高频话题 04 文娱活动
近五年考情分析
年份 卷区 体裁 话题 命题形式
对外交提出的“Fun at my school”和“Guess who
全国一卷 建议信 提纲类
I am”两个选项做出选择
全国二卷 咨询信 咨询外交介绍加拿大体育运动的文章进展 提纲类
2025年 浙 江 卷 1 发表关于在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象的演
发言稿 提纲类
月 讲稿
北京卷 建议信 给参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议 提纲类
在论坛交流上围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提
天津卷 推荐信 提纲类
出推荐
新 高 考 I
告知信 分享在公园上了一堂美术课经历 提纲类
和II卷
以Development of Transport in China 为题的发言
全国甲卷 发言稿 图标类
稿
北京卷 建议信 对好友介绍中国的发展成就提出建议 提纲类
2024年
天津卷 发言稿 “低碳校园，从我做起”英语主题的演讲稿 提纲类
浙 江 卷 1
征文投稿 推荐一项适合课间开展的运动 提纲类
月
在“排忧解难”专栏回复校友父母不容许自己做
上海卷 安慰信 提纲类
饭
新高考全
建议信 提出随机分组存在的问题并给建议 提纲类
国卷
全国甲卷 征文投稿 以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿 提纲类
用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得
全国乙卷 征文投稿 提纲类
2023年 的体验和感受
浙 江 卷 1
报道 报道“认识我们身边的植物”活动 提纲类
月
北京卷 建议信 为以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动提供建议 提纲类
天津卷 申请信 申请参加“中国工坊” 活动 提纲类
2022年 新高考全 邀请信 邀请外教做访谈 提纲类国卷
校图书馆新开设“小组学习室”
浙江卷 邀请信 提纲类
邀请外国留学生一同体验
浙江卷 (1
回忆经历 回忆中国-爱尔兰文化节 提纲类
月)
全国甲卷 征文投稿 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 提纲类
全国乙卷 征文投稿 英语学习方式图标的调查投稿 提纲类
北京卷 邀请信 邀请好友做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流 提纲类
天津卷 视频文字稿 用英语为社团纳新活动录制一段短视频 提纲类
新高考全
征文投稿 庆祝英文报创刊十周年投稿 提纲类
国卷
浙江卷 宣传稿 宣传学生国画作品展 提纲类
浙江卷 (1
发言稿 欢迎新西兰学生访校致辞 提纲类
2021年 月)
全国甲卷 咨询信 咨询国外友人对中国传统文化的看法 提纲类
全国乙卷 发言稿 以 Be smart online learners为题的发言稿 提纲类
北京卷 道歉信 你因故不能赴约周末一起外出 提纲类
天津卷 征文投稿 介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方 提纲类
语料表达
1. 通用词汇和句式
音乐会/演唱会: concert (pop/classical concert 流行/古典音乐会)
音乐节: music festival
合唱团: choir
校园乐队: school band
话剧/戏剧: drama / play
活动类型 舞蹈表演: dance performance (folk dance 民间舞)
通用核心词汇 京剧: Peking Opera
艺术展: art exhibition
博物馆展览: museum exhibition
画展: painting exhibition
摄影展: photography exhibition
观众: audience, spectators
参与人员
表演者: performer, actor/actress (男/女演员), musician (音乐家), singer (歌手)
画家/艺术家: painter / artist
组织者: organizer
精彩的: wonderful, fantastic, amazing, impressive
动人的: touching, moving
有才华的: talented, gifted
描述性词
互动的: interactive
汇
视觉震撼的: visually stunning
发人深省的: thought-provoking
座无虚席的: sold-out
I'm writing to share with you an unforgettable concert I attended last weekend.
我写信是想与你分享我上周末参加的一场难忘的音乐会。
A thought-provoking photography exhibition is currently being held in our school
library.
开篇句
一场发人深省的摄影展正在我校图书馆举行。
Our school is to organize/host a music festival next month, and I can't wait to tell
you about it.
我们学校下个月将组织一场音乐节，我迫不及待地想告诉你。
The performance consisted of three parts: singing, dancing and instrument playing.
