人和动物类故事
写作导图
一、情节构建方法论
1. 救助与回报模式
▌典型情节：施救行为→建立信任→情感升华→命运重逢
▶例句1: Wrapping the injured owl in his jacket, Ethan gently secured its trembling wings. (伊桑用夹克
裹住受伤的猫头鹰，轻轻固定它颤抖的翅膀)
[翻译] 动词链wrapping→securing构成完整救助动作，trembling wings暗示动物脆弱性
▶例句2: The golden retriever nudged the boy's limp body toward the riverbank with its muzzle. (金毛犬
用鼻尖将男孩瘫软的身体推向河岸)
[翻译] 动物救助场景中nudged→pushing构成连续动作链，limp body营造危机感
▶例句 3: Years later, the wolf I'd bandaged emerged from the mist, leading her pack away from our
campsite. (数年后，我曾包扎的狼从迷雾中出现，带领狼群远离我们的营地)
[翻译] 时空跨度搭建命运闭环，leading体现动物智慧与报恩
▶例句4: The fox cub's daily visits evolved from stealing chicken eggs to accepting hand-fed berries. (幼
狐从偷鸡蛋到接受亲手喂莓果的每日造访)[翻译] evolve from...to...展示关系递进，stealing→accepting形成行为对比
2. 共生日常描写
▌情感构建：细节积累→信任考验→情感认同→生命共情
▶例句 1: Each dawn, the wounded sparrow would tap its beak against my windowpane, a feathery
metronome. (每个黎明，受伤的麻雀都会用喙轻叩窗玻璃，像羽毛节拍器)
[翻译] 比喻手法将日常行为诗意化，tap...metronome形成听觉意象
▶例句2: The stray cat's matted fur gradually regained luster under Grandma's meticulous combing. (流
浪猫打结的毛发在奶奶精心梳理下重焕光泽)
[翻译] matted→regained构成视觉转变链，meticulous combing暗示持久关怀
▶例句 3: Our golden retriever would "accidentally" knock over the cookie jar whenever Mom baked
oatmeal cookies. (每当妈妈烤燕麦饼干，金毛总会"意外"撞翻饼干罐)
[翻译] 拟人化双引号制造幽默感，展示宠物性格特征
▶例句4: The hedgehog family's autumn nest-building ritual became our favorite backyard theater. (刺猬
家族的筑巢仪式成为我们最爱的后院剧场)
[翻译] ritual→theater比喻赋予动物行为仪式感，our体现情感共鸣
二、主题深化技巧
1． 生命对话描写
▌互动范式：语言障碍→行为沟通→情感互通→生命平等
▶例句1: When the injured dolphin pressed its forehead against mine, saltwater mingled with my tears.
(受伤海豚将额头抵住我的时，海水与泪水交融)
[翻译] forehead against mine建立跨物种亲密接触，mingled象征情感融合
▶例句2: The old shepherd's whistle echoed through the valley, answered by a chorus of bleating lambs.
(老牧羊人的口哨回荡山谷，应和着此起彼伏的羔羊叫声)[翻译] echoed→answered构成声音对话，chorus拟人化动物回应
▶例句3: My fingers traced the raised scars on the horse's flank—silent testaments to its survival story.
(指尖抚过马匹侧腹的凸起伤疤，这些无声的生存见证)
[翻译] 触觉描写连接生命记忆，silent testaments深化主题
▶例句4: In the tiger's amber eyes, I saw not ferocity but the same parental anxiety mirroring my own.
(在老虎琥珀色眼眸中，我看到的不是凶猛，而是与自己相同的父母焦虑)
[翻译] 眼神描写突破物种隔阂，mirroring实现情感映照
三、情感升华策略
1． 永恒承诺表达
▌情感锚点：物质记忆→精神传承→生命延续→永恒羁绊
▶例句 1: The dog's weathered collar now hangs on my study wall, its jingling tags still composing
phantom melodies. (狗狗磨损的项圈挂在书房，叮当铭牌仍奏响幻影旋律)
[翻译] 物品寄托思念，phantom melodies引发通感记忆
▶例句2: Every spring, butterflies emerge from the chrysalises we nurtured, carrying our shared summer
into the sky. (每年春天，我们培育的蝶蛹破茧，携着共度的夏日飞向天空)
[翻译] 生命循环意象，carrying...into实现情感转化
▶例句3: My daughter now feeds the same oak tree squirrels I befriended two decades ago. (女儿如今喂
养着二十年前我结识的橡树松鼠)
[翻译] 时间维度拓展情感，same强调生命传承
▶例句4: The wolf's howl at dawn wasn't a wilderness cry, but a familiar lullaby from my childhood. (黎
明的狼嚎不再是荒野之音，而是儿时熟悉的摇篮曲)
[翻译] 听觉记忆转化，not...but...重构认知四、创新视角示范
创新维度：时空错位→物种置换→情感反转→认知颠覆
▶例句1: From my perch in the maple tree, I watched the human child clumsily rebuild my toppled nest.
