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2024 年上海十六区二模九年级英语试题汇编集锦
专题 09： 英语写作题
1. 2024年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题
Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情境，写一段不少于60
个单词的文字)
近日，由于电动自行车引发的火灾屡屡发生。今年2月23日，南京市雨花区一处住
宅小区因电动自行车引发整栋楼大火，造成15人遇难。2月26日至3月4日，上海接连
发生因造规停放电动自行车和在非指定地点充电引发的火灾，3名车主被拘留。
你是玫瑰花园小区 (Rose Garden Estate) 的居民张磊 (Zhang Lei)。你的小区有不少
外国友人租住，他们中也有不少人是电动自行车的使用者。小区物业请你协助参与对这
些外国友人的安宣传工作。
任务1：撰写一份演讲稿，对他们进行安全宣传和教育。
任务2：设计一份告居民书，张贴在电梯中，起到警示告诫的作用。
请选其中的一项任务完成。
提示：
① 参考词汇： electric scooter电动自行车， non-motor vehicle park非机动车停车场，charge the battery给电
瓶充电。
② 若选择任务一，请在答题纸写作部分的首行书写 Dear friends；若选择任务二，请在写作部分答题纸的
首行书写To all electric scooter owners。以上内容不计入总词数。
③ 写作内容中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。
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【答案】参考范文：
Dear Friends,
I’m Zhang Lei who lives in the Rose Garden estate. Due to the severe fires caused by inappropriate charging
and illegal parking of the electric bicycles in Nanjing and Shanghai recently, I would like to recommend you a couple
of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events. First and foremost, parking your e-bikes in
the corridor is definitely not allowed, which means that you should park them in the designated places. In addition,
charging the battery of e-bikes at home is likely to result in uncontrollable fires, which is why you can only do it in
the open-air areas. Moreover, it is illegal behavior for people to use the elevators with their e-bikes. If there is a fire
in an elevator, people will have no chance to escape from it. Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the
elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. Hopefully, we can create a safe living
environment.
Thank you for listening.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻
辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述演讲稿的目的。
第二步，提出需要注意的内容。
第三步，最后结束文章。
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[亮点词汇]
①due to因为，由于
②recommend推荐，提醒
③potential潜在的
[高分句型]
① I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events.
（that引导的定语从句，动词不定式用作目的状语）
②Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the
potential consequences. （it is+adj.+to do 句型）
2. 2024年上海市黄浦区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符
号不占格。)
“世界地球日”即将来临，学校将举办公益宣传活动，具体活动安排如下表格所示。请你为校园网站写
一篇通知，邀请同学们踊跃参与，通知内容包括活动主题、目的，以及具体活动安排等。
Time Events
8:00-8:30 Check in
9:00-10:00 Drawing competition
10:00-11:00 Tree planting activity
12:00-13:00 Lunch break
13:30-14:30 Science experiment
15:00-15:30 Photo show
You can begin like this:
It’s time to celebrate Earth Day. You are welcome to join us!
注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Notice
It’s time to celebrate Earth Day. Welcome to join us!
On the occasion of World Earth Day, our school will be hosting a series of public welfare activities to raise
awareness about environmental protection. The theme of this event is “Love the Earth, Protect Our Home”. We hope
to inspire our students to take action and contribute to the preservation of our planet.
The event will start checking in from 8:00 am to 8:30 am. All participants are required to register upon arrival. From
9:00 to 10:00 am, there will be a drawing competition, providing students with the opportunity to showcase their
artistic talents while expressing their love for nature. Following that, from 10:00 to 11:00 am, we will organize a tree
planting activity. After a lunch break from 12:00 to 1:00 pm, a science experiment session will take place from 1:30
to 2:30 pm. To conclude the day, a photo show will be held from 3:00 to 3:30 pm, showcasing photographs taken by
students that capture the beauty of nature.
Thank you for your attention and we look forward to your active participation!