表演由三部分组成：唱歌、跳舞和乐器演奏。
The exhibition showcased a wide variety of traditional Chinese paintings, which
included landscapes, figures, and flowers.
展览展示了各种各样的中国画，包括山水画、人物画和花鸟画。
描述过程
万能句式模板 The audience was deeply attracted by the performers' amazing skills and passionate
和内容
performance.
观众被表演者惊人的技巧和充满激情的表演深深吸引。
What impressed me most was the interactive part, where we could ask the artist
questions directly.
最让我印象深刻的是互动环节，我们可以直接向艺术家提问。
I was deeply moved by the touching story and the actors' excellent acting.
我被那动人的故事和演员们出色的演技深深打动了。
It was not only a visual feast but also a cultural journey.
阐述感受 这不仅是一场视觉盛宴，更是一次文化之旅。
和意义 Through this activity, I not only relaxed myself but also broadened my horizons.
通过这次活动，我不仅放松了身心，还开阔了视野。
The experience enriched my school life and left me with many beautiful memories.
这次经历丰富了我的校园生活，给我留下了许多美好的回忆。2. 实用范文片段
Last Friday, our school held a pop music festival on the playground. The atmosphere was
fantastic! Several school bands and choir groups performed their latest songs. The audience
cheered and sang along to the music. It was an amazing night that brought all of us together
音乐会/音乐
and released our pressure from study.
节
上周五，我们学校在操场上举办了一场流行音乐节。气氛棒极了！几支校园乐队和合唱团
表演了他们的最新歌曲。观众们欢呼雀跃，跟着音乐一起唱。这是一个美妙的夜晚，它把
我们所有人凝聚在一起，释放了我们的学习压力。
I was deeply impressed by a traditional Chinese painting exhibition I visited last week. The
exhibition showcased a wide variety of paintings, which included landscapes, figures, and
flowers. The paintings were so visually stunning that I felt like I was traveling in those beautiful
scenes. It was a truly immersive experience that gave me a better understanding of Chinese
艺术展/画展
art and culture.
我对上周参观的一个中国画展印象深刻。展览展示了各种各样的画作，包括山水画、人物
画和花鸟画。这些画作视觉上非常震撼，让我感觉仿佛置身于那些美丽的景色中。这是一
次真正沉浸式的体验，让我更好地理解了中国艺术和文化。
Our drama club put on a wonderful play last night, and it was a great success. The play told a
touching story about family and friendship. The actors’ excellent acting moved everyone in the
audience to tears. Through this experience, I not only enjoyed a fantastic performance but
话剧/戏剧表
also learned the importance of courage and love.
演
我们戏剧社昨晚上演了一场精彩的话剧，取得了巨大成功。该剧讲述了一个关于家庭和友
谊的感人故事。演员们出色的表演感动了在场的每一位观众，让大家流下了眼泪。通过这
次经历，我不仅欣赏了一场精彩的演出，还懂得了勇气和爱的重要性。
必背满分范文
1．（2025·江苏南京·期中）假定你是校学生会主席李华，下个月将组织举办一场校园慈善音乐会。请给你
校的英国留学生Chris写一封邮件邀请他来参与演出，内容包括：
1. 活动介绍；
2. 表演形式建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I’m thrilled to invite you to be part of something truly special! We’re putting together a charity concert next
month with the goal of raising funds to support poor students.
We’d be absolutely excited to have you share your gift with us. Here are a few ideas that might suit your style.
If you fancy taking center stage, how about a solo piano performance of a classical piece? It would be a
showstopper! Or, if you’re up for it, a duet with other student musicians could be a magical collaboration that our
audience would love.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生Chris写一封邮件邀请他来参加学习举办的校
园慈善音乐会。内容包括：活动介绍以及表演形式建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目标：goal→ aim
兴奋的：excited→ exalted
适合：suit→ fit
合作：collaboration→ cooperation
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We’re putting together a charity concert next month with the goal of raising funds to support poor students.
