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09-2022年上海市初三英语二模真题专项训练之写作
2022杨浦二模
84. Write at least 60 words on the given situation (根据以下情境写不少于60个词的论坛帖
子及回复等，标点符号不占格。)
阅读D篇的论坛帖子中谈到了生活中发生的一些尴尬事件。假设你是 Sandy,请在论坛
中发帖，讲一个发生在自己身上的尴尬事件,并设想你的朋友Jill会如何与你互动，写下你
们之间的一问一答。
(注意: 1.文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
Sandy 25 October 9.00 p.m.
Jill 25 October 9.05 p.m.
Sandy 25 October 9.08 p.m. .
【答案】缺
2022普陀二模
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “ I learned a lot from... ” 【以“我从……学到了
很多”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】
提示：女孩在服装店打工的经历告诉我们，每个人都能通过不同的方式学到有益于成
长的东西，请结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感悟。
(注意： 短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇
不得分)教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
【答案】例文：
I learned a lot from my teacher
Recently, I’ve learned something helpful from my English teacher Mr. Li for my future life.
I’ve had a change in my life. It makes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.
I was poor at English and my English score was so disappointing that I became mad at
myself. But my teacher Mr. Li told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself.
Every time I met with some English problems, I told myself “You should be confident and you
can do it.” And out of my expectation, I got an “A” in my English exam a month later. Not until
then did I realize I had a gift for English.
There is nothing that I can’t do if I am confident enough.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。以“我从……学到了很多”为题进行写作，在
写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西，需要结合具体实例叙述自己的感
悟，可以适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，结合具体事例讲述自己
学到有益于成长的东西和自己的感受，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
2022虹口二模
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Small tricks to improve happiness”(以“提升幸福感的
小妙招”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)(共 20分)
3月20日是国际幸福日。快乐、自信、充实、自豪，当你拥有这些感受，你就是一个
幸福的人。生活中的一些小妙招可以让我们获得幸福感，请你结合自己或他人的经历和感
受描述至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并说明一下理由。
(注意:1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
【答案】例文：
The feeling of happiness is very important. We are no longer satisfied with only enough food
and clothes. Instead, we need happiness. Now I will share some tips to increase our sense of
happiness.
The first is friendship. Friends can share our feelings and help to make us happy when we are
sad. They can provide us with help when we are in need. They can also keep us company when we
are lonely. The second is being thankful. Sometimes we can’t get what we want and we will be
unhappy. But if we focus on what we already have, and be thankful to everything around us, I
believe our life will be a lot happier.
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【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“Small tricks to improve happiness”为题参
照所给提示中要点信息进行分析。写作时需选定至少两个提升幸福感的小妙招，并陈述理
由。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时；写作时注意分段叙述，第一段开
门见山，引入话题；第二段介绍小妙招及原因；第三段总结全文；保证文章条理清晰，语
句通顺。
2022松江二模
84. Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60
个词的倡议书，标点符号不占格)
在疫情防控的特殊时期，人们自觉落实各项防疫举措，居家工作、学习和生活成为阻
隔病毒传染的有效方法之一。请你以学校学生会的名义，给全体学生写一封倡议书，使大
家明白疫情期间在线学习和规律生活的重要性，并给出合理可行的建议，号召全校学生遵
守执行，为防疫工作贡献自己的力量。
Some phrases for reference:
call on (号召); during COVID; study online / have online lessons
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息 2. 不得照搬阅读语篇内
容。）
Dear schoolmates
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_____ _____ _____ ______ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____ _____
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From
The Students’ Union
【答案】例文：
Dear schoolmates,
During COVID, in order to effectively prevent the spread of the virus, our school decided to
delay the opening time and adopt online teaching. Students should study online. At the same time,
make sure you live a regular life. For everyone’s study and life, we call on you to do the教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
following:
1. Attend class on time and finish online homework.
2. Take your temperature every day, and then report it to your teacher.
3. Wash your hands frequently and drink plenty of water.
4. Take more exercise.
5. Wear a mask when you go out and don’t gather.
From
The Students’ Union
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一封倡议书，告诫学生和老师疫情期间在线学习和规律
生活的重要性，并给出合理的建议。注意要点齐全，并适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文应以一般现在时来行文，提建议时应详细具体，可以采用祈使句等句型；
内容要包含题目所给的提示内容，行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和
标点错误。
2022宝山二模
84. Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少
于60 个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
假如你是李华，你的朋友小强最近在学习时注意力难以集中，学习效果不佳，感觉压
力很大。请你给他写一封信对他表示关心，结合自身或他人的经历谈谈你对压力的看法，
并给他提供一些缓解学习压力的方法，帮助他放松身心、提高学习效率。
（注意：1，短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2，照抄阅读语篇内容不得分)
The following is for reference only. (以下表达仅供参考)
under stress
take an active part in…
try to relax and enjoy…
Dear Xiao Qiang,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Xiao Qiang,
I am sorry to hear that you have difficulty concentrating on his study recently, the learning
effect is poor, and you feel stressed. In fact, don’t worry, everyone will be under pressure. Proper
pressure is helpful to do our study well. However, too much pressure is harmful to our health and
study.
