高中英语应用文--建议类邮件--二选一--思辨

写作框架

P1：给出选择

P2：说明理由（生活关联、思辨价值、教育意义、实用价值、聚焦成长、时代前瞻性等角度展开）

P3：结尾。表达期待

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Dear Alex, 

I really like the idea of adding a new column to our debate club. In my opinion,the topic 选择一 would be a better choice than 选择二. 

My proposal is based on the following reasons. To begin with,___________(理由1).In addition, ________________________(理由2), allowing us to _______(思辨收获). 

Hopefully, my advice can be of help to you. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration. 

Yours, 

Li Hua

语块积累：

ØAI writing tools 人工智能写作工具

Øbe widely used in school life 在校园生活中广泛使用

Øgain a deep insight into… 深入洞察……

Øthe relationship between humans and AI 人与人工智能的关系

Øintellectual integrity 知识诚信

Øshort videos 短视频

Øbe highly relevant to us students 和我们学生高度相关

Øbe closely linked to our daily life 和日常生活紧密相关

Østimulate our critical thinking 激发批判性思维

Øthe cultivation of creative abilities 创造力的培养

Øarouse our interest 激发我们的兴趣

Øhave an impact on our cognition 对我们的认知产生影响

Øencourage us to think critically 鼓励我们批判性思考

Ømake use of them wisely 明智利用它们

Øavoid wasting too much time on… 避免在…… 浪费过多时间

Øinformation cocoons 信息茧房

Øfragmented thinking 碎片化思维

Ødigital literacy 数字素养

Øtake…into consideration /take…into account 考虑……

Øgain a deep insight into 深入理解、洞察

小试牛刀：

假定你是李华,你校英文辩论社将推出“思辨角”(Critical Thinking Corner)专栏,负责此专栏的同学Alex提供两个辩题方向供大家选择:“人工智能写作,助力还是消解创作力?”(AI Writing: A Boost or A Drain to Creativity?)和“短视频盛行,丰富还是窄化认知?”(Short-video Popularity: Enrich or Narrow Cognition?)。请你给Alex写一封邮件,内容包含:1. 你的选择;2. 说明理由。注意:写作词数应为80个左右。

Dear Alex, 

____________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Sample 1

Dear Alex,

I really like the idea of adding a new column to our debate club. In my opinion, if it can be approved, the topic “AI Writing: A Boost or A Drain to Creativity?” would be a better choice than “Short-video Popularity: Enrich or Narrow Cognition?”.

My proposal is based on the following reasons. First, with the development of technology, AI writing tools are widely used in our school life. Therefore, the topic about AI writing is highly relevant to us students, which can resonate deeply with us and remind us to use AI wisely. Second, this topic can stimulate our critical thinking, helping us gain a deep insight into the relationship between humans and AI.

I hope my suggestion will be helpful to our debate club.

Yours,

Li Hua

我非常喜欢在我们的辩论社增设一个新栏目的想法。在我看来,如果能够获得批准,“人工智能写作,助力还是消解创作力?”这个话题会是比“短视频盛行,丰富还是窄化认知?”更好的选择。

我的提议基于以下理由:首先,随着科技的发展,人工智能写作工具在我们的校园生活中得到了广泛应用。因此,人工智能写作这一话题与我们学生息息相关,能够引起我们的强烈共鸣,并提醒我们明智地使用人工智能。其次,这个主题能够激发我们的批判性思维,帮助我们深入洞察人类与人工智能之间的关系。

希望我的建议能够对我们的辩论社有所帮助。

Sample 2

Dear Alex,

I really like your idea of adding a new column to our debate club. In my opinion, the idea “Short-video Popularity: Enrich or Narrow Cognition?” is preferable to the other one, though your recommendation is quite appealing.

My preference is based on the following advantages. To begin with, short videos are more closely linked to our daily life, which can easily resonate with us and arouse our interest. In addition, this topic can make us gain a deep insight into the impact that short videos have on our cognition, allowing us to make use of them wisely and avoid wasting too much time on them.

Hopefully, my advice can be of help to you. I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

我非常喜欢你为我们的辩论社增设一个新栏目的想法。在我看来,尽管你的推荐很有吸引力,但是“短视频盛行,丰富还是窄化认知?”这个想法比其他想法更可取。

我的偏好基于以下几点优势:首先,短视频与我们的日常生活联系更为紧密,能够轻易引起大家的共鸣并激发我们的兴趣。此外,这个话题能让我们深入洞察短视频对我们认知的影响,使我们能够明智地使用它们,避免在上面浪费过多时间。

希望我的建议能对你有所帮助。如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。