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2024 年高考英语作文真题深度解读及五年优秀范文汇编
目录
应用文写作......................................................................................................................................1
【真题速递】...........................................................................................................................1
【文本解读】...........................................................................................................................2
【题目特点】...........................................................................................................................2
【内容要求】...........................................................................................................................3
【写作思路】...........................................................................................................................3
【满分范文】...........................................................................................................................4
【AI 多角度写作范文】........................................................................................................5
示例一：情感流露与细节描述.......................................................................................5
示例二：逻辑清晰与观点明确.......................................................................................6
示例三：创新表达与跨文化视角...................................................................................6
读后续写..........................................................................................................................................7
【真题速递】...........................................................................................................................7
【文本解读】...........................................................................................................................8
【明确主题】...........................................................................................................................8
【分析情节】...........................................................................................................................8
【写作思路】...........................................................................................................................8
【满分范文】...........................................................................................................................9
【AI写作范文】....................................................................................................................11
【原文结尾欣赏】.................................................................................................................13
应用文写作
【真题速递】
假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课。请你给英国好友
Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括：
1. 你的作品内容；
2. 你的感想。
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
【文本解读】
写作情境设定为一节在公园里进行的美术课，要求考生向朋友介绍此次经历，包含个人
作品及感受。写作话题紧密贴合学生的日常生活和校园经历，与译林版牛津高中教材选择
性必修一Unit 3的单元主题“The art of painting”高度契合。这样的写作任务不仅让考生对
创作内容充满了亲切感，也使得考生能够调动在教材中所学过的写作素材，增强文化意识，
提高艺术修养，培育美育品质，实现五育并举。
从考查内容看，考生需要运用得体的语言风格来介绍在公园里进行的美术课的个
人作品和感想，因此写作任务考查了学生在绘画艺术方面的英文表达方式的积累。写作任
务已经给出首句，是对应用文写作的一种“破”，考查学生如何进行有效衔接。鉴于大部
分的美术课都是在教室内进行，而本写作任务却设定在公园中，这要求考生突破常规，打
破套路，积极思维，从而培养了学生逻辑思维能力、批判思维能力和创新思维能力。
本次应用文写作是教考衔接的典范，引导高中英语教学务必重视教材，切实落实课
标要求，重视日常积累，强化语言运用，实现学科核心素养的培育与达成。
相关话题教材链接
1). 外研必修3U4之1.Developing ideas：Han Gan and his horses (人物介绍);
2. Vocabulary: Chinese art forms (中国传统艺术形式);
3.Writing：writing about an artwork (说明文-介绍梵高的向日葵)
(2) 译林版选必1U3 The art of painting之
1. Reading: First Impressions;
2. Extended reading: Qingming Scroll （清明上河图）
(3).北师大版必修3U7 之Lesson 1 Masterpieces
(4).人教选必3U1 Art之Reading and Thinking：A short history of western painting
【题目特点】
1）情境设定与真实性：
题目设定的情境——在公园上美术课，贴近学生的日常生活，具有真实性。
2）角色设定——“李华”这一常见名字，易于考生代入角色，同时假设的英国好友Chris
也增加了跨文化交流的元素。
【内容要求】
1）作品内容：考生需要描述自己在美术课上创作的作品内容。这可能包括画面的主题、色彩运用、构图
等。
参考文章中的示例，考生可能选择描述公园的自然景色、人物活动等元素，展示观察力和
表现力。
2）感想：
考生需要表达自己对这次美术课的感想，这可能涉及对创作过程的体验、对自然美的感
受、对艺术创作的理解等。
【写作思路】
1）总体内容思路：既然你要跟朋友分享上美术课的经历，那么这次美术课肯定有与以
往不同的地方。
按照这个思路，谋篇布局三个段落的内容：
第一段内容：可以告诉对方，这是我们第一次到室外（大自然) 去上课，这次带来了完
全不同的体验。
第二段的内容：在大自然的环境中（可以具体描写一下阳光、绿树、鸟儿的歌声），我
们灵感很多，我画了一幅自然风光的画（可以选取公园的具体场面，比如公园的湖，有
人在湖里划船，也可以是退休的老人们在公园里散步或是唱歌或是锻炼或者是老人们三
五成群的在跳舞），画的主题是人与自然和谐相处，体现了公园在城市里的重要意义。
第三段内容：呼应第一段，写你的收获，与大自然接触带来的好处，也可以呼应你的作
品内容所带来的感受，希望还有更多这样的机会等等。
（温馨提示：内容多少取决于答题卡上给多少行，但是题目要求的内容一定要包括进
去。切记只写80个词左右是得不到高分的，原则上要写满所给的行数但不要超过所给
的行数。）
2）时态：第二段是过去式，第一段和第三段可用一般现在时。
3）语言风格：语言应正式且亲切，既要符合书信的格式，又要体现出与朋友交流时的轻
松氛围。考虑到Chris是英国人的背景，考生在写作时应注意使用地道的英语表达，避免
中式英语。
【满分范文】
范文一：
Dear Chris.