I was in the same situation as you. You can take an active part in sports. When you feel
upset, you should try to relax and enjoy your favorite music. I believe that if you do this, you will
get better and you will make a big progress in your study.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，给小强写一封信，结合自身或他人的经历谈
谈你对压力的看法，并给出一些缓解学习压力的方法。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；在
写作时要确保内容完整，要点全面，行文连贯，流畅、通顺，适当选用表示因果、递进、
转折关系的连接词，和复合句。语言结构要符合语法习惯，保证单词拼写和标点使用正确。
2022静安二模
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The moving moment in my life"（请以"生活中让我感
动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件
事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。
（注意：1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
【答案】例文：
The moving moment in my life
Here is a moving moment in my life that I will never forget.
I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was worse,
I didn’t bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body, which seemed that they教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first, I thought the rain finally
stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike.
He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam can’t stand for everything. I believe you can
get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I
studied harder and made great progress.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“The moving moment in my life”为题，介
绍生活中让自己感动的事情。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展
开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语
句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。
2022崇明二模
84. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ Grow up in labour ”（以“在劳动中
成长”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在日常生活中，每个同学都会参与一些社会公益劳动、学校组织的劳动活动或居家时的
家务劳动等，相信你们在过程中都有所感悟和收获。请你结合自身经历，谈谈你曾参与的
劳动并分享一下你的所感所悟。
注意：1. 短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
【答案】例文
Grow up in labour
In our daily lives, we usually take part in some labour activities, such as volunteer work,
housework and so on. I want to share my experience with you.
Last weekend, our school held an activity. It was to help elder people in Old People’s Home.
We got there at about 9 a.m. Then we cleaned their rooms, told funny jokes and sang some songs.
From their smiling faces, I found that this activity was so meaningful. From this experience, I
realize that doing labour not only makes others get pleasure, but also develops our basic skills.
If you want to have a try, please take action from now on.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“Grow up in labour”为题，写一篇短文，谈
谈你参与的劳动经历以及所感所悟。
2.写作指导：本文应采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主来叙述。分为三教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
段式：第一段引出主题；第二i段介绍自己在老人院做义工的经历，并描述自己的感受；
第三段呼吁读者从现在开始做起。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
2022奉贤二模
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to pass ________ on”【补全题目，以“我愿
传递________”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格】
传递一种精神、一种品质、一种态度、一种情感、一种能量……。请结合自身经历，
谈谈你在家庭、学校或社会中所愿传递的东西。
【答案】例文：
I’d like to pass the helpful spirit on
We face many difficulties at school. For example, when I played football, I fell down and
hurt my leg. My classmates helped me to go to the school hospital. When I met some difficult
math questions, my classmates helped me to work them out. These things made me happy and
comfortable. I want to pass the helpful spirit on. I think helping others is to help ourselves.
【解析】
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，写作时应先补全题目，然后介绍传递乐
于助人的精神，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一
般过去时，介绍传递乐于助人的精神时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清
晰。
2022嘉定二模
84．Write at least 60 words according on the topic of “ made me a difference”
生活、学习中的经历,我们亲人、朋友或是陌生人等，都可能对我们产生影响，让我们发
生一些变化。这些变化往往会有助于我们的成长。请结合一次自身经历，以“_______ 改
变了我” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
【答案】
Persistence made me a difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in
our study or daily life, may make us a difference. What made me a difference is the persistence my教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
mother once taught me.
I can well remember the day when I first learnt the English word “valley”. I was five years
old then and my mother was trying to taught me English words. When my mother pronounced the
word “valley”, I tried over and over again, but it was too difficult for me to pronounce the v sound
correctly, so I failed. I began to get angry and was unwilling to utter any sound any more. At that
time, my mother just tried her best to encourage me to pronounce again. She told me that if I could
keep trying pronouncing the word, I would succeed in the end. Nobody else could help me. Only
I, myself could. So I did as my mother told me. I tried hard even if I was making mistakes all the
time. But suddenly, I heard my mother cheer, “You did it, my boy!”. It was persistence that helped
me succeed. I was greatly moved indeed.
From then on, persistence is always with me, especially whenever I come across difficulties.
