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2021 年上海中考英语写作考前押题强化训练
中考作文押题 （一）
Ⅶ. Writing （作文） （共20分）
Write at least 60 words according to the given information
有人说锻炼需要时间、空间、毅力等。你认为锻炼最需要的是什么？请你以“Doing
Exercise Requires _____________Most”为题写一篇英文短文向某英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 锻炼最需要的东西；
2. 请举例说明。
注意：
1. 补全短文题目；
2. 词数80左右。
Doing Exercise Requires Most
★ 参考范文
One possible version：
Doing Exercise Requires Patience Most
When it comes to doing exercise, some people think that it requires time, space,
willpower and so on, but for me, patience is the most important.
As far as I can remember, I began to run to lose weight when I was 13 years old.
However, after I did running for a month, I felt that there was no obvious weight loss and I
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more patient. I took his advice and patiently stuck to my routine. Gradually, running became
part of my life and I became fitter.
中考作文押题 （二）
Ⅶ. Writing （作文） （共20分）
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The best ________ I have ever met”（请
以“最美的遇见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
一场美丽的相遇是生命的恩赐， 是缘分的开始。最美的遇见可以是雨后的彩虹，可以是陪
伴的挚友，亦可是成长的鼓励等。请选择一个方面，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。
注意：1.补全作文题目；
2.抄袭试卷中内容不得分；
3.文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
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★ 参考范文
The best encouragement I have ever met
Life is full of difficulties, so we need to gain encouragement from others.教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
Once I made a speech in the school. I tried hard to say out every word clearly.
Unfortunately, I was so nervous that I forgot one part of my speech. I wanted to give up. “You are
great.” Someone shouted. I suddenly became powerful and completed the speech perfectly. From
that time, I have realized that we need encouragement from others.
This is the best encouragement I have ever met.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先要补全作文题目，然后根据题目要求，
叙述自己的亲身经历——遇见的最好的鼓励，并写出自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述故事内容，时态采用一般过去时为主。在描
述故事时，场景应描写细致，并且故事发生的起因、过程和结果等需要叙述完整，保证条
理清晰。
中考作文押题 （三）
Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于 60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中
选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。
1.Don't judge people by their looks. Someone could be bad-looking and still be nice. —Katie
2.When your friends do something stupid，you don't have to follow.—Jackie
3.Don't tell a teacher your dog ate your homework，especially if you don't have a dog.—
Alex
4.Life is like a“choose your own ending” book-you can take whatever adventures you want.
—Sally教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
(注意: 1. 先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸的横线上。)
★ 参考范文
Don't judge people by their looks
As an old saying goes, don’t judge a book by its cover. I didn’t recognize the true meaning of
it until last year. In my neighborhood came a man with a scary face. The first several times I came
across him, I always ran away quickly, with hands covering my eyes. Later, I knew from my
parents that he made a lot of effort to keep our neighborhood clean as a volunteer, which provides
a better living environment for us. Realizing the mistake I made, I went to say sorry to him. And I
really appreciated him for helping me learn that a person’s internal beauty is always the most
valuable part instead of his appearance.
【详解】
以下是几位同学在以貌取人、盲从朋友、看待谎言、抉择人生等方面的感悟。请从中选择
你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然
后围绕要点适当发挥，确定时态主要词汇等问题。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将
提示的内容利用上；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。另
外，在描述时，应该注意人称的变化。
【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。这篇短文层次非常的清晰，文中用到了一些好的句型：As we
all know, we can't judge people by their clothing . Because the clothes do not reflect what is inside
the human.；I think if you juge a person by his clothes you only can get his taste of clothes, but
taste of clothes not equal to the taste of life这些给文中增色不少。
中考作文押题 （四）
Writing (作文): (共20分)教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Success makes me ________.
(以”成功使我.....“为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，写作前先将题目补充完整, 标点
符号不占格。)
提示：在学习、生活中，每个人都会有一些成功事例，因此有了改变。请结合亲身经历，
谈谈你的感触。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
★ 参考范文
Success makes me grow up/confident
It is commonly believed that different people have different opinions about
success. As for me, success is to face the troubles bravely and diligently, which
makes me grow up and become more confident.
Two years ago, I was poor at Chinese and often failed to pass the exam.
