13. 新闻报道——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
参考答案
【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every
student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the competition. The route measured five kilometers, from
our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their
classmates along the way giving them necessary help as well as encouragement. At last, all the runners managed to
arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
The activity was highly spoken of, because not only did it provide chance for us to exercise, but also made us
more cohesive.
【导语】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生就上周日学校举行的5公里越野赛活动写一篇新闻报道。
【解析】
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示，时态应以一般过去时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 参加人员
2. 跑步路线
3. 活动反响
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
attend/witness/ draw one’s attention/ manage to do sth. / measure/ speak highly of/ provide sth. for sb.
第三步:连词成句
1. Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which nearly drew the attention of every
student and teacher of our school.
2. The students selected from every class took part in the competition.3. The route measured five kilometers, from our school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.
4. Every runner tried their best to finish the task, with their classmates along the way giving them necessary help as
well as encouragement.
5. At last, all the runners managed to arrive the finish line, receiving cheers from all the directions.
6. The activity is highly spoken of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us
more cohesive.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范
文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country running race, which
nearly drew the attention of every student and teacher of our school. 中which引导非限制性定语从句；The
activity is highly thought of, because not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, but also makes us more
cohesive. 中使用了部分倒装。
2．One possible version:
A Traditional Chinese Culture Week
A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance
students’confidence in our national culture.
During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities, including
singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese festivals.
Every one of us chose one to our taste and we enjoyed ourselves very much.
The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage us
tofurther spread Chinese culture in future.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为上周你校举办的中国传统文化周活动写一篇报道，内容包括：活动
目的；活动内容；活动反响。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累增加：enhance→boost
参加：participate in→take part in
许多：numerous→masses of
获得：gained→obtained
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school to enhance
students’confidence in our national culture.
拓展句：A traditional Chinese culture week campaign was launched last week in our school, whose purpose was
to enhance students’confidence in our national culture.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] During the campaign, we students were encouraged to participate in numerous cultural activities,
including singing Chinese folk songs, attending Chinese calligraphy classes and introducing traditional Chinese
festivals. (运用了非谓语动词作宾语)
[高分句型2] The campaign was a success and has gained in popularity among us students, which will encourage
us to further spread Chinese culture in future. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．A climbing event to celebrate the New Year
On New Year’s Day 2024, our school held a climbing event to celebrate the New Year.
At seven o’clock in the morning on January 1, the students who participated in the mountaineering set out for
the highest peak under the leadership of the school principal. They were in high spirits and full of energy, seeming
to compare with the mountaintop, and the sun to compete against the sun for the sunshine.
In the process of climbing, the students enjoyed the scenery and felt the grace of nature! In the New Year, I hope
everyone can climb high and look far, struggling for ourselves and having the courage to venture! Faced with
difficulties, we can embrace the future positively, with full confidence and bravery!
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
参与：participated in→ take part in
欣赏：enjoy→ appreciate
优美：grace→ beautify
奋斗：struggling for→ fighting for
2. 句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：Faced with difficulties, we can embrace the future positively, with full confidence and bravery!
拓展句：When we are faced with difficulties, we can embrace the future positively, with full confidence and
bravery!
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
At seven o’clock in the morning on January 1, the students who participated in the mountaineering set out for the
highest peak under the leadership of the school principal. (使用了At seven o’clock in the morning on January 1,
the students who participated in the mountaineering set out for the highest peak under the leadership of the school
principal. 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】
Faced with difficulties, we can embrace the future positively, with full confidence and bravery! (使用了过去分词
充当时间状语)
4．Our school held a volunteer activity to serve the community last Sunday. All the students in Grade l
participated in the activity.
My class went to Qingyuan community at 9:00 a. m, where we were divided into five groups to care for the
elderly and tell them some health knowledge. I was in group 4 whose assignment was to help the elderly clean
their windows. Besides, I also provided computer technical support to the elderly, which was welcomed by them.
By participating in such meaningful activities, not only are my interpersonal skills improved but also I learn
when we bring our love to the people in need, our life will be more significant.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生就学校组织的社区志愿服务活动为校报写一篇报道。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
参加：participate in →take part in
照顾：care for → take care of/look after/attend to
此外：besides → what’s more
重要的：significant → important/essential/vital/be of significance
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Our school held a volunteer activity to serve the community last Sunday. All the students in Grade lparticipated in the activity.
拓展句：Our school held a volunteer activity to serve the community last Sunday, which all the students in Grade l
participated in.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
My class went to Qingyuan community at 9:00 a. m, where we were divided into five groups to care for the elderly
and tell them some health knowledge. （运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
Besides, I also provided computer technical support to the elderly, which was welcomed by them. （本句使用了
which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】
Not only are my interpersonal skills improved but also I learn when we bring our love to the people in need, our life
will be more significant. （运用了部分倒装和宾语从句）
5．
An English Letter Exchange Event
In order to enrich students’ campus life and improve students’ English level, our school and Tongji Middle
School jointly held the An English Letter Exchange Event, in which students from the two schools were randomly
paired and exchanged letters written in English. The students actively participated in it. Not only did they made
new friends, but also they improved their English expression skills. This activity had a huge impact on the students
and greatly enhanced students’ curiosity and ability to communicate with people. We all hope that in the future our
school will hold more activities like this.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校与同济中学联合举办了“英文飞鸽传书”活动，两校学生随机配对，互相
交换英文信。要求考生就此为本校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括本次活动目的、过程及反响。
【解析】
1. 词汇积累
改善：improve→ upgrade
举办：hold→ sponsor
参加：participate in→ join in
影响：impact→ influence
2. 句式拓展合并简单句
原句：The students actively participated in it. Not only did they made new friends, but also they improved their
English expression skills.
拓展句：The students actively participated in it, in which they not only made new friends, but also improved their
English expression skills.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】
In order to enrich students’ campus life and improve students’ English level, our school and Tongji Middle School
jointly held the An English Letter Exchange Event, in which students from the two schools were randomly paired
and exchanged letters written in English. （运用了介词in+which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
We all hope that in the future our school will hold more activities like this. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
