17. 人物介绍——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
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【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．One possible version:
The person who inspires me
Su Bingtian, the first Chinese athlete to compete in the men’s 100-meter track and field final at the Olympic
Games, was one of the “People Who Moved China” in 2021.
He is my hero, who inspires me deeply. Actually, what impresses me most is his process to success as well as
setting the record. Injury from practices and competitions seriously affected his career and once he even planned to
retire. But it was the call to win glory for our motherland and challenge himself that brought him back. He trained
harder than before and all his efforts paid off.
Learning from him, I’ll study hard, face difficulties and challenge myself bravely to contribute more to our
country in the future.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The person who inspires me”为题写一篇英语征文比赛，
介绍该人物并写出该人物激励自己的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
事实上：Actually→In fact
过程：process→course
影响：affect→influence
奉献：contribute to→dedicate to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： Injury from practices and competitions seriously affected his career and once he even planned to retire.
拓展句： Once he even planned to retire because injury from practices and competitions seriously affected his
career.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Actually, what impresses me most is his process to success as well as setting the record.
（运用了what引导的主语从句）
【高分句型2】But it was the call to win glory for our motherland and challenge himself that brought him back.（运用了强调句型）
2．Dear Chris,
With the Beijing Winter Olympics around the corner, are you also expecting your favorite athletes’
performance?
My favorite is Su Bingtian, the first athlete in China to break into the men’s 100m finals of the Olympic Games.
His hard work, discipline and strength inspire me a lot. As an associate professor at Jinan University, Su is indeed
expert at sports science. Isn’t it amazing?
Who is your favorite athlete? Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Chris写信，介绍自己最喜欢的中国运动员。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临：on the way→around the corner
的确：really→indeed
努力：diligence→hard work
激励，鼓励：encourage→inspire
2.句型拓展
变强调句
原句：His hard work, discipline and strength inspire me a lot.
拓展句：It is his hard work, discipline and strength that inspire me a lot.
【点睛】[高分句型1]With the Beijing Winter Olympics around the corner, are you also expecting your favorite
athletes’ performance?（句中使用了with复合结构）
[高分句型2]My favorite is Su Bingtian, the first athlete in China to break into the men’s 100m finals of the
Olympic Games. （使用了不定式作后置定语）
3．范文
Lin Qiaozhi, known as the “mother of ten thousand babies”, was a famous doctor who won respect from all
the Chinese people.
She was born in 1901 in Fujian Province when girls seldom received an education. Facing great difficulties,
Lin Qiaozhi chose to study medicine when she was 18 years old. In 1929, Lin graduated from university and
realized her dream of becoming a doctor. After that, she went to England for further study in 1932. When studying
abroad, she gave up the chance to stay abroad. In her life, she delivered over 50,000 babies. When she died in 1983,she left her savings to a kindergarten.
Such was Lin Qiaozhi, a woman inspiring others to make a difference.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文。某中学生英文报开设了“人物介绍”栏，请根据提纲内容，为该栏目
写一篇介绍林巧稚的英文稿件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance→opportunity
几乎不：seldom→hardly
出名的：famous→well-known
去世：die→pass away
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Such was Lin Qiaozhi, a woman inspiring others to make a difference.
拓展句：Lin Qiaozhi was so great a woman that she inspired others to make a difference.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Lin Qiaozhi, known as the “mother of ten thousand babies”, was a famous doctor who won
respect from all the Chinese people. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] Facing great difficulties , Lin Qiaozhi chose to study medicine when she was 18 years old. (运用了
when引导时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)
4．One possible version:
Hello, everyone,
Among all the foreign travellers, my favourite is Marco Polo, a famous Italian traveller who travelled along
the ancient Silk Road to China in the 13th century.
He lived in China for 17 years, visiting many parts of China and was amazed to find how beautiful and
powerful China was. He introduced Chinese culture and scientific inventions to other parts of the world.
In my opinion, Marco Polo was really a great traveller, whose mission was to promote the exchange of
different cultures and spread the seeds of civilisation.
Thank you.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，介绍马可·波罗。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：famous→well-known
惊讶的：amazed→astounded
强大的：powerful→mighty促进：promote→accelerate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：He lived in China for 17 years, visiting many parts of China and was amazed to find how beautiful and
powerful China was.
拓展句：He lived in China for 17 years, during which time he visited many parts of China and was amazed to find
how beautiful and powerful China was.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Among all the foreign travellers, my favourite is Marco Polo, a famous Italian traveller who
travelled along the ancient Silk Road to China in the 13th century. (运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In my opinion, Marco Polo was really a great traveller, whose mission was to promote the exchange
of different cultures and spread the seeds of civilisation. (运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
5．We have a lot of respectable people around us. One of the most admirable people in my life is my mother. She
is a kind and loving person who dedicates her life to taking care of her family. She always puts the needs and wants
of others before her own.
My mother has always been there for me when I need her most. She is my biggest supporter and encourages
me to pursue my dreams. Despite facing many personal challenges and setbacks in her own life, she continues to
remain positive and optimistic.
What I admire most about my mother is her unwavering strength and resilience. She has faced many obstacles
in her life but has always managed to come out on top. Her determination and perseverance are truly inspiring.
Overall, my mother is an amazing person and an incredible role model. I am blessed to have her in my life and
I truly believe that the world would be a better place if there are more people like her.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生给用英语介绍一位自己所敬佩的人。
【详解】1.词汇积累
鼓励：encourage→inspire
追求：pursue→seek
积极的：positive→active
障碍：obstacles→barriers
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：She is my biggest supporter and encourages me to pursue my dreams.
同义句：She is my biggest supporter who encourages me to pursue my dreams.【点睛】【高分句型1】She is a kind and loving person who dedicates her life to taking care of her family.(运用
了关系代词who引导的定语从句以及动名词作宾语)
【高分句型2】What I admire most about my mother is her unwavering strength and resilience.(运用了连接代词
what引导的主语从句)