Instead of losing heart, I began to have lessons at weekends so that I could review
what I learnt at school and enrich myself . In addition, I did more practice in my
free time and turned to my teachers for help whenever I met some questions in
Chinese. (I focused on( 专心于 ) what my math teacher said in class.) Little by little , I
made great progress and became more confident.
From the experience, I have learned that the harder I work, the better I will
be. As a saying goes, “ Failure is the mother of success. ” If I keep moving and
carry on , I will surely achieve success sooner or later .
中考作文押题 （五）
Writing (作文): (共20分)
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bought and aren’t happy with. In your letter. (根据所给情景和提示，写一篇60-100词投诉信)
1· explain why you’re writing the letter
2· give details of your order (订单)
3· describe the problem with the product(s).
4· say what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir and Madam.
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Looking forward to a positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
★ 参考范文
Dear manager,
I am writing a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the product
that I bought and aren’t happy with. I feel bad to trouble you, but I am afraid that I have to make a
complaint about.
I bought a pair of shoes of size 36. But it’s not like what the picture says. In addition, I find it
very uncomfortable to wear. l am grateful if you take back the pair of shoes. I hope you can settle
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Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，写作时应先介绍你写这封信的原因，然
后介绍你的订单和产品的问题，最后说出你希望经理做什么，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；介绍产品的问题
和希望经理做什么时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
中考作文押题 （六）
Writing (作文): (共20分)
请以“I want to be a/an______________”为题写一篇短文，描述你对未来职业的憧憬。
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 不少于80词。
提示：
1. What is your dream job?
2. Where are you going to work?
3. Why do you like this job?
4. How are you going to do that?
I want to be a/an_______________
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★ 参考范文
I want to be a teacher
I have a dream. I want to be a teacher at the primary school in a small village in China.
I think teachers are the most important people in children’s lives. They not only teach
students knowledge but also help them succeed in the future. It’s an interesting and educational
job. If I am a teacher, I’ll be kind and patient with my students and try my best to make my lessons
interesting. I’ll also help students with their study and be good friends with them.
To achieve my dream, I’ll work hard from now on and get good grades in my study. After I
finish my high school, I am going to study education at a university. Then I am going to learn how
to teach children and make myself a better person. I won’t give up my dream!
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求以“I want to be a/an ____”为题写一篇短文，描
述对未来职业的憧憬。写作时所提供问题的内容要写全。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时，叙述自己
梦想的职业及喜欢这种职业的理由时使用一般现在时，描述将要如何做时，应用一般将来
时。本文可以分三段来写，第一段说明自己将来要干什么职业及在哪儿工作；第二段叙述
喜欢这种职业的理由；第三段写将要如何做。叙述喜欢的理由时需要叙述完整，保证条理
清晰，语言通顺。写完后，注意检查，确保单词拼写、语法和标点正确。教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
中考作文押题 （七）
Writing (作文): (共20分)
Write at least 60 words on the given situation(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标
点符号不占格。)
Michael Morpurgo 认为当小学老师是他一生最快乐的时光之一。每个人的成长过程中都
会有一些快乐时光，或长或短。请以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，分享你的经历和
感受。
的
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生 姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分）2. 照抄阅读语
篇不得分。
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★ 参考范文
The happiest days of my life
In my opinion, being a student is the happiest days of my life. I remember when I was in教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
junior high school, I learned every subject well, but my favorite subject was English. Every time I
had an English class, the teacher always gives me the small task of distributing homework and test
papers. Every time I did these things, I felt very proud. Not only English teachers, but also other
teachers paid special attention to me because of my serious attitude.
I miss junior high school life very much now, and thank the teachers for their concern, which
makes me grow up in happiness.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“The happiest days of my life” 为题，写一篇短文，叙述一
下成长过程中的一些快乐时光，分享你的经历和感受。短文不得出现姓名、校名等个人信
息。
2.写作指导：文章要求叙述成长过程中的快乐时光，是对过去的叙述，所以时态上以一般
过去时为主，人称上以第一人称为主。对过去的叙述，注意动词过去式的变化。最后表达
一下自己的感受。
中考作文押题 （八）
Writing (作文): (共20分)
“青春需早为，岂能长少年。”世间有很多美好的东西，如生命、健康、时间、亲情、
友情……，需要我们珍惜。
某英文网站正在开展以“珍惜”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇
短文投稿，谈谈你最珍惜什么，为什么最珍惜它，以及你在日常生活中是怎么做的。
提示问题：
● What do you value most in your life? Why?