I am writing to share with you an art class I had in the park last Friday. Given your passion for
painting, I believe you would appreciate the fascinating experience I had.With the aim of relieving our study pressure as well as enhancing our ability to capture scenes
vividly, we were taken to the city park surrounded by tall trees, beautiful flowers and green grass
and required to draw a scene that impressed us most. I was first fascinated by the fantastic
scenery in the park and then a group of elderly people came up to my eyes. Bathed in the tender
morning sunshine, they were dancing merrily to the music, their faces full of smiles. I couldn't
help putting them in my painting. This experience not only served as a relief from academic
pressures but also provided a profound opportunity to engage myself in the colorful life and
beautiful nature as well as practice my painting skills. All in all, lam truly grateful for the
opportunity to have such a wonderful art class in the park.What do you think of my experience?
Looking forward to your comments.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文二：
Dear Chris,
I am writing to share with you an art class I had in the park last Friday. Last Friday
witnessed an art class in a park. The whole class was filled with creativity and joy. I
can’t wait to share my extraordinary experience with you.
The task my teacher set for us was to draw the nature in our own way. I made a
work titled “The Vibrant Nature”. I started by sketching the contours of the main
elements, such as trees and flowers. Then I used different colors to fill in to create a
vivid atmosphere. At last, in order to make the picture more lovely and attractive, I also
added some beautiful birds and butterflies. My work was highly praised by my teacher
and classmates.
Taking an art class in a park gave me a novel experience and taught me to look at
the world from a different perspective. Was it interesting for you? I am looking forward
to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文三：
Dear Chris,I am writing to share with you the art class I had in the park last Friday. It was a perfect
combination of art and nature.
Soaked in the vibrant colors of the park, I painted a landscape featuring a flourishing
tree surrounded by bright flowers. On the top of the tree stood several lovely birds,
which deeply touched my heart. I went great lengths to describe the harmonious scene
on the canvas. Overwhelmed with a sense of peace and relaxation, I felt intensely
connected with nature,which was wholly different from our conventional art class.
It was an incredibly refreshing experience! Have you been working on any artwork
lately? Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【AI 多角度写作范文】
示例一：情感流露与细节描述
开头：
Dear Chris,
How are you? I hope this message finds you well. Last Friday, we had an exceptional art class in
the park, and I can't wait to share my experience with you.
作品内容描述：
My artwork focused on a serene scene in the park. In the foreground, I painted a bench under a
lush tree, where a couple was enjoying a quiet moment. Behind them, a meandering path led to a
shimmering lake, reflecting the sky's azure hue. The details of the leaves and the soft light filtering
through the branches added to the tranquility of the scene.
感想表达：
This experience was truly enriching. The beauty of nature inspired me to capture its essence in my
painting. I felt a sense of peace and harmony as I painted, and I hope my work conveys that
feeling to you.
结尾：
I'm looking forward to hearing about your latest adventures. Take care and stay in touch.
Best regards,
Li Hua
示例二：逻辑清晰与观点明确开头：
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you in good spirits. I'd like to share with you an exciting art class we had in
the park last Friday.
作品内容描述：
My painting depicted a busy but charming scene in the park. The central focus was a group of
children playing in the playground, surrounded by parents and grandparents watching over them.
In the background, I included a vibrant flowerbed and a few benches where people were reading
or chatting.
感想表达：
This art class taught me the value of observing life's mundane moments. It made me realize that
even the most commonplace scenes can be transformed into beautiful works of art. The process of
creating my painting was both challenging and rewarding.
结尾：
I hope you'll find my painting as captivating as I do. Let's talk more about art soon.
Warmest regards,
Li Hua
示例三：创新表达与跨文化视角
开头：
Hello, Chris!
I hope this email brings a smile to your face. Last Friday, our class ventured into the park for an
unconventional art lesson, and I'd love to share my unique perspective with you.