拓展句：We’re putting together a charity concert next month whose goal is to raise funds to support poor students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here are a few ideas that might suit your style.（运用了that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Or, if you’re up for it, a duet with other student musicians could be a magical collaboration that
our audience would love.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句与that引导的定语从句）
2．（2025·长春·返校考）假定你是学生会主席李华，想邀请外教Mr Black一起参观学生会组织的书法展
(calligraphy exhibition)。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 展览时间、地点；
2. 展览内容。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr Black,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mr Black,
How is it going? I’m too excited to invite you to pay a visit to the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition, which is to
be held at nine o’clock next Saturday morning in the museum of our city.
On the exhibition, not only will there be many excellent works of various styles, but you can also
communicate with some famous artists who will give a live performance of their writing skills. Furthermore, there
will be a lecture, where you can learn the beginning, development and achievements on Chinese Calligraphy. I
know you have a deep affection for Chinese traditional culture, and I believe it’s well worth a visit. Please call me
and I will meet you at the airport upon your arrival.
Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Mr Black写封邮件，邀请他一起参观学生会组织的书
法展。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举行：be held→take place
著名的：famous→well-known
此外：furthermore→what’s more
值得参观：be worth a visit→be worth visiting
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句：Please call me and I will meet you at the airport upon your arrival.
拓展句：Please call me and I will meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m too excited to invite you to pay a visit to the Chinese Calligraphy Exhibition, which
is to be held at nine o’clock next Saturday morning in the museum of our city.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】On the exhibition, not only will there be many excellent works of various styles, but you can also
communicate with some famous artists who will give a live performance of their writing skills.（运用了not only
位于句首的倒装和who引导的定语从句。
3．（2025·四川·月考）你校上周五举办了主题为“人人都是科学家”的展览，该展览展示了同学们的科学
发明。请你为校报“英语天地”栏目写一份新闻报道，内容包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 活动内容；
3. 活动意义。
注意：写作词数应为80左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
【范文】
In order to develop students’ interest in science and technology, an exhibition themed “Everyone Is a
Scientist” was successfully held at the school hall last Friday.
At 9 a.m., the exhibition started with a speech delivered by our headmaster. About a hundred inventions
created by students were on display, some of which could be operated according to the instructions attached to
them.
All the students thought it very meaningful to hold the exhibition as it has inspired students’ creativity.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。题目要求考生为主题是“人人都是科学家”的校展览写一篇英文
新闻报道，需包括活动的目的、内容和意义。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
为了：in order to→for the purpose of
培养：develop→cultivate
从……开始：start with→begin with
展览：on display→on show
有意义的：meaningful→significant, purposeful, consequential
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At 9 a.m., the exhibition started with a speech delivered by our headmaster.
拓展句：At 9 a.m., the exhibition started with a speech that was delivered by our headmaster.【点睛】【高分句型1】About a hundred inventions created by students were on display, some of which
could be operated according to the instructions attached to them.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句
过去分词短语作置定语）
【高分句型 2】All the students thought it very meaningful to hold the exhibition as it has inspired
students’ creativity.（运用了as引导的原因状语从句）
4．（2025·山东·阶段考）假定你是李华，你校成功举办了校园文化秀（the Campus Culture Show）。现
在，请你按照以下要点给英国网友 Wilson 写一封邮件，分享这次活动。
1. 活动时间、地点；
2. 活动内容：书法展、摄影展、话剧等；
3. 活动感受。
注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：书法 calligraphy ；摄影 photography ；话剧 drama
Dear Wilson,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Wilson,
I’m writing to share our school’s Campus Culture Show held last Friday on the second floor of our school’s art
center.
The event was meant to enrich students’ life. Art works including photography and calligraphy were exhibited,
from which we could appreciate the beauty of our life and experience the attraction of Chinese characters. What
impressed us most was the folk dance and local operas performed by students. Through these activities, we not only
got relaxed but also exposed ourselves to traditional Chinese culture.
Looking forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国网友 Wilson 写封邮件，分享你校举办的校园文化秀
活动。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 活动时间、地点；
2. 活动内容：书法展、摄影展、话剧等；
3. 活动感受。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
share our school’s Campus Culture Show; be meant to do; enrich students’ life; appreciate the beauty of our
life;local operas; not only......but also......; expose...... to......; traditional Chinese culture
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m writing to share our school’s Campus Culture Show held last Friday on the second floor of our school’s art
center.