(栖身枫树，我望着人类孩子笨拙地重建我倾覆的鸟巢)
[翻译] 动物视角叙述，perch建立观察角度，clumsily制造反差萌
▶例句2: The fire hydrant's red paint was fading, just like the old man's memories of our morning walks.
(消防栓的红漆在褪色，如同老人对我们晨间散步的记忆)
[翻译] 物品见证岁月，like连接物质与精神消逝
▶例句3: My paw prints in the wet concrete outlived the construction crew's angry shouts. (水泥地上的
爪印比工人们的怒骂更持久)
[翻译] 动物视角下的时间感知，outlived形成幽默对比
▶例句4: The vet's trembling hands betrayed her professional calm when treating the abused pitbull. (兽
医颤抖的双手泄露了她的专业镇定，当治疗受虐比特犬时)
[翻译] 细节描写人性，betrayed制造情感张力
高考真题演练
2024年1月九省联考（聪明的海豚）
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure
the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one
day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When
Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event,
Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear（水下呼吸器）and jumped into
the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to
see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. Shewatched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn't surprised when she surfaced empty-
handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam
to the back part of the tank where the filter （过滤） box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box
and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there? Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and
swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank
following Maya's path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned
around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb（梳子） in her mouth
waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that?” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know
where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery,
resting place. “What's all this?” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph1：“This is Maya's secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
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Paragraph2：Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
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2023 年 2 月四省联考（收养小松鼠）
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover
their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to thedoorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait – and
looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother – we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and
Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded
that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for
milk and supplies was in order.
More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him,
and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to
eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would
chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long
before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then
run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1：One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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Paragraph 2：One night, Squirt didn't come back to our house and it rained hard.
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2023 年 1 月浙江卷（蜂鸟报恩）
I was invited to a cookout on an old friend’s farm in western Washington. I parked my car outside the farm
and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years. A noise at a window caught
my attention, so I entered it. It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape. She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings. She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
With the bird in my cupped hand, I looked around to see how she had gotten in. The broken window glass was
the likely answer. I stuffed a piece of cloth into the hole and took her outside, closing the door securely behind me.
When I opened my hand, the bird did not fly away; she sat looking at me with her bright eyes. I removed the
sticky spider-webs that covered her head and wings. Still, she made no attempt to fly. Perhaps she had been
struggling against the window too long and was too tired? Or too thirsty?
As I carried her up the blackberry-lined path toward my car where I kept a water bottle, she began to move. I
stopped, and she soon took wing but did not immediately fly away.
Hovering (悬停), she approached within six inches of my face. For a very long moment, this tiny creature
looked into my eyes, turning her head from side to side. Then she flew quickly out of sight.
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During the cookout I told my hosts about the hummingbird incident. They promised to fix the window. As I
was departing, my friends walked me to my car. I was standing by the car when a hummingbird flew to the center
of our group and began hovering. She turned from person to person until she came to me. She again looked directly
into my eyes, then let out a squeaking call and was gone. For a moment, all were speechless. Then someone said,
“She must have come to say goodbye.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
A few weeks later, I went to the farm again.
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I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared.
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A few weeks later, I went to the farm again. As my car neared it ,my thoughts drifted back to the moment
when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort
that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it
was getting on now. Had it managed to find its way back home, or was it still out there somewhere struggling to
survive?
I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention. I turned
around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air. It seemed that the bird was waiting for me, its beady eyeslocked on mine as if trying to convey some deep, unspoken gratitude. I felt a surge of relief and awe at the sight of
this sound and grateful creature, and I knew that I would always cherish the memories we shared as I climbed into
my car and drove away.