作品内容描述：
My work explored the intersection of nature and urban life. I painted a bird perched on a park
bench, seemingly fascinated by the hustle and bustle of the city beyond the park's perimeter. The
contrast between the bird's serenity and the city's energy was a key element in my composition.
感想表达：
This art class broadened my horizons. It reminded me of the importance of appreciating diversity
and finding beauty in unexpected places. As a cross-cultural exchange, I believe my painting
bridges the gap between our two worlds.
结尾：I'm eager to hear your thoughts on my work. Keep in touch, and don't forget to share your own
artistic creations with me!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
读后续写
【真题速递】
I met Gunter on a cold, wet and unforgettable evening in September. I had planned to fly to
Vienna and take a bus to Prague for a conference. Due to a big storm, my flight had been delayed
by an hour and a half. I touched down in Vienna just 30 minutes before the departure of the last
bus to Prague. The moment I got off the plane, I ran like crazy through the airport building and
jumped into the first taxi on the rank without a second thought.
That was when I met Gunter. I told him where I was going, but he said he hadn’t heard of the bus
station. I thought my pronunciation was the problem, so I explained again more slowly, but he still
looked confused. When I was about to give up, Gunter fished out his little phone and rang up a
friend. After a heated discussion that lasted for what seemed like a century, Gunter put his phone
down and started the car.
Finally, with just two minutes to spare we rolled into the bus station. Thankfully, there was a long
queue (队列) still waiting to board the bus. Gunter parked the taxi behind the bus, turned around,
and looked at me with a big smile on his face. “We made it,” he said.
Just then I realised that I had zero cash in my wallet. I flashed him an apologetic smile as I pulled
out my Portuguese bankcard. He tried it several times, but the card machine just did not play
along. A feeling of helplessness washed over me as I saw the bus queue thinning out.
At this moment, Gunter pointed towards the waiting hall of the bus station. There, at the entrance,
was a cash machine. I jumped out of the car, made a mad run for the machine, and popped my
card in, only to read the message: “Out of order. Sorry.”
续写部分：Para. 1:I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news.
_______________________________________________________________________________
Para. 2:Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised.___________________________________________________________________
【文本解读】
本文一篇记叙文，主题语境是人与自我：做人与做事，试题情景是以第一人
称描述了作者“我”乘飞机到维也纳，然后要转乘公交车去Prague参加一个会
议。但由于暴风雨，飞机被延误一个半小时，当作者到达维也纳机场时，离最
后一班到Prague的公交车仅剩半小时。于是，作者下机后狂奔出机场，跳上出
租车，紧赶慢赶，终于赶上末班车。但由于取款机故障无法向出租汽车司机付
费。作者承诺四天后返回维也纳时再联系出租汽车司机的故事。其核心价值在
引导考生讲诚信、守承诺，学会感恩以及赞扬出租汽车司机以人为本、宽以待
人的品质。
【明确主题】
该语篇讲述了作者在出差途中，与出租车司机协商解决车费支付问题的故事，
提示学生循着信任他人与遵守诺言的思路进行续写，引导学生培养诚实守信的
美好品德。
【分析情节】
根据立德树人的正能量原则，这篇文章所传达的点有两个：
1. Gunter一定会帮了我，让我及时上车去参加了我的会议。
2.我也遵守诺言，4天后回到维也纳，找到司机把车钱付给了他。
【写作思路】
第一段续写思路：
根据第一段首句 I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. 设定第一个镜头：
Gunter听到坏消息的反应。
用 “I”的视角去描述，可以有Gunter面部表情，心里活动，甚至还会有简短的对话.
Gunter 没有生气或失望，相反，他催促我赶紧上车，并且安慰我说不用给钱了。
Much to my surprise, he urged me to get on the bus instead of getting angry or
disappointed, adding that I didn’t have to pay him for the ride for it was the
machines’ fault but not mine, with a broad smile on his face.
第二个镜头：我的心理活动及动作描写。我肯定感到如释重负，赶紧上车。第二段的首
句提醒我们还要写问出租车司机要电话号码并承诺返回维也纳后联系他。
A feeling of relief surged through my whole body.(模仿原文语言特色，但不能抄袭，稍
微做一下改动） Before boarding the bus ,I asked Gunter for his phone number,
ensuring that I was bound to pay him after returning to Vienna.第三个镜头：可以写我坐在车上心情，如果答题卡上还有空间，可以顺便提一下你的会
议情况，如果已经是最后一行了，可以就此打住。
回顾第一段的环境描写，这是一个又冷又下雨的旁晚，那么衬托出你此时此刻感受到的
温暖以及你很感激这个司机的帮助。
Hardly had I sat on the bus when it started to move. Instantly, an intense wave of relief
and gratitude surrounded me like a beam of sunlight, throwing me into a sense of kindness
and warmth.