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There are many things we should value in our life.
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★ 参考范文
There are many things we should value in our life. I value time the most because it’s easy to
simply let it pass. It is like a secret friend whose company is sometimes unnoticed. And we can’t
make up for the lost time.
As soon as I realize that time is priceless, I begin to value every second in life. To begin with,
I make daily schedules and stick to them so that my time is well spent. Besides, I manage to spend
time on worthy things, such as studying or being with my family and friends. I believe this is how
time should be spent.
To live life to the fullest, let’s all learn to value time.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。作为李华，要求以“珍惜”为题，写一篇英语短文向
某英文网站投稿，谈谈你最珍惜什么，为什么最珍惜它，以及你在日常生活中是怎么做的；
注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导：本文采用第一、第三人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认
真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，
动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合
语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
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VII. Writing (作文): (共20分)
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “________ makes me
change.(以“.....使我成长”为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，写作前先将题目
补充完整, 标点符号不占格。)
提示：在学习、生活中，每个人可能都会遇到一些事例，激发自信，助己成长，
因此有了改变。请结合你的亲身经历，谈谈你的感触。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评
分。）
★ 参考范文
Success makes me change
It is commonly believed that different people have different opinions about
success. As for me, success is to face the troubles bravely and diligently,
which makes me grow up and become more confident.
Two years ago, I was poor at Chinese and often failed to pass the exam.
Instead of losing heart, I began to have lessons at weekends so that I could
review what I learnt at school and enrich myself. In addition, I did more
practice in my free time and turned to my teachers for help whenever I met
some questions in Chinese. (I focused on what my teacher said in class.) Little教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
by little, I made great progress and became more confident.
From the experience, I have learned that the harder I work, the better I
will be. As a saying goes, “Failure is the mother of success.” If I keep moving
and carry on, I will surely achieve success sooner or later.
中考作文押题 （十）
VII. Writing (作文): (共20分)
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The Most Impressive
________ in My Life.(以“生活中给我印象最深刻的是.....为题”写一篇不少于
60 个词的短文，写作前先将题目补充完整, 标点符号不占格。)
提示：在生活中，总有一些事或人让我们感动、留恋难忘。请结合你的亲身经
历，谈谈是什最能打动你的是什么？给你带来什么样的影响？
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评
分。）
★ 参考范文
The Most Impressive Woman in My Life
During my life there are many people who impressed me deeply.But my English
teacher Miss Zhao is the most impressive woman in my eyes.教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
Miss Zhao is a warm-hearted lady with a charming smile on her face.As a
teacher,she is ready to help those students in need.Besides,she is strict with us and
responsible for her work.There was story after story of how Miss Zhao,tired after a
day’s work,went late at night to grade our papers.Under her guidance, I became
interested in English.Without her help,I couldn’t have made rapid progress.
Such is Miss Zhao,an excellent teacher who makes a deep impression on me and
wins my respect.
中考作文押题 （十一）
Writing(作文):(共20分)
请以“ Something I did for my__________”为题，分享一件你给某个家人所做的
事并谈谈感想。
★ 参考范文1
Something I did for my mother
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beautiful lady in the world. But she is the greatest person in the world. She always
inadvertently gives help and care to me. No matter how an insensible person I am.
Today, when I realize this, I want to do something for her.
I want to take care of her to ensure that she would not feel cold in the bad
weather. I want give a call to greet her and tell her I am always missing her. And I will
study hard to repay her.
I know, my health and happiness is the best thing I could do for her, so I’ll try
my best.
★ 参考范文2
Something I did for my school
I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think
so.Our teacher said,"School is your home,you should keep it clean."But I have never
done anything to make school clean.
For example,I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on
the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so
that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday,I will go to school to make
school clean.Of course,I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean
every weekends next term as well.Now,do you think it is simple?
中考作文押题 （十二）
请你根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Peter写一封邮件，告诉他你认为做个文明中学
生什么是重要的，你通常是怎么做的，以及你的感受。
写作要求：1. 文中不能出现学校和个人真实姓名。2. 字数不少于80词。文章开头已给出，教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
不计入总词数。
提示词语：think, smile, respect, say hello to, wait in line, on time, happy
Dear Peter,
How is it going? At my school we’re talking about what we should do to be a good
student.