模拟演练
01
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was
dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those
of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I
looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer
in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in
between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily
looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of
the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise
then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other
routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I
noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of
kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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When I returned to the house, the workers were laughing and talking happily.
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02
“Sun, sun, sun, here it comes…”
Danny sang while his fingers pressed and pulled skillfully at the guitar strings, delivering a slow and
peaceful tune. A circle of audience had formed, nodding and moving slowly to the song.
Lying at the feet of the street performer was his most adoring fan: One-Eyed, a white stray (流浪) dog with
pieces of brown. Danny felt the name was suitable considering its physical disability. Usually, One-Eyed would
bark loudly as Danny performed. Much to his annoyance, people often mistook the pair as owner and pet. At
this time, Danny would reply, “My dog? No!”, eyes rolling at the idea. How he wished the dog would leave him
alone instead!
On a snowy night, while Danny was performing, a bird flew downward, landing into the midst of the
crowd. It cooed happily as if to harmonize with Danny. Unfortunately, that did not sit well with One-Eyed,
which immediately bounced at it and the bird flew away desperately.
The unexpected chaos upturned Danny's hat, which could have been filled with notes and coins from his
appreciative audience, leaving it ignored on the ground. "Argh! The hateful dog!” Danny broke down, thinking
to himself, “Either the dog goes or I go!”
On the next night, Danny tried to find a new place and chanced upon the park. For a while his earnings
were good unsurprisingly as there was a steady flow of visitors. However, that didn't last long. One-Eyed came
along and appointed itself as Danny's guardian. "Argh! Here comes the hateful dog again!" That night, Danny
hadn't made enough money he should have, all thanks to the troublesome dog.
Danny was almost mad with One-Eyed. “What should I do? Call an animal shelter?” Torn by this problem,
he walked aimlessly by the lake of the park. With all his mind focused on how to get rid of the dog, Danny
didn't watch his steps. Suddenly, he slipped and fell into the lake accidentally. Struggling in the icy water, he
cried for help desperately, almost choking to death. Sensing the approach of death, Danny got into
overwhelming panic.注意：
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2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just then, a familiar barking was heard in the distance.
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“My hero! Thank you for saving me,” Danny said gratefully with watery eyes.
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03
It was one of the hottest days of the dry season. We had not seen rain in almost a month. The crops were
dying. Cows had stopped giving milk. The streams were long gone back into the earth. If we didn’t see any rain
soon we would lose everything. It was on that day that I learned the true lesson of sharing and witnessed the
only miracle I have seen in my life.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for my husband and his brothers when I saw my six-year old son, Billy,
walking toward the woods. I could only see his back. He wasn’t walking in his usual way. He was obviously
walking with a great effort, trying to be as still as possible. Minutes after he disappeared into the woods, he
came running out again, toward the house. I went back to making sandwiches, thinking that whatever he had
been doing was completed. Moments later, however, he was once again walking in that unusual way toward the
woods. This activity went on for over an hour: walking cautiously to the woods, then running back to the house.
Finally, my curiosity got the best of me. I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he
carried. I followed him secretly as he went into the woods. Branches and thorns(刺) slapped his little face but
he did not try to avoid them. He might have a much greater purpose, I thought. As I leaned in to spy on him, I
saw the most amazing sight. Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him. But Billy walked right up
to them, at the sight of which I almost screamed for him to get away. A huge buck(雄鹿) was dangerously
close. But the buck didn’t threaten him nor even move as Billy knelt down. And then I saw a baby deer lying on
the ground, obviously suffering from thirst and heat, lift its head with great effort to lap (舔)up the watercupped in my beautiful boy’s hands.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在相应的位置作答。
When the water was gone, Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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Instead of scolding him like his father, I decided to help him.
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04
Brady was a recently retired search and rescue dog. He was not happy and missed his owner Al because
Al had gone out on a rescue mission without him. Al’s nephew Steve took Brady along when he and his friend
Zach went on a overnight hike. But suddenly Steve and Zach smelled something burning and they realized that
lightning had set the woods on fire. Wind-blown flame had leaped from the top of one tree to another. The long
dry summer had turned the forest into a tinderbox(火绒箱) and the thunderstorm wasn’t helping much. It had
more wind and lightning than rain. Zach pulled Steve’s arm. “Let’s go! We can make it back to the river we
crossed today.” Steve pulled Brady’s leash（皮带） and their heads down against the strong fire-wind, they
hurried down the path they had followed earlier. The air was full of smoke，and pine branches broke from
burning trees with a crisp sound. Steve kept his eyes on the route. All they had to do was to make it down to the
river…
Brady barked a sharp warning. Ahead of them lay a dense curtain of smoke across the path. They’d never
make it through that. They would have to find another escape route. The dog was pulling at his leash trying to
draw them away from the smoke. This was what Brady was trained to do, and yet Steve was uneasy. It seemed
to him they were moving away from the river.