School Administration
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点出“世界地球日”的主题和目的。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，阐述具体活动安排。
第三步，书写结语 。
[亮点词汇]
①preservation保持，维护
②showcase展示优点
③contribute to为……做贡献
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[高分句型]
①From 9:00 to 10:00 am, there will be a drawing competition, providing students with the opportunity to
showcase their artistic talents while expressing their love for nature. （there be句型）
②To conclude the day, a photo show will be held from 3:00 to 3:30 pm, showcasing photographs taken by students
that capture the beauty of nature.（定语从句）
3. 2024年上海市浦东新区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标
点符号不占格)
学校呼吁师生共建美好校园。学生会 (the student union) 收到来自同学们的众多提议(proposal)。请代
表学生会选取以下一项提议写一份倡议书。谈一谈提出该倡议的理由并给出具体实施建议。
Recycling wastepaper 废纸回收
Volunteering in the canteen 食堂志愿工
作
Daily jogging 每日慢
跑
Weekly talent show 每周才
艺秀
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【答案】参考范文：
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The student union has received many proposals on how to make our school better. Among them, recycling
wastepaper caught our eye, and we appeal all students to recycle it. Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers
which are made from trees. We cut down millions of trees every year and replace hardly any of them. To save paper,
you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping it. You can also take
waste papers to the school recycling centre to reuse them. By making a few small changes daily, you can have a huge
impact on the amount of paper that gets used.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作主题；
第二步，具体介绍如何使我们学校变得更好。
[亮点词汇]
①caught our eye引起我们的注意
②hundreds of几百
③make sure确保
④have a huge impact on有巨大影响
[高分句型]
①Every day, the school prints hundreds of papers which are made from trees.（which引导的定语从句）
②To save paper, you can write on both sides of a draft paper and make sure there are few blanks before dropping
it.（省略that的宾语从句）
4. 2024年上海市奉贤区中考二模英语试题
Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (根据以下情境，请补全标题“
will make my summer holiday meaningful”后，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
中考结束后的暑假，你有机会去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如
来一场 citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time job，积累工作的经验，又如…… 你最想参加
哪一类社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。
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注意：
1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Volunteering will make my summer holiday meaningful
Summer holiday is coming and I plan to do some volunteer work.
I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to
improve myself. I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can
sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the
elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices.
I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
【解析】
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
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②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己暑期打算做什么社会实践活动，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍想成为志愿者的原因，具体能做的工作；
第三步，表达希望。
［亮点词汇］
①at the same time同时
②the elderly老人
③hand out分发
［高分句型］
①I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s
Home. （含有so的并列句）
②I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.（宾语从句）
5. 2024年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符
号不占格）
你校计划举办主题为“发现城市之美（Discover the beauty of the city）” 的活动，现就活动方案征求大家
意见。假设你是本校学生张明，请阅读以下活动方案，写一封邮件给该活动负责人李老师，邮件须包含以
下内容：
（1）你是否会参加此活动，并简述理由；
（2）针对方案中的至少一项内容，提出修改建议。
活动方案
活动对象
本校六至八年级学生
（participant）
徒步+观光（Hiking &
活动形式
sightseeing）
活动时间 5月2日7点30分
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集合地点 学校操场
目的地 外滩陈毅广场
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr Li,
I am very happy to learn that our school will have an activity called “Discover the beauty of the city”. I want to
take part in this activity because we can enjoy the beauty of our city.
Students from Grade six to eight can take part in this activity. They can go hiking and sightseeing. It says the
activity begins at 7:30 a.m on 2 May, and we will meet on the school playground. I think we can begin earlier so that
we can have enough time to play at Chen Yi Bund Plaza.
I am looking forward to that day.
Zhang Ming
【解析】
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【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：以一般现在时为主；
③提示：要求根据提示内容进行写作。
［写作步骤］
第一步，简述是否会参加活动并给出理由；
第二步，针对一项给出建议。
［亮点词汇］
① take part in 参加
② so that 为了
［高分句型］
① I want to take part in this activity because we can enjoy the beauty of our city.（原因状语从句）
② I think we can begin earlier so that we can have enough time to play at Chen Yi Bund Plaza.（目的状语从句）
6. 2024年上海市徐汇区中考二模英语试题
初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony)，部分学生将有机会
在毕业典礼上演讲，演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Joe，请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等
中选择一项内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的感受，给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。
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【答案】例文
My dear teachers and classmates,
I’m very glad to make a speech on the graduation ceremony. It has been three great years for us to study in this
beautiful schoool. The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life.
