14. 征文投稿——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
参考答案
【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．参考范文一
Labor class, part of our school courses, is required in primary and middle schools every week. Labor education
is attached importance to since it strengthens students’ awareness of labor and develops their practical skills.
Of all the labor courses, I like planting most, because it offers me opportunities to endure hardships and get
close to nature. And the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider
it the best way to relax myself.
Thanks to labor class, I’ve found my personal interest and become a well-rounded student! Here I sincerely
invite all of you to enjoy the fun of farming, or some other labor courses you like.
参考范文二
Labor class, part of our school courses, is required in primary and middle schools every week. The new course
arrangement stresses the importance of labor education since it strengthens students’ awareness of labor and
develops their practical skills.
Now the labor course varies from cooking to cleaning to planting, of which I like planting most. Such a
specific topic can always interest me because it offers me opportunities to endure hardships and get close to nature.
When I’m involved in the planting process, the cycle of sowing, fertilizing and harvesting can bring me a sense of
satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider it the best way to relax myself. Thanks to labor class, I’ve found
my personal interest and become a well-rounded student!
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你校的英文校报将发行以“劳动课”为专题的一期报纸，请你写一篇稿件
投稿。
【解析】
1.词汇积累（以范文一为例）
重要性：importance→significance
由于，因为：thanks to→owing to/due to/because of
诚恳地：sincerely→faithfully享受：enjoy→feast
1.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： And the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider it the
best way to relax myself.
拓展句： And the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, which I really consider
the best way to relax myself.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
Labor education is attached importance to since it strengthens students’ awareness of labor and develops their
practical skills.（运用了since引导原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】
And the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement, so I really consider it the best way
to relax myself.（运用了so连接并列句，不定式作后置定语）
2． The Benefits of Doing Housework
With the Labor Day holiday approaching, I interviewed my fellow students about their opinions on the
benefits of doing housework.
According to my interviews, I found that the benefits of doing housework include improving self-discipline,
emotional stability, and increase cooperation skills. Most students also pointed out that doing housework can help
them learn about responsibility and understanding the value of hard work.
In conclusion, the benefits of doing housework are not only apparent in the physical labor, but also in the
mental and emotional aspects of our lives. I highly recommend everyone to take some time to do housework.
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生就自己做的关于“The Benefits of Doing Housework”的校园采访写一篇报道，向
校英文报投稿。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
临近：approach→draw near/around the corner
看法，观点：opinion→perspective
明显的：apparent→evident
建议：recommend→advise/suggest2.句型拓展
同义句
原句： I highly recommend everyone to take some time to do housework.
拓展句： I highly recommend that everyone should take some time to do housework.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
With the Labor Day holiday approaching, I interviewed my fellow students about their opinions on the benefits of
doing housework.（运用了with复合结构）
【高分句型2】
According to my interviews, I found that the benefits of doing housework include improving self-discipline,
emotional stability, and increase cooperation skills. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
3． Our Cultural Festival on Campus
Our school recently held an amazing Cultural Festival!
It was a vibrant showcase of diverse cultures. We enjoyed colorful performances, delicious foods, and
engaging activities from around the world. From traditional dances to exotic dishes, there was something for
everyone to enjoy. It was such a fantastic opportunity that we can learn about different cultures and make new
friends.
The festival brought us together and celebrated the beauty of diversity on our campus. It was truly a
memorable experience for all who participated in it.
【导语】
本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，要求用英文写一篇短文就学校刚刚举办的文化节活动向学校英文报投稿，
内容要点如下：1.简要描述；2.体验和感受。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
不同的：diverse→various
绝妙的：amazing→marvellous
极好的：fantastic→terrific
难忘的：memorable→unforgettable
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：From traditional dances to exotic dishes, there was something for everyone to enjoy.拓展句：There was something for everyone to enjoy, ranging from traditional dances to exotic dishes.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
It was such a fantastic opportunity that we can learn about different cultures and make new friends. (运用了
such...that...引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】
It was truly a memorable experience for all who participated in it. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
4．One Possible Version
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
I’m excited to share my experience with the weekly English Literature Reading class.
Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency. Each week
this class unfolds with a new literary masterpiece ranging from classic novels to contemporary poetry. Through
interactive discussions, group readings, and insightful analysis, we are able to explore the depths of literary. Not
only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I’ve honed critical thinking skills.
Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to explore
further in the vast world of English letters. It has undoubtedly been a highlight of this academic semester.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文向学校英文报“Student Voice”栏目投稿，介绍英语文学阅
读课以及自己的收获。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
兴奋的：excited→thrilled
提高：enhance→improve
另外：moreover→furthermore
无疑：undoubtedly→beyond doubt
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
拓展句：The class, which started this semester, is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I’ve honed critical thinking skills. (运用了部分倒装结构)
[高分句型2] Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to
explore further in the vast world of English letters. (运用了现在分词短语作状语)
5． An Unforgettable Activity in High School
During my high school years, one unforgettable activity I participated in was the charity bazaar organized by
the school. Students set up booths selling handmade crafts and baked goods to raise funds for a local orphanage. I
helped at a face-painting booth and saw the joy on children’s faces as their designs came to life.
The sense of unity and purpose among everyone involved was inspiring. It taught me the value of giving
back and working together for a meaningful cause, making it a truly valuable experience in my high school journey.
【导语】
本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，要求考生写一篇文章参加主题为“An Unforgettable Activity in High School”
的征文活动，分享自己参加过的一次校园活动。
【解析】
1.词汇积累
难忘的：unforgettable→memorable
筹集：raise→collect
振奋人心的：inspiring→encouraging
快乐：joy→happiness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Students set up booths selling handmade crafts and baked goods to raise funds for a local orphanage.
拓展句：Students set up booths selling handmade crafts and baked goods in order that they could raise funds for a
local orphanage.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
During my high school years, one unforgettable activity I participated in was the charity bazaar organized by the
school. (运用了定语从句“I participated in”修饰先行词activity)
【高分句型2】
It taught me the value of giving back and working together for a meaningful cause, making it a truly valuable
experience in my high school journey.(逗号后面运用了现在分词作结果状语)