Brady lifted his head and smelled the smoky wind. Suddenly, the dog ran away and disappeared. The boys
yelled and shouted for him，but he didn’t come back.
They had no choice but to leave him behind. Heartsick, Steve and Zach went up aslope（斜坡）. He
couldn’t blame Brady for panicking and escaping. He himself wanted to run even though he didn’t have a cluewhich way. They hadn’t gone far when there was a familiar bark, and Brady came running toward him.
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“Where’ve you been?” Steve cried.
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Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees.
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05
In 2000, when I was around seven years old, all my family were coming back from a T-ball game, which
was our usual weekend adventure, but unlike every other weekend, a surprise was waiting for us in our
driveway — two adult geese and a small goose. Obviously startled by our return, the adults flew away in panic,
with their baby, too young to fly, left in place, tiny and delicate.
Hours passed one after another, and night eventually fell. However, with it also came a deep chill and a
fear of watchful animals. It was apparent that the gosling needed protection, warmth, and food to make it to the
morning, so we had to help it, and we brought him onto our back yard.
We all pretty much slept with one eye open till morning came. And then another morning. And still
another. Each morning, we would try to drive the goose away to his parents, who kept coming back to our yard.
He wouldn’t go to them, though, and neither would they come close enough to claim him. We kept this up for
five days, but no luck. Realizing the young goose had clearly decided we were his family by then, we had to
give him a name, calling the little guy Peeper, because he would often follow us around the yard making a
peeping (唧唧叫) noise, nonstop. Besides, we decided that Peeper was a boy. I don’t know why; it just felt
right.
A year passed and we settled into a routine. Peeper slept on our back yard each night and, in typical goose
fashion, used it as a public toilet. My dad would spray off all the goose droppings daily. Part of this ceremony
included Dad throwing Peeper up into the air so he could flap its wings and flew around the house, and then
came back again once the porch was clean.Days turned into weeks, and weeks turned into months.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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Before we knew it, the little thing had grown into a big bird with two powerful wings.
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It came as a total surprise to me when, in 2019, an adult goose made his way back to my family home.
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06
A Midnight Rescue
It was not uncommon to carry out tasks at night as rescuers. Harry and David were informed of their task
when it was nearly midnight. It was urgent so there was no time to hesitate. They headed into the forest.
The forest was black and silent. A little way into it they reached a fork in the earth path. Harry and David
took the left path. They walked in silence, their eyes on the ground, watching out for the traps like big pits
（坑）set by the illegal hunters. Every now and then a ray of moonlight through the branches above lit a spot
of scarlet（猩红的）blood on the fallen leaves.
David saw that Harry looked very worried, asking, "Could Unicorn be hurt that badly?" Harry answered,
"If we can't find it as soon as possible, it doesn't stand much chance to survive." Of course, Unicorn was not the
animal in fairy tales but the nickname of a 3-year-old elephant, the last wild elephant in this forest. The
nickname was given by the biodiversity rescuers who were protecting every member in this forest. They knew
Unicorn was obedient and not afraid of human beings and that sometimes put it in danger. "Without it, the
forest was not complete. Those illegal hunters should be thrown into prison." Harry thought, carrying his first
aid kit（急救箱）on his back and walking forward with his flashlight.
It seemed that thick fog would come at any time, which would increase the danger. Harry hurried into theheart of the forest with David. They walked for nearly half an hour, deeper and deeper. There were blood
splashes（血迹）on the roots of a tree, as though the poor creature had been struggling around in pain close by.
"We must hurry up", said Harry.
注意：
1． 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
However, it was really not easy for them to find it.
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Without delay, Harry knelt down to do first aid on its wound with David holding the flashlight.
