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2024 年高考英语作文真题深度解读及五年优秀范文汇编
目录
应用文写作......................................................................................................................................1
【真题速递】...........................................................................................................................1
【文本解读】...........................................................................................................................2
【题目特点】...........................................................................................................................2
【内容要求】...........................................................................................................................3
【写作思路】...........................................................................................................................3
【满分范文】...........................................................................................................................4
【AI 多角度写作范文】........................................................................................................5
【真题速递】
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友 Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投
稿。得知今年是新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建
议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1. 建议投稿内容;
2. 就以上建议简要说明理由。
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【文本解读】
本次高考英语北京卷的书面表达题目要求考生以红星中学高三学生李华的身份，给外
国好友Jim提供关于向校报Asia Today栏目投稿的建议。具体背景是，得知今年新中
国成立75周年，Jim打算重点介绍中国的发展成就，并向李华询问相关建议。
【题目特点】紧扣时代背景：题目紧密结合了2024年新中国成立75周年的背景，要求考生展现对中国发展
成就的了解和自豪。
实际应用能力：题目强调语言的实际应用能力，考生需将所学的英语知识用于解决实际问题，
即如何有效地向外国友人介绍中国的发展。
内容丰富性：参考范文和解析中提到的建议内容涵盖了经济增长、科技进步、减贫努力以及全
球贡献等多个方面，体现了中国全面发展的成就。
理由充分性：建议内容后的理由说明了为何这些话题能够展现中国的发展和影响力，如何促进
外国友人对中国有更深的了解，体现了考生对中国发展成就深入的思考和认识
【内容要求】
建议投稿内容：针对中国的发展成就，给出具体的投稿建议。
简要说明理由：对于所给建议，考生需要简要阐述其理由
【写作思路】
第一段：
简要介绍背景：提及新中国成立75周年这一重要时刻，并表达对于外国好友Jim想要了解中国
发展成就的赞赏。
引出主题：明确写作目的，即给出关于中国发展成就的建议投稿内容。
第二段：经济增长：
强调中国近年来的经济快速发展，可以提及具体的经济增长率数据（如年均增长率等）。
举例说明中国在经济发展方面的成就，如一带一路倡议、自由贸易区建设等。
科技进步：
突出中国在科技领域的重大突破，如高铁技术、5G网络、人工智能等领域的成就。
可以引用具体的技术数据或成就案例来支持观点。
社会进步：
阐述中国在教育、医疗、扶贫等方面的显著进步。
举例说明具体的政策或项目，如教育普及率的提高、医疗改革的成果、扶贫工作的成效等。
文化传承与创新：
强调中国对传统文化的保护和传承，同时展示在文化艺术领域的创新成果。
可以提及非物质文化遗产的保护工作、文化艺术的国际交流等。
第三段：
总结前文：简要回顾所提到的中国发展成就，强调这些成就对于国家和世界的意义。
给出建议：基于以上内容，给出具体的建议投稿内容，并简要说明理由。表达期望：表达对于Jim能够成功投稿并让更多外国友人了解中国发展成就的期望。
【满分范文】
范文一：
Dear Jim,
Glad to hear from you. As you mentioned in the letter, it's a good choice writing the
great achievements of China for the column, the Asia Today, of your school newspaper.
The past 75 years have witnessed the development of China. Instead of involving all
the aspects, you'd better focus on the ones related to people's life. Transportation and
technology are the suitable topics that your teachers and schoolmates may be concerned
about. High-speed trains are the most persuading proof, combining the transportation
and technology. Not only have they shortened the exact time between places when
people travel, but they get people closer to one another. That's really worth introducing.
Hope your article will be a marvelous window for people around you to get insights
into China. (127 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
范文二：
Dear Jim,
Hardly could I hide my excitement when hearing that your intend to contribute to "Asia
Today" and showcase China's achievements. I can’t wait to share my my suggestion for
your submission.
First and foremost, focusing on the economic growth and technological advancements
China has acquired over the past 75 years is a must. Additionally, it is also a fabulous
idea to highlight the Belt and Road Initiative, which has fostered global trade and
cooperation. Last but not least, don't miss out on the green development and poverty
alleviation efforts China has made to significantly improve the lives of millions of
Chinese people.
Not only are these topics central to China's development but they also resonate with
global themes of sustainability and progress. I am firmly convinced that they will
provide a comprehensive view of China's journey and its impact on the world stage.
Yours,Li Hua
范文三：
Dear Jim,
Delighted to know you plan to introduce China's achievements in Asia Today,
especially highlighting the 75th anniversary of the founding of the People's Republic of
China, I'm willing to share my suggestion with you.
In recent years,China has made significant advancements in the field of science and
technology.
To begin with, China has built the Five-hundred-meter Aperture Spherical
Telescope,which has allowed scientists to study the universe in greater detail than ever
before. What's more, one of the most notable achievements is the construction of the
Tiangong space station. This space station serves as a base for future manned missions
to space. Overall, the topic is certainly worthy of introduction. I believe your article
will be well-received by the readers of Asia Today and will contribute to promoting a
more nuanced and balanced view of China's development on the global stage.
Yours
Li Hua
【AI 多角度写作范文】
结构示例一：时间线介绍法
The Remarkable Journey of China's 75 Years of Progress
As Jim, I am thrilled to share with you the remarkable journey of China's 75 years of progress.
Since its founding, China has undergone tremendous changes and achieved significant
accomplishments.
In the early years, China focused on rebuilding its economy and establishing a solid foundation
for future development. Despite challenges, China made significant progress in industrialization
and infrastructure construction.The reform and opening-up policy marked a new era for China.
Economic growth accelerated, and China became a global powerhouse in various industries,
including manufacturing, technology, and infrastructure.In the 21st century, China has continued
to grow and prosper. It has become a leading country in many fields, such as renewable energy,artificial intelligence, and space exploration. Additionally, China has made significant
contributions to global peace and development.
In conclusion, China's 75 years of progress have been remarkable. From the early years of
reconstruction to the modern era of innovation, China has transformed into a global leader. I
encourage you, Jim, to learn more about China's achievements and contributions to the world.
结构示例二：主题分类法
Shining Light on China's 75 Years of Development
Dear Jim,
I am excited to introduce you to the exceptional advancements China has achieved over the past
75 years. In this letter, I will categorize these advancements into three key areas: economic
prosperity, technological breakthroughs, and social progress.
China has experienced unprecedented economic growth over the past decades. Its GDP has
skyrocketed, and the country has become a major player in global trade and investment. Millions
of people have been lifted out of poverty, and living standards have improved significantly. China
has made remarkable progress in the field of technology. It has become a global leader in areas
such as artificial intelligence, renewable energy, and space exploration. These advancements have
not only propelled China's economic growth but have also benefited the world.Along with
economic and technological development, China has also achieved significant social progress.
Education has become more accessible and inclusive, and the rights and freedoms of citizens have
been protected. China has also taken active measures to protect the environment and promote
sustainable development.
In conclusion, China's 75 years of development have been truly exceptional. The country has
achieved remarkable advancements in economic prosperity, technological breakthroughs, and
social progress. I hope this introduction has inspired you, Jim, to learn more about China's journey
and contributions to the world.
