曲一线 2023版《5年高考3年模拟》B版
第四部分 写作
专题十四 应用文写作
考点一 人物/事物介绍
Writing 1 (2016北京)
第一节
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历
史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:
1.该人物是谁;
2.该人物的主要贡献;
3.该人物对你的影响。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文属书信体文章,向对方介绍自己喜欢的中国历史人物,时态用一般过去时和一般现
在时。
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2.文章要点包括对自己喜欢的中国历史人物的简介、该人物的主要贡献及该人物对自己
的影响。
(1)第一段:按照书信的格式礼貌地回应对方;
(2)第二段:应对方要求介绍自己喜欢的历史人物及该人物对自己的影响;
(3)第三段:结尾,希望给对方提供更多的帮助。
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
It’s great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.
As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late
Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced
modern technologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he
inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.
Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know.
Cheers!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2 (2015浙江)
在班级活动中,当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时,你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人,
还是尊重大多数同学的意见?请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题,用英语写一
篇100~ 120个词的短文。要求如下:
1.从以上两种做法中选择一种;
2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。
注意:短文中,不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。
When I Have a Different Opinion
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答案
[写作提示]
1.主要用第一人称,第一段表达观点用一般现在时态,第二段说明具体事例用一般过去时
态;
2.观点鲜明,二选一,并说明理由;
3.所写的事例有说服力。
One possible version:
When I Have a Different Opinion
We may have different opinions in organizing class activities.When I have a different
opinion,I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.
The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing
collectivism,I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit.Once we were left to
decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum.I would love to go to a
museum,but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic.Without hesitation,I decided to
follow them and we did have lots of fun that day.Sometimes giving up a little can mean
getting more.
Writing 3 (2015安徽)
某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动,请你以
“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1.采访的对象;
2.采访的原因;
3.想提的问题。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
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答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为提纲类作文,写作时主要采用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,
同时还要恰当使用虚拟语气。
2.内容要点:
(1)表明采访的对象;(2)阐明采访的原因;(3)说明想提的问题。
One possible version:
A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview
The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.
I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but
also one of the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space
exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.
If I could interview him,I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was
trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great
fun as I have read.Finally,I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,which
must be very interesting.
Writing 4 (2014课标全国Ⅱ)
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想
完成短文。
1.家庭;
2.工作;
3.业余生活。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
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I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为提纲式作文,注意不要遗漏内容要点,注意上下文的连贯性。
2.人称需用第一人称,时态以一般将来时为主。
3.注意结尾要有总结性语句。
One possible version:
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.I think my life will be very different in
ten years.I will be twenty-eight years old by then.I will have my own family,probably with a
lovely child. I hope I ’ ll work in a computer company as a program designer. I’ll enjoy my
work and get along well with my colleagues.I’ll do a good job in whatever I do.In my free
time,I’ll continue to take regular exercise,such as swimming,running and various ball
games.On my holidays,I’ll travel around the world.In a word,my life will be much richer and
more colorful.
Writing 5 (2014湖南)
学校正在组织科技创新大赛,你想为日常生活中某件物品(如钢笔、书包、鞋子……)
设计添加新功能来参赛。请以“My Magic ”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的创意。
内容:
1.说明设计理由;
2.介绍新功能。
注意:
1.词数不少于120个;
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2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
答案
[写作提示]
1.因为是介绍新产品,时态以一般现在时为主。
2.要点齐全,使用适当的连接词以使行文连贯。
One possible version:
My Magic Neutral Water Pen
The neutral water pen is widely used in the process of study but we often have trouble using
them because of their limited ink and other inconvenience.
To deal with these problems,consequently,I have worked heart and soul to create my own
magic neutral water pen.
The most shining function of this newly designed pen is that it will contain special ink
powder which makes it have endless ink.Furthermore,the pen is made of the extremely strong
materials,which can protect the pen from the damage when it might fall down onto the
ground.Better still,so smoothly does it write that it can contribute to making our handwriting
better.
Such is my magic neutral water pen.Are you interested in it?Hope it will be of great use for
users.
Writing 6 (2013浙江)
请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题,用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文,记述一件
你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下:
1.记述事情经过;
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2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。
注意:文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。
One Thing I’m Proud of
答案
[写作提示]
1.建议将本书面表达内容分为两部分,第一部分写一个典型的事例,第二部分是总结和感
想。
2.时态也需要两种,举事例部分主要用一般过去时,而总结和感想部分应该用一般现在时。
One possible version:
One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school,I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis.Amazed
at how skilful they were,I was determined to be just as good.Later on,I often watched them
carefully to learn their techniques.Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to
challenge the good players.At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my
class.
I am really proud of this experience,because it helps me realise that we all can fulfil our
potential and achieve our goals through hard work.It also helps me better understand the
proverb“Practice makes perfect.”
