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专项9-2022年上海市初三英语二模真题专项训练之写作（解析版）
目录
一、宝山二模 二、黄浦二模
三、嘉定二模 四、徐汇二模
五、闵行古美学校九下期中卷 六、普陀九下期中卷
七、松江九下期中卷 八、徐汇九下期中卷
九、静安民立中学九下期中卷 十、长宁九下线上测试卷
十一、浦东新区上外浦外九下期中卷 十二、浦东新区进才中学九下期中卷
一、宝山二模
64. Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于
60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
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Sam在学校 英语学习论坛里发了一个帖子寻求帮助，请阅读他的帖子并针对他提出
的问题写一份回帖为他提供帮助。
My problem
I’m very worried about the coming English oral test (口语测试) . I’m
Sam, not good at speaking English. I’ve no idea about how to practice oral
English. My parents are angry with me because I haven’t made much
Posted:
progress. What should I do? Can you give me some advice?
(2 days ago)
Your Reply
Re: Sam’s problem
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注意:
1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
●be patient
●keep practising
●communicate with
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【答案】例文
Don’t lose heart. Confidence will solve many problems. There are some solutions to
improve your oral English.
First of all, recite the words and be patient. Because the sentences read in English are
composed of words, you will be more fluent when you are familiar with the words. Secondly,
you should read after the radio and cultivate your sense of language. Keep practicing so that
you can speak fluently. Finally, you should find more classmates to communicate with you in
your classroom.
I hope above advice will be helpful to you.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文需要回复Sam发布的一个帖子，回复原贴中的问题：应该
如何提高口语？
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时；主要以第二人称为主展开叙述；短文采用三段式：
第一段鼓励对方，引出话题。第二段给出具体的三个提高口语建议；最后一段总结全
文。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误。教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
二、黄浦二模
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三、嘉定二模
64. Write at least 60 words according to the pictures about “A spring outing”（根据所给图片，
写一篇关于“春游”的短文，题目可以另拟，字数不少于60词，标点符号不占格。）
climb a mountain pick up paper and bottles throw…into dustbins
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【答案】One possible version:
A spring outing
Spring in March, accompanied by the comfortable weather and warm sunshine, our class
had a spring outing on Saturday.
We went to Renmin Park and hold some activities. All of my classmates were so excited
that we looked like the birds just coming out from birdcage. We climbed a mountain and went
boating. We picked up paper and bottles then threw them into dustbins. At the same time, we
enjoyed the beautiful scenery of spring. Some people in the park also joined us and had fun.
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【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文。要求根据图片提示，写一篇关于“春游”的
短文。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态是一般过去时，主要用第一人称来书写。在写作时应该注意符合
题意，做到无语法和单词拼写错误，可适当补充细节使文章连贯。
四、徐汇二模
80. Compare your school with Blue Sky School and write at least 60 words to leave a
comment on school life at Blue Sky School and briefly describe how your school life is
different from a school day at Blue Sky School and what may probably make such
differences.
假如你是李华，对比一下你的学校和 Blue Sky School。请用至少 60 个词给 Blue
Sky School的学生留个言，并简单描述一下你的学校生活与 Blue Sky School 的不同之
处以及原因。如必须出现学校名，请用ABC School 代替。
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【答案】Dear Blue Sky School students,
Blue Sky School is a little different from my school. Bay Gardens Resort, a hotel near
Blue Sky School, runs a breakfast club at the school, where students can enjoy delicious
breakfast for free. It is fantastic. But I have to eat breakfast at home before I go to school.
Because my parents and teachers don’t allow us to have breakfast at school.
