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热考话题5 遇险救援
情节构思
情节构思
佳段赏析
交通事故
I heard a roaring sound of my car hitting the tree. The white airbag immediately
burst open and hit me violently. My body flew back to the seat like a rag doll. Mike
was thrown forward, while the seat belt which he was thankfully wearing pulled him
back. The front of my car and the car windows were broken, and the passenger door
was destroyed. I was overwhelmed by the feeling of guilt. 我听到汽车撞到树上的
轰鸣声，白色的安全气囊立刻弹了出来，猛烈地撞击我，我的身体像布娃娃一
样被弹回座位上。迈克被甩向前，幸好他系了安全带，安全带把他拉了回来。
我的车头和车窗都坏了，乘客门也被毁了。我被内疚感淹没了。
Through this accident, I came to realize the value of our life and the importance
of obeying traffic rules. After all, nothing is more precious than life. 通过这次事
故，我认识到了我们生命的重要性和遵守交通规则的重要性。毕竟，没有什么
比生命更珍贵了。
火势蔓延
Simpson noticed the flame was growing. Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the
spot. By then, he was coughing and his eyes were stinging. Time seemed to stand still,
though he was probably there for only two or three minutes. Simpson注意到火势越
来越大。他吓呆了，站在原地一动不动。到那时，他已经开始咳嗽，眼睛刺
痛。时间似乎静止了，尽管他可能只在那里停留了两三分钟。
水中救人To my sadness, I found that a small child had fallen into the hole on the road. The
boards had been washed away by the rushing water. I could hardly see the child as it
was dark all around me. Then I stretched out a hand to seize the child's hand, pulling
him out completely. 令我伤心的是，我发现一个小孩掉进了路上的洞里。木板被
湍急的水流冲走了。我几乎看不见那个孩子，因为我周围一片漆黑。然后我伸
出一只手抓住孩子的手，把他完全拉了出来。
雪中自救
With great efforts, he fought his way out in the snow for hours but couldn't find
anyone. He had no choice but to follow his tracks and return to his snow cave,
because without shelter, he could die during the night. On the third day, he again went
out in search of help. He had walked for about two miles when a volunteer rescuer
spotted him. After being stuck in the snow for two days, he was saved eventually.他
费了很大的力气，在雪地里奋力前行了几个小时，却找不到任何人。他别无选
择，只能沿着自己的足迹回到雪洞，因为没有住所，他可能会在夜里死去。第
三天，他再次外出寻求帮助。当一名志愿救援人员发现他时，他已经走了大约
两英里。在雪中被困了两天后，他终于得救了。
佳作欣赏
[2023湖北黄冈期中]It was a bright spring afternoon along the coast, and
Jonathan Bauer, 51, and his 13-year-old daughter, Ava, were taking full advantage of
it. They were driving with the windows down as they headed home on the 1.4-mile-
long, two-lane Route 90 bridge, which crosses the shallow waters of the bay.
Suddenly, the calm was disturbed by the loud noise of tires.
Not far ahead of them, a black pickup truck was skidding（打滑） from one
lane to the other. To Bauer's horror, it crashed into a concrete barrier, spun like a top
（陀螺）, flipped over the SUV directly ahead of them, and came to rest hanging
over the railing（栏杆） of the bridge. Bauer slammed on the brakes in time to avoid
the vehicles in his path, but a BMW that had hit into the guardrail（护栏） on the
right came sliding backward towards him. He turned left, but too late — the BMW
struck his car's fender（保险杠） before crashing into the vehicle behind him.
Bauer stopped the car. "Ava, are you OK?" he asked. She was shaken, but unhurt.He ran to the BMW. "Are you OK?" he asked the driver. She nodded, too
shocked to speak.
And then a scream. It came from the pickup truck, which had come to rest on its
right side. The back passenger compartment（隔间） and truck bed hung out past
the guardrail, 30 or more feet above the waters of the bay. The driver's door was open
and a man climbed out. He dropped to the ground, and then dashed to the railing.
Bauer ran up beside him. The man pointed down. In the water was a car seat. Next to
it, a girl, about two years old, was terrified, floating on her back, and screaming.
Things quickly went from bad to worse when the girl rolled over onto her
stomach. Bauer waited for the pickup truck driver to do something, but he didn't.
Maybe he was in shock.
"Ava!" Bauer yelled, trying to remove his shoes. "Stay by the car!"
He climbed onto the railing and jumped into the water without hesitation.
A moment later the ambulance arrived.
佳作
He climbed onto the railing and jumped into the water without hesitation. Seeing
the little girl just ten feet away, Bauer swam to her with all his strength and lifted her
out of the water swiftly. Seeing her return a little after coughing some water, Bauer
breathed a sigh of relief（松了一口气）, and pulled her close to shelter her from the
cold. Just then a boat pulled up（停靠） and saved Bauer and the little girl aboard.
In the meantime, Ava, stunned by what she witnessed（震惊于她所目睹的一切）,
called for the ambulance.
A moment later the ambulance arrived. The girl was rushed to hospital. The people
looking down from the bridge changed their great tension into much admiration for
Bauer（他们极度紧张的情绪变成了对Bauer的深深钦佩）, including his
daughter, Ava. Inspired by her father ' s deed （受父亲事迹的鼓舞）, Ava
determined to be a person who is also helpful and brave