Writing 7 (2013安徽)
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文活动,请你以“On
the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。
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内容主要包括:
1.遵守交通法规;
2.注意举止文明。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
答案
One possible version:
On the Way to School
These days,breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon,causing serious harm to life
and the environment.Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of
everyone.As for me,it should start on my way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way.If I ride a bike,I’ll always keep to the right and
never cross a road until the traffic light turns green.If I walk,I’ll never forget to use the
pedestrian crossing.Meanwhile,I will regard it as my duty to help keep our environment
clean.Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere,I will also help clean up the
roadside whenever possible.I hope my behavior will make a difference.
Writing 8 (2012湖南)
生活中,你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历,其间有烦恼、有惊喜、
有感慨……请就此写一篇英语短文。
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主要内容包括:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感想。
注意:
1.词数不少于120个;
2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为夹叙夹议类文章。需要使用第一人称,用一般过去时对所发生的事情进行描述,
然后加以议论。记叙为主,议论为辅。
2.写作要点:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感想。
One possible version:
I still remember a day last term when I was in our school library.I lost my glasses,without
which I can’t see anything.
One rainy afternoon,I came to the school library,hoping to kill time.Unfortunately,I left my
glasses on the desk.The moment I noticed it,I returned,only to find the library was closed.The
next day when I went back to the library,I found they were gone.I was very worried.My head
teacher told me to put up a notice outside the lost and found office.My classmates also helped
me and some of them even put up a notice on their backs reading that whoever found and
returned the glasses would receive a special gift.A short while later,a teacher in the office
called me and told me the good news.I eventually found my “two windows”.No one could tell
how delighted I was at that time.
From this experience,I learned that on the one hand,I should be careful enough in future,and
on the other hand,“Many hands make light work.”
Writing 9 (2012江西)
某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下要
点写一篇短文:
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1.你为什么喜欢读书;
2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、科学、文学等)。请给出至少两个理由。
注意:词数120左右。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为议论文,基本时态为一般现在时。
2.参考短语:for one thing...for another...;as we know;a variety of。
One possible version:
I Like Reading
Reading is my favorite.I can never stop the love for reading because books are like wise
teachers as well as good friends in my life.As we know,books are the source of knowledge.I
benefit a great deal from reading.
There are a variety of books for us to choose from,like history books,science books,literary
books and so on.But what interests me most is literary books,especially those by famous
writers.For one thing,they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons.For
another,they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.Isn’t it a pleasure to have great
calm in mind while you are reading?
考点二 报道
Writing 1 (2014广东)
你接受了一项写作任务,要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道,内容包括:
人物:英国人理查德·阿维斯(Richard Avis)
出生日期:1974年12月1日
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事件:2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日出生的人
目的:理解不同文化中成功人生的含义
相关信息:
·借助当地媒体寻找
·迄今找到32名,其中男性17名,女性15名,来自13个国家
·职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等
·计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日出生的人
·打算根据此经历写一本书
*同年同月同日出生的人:time twin
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
答案
One possible version:
Richard Avis,(who was) born on December 1st,1974,is a British man. With the purpose of
understanding the meaning of successful life in different cultures,Richard,from 2011,began to
seek time twins around the world. Due to the help of the local media,so far he has succeeded
in finding 32 time twins,including 17 males and 15 females coming from 13 countries. In
addition,their positions include government officials,athletes,drivers,teachers,artists and so
on. Not only does Richard intend to find 40 time twins before his 40th birthday but also he is
going to write a book according to this experience.
Writing 2 (2013江西)
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星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报
记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:
1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(Daqing Mountain);
2.活动的过程;
3.你对于这次活动的评论。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文可分三段来写,第一段大体交代有该项活动,第二段详细描述活动过程,第三段描述
活动带来的影响。
2.因为描述一项过去的活动,所以时态以一般过去时为主。
3.要点要齐全,使用适当的连接词,以使语句连贯。
One possible version:
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a mountain-
climbing on April 10.Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day.At 8:00,we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top
in high spirits.All the way we were chatting,singing and laughing,enjoying the fresh air and
the beautiful scenery.When some fell behind,others would come and offer help.About 2
hours later,we all reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine,we jumped and cheered with joy.
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The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation
from heavy schoolwork,but it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful
time!
考点三 邮件/书信——请求帮助/提供帮助
Writing 1 (2020北京)
第一节
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们学校英语戏剧俱乐部外籍指导教师Jim因疫情
滞留英国。复学在即,作为俱乐部负责人,你给Jim写一封电子邮件,请他推荐一名外籍指
导教师,内容包括:
1.条件及要求;
2.表示感谢并提醒注意防护。
注意:1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
第一节
[[写作提示]]
1. 本题要求写一封请求信,请求对方推荐一名外籍指导教师。根据信件特点注意写作的
口吻要客气、礼貌,语言简练,将要点表述清楚即可,无需赘述。
2. 写信时首段开门见山,亮出写信的目的,尾段对对方表示感谢,做到首尾呼应。
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One possible version:
Dear Jim,
How are you doing? I hope everything’s OK with you.