Yours,
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【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求写一个留言条。给Blue Sky School的学生简单描述一
下自己的学校生活与 Blue Sky School 的不同之处以及原因。
2.写作指导：本文时态应用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。留言条格式与书信格式
基本相同，首先顶格写 Dear...，然后下一行开始写正文，首行缩进，最后右下角署名。
写作时注意保证单词语法正确，语句通顺。
五、闵行古美学校九下期中卷
84. 如果你的班级要征集关于饲养班级宠物的建议，你会提议选什么动物? 请以“The
Best Class Pet to Keep in a Classroom”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的英语短文，解释你这
样提议的理由。文章可参考以下内容：
1. 交代你想要在班级里养什么动物
2. 阐述在教室里饲养这种动物有哪些好处
3. 可参考文中提到的因素，也可加入自己新的观点
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六、普陀九下期中卷
84.Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.(根据以下情景， 写一篇不少于
60字的短文，标点符号不占格)
暑假渐渐临近，你所在的社区（community）正在招募一批小志愿者，希望可以帮助社
区工作者一起服务社区居民， 包括关爱老人、陪伴幼儿、垃圾分类(garbage sorting)、
爱心义 卖(charity sale)、热心助残等。请你写一封自荐信， 结合你的兴趣和特长，表
达你想参与其中哪一项活动的意愿，并说明理由。
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七、松江九下期中卷
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic ‘My gains’.
（疫情期间，我们足不出户，但是我们看到听到了很多感人事迹，我们也经历了一段
不同寻常的学习生活。无论是无私奉献的白衣天使或社区志愿者，还是我们自己的生
活经历都给我们带来了不同的感悟和收获。请结合这些感人事迹或自身经历，完成一
篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
The following expressions are just for reference:
online learning; moving; medical workers; impressive; community volunteers; warm-hearted
注意：短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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范文：
My gains
The Chinese students have to take online courses at home because of the virus.There is no
denying that every student has his own impressive experience.As for me,I firmly believe that
it makes me more knowledgeable and self-disciplined.During this period,teachers arranged
our time well enough to make every student study more efficiently at home.I also took full use
of my leisure time to learn my poor subject-Maths.When I was in trouble,I also used QQ or教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
WeChat to ask my teachers for help and they could help me instantly.However,sometimes my
self-control was not enough,so my parents always remind me that I must spend more time
studying at home so that I could be admitted into ideal high school.After a certain time ,I am
able to take full advantage of my time flexibly.Therefore,online learning improves my ability
of getting knowledge and controlling myself.
1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇英语记叙文，根据给出的短语和单词，写一篇疫情期间，
你所看到和听到的感人事迹，疫情期间你的学习生活以及感悟和收获，结合感人的事
迹和自身经历，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，用一般过去
时描述疫情期间自己的学习生活；描述疫情期间的感人事迹，要叙述正面，积极，感
人的事迹，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。
八、徐汇九下期中卷
84.Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Way(s) of Improving Social Skills”
（ 以“我提高社交技能的方法”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占
格。）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容供参考)
▲ 1. Are social skills important?
▲ 2. Describe your own experience and share your way of improving social skills.
▲ 3. What do you want to say to those who are shy?
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九、静安民立中学九下期中卷
88.Write at least 60 words on the given topic “_______ has changed me”.（以“ _______改
变了我”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
世间瞬息万变，凡事都在变化、都在发展，我们也在不断地调整、改变自己。某些人、
事、经历改变着我们的心态、行为、价值观、思维方式、生活方式等。请结合题目和
自己的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。
（注意： 1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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十、长宁九下线上测试卷
94.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Ways to improve my online learning”
（以“提高我在线学习效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号
不占格。）.
（注意：抄袭试卷中内容不得分。文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，
否则不予评分。）
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十一、浦东新区上外浦外九下期中卷
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十二、浦东新区进才中学九下期中卷
84. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "We can do something for Shanghai".
（以“我们为上海出份力”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
因新冠疫情，目前上海很多小区处于封闭状态，全国各地的医护人员纷纷赶来帮助
上海抗疫。同学们只能居家线上学习，同学们的生活怎么样？作为上海市民，你与你
的家人能为上海做些什么呢？
以下短语供选用：
the COVID-19 epidemic 新冠疫情
nucleic acid testing 核酸检测
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