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Yours,
Wang Ping
★ 参考范文
Dear Peter,教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
How is it going? At my school we are talking about what we should do to be a good student.
To be a polite middle school student, I think we have to do a lot of things. First, it’s important
for us to speak politely. We must respect the others, be warm-hearted to everyone, and be generous
to our friends. Second, we can’t throw rubbish everywhere. We must throw them in the rubbish
bins. Littering is not a good habit. Every time I go to the park, I always pick up the litter and put it
into the bin. I think if we all do so, the world will be cleaner. Another important thing is that we
must follow the rules. There is no doubt that waiting in line is the important rule. I never rush into
the bus. Waiting may be a happy thing. I often feel happy when I do something that is better for
us. I think being a polite middle school student is proud.
Yours,
Wang Ping
【知识详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于电子邮件类书面表达，在写作时应承接短文开头，第二段主要说
明保护环境的举措，并且提出自己的感受。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来说明具体的举措；时态采用一般现在时为主，一般将
来时为辅；说明具体举措时，不仅要有层次，而且也应该有具体的事例。整篇文章应该保
证条理清晰，结构完整。
中考作文押题 （十三）
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “Life is full of beauty” (根据中文提示，以“生
活中充满了美”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
生活并不是缺少美，而是缺少一双发现美的眼睛。只要我们用心感受生活，就能发现
身边的美好，也许它只是一个平凡人，一件平常事，一个普通物品，也会给我们的生活增
添光彩。请根据自己的经历或者见闻，和同学们分享你在生活中发现的美及感受。教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
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Life is full of beauty
Life is full of beauty. I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long
time but didn’t see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that
time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help
her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she
told me that she passed it. I felt so happy.
Helping others is the beauty of life.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求结合自身经历或见闻以“Life is full of beauty”为题
写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时，以第一人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；
第二段描述自己的经历；第三段发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
无语法和标点错误。
中考作文押题 （十四）
上学期间，学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆，如教室、阅览室、操场等等。某
英文报纸正以 “My favorite place is _________at School” 为题征文，请你投稿。描述一
个你最喜欢的地方，并请说明原因。
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称）
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My favorite place is the reading room at school
My favorite place at school is the reading room. It is very big and bright. There are a lot of
useful books, newspapers and magazines there.
I like reading books and magazines there because they not only provide me with much
knowledge, but also help me learn a lot about what is happening around the world. Sometimes I
even feel I can have a talk with the people in the books.
I can also relax myself in the peaceful environment there. When I feel tired and unhappy, the
reading room is the best place to go to. Reading helps me forget all my troubles.
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中考作文押题 （十五）
为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请
你以“Go green at school”为题, 根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿, 号召全体同学行
动起来, 共建美好校园。
Purposes develop a green lifestyle
save resources
1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper
2. save ... : two examples
3. save ... : two examples
Actions
reduce pollution
1. take care of the trees and flowers
2. ...
Hopes ...
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥;
（3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）;
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
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Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle,
we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
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Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school? To develop a green lifestyle,
we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
On one hand, we should save resources. First, we should save paper. We can reuse the
textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, we should save water. We can take short
showers and reuse water. Third, we are supposed to save electricity. We can turn off the light when
we leave from the classroom. Also, we needn't turn on all the lights if enough. On the other hand,
we should reduce pollution. We can take care of the trees and flowers, choose the public transport
and use the cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should develop a green lifestyle, we can do more
exercise and watch less TV. If we take good care of our earth today, it will be more beautiful
tomorrow.
That’s all. Thank you!
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1、题干解读：要求写一篇演讲稿，轮廓已经给出，学生需要将内容填充进去，合理有据即
可。全文人称应以第一人称为主，时态应用一般现在时态。
2、例文点评：例文分为三段。第一段直接点题；第二段从两个部分说明了如何行动，分别
是节约资源和减少污染；第三部分礼貌结尾。内容详实完整，语言规范。
3、高分亮点：
短语：On one hand ... on the other hand 一方面……；另一方面……；both sides of...……的
两面；take showers洗澡；be supposed to do sth.应该做某事；turn off 关闭；turn on 打开；
take care of 照料；instead of 代替，而不是；do exercise 锻炼。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
中考作文押题 （十六）
假如你是李雷，今天你们班针对学校本周末开展的 “无作业日”活动进行了讨论。你
的外校好友张鹏对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他讨论的
情况，并说说你的计划及理由。
写作要点：
1.讨论主题：如何让 “无作业日”过得有意义。
2.同学们的周末计划：
（1）韩梅进行户外活动
（2）魏军参加志愿者活动
（3）我看喜欢的电影
3.谈一谈你喜欢看电影的理由。
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1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
2.适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少 80 词。
Dear Zhang Peng,
I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
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Dear Zhang Peng,
I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion today.