2. The event was meant to enrich students’ life.
3. Art works including photography and calligraphy were exhibited, from which we could appreciate the beauty of
our life and experience the attraction of Chinese characters.
4. What impressed us most was the folk dance and local operas performed by students.
5. Through these activities, we not only got relaxed but also exposed ourselves to traditional Chinese culture.
6. Looking forward to hearing from you again.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供
参考)
2.表并列补充关系：and, not only...but (also)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing ,as for,(供
参考)
5．（2025·山东·月考）假如你是李华，学校英语话剧社（English Drama Club）正在招纳新成员，参与话剧
社管理和表演。请你用英语给社团负责老师写一封电子邮件，申请加入。
要点如下：1．介绍个人情况和优势；
2．希望被录用。
注意：1. 词数80字左右，开头语已为你写好，其词数不计入总数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a freshman of our school.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a freshman of our school. Learning that the English Drama Club is recruiting (招募) new
members (Hearing that new members are needed for the English Drama Club), I’m writing to apply to sign up (for
it).
My advantages are as follows. First and foremost, I speak English fluently, which makes it possible for me to
act smoothly in the English play with ease. In addition, I’m especially fond of drama, good at communication and
always willing to take an active part in organizing the activities for our class. I’m confident that my proficiency in
English and excellent ability of organization and management will enable me to do well in the club.
I would appreciate it if you could give me the valuable chance. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，给英语话剧社的负责老师写一封电子邮
件，申请加入该社团，需涵盖介绍个人信息和表达愿望两方面的内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
优点：advantage→strength, strong point
首先：first and foremost→above all, first of all
愿意做：be willing to do→be glad to do, be ready to do
参与：take part in→participate in, engage in
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m confident that my proficiency in English and excellent ability of organization and management will
enable me to do well in the club.
拓展句：I have no doubt that my proficiency in English and excellent ability of organization and management will
enable me to do well in the club.
【点睛】[高分句型 1] Learning that the English Drama Club is recruiting new members (Hearing that new
members are needed for the English Drama Club), I’m writing to apply to sign up (for it). (运用了现在分词短语
作状语、that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First and foremost, I speak English fluently, which makes it possible for me to act smoothly in the
English play with ease. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
6．（2025·湖北·开学考）假如你是李华，你班计划在艺术周期间表演英语情景剧(sitcom)，并想请对此颇有兴趣的外教Mr. Smith给予指导。现请你给他写一邮件，内容包括：
1. 提出请求；
2. 指导内容；
3. 期待回复。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mr. Smith,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
We are to put on an English sitcom during the Art Festival. So I'm writing to ask if you would be kind enough
to give us some guidance.
The sitcom is set in a nuclear family where a series of amusing incidents happen. Its plots and lines have been
in place, but considering the possible problems, we long for your expertise to polish them. Additionally, the
performers being inexperienced, we expect your guidance with performing skills.
Your help with the sitcom will be much appreciated. Looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件，请求其对班级
英语情景剧表演进行指导，需包含请求、指导内容和期待回复，词数80左右。
【详解】
词汇积累
表演：put on → stage
指导：guidance → coaching
修改完善：polish → refine
inexperienced → novice
期待：look forward to → await
句式拓展
简单句变复合句原句：The performers are inexperienced. We expect your guidance.
拓展句：Since our performers are relatively inexperienced, we would greatly appreciate your professional
coaching.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
"We are to put on an English sitcom during the Art Festival. So I'm writing to ask if you would be kind enough to
give us some guidance."
（使用"So"连接前后逻辑，并通过委婉语气"would be kind enough"提出请求，体现礼貌与正式）
【高分句型2】
"Its plots and lines have been in place, but considering the possible problems, we long for your expertise to polish
them."
（运用"but"转折连词和"considering"引导的状语成分，清晰表达现有成果与待改进之处的矛盾，突出指导
必要性）
【高分句型3】
"Additionally, the performers being inexperienced, we expect your guidance with performing skills."