把三个镜头连成段落，中间还可以加上一些承上启下的词或句子。
【满分范文】
范文一：
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. Much to my surprise, however , he urged
me to get on the bus in no time instead of getting angry or disappointed, adding that I
didn’t have to pay him for the ride for it was the machines’ fault but not mine, with a
broad smile on his face. A feeling of relief surged through my whole body and before
boarding the bus ,I asked Gunter for his phone number, ensuring that I was bound to pay
him after returning to Vienna. He just waved good-bye to me and wished me a smooth
journey . Hardly had I sat on the bus when it started to move. Instantly, an intense wave
of relief and gratitude surrounded me like a beam of sunlight, throwing me into a sense of
kindness and warmth.
Four days later, When I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He agreed to meet
me in a delighted voice. A few minutes later, when Gunter got out of his car and approached me,
I rushed to him and gave him a bear hug, conveying my sincere appreciation to him. Then I gave
him the money along with a small gift. I gratefully informed him that it was with his assistance
that I didn’t miss my important conference. It turned out to be a turning point in my successful
future career life. Hearing what I said, Guter responded to me by flashing me a celebrating
smile.Never before had I got such a unique experience, which was deeply engraved（雕刻） in
my mind and had a profound influence on me in the rest of my life. A small act of kindness could
make a great difference to others.
范文二：I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He looked at me in
disbelief, asking me what to do. Giving him another apologetic smile (呼应原
文), I asked him for a delay in payment and promised to call him and pay him
back the money I owed him ( 有 效 衔 接 第 二 段 首 句 信 息 ). To my surprise,
Gunter wrote down his phone number without hesitation and gave it to me.
“Just keep your promise, Sir.” A feeling of gratitude washed over me (无灵主
语句，生动形象). I gave him a firm handshake, jumped out of the car and
made a mad dash for the bus and jumped onto it just before it left (呼应原文，
四连动增强了动作的画面感).
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as
promised. We met at the bus station where he had dropped me off four days
before (和原文形成有效衔接). As soon as I saw him, I gave him a big hug. I
told him that thanks to his kindness and timely help, everything had gone
smoothly (和原文形成有效衔接，侧面表达了“我”的感激之情). I paid him for
the ride, along with a generous tip, which he declined. I felt blessed to have
met such a warm-hearted man. After that, we became good friends and kept in
touch with each other regularly (结局美满，顺理成章).
范文三：
Paragraph 1: I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. His face showed a hint of
concern, but he quickly nodded in understanding.（合理的情绪：Gunter 有一些担心，
但却表示理解）“Don’t worry,” he said calmly. “You can pay me back later.” （适当而
且必要的对话描写）I was surprised by his kindness and insisted on getting his contact
information. Gunter wrote down his number and handed it to me.（要司机的手机号才能
和第二段首句合理衔接）“Promise you’ll call me when you’re back.” he said with a
smile. I thanked him and hurried out. As I boarded the bus just in time, I waved goodbye
to Gunter, who was standing by his taxi, feeling a mix of relief and gratitude.（合理的情
绪：如释重负、心怀感激）
Paragraph 2: Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as
promised. He answered the phone cheerfully. We arranged to meet at a café near
the Vienna airport.（合理的地点：作者出差开会结束，原路返程）When we met, Ihanded him the cash I owed along with a small token of appreciation – a local delicacy
from Prague.（合理的内容创设：一个感谢小礼物）“This is to thank you for your
help,” I said, smiling. Gunter accepted the gift with a warm grin, and we spent the next
hour talking about our lives and travels. Through this encounter, I not only attended
my conference but also gained a new friend. Gunter’s kindness left a lasting impact,
reminding me of goodness in unexpected places. (文末适度升华故事主题)
【AI写作范文】
范文一：
Para. 1:
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. His face fell, but he quickly recovered his
composure. "Don't worry," he said, "I'll lend you the money." With that, he handed me a crisp
note. I was overwhelmed by his kindness and couldn't find the words to express my gratitude. As I
boarded the bus, Gunter waved goodbye, his smile still bright. The bus pulled away, leaving me
with a newfound appreciation for the goodness of strangers. This small act of kindness left a
lasting impression on me, a reminder that humanity still shines in unexpected places.