And I never give up easily. Persistence made me a difference.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文写作，以“……改变了我”为题，按照记叙文的格
式，讲述自己的一次亲身经历，说明是“什么改变了我”，可以是某些人，也可以是某个
物件或某个抽象概念。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写；在记叙亲身经历时，时态以一般过去时为
主；在陈述观点时，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时按记叙文的格式来写，第一段开门见
山，直接说明“改变了我”的东西是什么；第二段记叙自己的亲身经历为主；第三段回应
主题并结尾。叙述亲身经历是这篇文章的主体部分，讲述时要说清楚事件的来龙去脉，适
时抒发自己的感悟。
2022闵行二模
84. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “_________ makes no difference”. ( 以
“……是无济于事的”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
阅读D篇怀特家的故事告诉我们：一旦事情已经发生，责备任何人都无济于事，相反
会让被责备的人背负罪恶感。在我们的生活中，总会遇到困难或者发生一些不愉快的事情
这时候谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧等等都不会起到任何作用。我们应该改变自身，寻
求智慧的解决办法。请结合你的经历或见闻，谈谈你的感受。写作前请你先把题目补充完
整。
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。抄袭阅读理解
语篇的不给分。）教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
【答案】
例文：
Blaming others makes no difference
In our life, there will always be difficulties or unpleasant things. Blaming, complaining,
getting angry, worrying and so on will not do any good. We should change ourselves and seek
intelligent solutions.
I used to climb mountains with my friend who insisted on going to remote places. Finally we
got lost, and I knew it was useless to blame my friend. So I called for help right away. At last we
were saved.
I think when something unexpected happens, we should try to solve it instead of blaming the
other person.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，首先把题目补全完整。其次根据题目要求结
合自己的经历和见闻写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文在叙述过去的经历时用一般过去时，叙述感受时使用一般现在时。人称
以第一人为主。写作时可以从“谩骂、责备、抱怨、生气、担忧”等词中选取一个把题目
补充完整，然后围绕主题展开叙述。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
2022徐汇二模
84. The school newspaper is going to use the given photo in the culture section. It's a photo of two
exchange students from America. Please write a short news article entitled "Exploring Chinese
Culture" based on the given photo for the newspaper.
校报准备在报纸文化栏里用到所给照片做报道。这张照片主人公是两位来自于美国的
交换生。请仔细看所给照片，并为报纸撰写一篇题为“探索中国文化”的简单报道。不少
于60词。
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号
不占格)
剪纸 paper cutting 书法 calligraphy
Exploring Chinese Culture教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
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【答案】例文：
Exploring Chinese Culture
In order to arouse students’ interest in exploring Chinese culture and enrich our school life,
our school held a Culture Day last week. Hundreds of us took part in it.
As scheduled, students gathered at the assembly hall at 2 p.m. Tuesday. 15 students delivered
their speeches introducing different Chinese culture in turn, which were well received by the
audience. Later, some students showed some traditional skills, such as knitting, making kites and
performing Beijing opera. Some American students were interested in the paper cutting and
calligraphy. They learned Chinese characters and tried to write some of them with writing brushes.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it improve our understanding of Chinese
culture, but it also provided a great chance for us to show ourselves. What a wonderful time!
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时应根据题目要求讲述学校的文化
节的具体过程。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主，讲述文化节的活动和中
国文化的体验，要叙述完整，条理清晰。
2022浦东二模
84.Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (假定你是 Tony, 根据以下情境
续写这一封信, 不少于 60 词，标点符号不占格)
（注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
Note: entire adj. 全部的，整个的
【答案】例文：
Dear Editor,
I have lived in Jackson my entire life. I go to Lake School. I am in second grade. I am writing
this letter because I do not agree with your article. You wrote about the new shopping mall that
will be built on First Street. I think it is exciting to have new things to do here. I just wish our city
did not decide to get rid of Hardy Park. Why should we lose a park to get a mall?
Now people are under more and more pressure from work and study. We need a place to
relax. I think this park is the best place to relax. We can see many people in the park every day.
Some old people exercise in the park, and children fly kites in the park. There are also many
people talking happily with their friends. If the park becomes a shopping center, there will be no
suitable place for us to relax.
So I insist on my view that the park cannot be given up. Now the transportation is very
convenient. People can take the subway or car to go to a far place when shopping. I think this is a
better solution.
That’s all. Thank you!
Tony.
【解析】
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据信件中的提示要点，介绍不同意公园变购物公园的理
由以及建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态
采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整
保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
2022长宁二模
84.Write at least 60 words about the given situation(请跟据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词
的短文，标点符号不占格。）
为了提高学生英语学习能力，李老师想要调查了解一下学生课外在记忆单词、朗读/背
诵课文、做书面作业、读英语书刊和故事，或者其它等等方面的学习情况。请你写一封信
给他，谈谈以上几个方面你觉得哪个最重要，哪个方面你花时最多，哪个做得最少；哪个
方面你最感到困难或最有成功经验；你将如何改进学习方法才能取得更大的进步。
（注意：1、信的格式与开头已给，这些文字不计入你所写的总数。2、信中不得出现任何
姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Dear Mr Li,教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
In response to your survey, I'd like to tell you something about how I learn English after
school._________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
XXX
【答案】
例文
Dear Mr. Li,
In response to your survey, I’d like to tell you something about how I learn English after
school. Personally, I find memorizing new words most important, for vocabulary is the basis of
any language learning, not just English. Besides, reading out loud is what I spend most of my time
doing while I seldom recite any texts, which is too boring for me. As for written homework, it is
truly my biggest headache because it seems endless. To progress more in English learning, I think
it necessary to do some pleasure reading and that is exactly what I am about to do.
