【高中英语应用文写作专项突破】吴木英|道歉信满分攻略(含近年真题·高分范文)

Part 01 ｜ 近年高考真题 · 高分范文

🔹(全国卷Ⅲ)

假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:

1.表示歉意;

2.说明原因;

3.另约时间。

注意:写作词数应为80左右。

好词

①accompany /ə̍kʌmpənI/ 

vt.陪伴;伴随;伴奏

②as planned按计划

Dear Bob,

(表达歉意) I'm writing to apologize to you for being unable to accompany you to the bookstore tomorrow as planned.

(解释失约原因) The reason is that I will attend a family get⁃together利用表语从句,说明失约的原因 

tomorrow when my cousin Peter will return home from Beijing. Actually, Peter and I grew up together when we were kids and later he went to study in Beijing. Therefore, it's exciting for me to see him again after half a year. 

(请求对方接受道歉并另约时间) I hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Would you mind if I suggested we利用疑问句和虚拟语气委婉地另约时间 

go to the bookstore next weekend? Looking forward to your early reply. 

Yours,

Li Hua

🔹 模拟题

你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴约。请写邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意并说明原因；2.提出建议并给出理由。

Dear Jim,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to convey my heartfelt apology for having to cancel our outing this weekend, which I had genuinely been looking forward to.

Unfortunately, an unexpected family matter has arisen that requires my immediate attention. My grandfather fell ill yesterday, and I need to stay home to help care for him while my parents are away on a business trip. I understand how disappointing this must be, and I deeply regret any inconvenience it may cause you. As an alternative, I would like to propose that we postpone our outing to next weekend. By then, my grandfather should be recovering well, and I will be able to fully devote my time and attention to our plans without any distraction. I promise to make it up to you with an even better itinerary—perhaps we could explore that newly opened book café you mentioned last time.

I value our friendship greatly and would truly appreciate your understanding. Looking forward to hearing from you, and once again, I am terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused.

Yours,Li Hua

Part 02 ｜ 道歉信 · 满分句型库

🎯 夺人眼球开头句

1.I'm writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at our appointed time. 我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意,因为我没有在我们约定的时间陪你去画廊。

2.I hate to say sorry, but there is a change in my school arrangement, so I can't attend your birthday party. 很抱歉,我学校的安排有变动,所以我不能参加你的生日聚会了。

💪 亮点出彩篇中句

1.The reason why I won't be available at that time as planned is that my grandfather fell ill suddenly yesterday and I have to care for him. 我不能按计划届时到场,因为我祖父昨天突然生病了,我必须照顾他。

2.I have just found I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the change will not cause too much trouble. 我刚发现我那天下午要参加一个重要的班会。我希望这个变化不会造成太大的麻烦。

3.I feel so sorry for not keeping my word, but would you give me a chance to say sorry to you face to face? 我很抱歉没有信守诺言,但你能给我个机会当面向你道歉吗?

4.Much to my regret, I was unable to keep my appointment to discuss Chinese paintings with you. 非常遗憾,我不能如约和你讨论中国画。

5.I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time. If not, please keep me informed in advance of what time suits you best. 如果您能允许我另安排时间,我将不胜感激。如果不能,请提前告诉我何时最适合您。

🌟 韵味无穷结尾句

1.I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change. 对于这个意外的变化给您带来的不便,我深表歉意。

2.Hope you can accept my apologies for this unhappy experience and understand my situation. 对于这次不愉快的经历,希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的处境。

3.Please allow me to say sorry again, and I'll try to make up for my fault. 请允许我再次致歉,我将尽力弥补我的过错。

Part 03 ｜ 道歉信 · 满分万能模板

Dear George,

(说明写信意图,对某事表示歉意)I feel sorry that I can't keep my word to accompany you to the football match as planned.

(具体说明道歉的原因,提出补救措施) The reason why I will not be available at that time is that there is a change in my school arrangements. (说明原因) Therefore, I'm afraid I'm unable to keep my appointment. Meanwhile, would you give me a chance to say sorry to you face to face? I sincerely invite you to have dinner next Wednesday and I hope you can accept my invitation. (提出补救措施)

(再次表明歉意,请求谅解)Once again, I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change.

Yours,

Li Hua

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