This weekend is Homework-free Day. My classmates had a discussion about how to make
the weekend meaningful. They have different plans.
Han Mei will do outdoor activities. She will take a trip and have a volleyball match. Wei Jun
will have a volunteer time in Children's Home, he thinks it is interesting. I like watching action
movies. Because I think it is relaxing and amazing. So I will go to the cinema.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目是一篇邮件作文。要求以李雷身份给张鹏写一封电子邮件，介绍一下自
己班就如何让 “无作业日”过得有意义展开讨论的情况，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一、三人称来写，时态以一般将来时为主。应包括所提供的信
息，把同学们的计划叙述完整，注意主谓一致问题，语句通顺。
中考作文押题 （十七）
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词
的短文， 标点符号不占格）
在我们的日常学习生活中，我们会遇到各种各样的问题。当你遇到问题的时候，你会
寻求谁的帮助?你一般会用怎样的方式解决遇到的问题? 请结合学习生活中遇到的真实问题，
以“My way of solving a problem” 写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文
（注意：1. 文章中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得
分。）
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My way of solving a problem
In our daily life, we may meet different kinds of problems. When I meet a problem, I always
ask my father for help.
When I was young, I argued with my mother. My father told me to keep calm first. Never say
some words to others when you are angry. Then think of a way to solve this problem. My father
gave me a meaningful lesson. So if I meet some problems now, I always remember the words that
my father told me.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“我解决问题的方式”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时。结合自己的经历，来介绍自己解决问题
的方法是什么，写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
中考作文押题 （十八）
我们生活的地球正面临着巨大的环境压力，因此，将环保行动渗透到日常生活是我们
每个人的责任。请你写出包含至少三条的“从我做起，从现在做起”的保护环境的做法。
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Air Pollution
The air is badly polluted around us.
There are some methods to solve the problem. First of all, we should ask the factories to
stop giving out black smoke into the air. Next, we’d better ride bikes or walk instead of driving to
school. What’s more, it's a good idea to plant more trees and flowers. I’m sure that our actions can
make a difference and lead to a better future.
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时围绕空气污染，写出至少三条“从我做起，
从现在做起”的保护环境的做法。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称为主来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，
力求语言准确，内容完整，保证条理清晰，行文连贯。
中考作文押题 （十九）
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Taking cell phones to school”.
Situation: Nowadays more and more students take their cell phones to school. Some of them
use cell phones as tools, but some use them as toys.
What's your opinion on taking cell phones to school? Is it necessary?
Please list at least two reasons to support your opinion.
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different ideas about the phenomenon. As for me, I think it unnecessary for students to take cell
phones to school.
Some parents may argue that they want to contact with their children in case there is any
emergency. However, I think calling to the head teacher also works. So, students’ keeping a cell
phone with them is not necessary. What’s more, students can be easily distracted by cell phones,
which is bad for their study.