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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Have you noticed how some lucky people just aren’t the worrying type? Take my friend Olline, for
example. Living on the same block, we’ve known each other since we were babies, and I’ve seen him act
worried maybe five times total. I, on the other hand, am pretty much the exact opposite.
I could find something to worry about every day.
At my karate(空手道) school, there’s a group of kids that gives karate lessons to younger kids, and I
recently tried out to be one of the teachers.
Surprisingly, I wasn’t that nervous for the tryouts(选拔). But when I didn’t get the call saying if I was in or
out, I started feeling more and more nervous. Before long, my nervousness turned into worrying, and when it
came to thinking about anything else or getting anything done, I was useless! So after lunch yesterday, when
my little brother Tex asked me to play basketball with him, I could only say, “I can’t. I’m busy!” “Busy with
what?” my little sister, Indi, asked. “Busy waiting for the phone to ring!” I grumbled.
“You’re reminding me of that old saying,” said our mom. “A watched pot never boils!” “The more you
focus on the thing you’re waiting for, the longer it seems to take,” she explained when seeing my brother’s
puzzling eyes.Just then, the phone rang, and I raced to grab it. “Hello?” “Hey,” said Ollie. “Oh, it’s just you,”
I said. “Wow, you sure know how to make a friend feel special!” said Ollie. “I’m sorry. It’s just that I’ve
been waiting for a call telling me if I made it into this karate group, and it’s stressing me out.” “I get it,” said
Ollie. “I remember being so stressed waiting to find out if I’d made it onto the select soccer team last year. The
best cure was distracting(使分心) myself.”
I was surprised. “It thought you never worried.” “I’m pretty sure that’s part of being human,” said Ollie.
“And I’m also pretty sure I have just the thing to distract you. Want me to bring it over?” he asked.
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“Hmm,” I said suspiciously. “What exactly is this thing?”
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By the end of the day, we were all worn out and Daisy the dog even fell sound asleep, when suddenly my
mom called from the kitchen, “Zona! Telephone.”
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On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to
Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac
to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled (骑行) along alone, he thought fondly of
his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.
Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, that's a big dog!” he thought. But when he
looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasn’t a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.
Mac’s heart jumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at
the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a
minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, tearing open his tent bag. He
fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）。
Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to show down. Hesaw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, he’d be easy caught up and the wolf’s
teeth would be tearing into his flesh.
At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn’t think much of
it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too,
assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf.
Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen
yards away now.
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The car abruptly stopped in front of him.
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“Misssy,” I cried to my wife. “Did you put his banana skin on my desk?” “No, honey, Meghan probably
did.” As I’d feared, she had missed the real purpose of my question, which was to make it clear to her that she
hadn’t done her job of defending my desk against the invader-our naughty girl. I abandoned the conversation.
I sat at my desk and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me as I tried to think up
exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a party somewhere, but I was
not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old angel, kept me company. Yet her plans seemed to go against mine.
She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks:
watching the fish, sweeping the floor in her room, climbing up and down on her bed.At first I was able to concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked. I had not counted
on the arrival of the “bib-bibs”---“bib-bibs” were birds. “Bib-bibs!” Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive
with expectation. She insisted that I came with her to the window.
“In a minute. Just let me finish this question.” I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually)
toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the “bib-bids”. They chattered and leaped back
and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still
thought about my work. With her attention off me, I left the window and went back to my desk.
Five minutes later, she returned. She reached up to my keyboard and pressed a bunch of keys, adding a
long line of scrabbled letters to my question. I struggled to bring my annoyance under control. “No, thank you,
Meghan. Daddy’s seen your work. I will do it myself.” She backed off.
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A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.
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I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.
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Every year, Tia Vargas and her dad go hiking: this summer’s trip was up Table Rock in the Grand Tetons in
early July. Vargas was just below the 11, 000-foot peak with her dad waiting about a mile down the trail (路线)
when she ran into a family of hikers who had found an injured English springer spaniel (斯宾格猎犬).
They couldn’t find the limping (跛的) pup’s owner and, because the family were hiking with kids, Vargas
figured it would be easier for her to carry the pup to safety.