I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do
well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how
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to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m
good at it. Here I want to say, thank you, my best teacher. Finally, I hope that all the students will have a good future
and our school will become better and better.
Thank you for listening.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸在毕业典礼上发言”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等选一项内容、
结合经历、谈感受、给建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达感谢您的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech做演讲
②Little by little一点一点地
③a precious treasure一个珍贵的财富
[高分句型]
①The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life. (定语从句）
②I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better. (宾语从句)
7. 2024年上海市虹口区中考二模英语试题
你所在学校的英语校报正在举行公开竞选。假如你是学生李华，请阅读竞选职位和要求，参与其中
一个职位的竞选，并完成竞选演讲稿。
演讲稿须包含以下内容：
（1）你想要参与校报工作的原因；
（2）你想竞选哪个职位，并说明理由。
Job What to do
write news articles/conduct
reporter
interviews
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photographer take photos
editor take charge of a section
secretary arrange meetings/take notes
注意：
1.演讲稿中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Hello, teachers and classmates! My name is Li Hua. I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our
school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.
First, I love writing news articles. I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words. Working on the school
newspaper will give me a chance to write news stories and share them with everyone.
Also, I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories. As a reporter, I
can talk to different students and teachers, find out interesting things, and then write about them in the newspaper.
I believe I have the skills to be a good reporter. I’m good at observing and listening, and I can ask good
questions. I hope you’ll support me and give me a chance to show what I can do. Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，打招呼并表明演讲目的；
第二步，讲述想要参与校报工作和竞选记者职位的原因；
第三步，介绍自己的优势，并表达想要成为记者的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
②find out找出
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[高分句型]
①I’m excited to share with you why I want to be a part of our school newspaper and why I want to be a reporter.
（why引导的宾语从句）
②I think it’s fun to put my thoughts and ideas into words.（省略that的宾语从句；it作形式主语）
③I want to be a reporter because I enjoy interviewing people and learning about their stories.（because引导的原
因状语从句）
8. 2024年上海市闵行区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标
点符号不占格)
今年“青少年心理健康周” (Teenagers’ Mental Health Week) 活动期间，校园英文电台就同学们眼中“最
合适的倾诉对象”进行了问卷调查，下图为调查结果的饼状图 (the pie chart)。请阅读下图，谈谈你对此结
果的看法，并结合自身实际，说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
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【答案】例文：
During the “Teenagers’ Mental Health Week”, our English Radio did a questionnaire survey on the “the most
suitable person to talk to” among students. The result shows that about half of the students would rather talk to friends
than parents and teachers when they have problems. I think for most students, friends know them better.
However, as for me, parents are the most suitable persons to talk to. For example, when I feel stressed about my
lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents. They can give me some advice through their experiences.
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They can make me relaxed and have confidence in myself.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点包括对问卷调查结果的看法，以及结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍调查结果和对此的看法；
第二步，结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①would rather ... than ... 比起……更愿意……
②as for me 至于我
③communicate with sb 和某人交谈
④through their experiences 通过他们的经历
⑤have confidence in myself 相信自己
[高分句型]
①I think for most students, friends know them better.（宾语从句）
②For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents.（when引
导时间状语从句）
9. 2024年上海市松江区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文，
标点符号不占格。)
短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看
似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。
你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或
成功。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was
a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My
parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. I became more confident than
I used to be. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. Imagining there was a
mirror in front of me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly.
Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。以第一人称
为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去常常
②took part in参加
③give up放弃
④deal with解决
⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不
定式作目的状语)
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②My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. (which引导的非限制
性定语从句)
10. 2024年上海市青浦区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words on the given topic “Actions speak louder than words”. (根据所给题目“行动胜于空
谈”写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
常言道“行动胜于空谈”，一个行动往往胜过千言万语，我们在生活与学习中需要牢记这一点。请结合你
的经历或是所见所闻，谈谈你的心得感悟。
写作要点：
(1) 围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
(2) 谈谈你对这件事的心得感悟。
注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文：
Actions Speak Louder than Words
As an old saying goes, actions speak louder than words. The saying shows that taking action is of great important.