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求以“Taking cell phones to school”为话题写一篇作文，
要求给出你的观点，你认为这是否有必要，至少写出两点原因。
例文点评：文章主要采用第三人称展开论述，时态以一般现在时为主；文章分为两段：第
一段点明问题并直接给出作者的观点，认为学生没必要带手机上学；第二段给出两个理由
支撑作者的观点，一个是联系孩子可以通过班主任，另一个是手机太容易令学生分心，对
学习不好。文章层次分明、逻辑清晰、语言精炼。
高分亮点：
短语：as for sb.；contact with； what’s more；be distracted by；be bad for。
句型：think it+adj.+for sb. to do sth.；that引导的宾语从句；in case引导的条件状语从句；
which引导的非限定性定语从句。
中考作文押题 （二十）
Ⅶ. Writing （作文） （共20分）
Write at least 60 words according to the given information（根据以下材料，写一篇不少于 60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Please complete the topic "The I will never forget" and write at least 60 words on your
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（请补全题目并以此为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格）．
提示：生活中总有一些令人难忘的东西，或是一个给你帮助的人；或是一个意义非凡的
日子或是一部令人深思的电影…请你搜索记忆的宝库，分享一段令人难忘的片段．
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
(注意: 1. 先将你选择的一条感悟抄写在答题纸的横线上。)
★ 参考范文
The English speech contest I will never forget
During my middle school study，I have taken part in many matches，but I never forget an
English speech contest．（最难忘的是一场英语演讲比赛）
When the teacher told us there was an English speech contest，I didn't think much of it．
【高分句型一】
Many excellent students were in our class．Besides me，several students put up their hands
to show their interest in the contest．Luckily，the English teacher asked me to take it．I was
worried about it very much．I was eager to get it，but I was afraid to fail．With the help of my
English teacher and more than a week's hard work，I won the first in our school．（经历）
After that I worked harder．I think I can succeed if I try my best to do it．【高分句型
二】Where there is a will，there is a way．Do you think so？（这种经历带给你什么启
示）
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Write at least 60 words about the topic “Everyone has a dream.” (以每个人都有梦”为题的写一
篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意:短文中不出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)
★ 参考范文
Everyone has a dream
Everyone has his own dream. Some want to be doctors. Others hope to be scientists. My dream is
to become a teacher. Teachers can not teach us many things at school, but they do their best to
teach us how to learn. Thanks to them, we learn knowledge. And at the same time, we learn how
to live a happy life. They spend most time on their students. They are great in my eyes. I hope to
be a teacher because I admire teachers. I know it is not easy to make my dream come true. But I
decide to study harder from now on. I am sure my dream will come true.
中考作文押题 （二十二）
Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever
Learned”. 写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。你的文章比须包括：
•这项技能是什么？你是通过什么方式学会的？
•举例说明为什么你觉得它最有用．
（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称）
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The Most Useful SkillI Have Ever Learned
In my view，the Most Useful SkillI Have Ever Learned is first aid．First aid is the
provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury．It is usually performed by a person to a
sick or injured patient until medical treatment can be accessed．I learn some first aid skills in an
activity held in our school．
I know the importance of the first aid due to an accident．One day，I saw an old woman
was hit by a car on the way to school，but the car sped away．I came up and found that elderly
people left leg injury，flow of blood．Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，I took out my
handkerchief，dressed wounds，and energetically hold the wound to stop blood flowing．When
the doctor in the ambulance come to the spot，he spoke highly of what I did，saying if I hadn't
done that，the old man would die because of blood flowing．So I think everybody should know
some first aid in order to save othe people's lives． ．
【分析】这是一篇介绍自己认为最有用的技能的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时
态以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主．内容包括：一介绍自己认为最有用的技能﹣﹣﹣
急救；二举例说明为什么急救最有用．
高分句型
1．It is usually performed by a person to a sick or injured patient until medical treatment can be
accessed．句子里状语从句until medical treatment can be accessed．表示"直到医疗救助能
够被得到"．
它通常是在医疗救助能够被得到之前，一个人对一个病人或者伤员做的救治．
2．Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，I took out my handkerchief，dressed wounds，
and energetically hold the wound to stop blood flowing 句子里现在分词短语 Remembering
some first﹣aid knowledge，做原因状语，表示"因为记的一些急救知识"； took out my
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表示"紧急摁住伤口"．
因为记的一些急救知识，我拿出手绢，盖住伤口，紧急摁住伤口，阻止血液流失．
【解答】The Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned
In my view，the Most Useful Skill I Have Ever Learned is first aid．First aid is the
provision of initial limited care for an illness or injury．It is usually performed by a person to a
sick or injured patient until medical treatment can be accessed．【高分句型一】I learn some
first aid skills in an activity held in our school．（介绍自己认为最有用的技能﹣﹣﹣急救）
I know the importance of the first aid due to an accident．One day，I saw an old
woman was hit by a car on the way to school，but the car sped away．I came up and found that
elderly people left leg injury，flow of blood．Remembering some first﹣aid knowledge，I
took out my handkerchief，dressed wounds，and energetically hold the wound to stop blood
flowing．【高分句型二】When the doctor in the ambulance come to the spot，he spoke highly
of what I did，saying if I hadn't done that，the old man would die because of blood flowing．So
I think everybody should know some first aid in order to save othe people's lives．（举例说明
为什么急救最有用）
中考作文押题 （二十三）
Writing
Write at least 60 words on the topic "_________ help(s) me grow"（以“_________
帮助我成长”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
成长路上，你曾经遇见过很多人，如一位师长、一个朋友等，你也曾经经
历过很多事，如一次比赛、一项活动等，这些人与事让你变为更好的自己，帮
助你成长。请选择其中某件事或某个人，结合发生在你自己身上的经历，来写
一写他（它）是如何助力你成长的。
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The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
encourage sb. to do ...