“I had to crawl under him to get him up on my shoulders,” Vargas, a single mother of three from Idaho
Falls, Idaho, tells MNN. “I felt the difficulty of it right away. I never felt 55 pounds like that before.” Vargas
soon ran into her dad, Ted Kasper, who snapped some photos when he saw his daughter coming down the trail
with a dog on her shoulders. “Dad laughed and said. ‘Isn’t this hike hard enough? You have to carry a dog
too?’” Vargas recalls. “My dad makes me laugh. He is such a great man.”That sense of humor helped Vargas get through the hard journey of carrying the heavy dog down the steep
trail, she says. The trip was hard and nearly unbearable at times. “Every time I put him down to rest, it was
difficult. And every time I got down on my knees to put my head under his belly and try to use neck and body
strength to lift him it was painful and difficult. I thought we would see people on the trail on the way down to
help. But that wasn’t the case.” she says.
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The group of three got lost once because of the fallen trees that made the trail disappear.
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Finally hiking six miles and reaching the bottom of the trail, Vargas found a very small note that said,
“Lost dog named Boomer, call this number.”
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Michael sat on the wooden bench outside the house holding a fourleaf clover. Michael had believed that
fourleaf clovers brought good luck, but he started doubting that kind of power.
Michael was eleven. It had been two months since his mum and dad died in an accident. A widow by the
name of Jill adopted him. Michael had a dislike for Jill. Her voice was loud. She also made him do her chores.
Michael felt not as much as a son to her. He dreamed a lot. He spoke little. He cried secretly. He had even been
working on a plan for two weeks to flee the house.
That was, until he heard Jill parking her Honda into the garage.
Michael stuffed the fourleaf clover in his left pocket. Before he realised it, Jill was standing in front of
him, with a small beagle in her hand. She put the beagle down. It ran to Michael and sat on his Nike tennis
shoes. Michael knelt down to pet it. After a while, he looked up，“Is the dog for me？”
Jill laughed，“Of course! You are the slowest little boy ever! I've got you a little puppy to make you
work faster.”
Michael couldn't see how a beagle would help with his chores, but he thought it would be nice to have afriend. “Give him a name,” Jill said.
Michael thought for a moment. He saw a big, black spot on his back. That's it! Spot！“I'll name him
Spot！” Michael announced.
“Spot, Spot, stupid name but it'll do. Now, you'd better clean the bathroom and finish your homework
before dinner's ready.”
“Yes, ma'am.”
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Michael ran to the bathroom, with Spot by his side.
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Two weeks passed, and everyone could see something changed in Michael.
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One day when I was 12, my mother gave me an order: I was to walk to the public library, and borrow at
least one book for the summer. This was one more way for her to solve my strange problem—inability (没能
力)to read.
In the library, I found my way into the “Children’s Room”. I pulled a few books off the shelf and sat down
on the floor. The cover of a book caught my eye. It presented a picture of dog. I had recently had a dog, the first
and only animal companion I ever had as a child. He was the one I could share secrets with, but later he was
given away to someone who had space and money to care for him. I never forgot my dog.
On the book’s cover, there was a dog which looked the same as mine. I figured the picture of the dog on
the cover. My eyes ran across the little, Amos, the Dog with a Plan. Without opening the book, I borrowed it
from the library for the summer.Under the shade of a bush, I started to read about Amos. I read very, very slowly with difficulty and got the
main ides of the story about a dog who, like mine, had been separated from his family and who finally found
his way back home. At the end of the story, my mind continued the final scene of reunion. When I finished my
reading, a stream of tears ran down my cheeks. It was until then that I realized I had begun to overcome my
inability to read. Thus, this was the very first book for me which I had read through and deeply immersed
myself in the real scene.
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My mother’s call brought me back to the real world and I suddenly realized something.
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Last year, my mother was so proud that her son was awarded a PhD in literature.
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The Biggest Dog on the Mountain
We liked hiking together. Today, we were looking for a trail over Wallace Mountain.
”It’s been over an hour,” said Jessc, my nineteen-year-old son. “Do you think the trail still exists?” We had
explored several paths but with no luck. We pushed through weeds mid-calf high for us, but neck-high for our
rusty-brown dog, Shadow. Once in a while, we would call Shadow back when she was attracted by the pleasant
smell of flowers. No longer slim and bouncing with energy, Shadow was the size of a large house cat, and
always content to curl up on the couch beside one of us.