Here is a thing happened in my life.
When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never
took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. Then I gradually realized that taking action to
develop a plan and putting it into practice is very important for me. It not only helps me achieve better grades, but
also benefits me in my daily life.
In short, I firmly believe that setting detailed goals for the future and taking action to achieve them one by one
is very important.
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【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明行动胜于空谈的重要性，引出话题。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，围绕“行动胜于空谈”的主题，讲述一则你生活中的小故事。
第三步，书写结语，表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①As an old saying goes正如老话所说
②is of great important……是非常重要的
③take action to do sth.采取行动做某事
④Not only…but also…不仅……而且……
⑤In short总之
[高分句型]
①The saying shows that taking action is of great important. (that引导的宾语从句)
②When I was a middle school student, I always aspired to achieve better grades and made many plans, but never
took action, so I missed the opportunity to enter a good high school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
11. 2024年上海市金山区中考二模英语试题
Write at least 60 words according to the given information.（以“My suggestion for social practice”为题，
写一篇至少60个单词的短文。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。）
社会实践活动是课堂教学的延伸，它能够丰富我们的生活经历，帮助我们认识社会、开拓视野、锻炼
能力。你的学校正在开展“我为社会实践献一计”（My suggestion for social practice）的活动，即将初中毕
业的你针对这个活动有何建议？请介绍你所希望进行的社会实践活动并阐述理由。
以下活动仅供参考。
参观类（Visit）：科技馆（Science Museum）、博物馆……
实践类（Practice）：田间劳作（Working in the fields）、志愿者、厨艺……
娱乐类（Entertainment）：演出（Performance）……
比赛类（Match）：摄影（Taking photos）……
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（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
My Suggestion for Social Practice
Social practice activities are important for students’ personal growth and development. I would like to share my
suggestion for social practice. Visiting the science museum can improve students’ understanding of science and
technology. Working in the fields is also a good way to make students know where food comes from and how it is
grown. Participating in performances can help students build confidence. Different matches can enrich students’
lives and allow them find their interests. So, it is necessary for students to have some social practice activities.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，说明社会实践活动的重要性；
第二步，具体阐社会实践活动的工作内容及选择原因；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① personal growth and development个人成长和发展
② participate in参加
③ build confidence建立自信
[高分句型]
① Working in the fields is also a good way to make students know where food comes from and how it is
grown. (where和when引导的宾语从句)
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② So, it is necessary for students to have some social practice activities. (it is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.句型)
12. 2024年上海市嘉定区中考二模英语试题、
Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.(请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
标点符号不占格。)
的
你所在 学校即将欢迎一批国际交流生(international exchange students)，学校正在策划一系列精彩纷呈的活
动。目前，学校正积极征集学生们对于具体活动及国际交流生住宿地点的建议。假设你是李华，请给学校
负责人张老师写一封邮件，详细描述你推荐的一个活动及住宿地点的建议，并说明理由。请撰写一篇不少
于60个词的短文，展现你对这次交流活动价值的深刻理解。
(注意：1.短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分 2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
I’d like to share my advice. I recommend that they should learn something about Chinese traditional art, such
as paper-cutting, Peking opera, etc. It is a good way to show our colorful culture and help international exchange
students have a better understanding of China. As for accommodation, I think students’ dormitories are the best
because it allows students to communicate with each other freely and build friendships.
I hope my advice is helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
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③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体针对活动及住宿地点给出建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②have a better understanding of... 对……有了更好的了解
③As for 至于
④communicate with each other freely 彼此自由交流
[高分句型]
①I recommend that they should learn something about Chinese traditional art, such as paper-cutting, Peking opera,
etc.（宾语从句）
②As for accommodation, I think students’ dormitories are the best because it allows students to communicate with
each other freely and build friendships.（宾语从句和原因状语从句）
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