曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
题型五 应用文写作
Writing 1 (2022全国甲)
你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿,内
容包括:
1.海洋的重要性;
2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day.
答案
One possible version:
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It aims to raise
people's awareness of protecting oceans.
Why should we protect the ocean? The reason is that it provides various benefits. To
begin with, the sea is a significant source of food. With the world population growing, we are
relying on the ocean more and more for survival. In addition, not only does the ocean produce
much oxygen, but it also absorbs much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to
regulating the Earth's climate. Also,vast amounts of medicinal products come from the ocean,
including ingredients that help fight cancer and heart disease.
However, the sea is being damaged. Huge as it is, it is more sensitive than we think. Thus,
it is high time that we took effective measures to protect it. Otherwise, future generations will
not forgive us.
精彩语句
1.精美词汇 significant adj.有重大意义的
sensitive adj.敏感的 vast amounts of 大量的曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
2.出彩结构 ①In addition, not only does the ocean produce much oxygen, but it
also absorbs much carbon dioxide, which remarkably contributes to regulating the
Earth's climate. (倒装;定语从句)
②Thus, it is high time that we took effective measures to protect it.(it is high
time+that从句)
Writing 2 (2022全国乙)
学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用
图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.学习活动状况描述;
2.简单评论;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well.
答案
One possible version:
Learning English Beyond the Classroom
There are many things we can do to learn English well. To learn more about how senior
high school students learn English after class, recently our school English newspaper is
holding a heated discussion, whose theme is “Learning English Beyond the Classroom”. The
following are the results of a survey connected to the discussion.曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
The percentage of students who choose to listen to English songs and watch English
movies is respectively 65% and 50%, while those choosing to read books in English and
browse English learning websites only account for 18% and 12%.
From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that most students
prefer to choose more relaxing and interesting ways to learn English beyond the classroom.As
far as I am concerned, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing after
school, we will learn English well.
精彩语句
From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that most students
prefer to choose more relaxing and interesting ways to learn English beyond the
classroom.(what引导宾语从句,作介词From的宾语;that引导同位语从句;to learn English
beyond the classroom为不定式短语作后置定语)
Writing 3 (2021全国甲)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。
请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内
容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Chris,曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
It's been a long time since we last met. How is everything? I'm kind of busy recently, for
our school is planning to hold a class meeting with the theme of introducing traditional
Chinese culture. Meanwhile, the activity will be posted on an English website. I was
appointed to take charge of this activity, which worries me a lot.
Faced with difficulties, I have to turn to you for help. Since you have always been
interested in Chinese culture, I sincerely hope that you can tell me what traditional Chinese
culture attracts you foreigners most and why. I know it's not an easy question to answer, but
any advice from you will be of great help in accomplishing my task.
I would appreciate it if you could give me any idea. I am looking forward to receiving
your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
①Faced with difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.(Faced with...为过去分词短语
作状语,意为“面临着……”)
②I would appreciate it if you could give me any idea.(I would appreciate it if you
could...为虚拟条件句,意为“如果你能……,我将不胜感激”)
Writing 4 (2021全国乙)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,
内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Be smart online learners
Learning online has become an important way to study recently.
答案
One possible version:
Be smart online learners曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
Learning online has become an important way to study recently. Students have easier
access to more materials in their favor. Besides, there is no limit to learning time and space,
which brings great convenience to all learners. However, some students who lack
self⁃discipline may find their minds wandering when facing a screen rather than the faces of
their teachers.
I benefit a lot from online learning, and for those who hope so too, my following
suggestions will be helpful. First, put down learning tasks in detail before you start. Then, tick
what you have achieved and rearrange those you haven't. Finally, set aside 10 minutes to have
a break if you find it hard to focus on what you're learning. Keep it in mind that distraction
should be dealt with wisely.
That's all. Thank you for your attention.
增分亮点
文章中长短句错落安排,长句中定语从句、宾语从句运用合理。短语如 have easier
access to, bring great convenience to, find their minds wandering, put down, set aside 等使语
言丰满有节奏感。
Writing 5(2021浙江6月卷)
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
One possible version:
Aiming to enrich students' school life and stimulate interest in traditional culture, our
school has decided to hold an exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings in our stadium.
As scheduled, the exhibition lasts 7 days, from March 8 to 14, during which a wide
variety of our students' works about different subjects are on display. Frankly speaking, the
moment I entered the hall, I was spellbound by their fantastic works. Furthermore, the
professional narration enabled me to have a deep understanding of the Chinese paintings.
So meaningful and fascinating is the exhibition that I strongly recommend anyone who
has a passion for traditional Chinese paintings should come to experience it in person.
Writing 6(2021天津)
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家,他母亲
Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。
请你用英语回复,内容包括:
(1)表示感谢并问候;
(2)计划与家人一起做的事情;
(3)你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何准备。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Nancy,
Yours,
Li Jin
答案
写作提示
1.本文为回信,也是一封告知信,要注意书信格式及告知信特点;
2.主要采用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主;曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
3.首段感谢对方来信问候,引出正文内容;第二段描述自己的假期计划;第三段告知对
方自己大学专业的选择及准备。
参考范文
Dear Nancy,
Im glad to hear from you. And thank you very much for asking about my vacation
arrangements and future plans.
Since this summer vacation is my last one in high school, my family and I have already
made a travel plan. We are going to take a trip to Tibet. Tibet lies on the Qinghai-Tibet
Plateau of the southwest border of China, which is a place I have been longing for. This time I
finally have a chance to realize my dream.
After graduating from high school, I will be faced with the choice of university and
university major. You know I have always been interested in languages, so I plan to major in
languages, preferably English, if possible. I also plan to improve my oral English by studying
online during the vacation.
I hope to visit you again if the COVID-19 situation gets better.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Jin
评析
1.范文内容完整,要点齐全,比例合适。主题句和支撑细节一一对应,衔接词的使用让
文章逻辑清晰,条理分明。
2.用词分析
(1)be faced with...比face高级;
(2)major in...为常用短语。
Writing 7(2021天津春)
假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了
《最美中华》栏目,请你给该栏目投稿,介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括:
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等);
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等);
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
