式并将黑体词汇替换为升级后的词汇
1．用定语从句合并句②和句③。
As scheduled，during your stay at our school，we will first give you a tour of our school，
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2．用强调句改写句⑤。
Last but not least，________________________________________________________________
will provide the opportunity for you to experience a different culture and try some delicious，
traditional Chinese food.
作文升档第三步 过渡衔接更巧妙
利用适当的过渡衔接词衔接升级后的作文并誊写
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Ⅱ.写作演练
(2022·湖南常德3月模拟)
在2022年北京冬奥会上，谷爱凌(Eileen Gu)获得了两金一银的好成绩，她的自信、聪
慧和勤奋给我们留下了深刻印象。假设你是李华，你校外刊开设了“What I Want to Say to
Eileen Gu”专栏，请你给她写一封信，内容如下：
1．对她的成就表示祝贺；
2．作为同龄人她对你的影响和启迪；
3．表达祝愿。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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