do sb. a favour
with the help of ...
make great progress
Mary helps me grow
★ 参考范文
Looking back on the past four years' study, there have been many difficulties for
me not only in study but also in life. There is an unforgettable experience.
It was the first time that I didn't pass an important exam. At that time, I was so
depressed that I could hardly control myself. After knowing that I was in bad mood,
my friend Mary spent all her free time companying me and never stopped
encouraging me. With her encouragement, I tried my best in study. Finally, I
succeeded in making progress, and I realized that how important a good friend was to
me.
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阳光中学为培养学生个性，拓展学生技能，开展了选修课。假如你是阳光中学九年级
学生李华，请你用英文向七年级新生写一篇推荐信，推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课。以下信
息为非限定性内容，仅供参考。
DIY Course Travelling Course …
·traditional Chinese arts:
paper-cutting, clay figurine(泥 ·watch videos to enjoy natural
塑)… beauty, such as…
Things to do …
·birthday presents… ·share travelling experiences
·share DIY stories
·What do you think of it?
Reasons to
recommend
·What can you learn from it? (at least 2 points)
注意事项：
1.推荐信须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意：
2.词数在80个左右，推荐信开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
3.推荐信中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息：
4.推荐信内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Dear schoolmates, I’m glad to hear that our school will offer you some optional
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear schoolmates,
I’m glad to hear that our school will offer you some optional courses. I want to recommend
the DIY Course to you.
You can make traditional Chinese arts in DIY courses, such as paper-cutting and clay
figurine. You can not only experience the process of creation, but also learn about our colorful
Chinese culture. You can also make unique birthday presents for your family members and friends
by yourselves. They will be surprised and keep the presents forever. You can share your DIY
stories with others. It is a good topic.
I like DIY Course very much and I recommend it to all of you. I learn about strong practical
ability and creation ability during the courses. I learn how to cooperate with others, too. I hope
you will have a good time in DIY Course.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求向七年级新生推荐一门你最喜欢的选修课。注意
要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，
第一段引出话题；第二段介绍可以在喜欢的选修课上做什么；第三段介绍自己对选修课的
看法以及自己学到了什么。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
中考作文押题 （二十五）
每个人的成长历程中都收到过来自家人、老师、同学和朋友们的建议，有的建议帮你教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
解决生活中的烦恼，有的建议帮助你度过了学习上的难关。好的建议会让我们受益匪浅。
新世纪英语报社以“The Best Advice”为题举办征文比赛，请你根据自己的亲身经历写一篇
短文参赛。
参考要点：
1．你遇到了什么问题？
2．你收到的最好的建议是什么？
3．这个建议让你……
要求：
1．词数80词左右；
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
The Best Advice
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例文
The Best Advice
When I was a child, I always lacked confidence in myself, but one thing changed me
completely.
On day, my father led me to the foot of a mountain. Seeing the steep peak and winding paths,教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
said fearfully, “I’m afraid I can’t make it.” Then my father encouraged me gently. “Never will you
see the scenery until you reach the top. Never will you know what you can do until you try.” With
his encouragement, I decided to make an attempt to climb. Step by step, I followed my father and
reached the top successfully.
You can’t imagine how excited I was when I did what I had thought was impossible. Eve
since then, I have realized that I can achieve my goals as long as I believe in myself and make a
resolution.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“最好的建议”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式；第一段引出主题；第二段
结合自己的经历讲述遇到了什么问题，得到的建议是什么；最后一段表达这个建议让自己
收获到了什么。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。教育资源分享店铺 网址：https://shop175591889.taobao.com 微信号：kingcsa333