（采用独立主格结构"the performers being inexperienced"作原因状语，使句式富于变化且表意凝练）
7．（2025·陕西西安·月考）假定你是学生会主席李华。你校新来一批美国交流生，学校要组织迎新晚会请
你用英文给他们的领队Tom写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
时间：本周六晚上6点到8点；
地点：学校礼堂；
活动：表演节目，中美学生互动。
注意：词数 100 左右，可合理添加细节；开头已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
Welcome to our school!
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
Students’ Union
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Tom,
Welcome to our school! In celebration of your arrival, a grand party is to be held in the school hall. I would
like to invite you to participate in it.
As scheduled, the party falls on this Saturday, lasting from 6 pm to 8 pm, during which time a wide variety ofwonderful performances will be put on. Students, blessed with a talent for music, cross-talk, or dance will show
themselves confidently. More importantly, we can have face-to-face talks in the activities so that we will have a
better understanding of each other.
Hopefully, you can spare time to join us. Should you have any question, please don’t hesitate to let me know.
May you have a good time in our school.
Students’ Union
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会主席李华的身份给美国交流生领队 Tom写一封邮件，
邀请其参加迎新晚会，需包含时间、地点、活动安排等要素，词数100左右。
【详解】
词汇积累
庆祝：celebration → in honor of
举行：hold → host
参与：participate → attend
才华：talent → gift
面对面交流：face-to-face talks → interpersonal interactions
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Students will show themselves. They are talented in music, cross-talk, or dance.
拓展句：Students gifted in music, cross-talk, or dance will demonstrate their talents confidently on stage.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
"In celebration of your arrival, a grand party is to be held in the school hall."
（运用"in celebration of"介词短语作目的状语，并使用被动语态"is to be held"体现正式安排，开场自然得
体）
【高分句型2】
"As scheduled, the party falls on this Saturday, lasting from 6 pm to 8 pm, during which time a wide variety of
wonderful performances will be put on."
（通过"lasting"现在分词作状语表示持续时间，并巧妙运用"during which"引导的非限制性定语从句，将时
间信息与活动内容有机衔接）
【高分句型3】
"More importantly, we can have face-to-face talks in the activities so that we will have a better understanding of
each other."
（使用"so that"引导的目的状语从句，清晰阐明互动活动的深层意义，体现文化交流价值）
【高分句型4】
"Should you have any question, please don't hesitate to let me know."（采用倒装句式"Should you..."替代"If you should..."，既保持正式礼貌又体现语言功底，增强书信文体的
规范性）
8．（2025·湖北·模拟考）假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友John没有进入“汉语才艺大赛”的决赛，
感到非常沮丧。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给予安慰；
3. 鼓励继续努力。
注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear John,
I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show. I was told that you are in
low spirits and I understand how you feel. However, I think you should cheer up. You have tried your best, so there
is nothing to regret. And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took
part in the talent show? This is what you have gained and what really matters.
Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further. Keep on trying and
you will succeed sooner or later. I wish you happy every day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国留学生朋友John写封邮件，对John没有进入“汉语
才艺大赛”的决赛进行安慰。
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和现在完成时，少量一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 表示理解；
2. 给予安慰；
3. 鼓励继续努力。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be sorry to do sth.; make it; cheer up; try one’s best; make great progress; take part in sth.; encourage sb. to do sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. I am sorry to know that you didn't make it to the final of the Chinese Talent Show.
2. However, I think you should cheer up.
3. You have tried your best, so there is nothing to regret.
4. And have you noticed that you have made great progress in Chinese and singing since you took part in the talent
show?
5. Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表并列补充关系：And，Moreover
2.表转折对比关系：However
2.表因果关系：so
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
[高分句型1] This is what you have gained and what really matters.用了两个what引导的表语从句。
[高分句型2] Moreover, it's common for us to experience failure, which will encourage us to go further.
用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
9．（2025·湖南·阶段考）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jerry邀请你下周日去北京环球影视城（Universal
Beijing Resort）游玩,并来信询问特色游玩项目。因下周日你需要参加学校的志愿者活动而无法赴约，你回
信表示歉意。内容包括：
1.表示歉意；
2.推荐娱乐项目: 各类骑乘设施；哈利波特主题公园等
3.表示祝愿
注意：（1）词数80 左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Jerry,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jerry,I’m terribly sorry that I can’t join you to visit Universal Beijing Resort next Sunday since I’m fully occupied
with the voluntary work in school.