Suddenly, we heard what sounded like many dogs barking in the distance, an unusual sound in the
wilderness around us. Curious, we climbed the ridge (山脉), only to find what seemed like a dog factory. Small
dogs, big dogs, brown dogs, and dogs I can’t even describe poured out. The hounds (猎狗) hit the ground,
sniffing the air and turning to face us. Before long, they went down from their side of the mountain. Jesse shotan alarmed glance at me before turning to call in a firm voice, “Shadow, come here, stay.”
I patted my pockets, feeling for the pepper spray (防狼喷雾), so small it would never work against so
many animals. I turned, surveying the nearby brush for a potential weapon. With the help of adrenaline (肾上腺
素), I broke off two thick branches from a tree and rushed to Jesse’s side, “Here you are!” “OK,” he said, “Dad,
they are coming to us.” My-mouth went dry. I glanced over at Jesse, his lips pinched (夹紧) tight.
The pack emerged from the valley, marching straight toward us. The dogs in the lead were now close
enough for us to see that most of them were three times larger than Shadow. With deep growls (怒吼声)，they
ran straight for us. Jesse swallowed hard and looked at me.
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Shadow’s back fur rose.
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Surprisingly, the entire mass of dogs turned tail and fled.
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My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before driving her to
college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on the ground and giving his puppya cone.
“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man replied. Donald asked him
what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving away from Vermont and did not think the travel
would be good for the dog. He had raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross
between the Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as they say,
is history.
Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone came to the house,
she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died
about a year later, but, fortunately, Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had
been alone. But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would sometimes get
excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows open and the doors
unlocked. At about 3 a.m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarb barking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the kitchen was open.
Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also open. We quickly locked all the doors,
and we did not get any sleep that night. It was deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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It seemed like it had only been a few years ago that Indigo had first rushed through our door. Herunderbelly showed the signs of the litter she’d recently delivered. She had a nose for trouble. On one occasion, I
had come home to find that she’d eaten a five-pound bag of flour. She was covered in white powder, and flour
paw prints were everywhere, including, incredibly, on the countertops(台板). I asked the dog what the hell had
happened, and Indigo just looked at me with a glance that said, I cannot imagine what you are referring to.
Time raced by. Our children grew up and went off to university. The mirror, which had reflected a young
mum when Indigo first arrived, now showed a woman in late middle age. I had surgery for cataracts(白内障). I
began to lose my hearing. We all turned grey: me, my spouse(配偶), the dog.
In August 2017, I took Indigo for one last walk. She was slow and unsteady on her paws. She looked up at
me sadly. You did say you’d take care of me when the time came, she said. You promised, Jenny. She died that
month, a tennis ball by her side. I’d owned a succession of dogs since 1964, each one of them a witness to a
particular stage of my life. But with the loss of Indigo, all that was over. The days of my dogs, I now
understood, were done at last.
But one morning, as I was passing the Bed ’n’ Biscuit in my car, somehow I pulled over. I could at least
lay eyes upon one cute dog, a tiny sweet thing. What harm could it do? She had a soft face.
Not long after, I got a call from the Bed ’n’ Biscuit, our dog daycare(日托所). One of their customers was
leaving, and her dog which was the one I saw that morning, Chloe, needed a home. Given our recent loss, they
asked, might our family be interested in adopting her?
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When Chloe entered our house, she was cautious, uncertain.
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It was a hot and wet day in late summer. I was a young dad working in a local wood factory. It was
dangerous, back-breaking work that paid very little.
In the year I had worked there, only four other people hadn’t quit and been replaced with new faces. Those
of us who stayed did so only because there was no other work to find to support our families.
One day the electric fans weren’t working and all of us were covered in sweat and sawdust . When I
looked around every face, they looked angry and frustrated. Suddenly, a voice called out: “Hey! There’s a deer
in here. A lost little deer had wandered through the open loading bay doors and was now hiding in fear in
between the huge piles of wood. All of us stopped working and went looking for her as she ran about crazily
looking for a way out.
Now most people where I live hunt deer for meat in the fall but treat them with great kindness the rest of
the year. Many will even buy bags of corn to help feed them during the cold winter months. It was no surprise
then that all of us were soon quickly working together to free this little deer. By blocking off all the other
routes, we were able to guide her crazy search back to the open bay doors.
We watched as she jumped out of the building and back into the woods. Then we walked back in to work. I
noticed something, though. On every face, there was a joyful smile. It seemed as if this one single act of
kindness had energized us again and reminded us of what life was all about.
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I went out of the house and looked into the woods again.
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