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专题 09 材料作文
一、宝山区
十三、电子邮件
64．Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情境， 写一篇不少于60个词的
短文。标点符号不占格，邮件格式已给）
美好的初中生活即将画上句号，你的学校正在征集初三年级毕业典礼的活动方案。假如你是李华，请
你给教导处王老师写一份邮件。阐述你对毕业典礼活动的初步设想，重点设计1-2个活动并说明你的设计
理由。
以下活动仅供参考：
诗歌朗诵（poetry reading） 小组唱（group singing） 脱
口秀（talk show）
制作微视频（making short videos） 小品表演（short play） 赠
送礼物（giving gifts）
（注意：1.文中不得出现任何真实人各、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。）
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【答案】例文Dear Mr. Wang,
The wonderful junior high school life is coming to an end. I hope our graduation ceremony is colorful and
interesting. This is my activity plan.
I think making short videos and giving gifts are good activities. We can make short videos of the three years’
experiences to show our study, life and love. It can be a good memory for us in the future. Besides, we can give
gifts to each other in order to express the friendship between students and teachers. This is a symbol of our
friendship.
I hope my advice is helpful to you. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求向教导处王老师阐述你对毕业典礼活动的初步设想，适当添加细节，并突
出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己的活动计划；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍1-2个活动并说明设计理由；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come to an end结束
②in the future在将来
③each other彼此
④a symbol of……的象征
[高分句型]
①Besides, we can give gifts to each other in order to express the friendship between students and teachers.（in
order to表示目的）
②I hope my advice is helpful to you.（省略that的宾语从句）二、崇明区
十三、话题作文
64．Write at least 60 words on the topic “No Gains without Pains”（以“一分耕耘一分收获”为题写一篇
不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
成功的背后都凝聚着辛勤的付出。请结合自己的亲身经历，分享你的一个“没有耕耘就不可能有收
获”的故事。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
No Gains without Pains
I think the saying “No pains, no gains.” means we can’t get anywhere in life if we don’t work hard.
As we all know, scientists make progress only after years of careful research. We students get good scores after
months of hard work. For example, I have improved my physics by putting in lots of effort. At school, I listened to
the teacher carefully and took down lots of notes in class. And when I had questions, I asked my physics teacher or
my classmates for help. After school, I finished my physics homework as soon as I got home. Also, I did lots of
physics exercises. Day by day, I was making progress in physics and now I’m one of the top physics students in my
class.
In short, no pains, no gains. We will achieve success as long as we work hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单说明“没有耕耘就不可能有收获”的含义；
第二步，具体结合自身经历分享一下；第三步，最后作小结。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know众所周知
②for example比如
③in short总之
[高分句型]
①when I had questions, I asked my physics teacher or my classmates for help. （when引导的时间状语从句）
②I finished my physics homework as soon as I got home.（as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
三、奉贤区
十三、话题作文
64．Write at least 60 words on the topic “How I Went From Hating __________ to Loving it”
成长过程中，总会经历很多的变化。你是否有过对一样事物或者一种活动由讨厌转变为享受的经历呢？
请以“How I Went From Hating __________ to Loving it”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。
（注意：1.写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文How I Went From Hating Following the Family Rules to Loving it
There are many family rules in my family. I can’t go out on school days. I can’t watch TV unless my
homework is finished. I must clean up my room twice a week. At first, I hate following these rules because I think
they are useless and strict. After a few weeks, I begin to love it. These rules make me develop good study habits. I
am used to making a study plan in advance. What’s more, doing housework teaches me how to take care of myself.