Para. 2:
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. His voice was warm and
welcoming over the phone. I thanked him profusely for his help and insisted on repaying him. He
laughed and said, "It was nothing, really. I'm just glad I could be there for you." We talked for a
while, getting to know each other better. It was a chance encounter that turned into a meaningful
friendship. Gunter's kindness and generosity taught me the value of being there for others, no
matter how small the gesture may seem. I left Vienna with a heart full of gratitude and a newfound
friend.
范文二：
Para. 1:
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He furrowed his brow, but his face quickly
softened. "Don't worry," he said, "I'll take care of it." He reached into his pocket and handed me a
few bills. I was speechless, overwhelmed by his kindness. As I boarded the bus, I turned to thank
him, but he was already gone, disappearing into the crowd. I sat down, feeling a sense of warmthin the cold autumn evening. Gunter's generosity had not only saved me from a tricky situation, but
also restored my faith in humanity.
Para. 2:
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. His voice sounded as
friendly and warm as before. I thanked him profusely for his help and offered to pay him back. He
laughed and said, "It's nothing, really. I was just happy to be able to help." We talked for a while,
discussing our respective lives and plans. I felt a strong bond of gratitude and friendship forming
between us. Before hanging up, I promised to keep in touch, and Gunter assured me that he would
do the same. It was a small act of kindness that had changed both our lives for the better.
范文三：
Para. 1:
I ran back to Gunter and told him the bad news. He paused for a moment, eyes scanning the
dwindling crowd of passengers boarding the bus. Then, with a shrug of his shoulders, he reached
into his pocket and handed me a few notes. "Here, take this," he said with a smile. "It's enough for
your ticket. You can pay me back later." I was stunned by his generosity and quickly thanked him.
With a nod and a wave, I boarded the bus, feeling a sense of gratitude and relief wash over me.
Para. 2:
Four days later, when I was back in Vienna, I called Gunter as promised. He answered with a
cheery hello, and I thanked him again for his help. "It's nothing," he said. "Just happy to have been
able to lend a hand." We talked for a while, catching up on our respective travels, and I offered to
pay him back for the money he had lent me. He refused, saying it was a small price to pay for a
chance to help someone in need. Our conversation ended with a promise to stay in touch, and I
hung up feeling grateful for having met such a kind and generous person as Gunter.
【原文结尾欣赏】
Blood drains from my face. Gunter, panting for breath, shakes his head.Game over. Fate
seemed to be conspiring against me today.In the distance, I can see the luggage door of the bus
closing. The last remaining passengers are about to board the bus. I look towards Gunter.
I can’t remember the exact words of what I said to him then. It’s a bit of a blur.It goes
something like this.‘I know Gunter we’ve just met. But I really need to get on this bus. Otherwise I have to spend
the night here which will be bloody expensive. I have to buy a new bus ticket tomorrow morning.
I know we’ve just met but I am going to be back in Vienna in 4 days’ time. If it’s okay with you I
can pay you the money then. I’ll add an extra 10 euros for your hassle.’
Then an uncomfortable pause as I analyse Gunter’s face for his reaction.
Then the impossible happened. He nodded his head simply.
‘It’s cool. I accept this solution and trust you. Give me the name of your hotel and we can meet
there.’
I look at him. Biggest smile you can imagine. I give him the name of my hotel and we
exchange phone numbers. I board the bus and give him a big huge wave to my newest friend on
planet earth.
4 days later ...
I am back in Vienna to attend the Wiener Wiesn Festival.As promised, I call Gunter. He’s
happy to hear from me.
We meet at the airport where he works from. We embrace like long lost friends.Gunter tells me
that he wasn’t sure if I was going to show up but was happy to hear my voice when I called him.I
gave Gunter the extra €10 tip I had promised which he would not accept. He told me to call him,
the next time I was in Vienna and buy him a beer.Which I happily agreed to.If my faith in
humanity was wavering, Gunter restored it.Things have changed since we were kids.They tell me
that fairy tales exist no more.Well, they are wrong. Fairy tales DO exist. Thanks to the invisible
knights in shining armour. Call them angels or kindred spirits. They exist in this world. We just
don’t see them.Like the anonymous taxi driver who you meet at the airports of this world. Like
my anon Gozitan taxi driver or indeed Gunter.Definitely, the nicest, the best taxi driver you will
meet in Vienna and maybe Austria.