As is known to all, Universal Beijing Resort is gaining increasing popularity at home and abroad. Personally,
the breathtaking rides, ranging from incredible pirate ships to terrifying 5D roller coaster, are bound to appeal to
thrill-seekers like you. Moreover, as a top tourist destination for fun and relaxation, the theme park of Harry Potter
will bring you into a fantasy world, where not only will you encounter your favorite characters, you can also have a
deeper insight into the stories behind it.
Hope you have fun and more than fun there.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友 Jerry写一封回信，婉拒游玩邀请
并推荐特色项目，需包含致歉、推荐内容和祝愿，词数80-100。
【详解】
词汇积累
忙碌：occupied → engaged
著名：popular → renowned
刺激的：breathtaking → thrilling
吸引：appeal to → captivate
遇见：encounter → come across
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The theme park of Harry Potter will bring you into a fantasy world. You will encounter your
favorite characters there.
拓展句：The Harry Potter theme park will transport you to a magical realm where you can not only
meet beloved characters but also gain deeper insights into the stories.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
"I'm terribly sorry that I can't join you to visit Universal Beijing Resort next Sunday since I'm fully occupied with
the voluntary work in school."
（运用"terribly sorry"表达诚挚歉意，并通过"since"引导的原因状语从句清晰解释无法赴约的客观理由，语
气委婉得体）
【高分句型2】
"Personally, the breathtaking rides, ranging from incredible pirate ships to terrifying 5D roller coaster, are bound to
appeal to thrill-seekers like you."
（使用"ranging from...to..."插入结构具体列举骑乘设施种类，并通过"are bound to"加强推荐语气，体现对
对方兴趣的了解）
【高分句型3】"Moreover, as a top tourist destination for fun and relaxation, the theme park of Harry Potter will bring you into a
fantasy world, where not only will you encounter your favorite characters, you can also have a deeper insight into
the stories behind it."
（采用"where"引导的非限制性定语从句描述主题公园体验，并运用"not only...but also..."倒装结构强调沉
浸式体验，句式富于变化且描述生动）
10．（2025·安徽芜湖·阶段考）假设你是李华，擅长中国国画，且多次获奖，最近创作了一幅作品，给负
责下月举办青少年画展的美国朋友Tom写一封信，请他展览你的作品，
要点包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 作品简介；
3. 期待回复。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
How are you? I’m happy to know you are in charge of a teenage art exhibition next month. As you know I’m
good at Chinese painting and some of them have won prizes in China. Recently I completed a new painting which
is about an old man fishing on the river. When you observe the painting, you will be amazed at the beauty of
Mother Nature and realize the importance of having a peaceful mind. I wonder if my painting could be displayed
along with other works then.
Attached you will find a photo of my painting. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给美国朋友Tom写一封书信，请求在青少年画
展中展出自己的中国画作品，需包含写信目的、作品简介和期待回复，词数80左右。
【详解】
词汇积累
擅长：good at → skilled in
完成：completed → accomplished
展示：display → exhibit惊讶：amazed → astonished
附件：attached → enclosed
句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I completed a new painting. It depicts an old man fishing on the river.
拓展句：I have recently accomplished a new painting that portrays an elderly man fishing by the
riverside.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
"As you know I'm good at Chinese painting and some of them have won prizes in China."
（运用"As you know"插入语自然建立与收信人的共同认知基础，并通过并列句简洁展示自己的专业资质，
增强请求的说服力）
【高分句型2】
"When you observe the painting, you will be amazed at the beauty of Mother Nature and realize the importance of
having a peaceful mind."
（使用"When"引导的时间状语从句，结合并列谓语"be amazed..."和"realize..."，生动传达画作的艺术感染
力与深层寓意）
【高分句型3】
"Attached you will find a photo of my painting."
（采用倒装句式突出附件信息，符合英文书信规范，以简洁地道的表达引导对方查看作品照片）