How useful these rules are!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全标题；
第二步，介绍是什么让自己从不喜欢到喜欢，这个过程发生了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up清理
②be used to doing sth习惯做某事
③in advance提前
[高分句型]
①There are many family rules in my family.（there be句型）
②I can’t watch TV unless my homework is finished.（unless引导条件状语从句）
四、虹口区
十八、材料作文
80．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格）
阅读D篇中的三位读者和我们分享了他们在日常生活中所做的小小改变和尝试。请根据你横线上所填
的故事主题，结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。
注意：
1.请自拟标题填在横线上。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。3.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Doing exercise makes me happy
In the past, I enjoyed eating too much fast food, so I became fatter and fatter. My students made fun of me. It
made me upset. My mother noticed my feelings and advised me to do more exercise. At first, I thought it was a
waste of time. When I kept on running for half an hour, I found some changes happened. Doing exercise not only
makes me healthy, but also brings me pleasure. This small change can improve my mood.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述自己过去的不健康生活；
第二步，讲述小小的改变给自己带来了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①in the past在过去
②make fun of取笑
③at first起初
④a waste of浪费
[高分句型]
①My mother noticed my feelings and advised me to do more exercise.（动词不定式作宾补）
②When I kept on running for half an hour, I found some changes happened.（when引导时间状语从句）
五、黄浦区十八、材料作文
80．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格。）
假设你是李华，暑假期间，你将参加一个国际夏令营。在夏令营期间，各国青少年都要介绍自己国家
的文化，包含语言（language）、节日（festivals）、饮食（food and drinks）、服饰（clothing）、文学艺
术（art and literature）、传统技艺（traditional skills）等不同方面。请你选择其中一种形式，向外国小朋友
介绍中国文化，并说明理由。
注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals of the Chinese people. It is a symbol of
unity, prosperity, and on the new hope for the future. On the Chinese new year’s eve, people let off fireworks, put
up red lanterns and use couplets to decorate their houses. They also have a big meal on the new year’s eve. They eat
dumplings, fish, meat and other delicious food. During this Festival, people wear new clothes, and visit relatives.
Children look forward to receiving red envelope money. There are also Dragon and lion dance on the street and
some other carnival activities.
I like this festival because we can have great fun during this festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据自己选择的文化开始介绍；
第二步，说明选择这个文化的理由
[亮点词汇]
①let off fireworks放烟花②look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①It is a symbol of unity, prosperity, and on the new hope for the future.（and表并列）
②There are also Dragon and lion dance on the street and some other carnival activities.（there be句型）
六、回民中学
十四、电子邮件
64．Write at least 60 words :
你校社团正在招募负责人，社团有：球类(Ball Games) 演讲(Speech) 器乐(Instrumental Music) 戏剧
(Drama) 手工(Handicrafts) 摄影(Photography)。
假如你是李华，请给学生会的负责人Lily写一封e-mail。 结合你的兴趣特长，说明你想作为哪一个社团的
负责人以及理由。
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【答案】例文
Dear Lily,
I want to work in Instrumental Music. You know I have learnt piano for many years. And I want to learn more
about music from others. What’s more, I can make more friends sharing the same interest with me. Life in junior
high school is quite different. We are so busy every day. Therefore, that will be a good chance for us to relax
ourselves.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]
第一步，表明自己想要作为哪一个社团的负责人；
第二步，介绍自己的优势以及想加入这个社团的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①learn about了解
②What’s more并且
③make friends with与……交朋友
[高分句型]
①And I want to learn more about music from others.（动词不定式作宾语）
②Therefore, that will be a good chance for us to relax ourselves.（动词不定式作定语）
七、嘉定区
十八、话题作文
80．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格)
滴水穿石，铁杵成针，都向我们展示了坚持的力量。坚持，定会给我们带来收获。请回忆在过去一年
里你坚持做的一件事，以“One thing I kept doing”为题，简单描述，并谈谈收获和感受。
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)
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【答案】例文
One thing I kept doing
Knowledge may be acquired through many ways, the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology,
reading deserves to be paid attention to. So I keep reading every day.To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better
understand society as well as nature, but also broaden their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of
great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring
people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival.
Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough
understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my
comprehension ability stably improved.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己坚持做的事情是什么；
第二步，介绍阅读的好处；
第三步，表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①to some degree在某种程度上
②What’s more并且
③be regarded as被认为是
④in my spare time在我闲暇时间
[高分句型]
①So I keep reading every day.（动名词作宾语）
②Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-
improvement.（动名词作主语）
八、金山区
十二、材料作文
64．Write at least 60 words on the topic“A volunteer labor”（以“一次公益劳动”为题，写一篇至少
60个单词的短文。标点符号不占格）
劳动教育(Labor Education) 已经纳入国家课程方案，它包含日常生活劳动、农业生产劳动和服务性劳动。在生活中，学生通过劳动，养成吃苦耐劳的品质，培养合作共享的精神，形成助人为乐、服务他人和
服务社会的公益精神。请你以“一次公益劳动(A volunteer labor)”为题，结合自身的经历谈谈自己对公益劳
动的看法。文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名。
以下问题供参考：
Suggested questions:
What do you think of the volunteer labor?
Why do you think so?（结合自身经历说明）
What have you learned from it?
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【答案】例文
A Volunteer Labor
Volunteer labor is very helpful for us, it not only makes us become independent, but also learn teamwork.
On April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my school where we took part in a volunteer labor.
We got there at nine o’clock. After divided into three groups, we began to work. Each group had their own tasks.
Group one planted trees and watered flowers. Group two picked up litter left by tourists and cleaned the benches.
My group wiped all the equipment in Children’s Playground. Each of us worked hard.
At about half past eleven, we finished working. Though we were tired, we were happy. It was a meaningful
day for us because we had done a good deed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍自己参加的一次公益活动，并提出自己的看法。适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明公益活动的好处；
第二步，具体介绍自己参加的公益活动，做了哪些事情；第三步，总结并表明自己对这次活动的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① not only...but also不仅……而且
② took part in参加
③ divided into分成
④ picked up litter捡垃圾
⑤ be helpful for对有益
[高分句型]
①On April 28th, my classmates and I went to the park near my school where we took part in a volunteer labor.
（定语从句）
②It was a meaningful day for us because we had done a good deed.（原因状语从句）
九、静安区
十三、材料作文
64．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Be sunflowers in life” (请根据下面的提示，以“做生活中的
向日葵”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
“Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadows”(面向阳光，你就看不到阴影)这句话告诉
我们，在学习和日常生活中我们经历风雨，但是我们也知道“阳光总在风雨后”。请你结合自身的生活体
验，举一个例子来谈谈你是如何做生活中的sunflowers的。请介绍你的理解、经历和感悟。
(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它标志性的具体信息，否则不予评分。)
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【答案】例文
Be sunflowers in lifeIt’s common to have difficulties in life.
Once my English was poor. I couldn’t understand it very well and often got low marks in exams. What was
worse, my parents only cared about my marks. So I felt much stressed. I asked my teacher for help. She advised me
to communicate with my parents and put my heart into English learning. I talked sincerely with my parents and
often turned to my teachers or friends when I had trouble with my English. Now my parents support me and my
English is getting better.
From it, I have learnt that we should manage to solve the problem bravely and take on challenges.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以 “Be sunflowers in life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，用“生活中遇到困难是很正常的”引出下文；
第二步，介绍自己的理解和经历；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①cared about关心
②communicate with沟通
③had trouble with有困难
④take on challenges接受挑战
[高分句型]
①She advised me to communicate with my parents and put my heart into English learning.（动词不定式作宾语
补足语和and连接并列结构）
②I talked sincerely with my parents and often turned to my teachers or friends when I had trouble with my
English.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③From it, I have learnt that we should manage to solve the problem bravely and take on challenges.（that引导的
宾语从句）十、闵行区
十八、话题作文
80．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My views on robots entering the classroom”. (以“我
对机器人进入课堂的看法”为题，展开合理想象，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
2023年1月中国工信部等十七个部门，对外发布“机器人+”应用行动实施方案，提出了十大应用场景。
请你就机器人进入教室，结合实际，展开想象，谈谈你的看法，表明你的观点。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
advantages/disadvantages give us practical advice respond to questions
communicate with collect our problems mark the homework...
