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满分练(十五) 应用文写作+读后续写
(限时:40 分钟)
Ⅰ.应用文写作
(2023 福建福州二模)
假设你是李华,你校邀请在福建医科大学工作的外籍眼科专家Tim 教授到校开设关于如
何保护眼睛的讲座,作为校学生会主席,请根据以下内容用英文写一段欢迎稿,内容如下:
1.教授简介;
2.讲座意义;
3.表示欢迎。
注意:1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
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Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
(2023 浙江宁波二模)
When I adopted him,he had been rescued from death inside a tightly tied black trash bag
abandoned right beside a garbage truck on the road.An alert garbage man noticed the bag
moving and used a metal rake (耙子) to tear open the bag to look inside.There was my
shaking puppy dog.The rake damaged the nerves in his back so he limped a little,but he could
run as fast as lightning.
For my dog’s first birthday,I entered him in a fun run sponsored by our local Society for
the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals (SPCA).I’m not much of a runner,but the run was only
3 kilometers,so I thought it would be fun for both of us.
We practiced for weeks.On our practice runs,he was always eager to go and usually
dragged me along behind him.I worked on his leash (拴狗链) manners so that he wouldn’t
trip me on the big day.I felt we were ready for anything.
The fun run was downtown among the big buildings,so the noise of barking dogs all
around us rose to a deafening pitch at the start of the race.My dog was frightened when the
starting tone went off.He had trouble running in the right direction with all the confusion
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around us.Soon the runners began to thin out,and my dog was running straight and fast.We
were passing people and making great time.I was dreaming of a gold-medal finish.
However,when we were six blocks from the finish,my dog suddenly stopped and
dropped to the ground like a sack of potatoes.I almost dislocated my shoulder from the
sudden stop as I was pulled backward by the leash.
He was lying flat on his belly with his head down in the middle of the crossroads.At first
I thought something bad had happened to him.He was shaking and sobbing.I did a quick
check and couldn’t see anything wrong.I tried to get him up,but he refused.The police officer
doing traffic control impatiently signed me to move away so he could release the cars.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
But I couldn’t get my seventy-five-pound dog to get up.__________________________
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Another half-block of carrying him brought the answer—a moving garbage truck._____
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满分练(十五) 应用文写作+读后续写
Ⅰ.
Dear fellow students,
Good afternoon!I am Li Hua,chairman of the Students’ Union.It’s my privilege on
behalf of the school to welcome professor Tim here,a well-known eye specialist working at
Fujian Medical University.
We’re delighted to have professor Tim deliver a lecture on how to protect our eyes.He
will combine theory with practice.With his expertise,the lecture is bound to raise our
awareness of eye healthcare and equip us with practical strategies to safeguard our
eyes.Prepare yourself to be educated and inspired.
Before I hand over to Mr.Tim,I want to say once more:thank you and welcome.
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1.词汇积累
(1)代表:on behalf of;represent
(2)著名的:well-known;celebrated
(3)发表演讲:deliver a lecture;address a lecture
(4)保护:safeguard;defend;protect
2.高分句型
(1)It’s my privilege on behalf of the school to welcome professor Tim here,a well-known eye
specialist working at Fujian Medical University.(运用了现在分词作定语)
(2)We’re delighted to have professor Tim deliver a lecture on how to protect your eyes.(运用
了疑问词+不定式作宾语)
Ⅱ.[语篇解读]文章以作者和狗狗的故事为线索展开,讲述作者收养了一条被抛弃在路边
垃圾车边的小狗,在狗一岁时报名参加了“快乐奔跑”比赛。比赛期间路边垃圾车的声
音让狗狗回忆起被抛弃时的场景造成心理恐惧而不敢前行,最终作者得知了狗狗不跑的
原因,帮助狗狗一起跑向终点。
[思路分析]
1.段落续写:
(1)由第一段首句内容“但我无法让我那只七十五磅重的狗起来。”可知,第一段可描写
作者听到警察的驱赶后,试图让狗狗从地上站起来继续比赛,但是用尽方法都不成功。路
人也开始责怪作者把狗狗逼得太紧。最终作者只能扛起狗狗,跑向终点。
(2)由第二段首句内容“在扛它走过半个街区后找到了答案——一辆正在行驶的垃圾
车。”可知,第二段可描写作者明白了狗狗弃赛的原因后,试图安慰狗狗,直到它放松下
来。最后作者和狗狗一起跑到了终点,虽然没有获得任何奖项,但是最终作者获得了狗狗
的信任。
2.续写线索:帮狗站起来——失败——扛狗狗——知晓原因——安慰——获得信任
[参考范文]
But I couldn’t get my seventy-five-pound dog to get up.The harder I tried to scoop him
up from the pavement,the more he fought me.The officer yelling and cars honking,I pulled
him with all my might,but in vain.Finally,I got my arm under him and lifted him up in a
fireman’s carry,throwing him over my shoulder.As I staggered to the roadside,people around
were taking my dog’s side,laughing I was running him too hard.I was fuming.My dog would
run all day long and he wasn’t the least bit tired.
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Another half-block of carrying him brought the answer—a moving garbage truck.Its
sound must have hit my dog’s sensitive ears,so he cried louder and clawed at my back as we
drew closer to it.I held on tighter and ran as fast as I could to get my sweet baby dog away
from that scary garbage truck.I ran with him on my shoulder until I felt him relaxed,and then
I set him down.He wagged his tail in gratitude for saving him from the garbage
truck.Surely,we didn’t win any medals,but I won his trust forever.
1.词汇积累
(1)行为类
①抱起:scoop up;pick up
②蹒跚:stagger;totter
③靠近:draw closer to;approach
(2)情绪类
①生气:fume;angry;annoyed
②感激:gratitude;appreciation
2.高分句型
(1)The harder I tried to scoop him up from the pavement,the more he fought me.(运用了
“the+比较级,the+比较级”句型)
(2)The officer yelling and cars honking,I pulled him with all my might,but in vain.(运用了独
立主格结构)
(3)As I staggered to the roadside,people around were taking my dog’s side,laughing I was
running him too hard.(运用了As 引导的时间状语从句以及现在分词作伴随状语)