Yours,
Helen
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇书信作文，谈谈自己英语学习的情况，具体包括单词、
课文、作业以及课外阅读等方面。
2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称；写作时承接开头，具体叙述自己认为
英语学习哪个部分最重要、哪个部分还有所欠缺，以及将如何改进学习方法来取得更大进
步。注意信件的写作格式，要正确运用语言句式和语法，注意标点符号使用恰当。
2022金山二模
84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “The most important rule in my family”(以“我家最重要
的一条家规”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
国有国法，家有家规(family rule) 。不同家庭有不同家规。如:做人诚实、尊敬长辈、
天天阅读、人人做家务或吃饭时不能刷手机等等。在你家里，可能也有很多家规，那么你
认为你家最看重的家规是哪一条呢?为什么?请举例说明。教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
(注意: 1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
【答案】例文
The most important rule in my family
There are national laws and family rules. Different families have different rules, such as
being honest, respecting elders, reading every day, not playing on the phone when doing
housework or eating, and so on.
In my family, the most important rule is to be honest. Because my father thinks: lose honesty,
also lose everything. Honesty involves many aspects, such as keeping promises, strictly carrying
out plans, not telling lies and so on.
Honesty is very important for everyone. I hope every one of us can be an honest person.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“The most important rule in my family”
为题，写一篇英文短文，介绍家中最重要的一条家规。
2.写作指导：本文运用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时。可采用分段的形式，使文章结构
清晰。最后保证语言通顺，行文连贯；注意语法正确，无标点和大小写错误。
2022青浦二模
78. Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A decision I made”（请以“决定”
为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
在学习和生活中，我们会做出许多决定，有时会庆幸自己的决定是正确的，有时也会
为错误的决定而懊恼后悔。这些决定都会让我们有所感悟。请结合你的经历，谈谈你的感
受。
注意： 1) 抄袭试卷中内容不得分；
2) 文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
【答案】范文：
A decision I made
Our lives are the sum of all our decision. The decisions we make today may play an
important role in our future. When I was thirteen, my mother wanted me to be a girl who was
good at school work. However, I was keen on playing the drum a lot and didn’t like study at all.
As a result, we quarreled with each other a lot. As time passed by, I gradually found that one
should be knowledgeable, no matter what he would be in the future. I decided to work hard and
regarded playing the drum as my hobby. I think the decision I’ve made must be wise one.教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“A decision I made”为题，叙述自己所做过的决定，以及
自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为
主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，并且把故事发生的背景、起因和过程叙述
完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
2022黄浦二模
84．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少
于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
疫情期间，为了帮助同学们保护视力，避免过多使用电子产品，学校鼓励大家阅读纸
质书籍。老师决定招募志愿者，管理在线读书俱乐部“Online reading club”。如果你有意
愿承担管理读书俱乐部的工作，请给老师写一封电子邮件，谈谈你计划如何做。
邮件内容可以包含以下几个问题：
1．How often do you meet on line?
2．How will you choose books to read?
3．What activities will you organise for your club?
(注意:1.短文中不得出现任何真实的人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
【答案】例文：
Dear teacher,
I am so delighted to hear that you are looking for a volunteer to manage the online reading
club. Responsible and organized as I am, I think I am the right person for this club.
If I am chosen, I will spare no effort to help my classmates use electronic products less and
read paper books more. First, I will hold a meeting online for everyone to share the books they
like best and choose some of them as a must for everyone to finish in a certain period of time.
Then, we will meet online once a week to report our reading achievements and share our thoughts.
Besides, I will sometimes ask our Chinese teachers to give us some tips on reading books. Last but
not least, I will invite my cousin, a very famous writer, to share some of her works as well as some
tips on how to write a good article.
In a word, if I am in charge of this club, I will do everything possible for my classmates.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题目属于应用文写作，同时写作时要按邮件格式写，要求按照三
个问题的提示展开写作，给老师写一封自荐信。
2. 写作指导：本文是向对方阐述自己的计划，因此应使用第一人称为主；时态采用一般将
来时为主；根据三个问题，计划至少涉及三个方面；结尾不忘进行总结，表达自己对这份
志愿者工作的向往。