注意：
文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。
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【答案】例文：
My views on robots entering the classroom
With the development of technology, it has become possible for robots to enter the classroom. I think robots
can help us with learning and make our learning more efficient. For example, it can give us practical advice and
help teachers mark the homework. If we allow robots to enter the classroom, we can communicate with them,
which will make the class more interesting.
In short, there will be many advantages if robots take part in teaching process. I hope that day will come soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作主题已经给出，结合提示词展开想象，添加细节，并突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题：机器人进入课堂已经成为可能。第二步，介绍机器人进入课堂的好处/坏处。
第三步，总结，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①efficient高效的
②For example例如
③In short总之
[高分句型]
①With the development of technology, it has become possible for robots to enter the classroom.（with的复合结
构；形式主语句型）
②If we allow robots to enter the classroom, we can communicate with them, which will make the class more
interesting.（if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的非限制性定语从句）
十一、浦东新区
十四、看图作文
64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格)
初三毕业典礼即将到来，为此学校开展了主题海报设计活动。目前初步确定了三幅主题为“友谊长
存”、“感谢师恩”、“美好未来”的候选海报，并在学校网站展示，征询学生们的意见。假设你是该校
学生李华，请在学校网站留言，选择其中的一幅海报，并结合海报内容阐述你的理由。
注意：
1、短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。
Poster 1 Poster 2 Poster 3____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
I would like to say “thank you” to my English teacher.
He’s a tall man with thick glasses. He likes sports and often plays football and basketball with us. He’s
humorous and always makes his classes lively and interesting. He’s kind but strict with us. He never allows us to
pretend that we know what we don’t know. He often tells us that it’s no use memorizing new words without
understanding. My English has greatly improved with his help.
I think he is the best in my mind. I will remember him forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：选择其中一幅海报进行阐述，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，表达想感谢哪位老师；
第二步，描述老师的基本特征及老师对我的影响；
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①be strict with sb对某人严格
②play football踢足球
③it’s no use doing sth做某事是没用的
[高分句型]
①He never allows us to pretend that we know what we don’t know.（that引导宾语从句）
②He’s kind but strict with us.（but表转折）
十二、普陀区十三、材料作文
64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation【根据以下情景写一篇不少于60词的短文，
标点符号不占格】
毕业将至，初三年级正在开展“我为学校发展献一计”（A suggestion for my school）的活动，请根据
以下内容任选一个方面提出合理建议并阐述理由。
●课程与活动（Courses and activities）
●设施与环境（Facilities and environment）
●规章与制度（Rules and regulations）
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）
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【答案】例文
A suggestion for my school
Our campus is very beautiful, and I am very happy to study here every day. I have deep memories here. But I
think there are some areas that need improvement. First of all, can we solicit the opinions of our students for lunch?
The school restaurant can make some lunches that students really enjoy. Secondly, I suggest that our school
activities be more diversified, such as we can hold some basketball games, dance competitions and so on. I hope
our school can get better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的内容任选一个方面，以“A suggestion for my school”为题写一篇短文，提出自己的合
理建议并阐述理由。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]
第一步：首先提到学校的环境，表示对母校的感谢。
第二步：介绍需要改进的地方。
第三步：写出自己对母校的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①be happy to高兴
②first of all首先
③such as例如
④get better and better变得越来越好
[高分句型]
①But I think there are some areas that need improvement.（that引导的定语从句）
②Secondly, I suggest that our school activities be more diversified, such as we can hold some basketball games
dance competitions and so on.（that引导的宾语从句）
十三、松江区
十四、看图作文
64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格）。
为了解初中生的周末活动安排，玫瑰花园学校（ Rose Garden school）采访了150名学生并汇总了部
分活动的平均用时（见下图）。从柱状图中，你发现了什么问题？请提出建议并陈述理由。
注意:
1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
To find out the students’ weekend activities, Rose Garden school interviewed 150 students. Most students
spend more time on smartphones and computer games. Students spend the least time on housework. I think students
should study hard and play smartphones less. It’s bad for their eyes to play computer games for a long time.
Besides, they help their parents with housework. It can cultivate their independence and learn how to take care of
themselves.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，分析图表中出现的问题；
第三步，给出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①find out找出
②spend time on sth在某事上花费时间
③be bad for对……有害
④take care of照顾
[高分句型]
①To find out the students’ weekend activities, Rose Garden school interviewed 150 students. （动词不定式作目
的状语）
②I think students should study hard and play smartphones less.（宾语从句）
十四、徐汇区
十二、电子邮件
64．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格)
你校正招募志愿者，将在校园开放日欢迎小学五年级学生参观了解校园环境与生活。假如你是Joe，
请给校方写一封邮件，谈谈作为志愿者，你会介绍校园的哪些亮点或特色。
注意：
1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
参考短语：school Open Day, Year 5 students, show around
Dear sir,
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Yours,
Joe
【答案】例文
Dear sir,
I heard our school is recruiting volunteers who will introduce our school on school Open Day to Year 5
students. I want to apply for it. If I become the volunteer, I will show them around and introduce our school like
this.
Our school is very beautiful and lovely. There are many trees and flowers in campus. It’s green all the year
round. There are three buildings in my school. Two of them are teaching buildings and one is office and library. Our
classroom is large and bright. We are happy to study in it. Besides, there are two playgrounds in my school, a
basketball court and a football field. After class, students often play in the basketball court. And, there are many
other places for fun in my school. Welcome you to our school!
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Joe
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，申请成为志愿者，然后介绍校园环境文化。适当增加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出申请成为志愿者；
第二步，具体介绍学校的特色；
第三步，表达期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
① apply for申请
② There are有
③ all the year round全年
④ look forward to期待⑤ show around带领参观
⑥ Besides除此之外
[高分句型]
① I heard our school is recruiting volunteers who will introduce our school on school Open Day to Year 5
students. （定语从句）
② Two of them are teaching buildings and one is office and library. （并列句）
③ If I become the volunteer, I will show them around and introduce our school like this.（条件状语从句）
十五、长宁区
十四、话题作文
64．Write at least 60 words on the topic “I no longer fear ________”（以“我不再害怕________”为题，写
一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在成长的道路上，常常会有一些事情开始时让我们感到畏而却步，例如：有的害怕某些学科学习、或
某项技能训练；有的缺乏勇气在班会上发言；还有的难于接受一时的挫折与失败等等。随着经历和知识的
增长，相信我们最终都会战胜挑战。请以一个具体的例子谈谈你在哪一方面积极应变，增强勇气，得以成
长的。请补全标题。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
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【答案】例文
I no longer fear difficulties
When I was in seventh grade, my English was very poor. I didn’t have the courage to sign up for an Englishspeech competition held at school once. At this moment, my English teacher saw my concerns and encouraged me,
promising to help me. So I signed up. During the period before the competition, my teacher used his break time
every noon to help me improve my pronunciation. I practiced continuously every day. Finally, I achieved a good
score of second place. Since then, I have realized that no matter what difficulties I encounter, as long as I work
hard, I will definitely be able to achieve my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：考生应围绕不再害怕的事物叙述一个具体的例子，注意语句通顺，不要有语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述遇到的困难，由于英语很差不敢报名参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛；
第二步，具体阐述克服困难的过程，老师的帮助，自己刻苦练习；
第三步，书写感悟，结束全文。无论遇到什么困难，只要努力学习，就一定能够实现梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①have the courage to do sth.有勇气去做某事
②sign up for报名参加
③promise to do sth.承诺做某事
④as long as只要
[高分句型]
①When I was in seventh grade, my English was very poor.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Since then, I have realized that no matter what difficulties I encounter, as long as I work hard, I will definitely be
able to achieve my dream.（that引导的宾语从句；no matter+疑问词引导的让步状语从句；as long as引导的
条件状语从句）