Our school’s drama club plans to start practising. Since you’re away in Britain, we need a
drama teacher to be in your place. Would you please recommend one for us?
He or she should be a native English speaker, currently in Beijing, and experienced in both
directing and teaching.
Thank you for your help. Please take care of yourself. Remember to wear a mask when
necessary.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节
假设你是红星中学高三(1)班班长李华。居家学习期间,你们班开展了一次以“自律”为
主题的调研活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文稿件,给你们学校英文网站
投稿,记述你在本次活动中发现问题并解决问题的过程。
注意:词数不少于60。
提示词:自律 self-discipline
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答案
第二节
[[写作提示]]
1. 写作的核心内容是记述“发生过的事”,因此主要时态为过去时,以第一人称为主。
2. 内容要点: (1)发现问题; (2)征求意见; (3)线上讨论; (4)汇报成果。
One possible version:
While studying at home, I surveyed my class on “self-discipline”. The findings worried
me a lot.
To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice.
Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to well discipline ourselves.
After that, we all knew better what to do.
Three months later, I did a second survey, which showed great improvements in self-
discipline. I phoned my teacher about it, and we both felt very pleased.
Writing 2 (2016课标全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教
Ms Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[[写作提示]]
1.本文为半开放式作文,体裁为书信。人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。
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2.文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个
人简历)。
One possible version:
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two. I’m writing to ask for your help.
This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign company, through which I would
like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends. My
application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.
Firstly, I’m wondering if you can help add some contents. Besides, if there are some mistakes
in them, I hope you can help correct them. Lastly, I attach some materials whose format had
better be changed and hope you can help.
I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇 take up a part-time job从事兼职工作
2.出彩结构 I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.(if引导
宾语从句,it作形式宾语)
Writing 3 (2014课标全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注
意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿—accommodation
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Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文属于图表类作文,在写作时主要用第一人称,基本时态以现在时为主。
2.内容要点:
说明写信的目的;
开课时间和每周上课时间;
班级大小;
收费情况;
住宿类型。
3.参考词汇:
住宿 accommodation 宿舍 dormitory
One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the
vacation.I’ve seen your ad,and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English
course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?
Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class. I ’ d also like to know how
much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be a
host family or a university dormitory?
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I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing 4 (2014浙江)
学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书
馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英
语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。
Dear Mr.Wang,
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
答案
[写作提示]
1.本篇书面表达的体裁为应用文,属于提纲式作文。考生可根据内容提示要点组织篇章
结构。
2.注意内容覆盖要全,既包含两类图书,又要有合适的推荐理由。同时要注意论据的安排
合理。
3.并列信息较多,注意利用定语从句,分词短语等“比较高级”的句式进行表达。
One possible version:
Dear Mr.Wang,
Knowing that our library is going to buy books,I’d like to give some suggestions.
What we need most are popular science books.Usually popular science books explain basic
principles of nature in a simple and interesting way.They help us understand science subjects
better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.
In addition to reading for knowledge,we read for fun and inspiration.That is why I
recommend another category of books:literary books.Classic works,written by
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masters,present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.They not only offer us
joy and excitement,but also encourage us to think critically.
I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Yue
Writing 5 (2014安徽)
为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设
你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自
己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封
回信。
内容要点如下:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.词数120左右;
2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:temper n.脾气,情绪
Hi Worried,
I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment.
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Yours,
Jamie
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为应用文——书信
2.内容要点:
(1)表示理解并给予安慰;
(2)提出建议并说明理由。
3.参考词汇及句型:
go wrong:出毛病,弄错 physical exercise:体育锻炼 positive:积极的,肯定的 The truth
is that...事实是……
One possible version:
Hi Worried,
I ’ m sorry to know that you ’ re having such a bad time at the moment .The truth is that
everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong,so you don’t
have to worry so much.The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may
not do or say anything you’ll regret.Here are three useful tips:
First,talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger
out without hurting others or yourself.Second,go outdoors and play team games with your
friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third,remain optimistic
about your future.Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.
I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.
Yours,
Jamie
Writing 6 (2013课标全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,
带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:CA985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
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注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文属提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第二和第三人称,基本时态为一般将来时。
2.内容要点:
①说明写信目的;
②请求Peter接机;
③介绍李明外貌特征;
④说明航班号、飞机到达时间。
3.参考词汇及句型:attend a conference/go for a conference 开会;meet sb.at the airport接
机;flight number 航班号;Would you please...?/Could you help me to...?/Would you mind...?
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference,and I’ve
asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
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Also,I’d like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take
him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August 6.My uncle is tall and he is
wearing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句 ①do sb. a favor帮某人忙 ②in advance提前
Writing 7 (2013课标全国Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,
请他代卖,要点包括:
1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)
2.象征意义
3.价格
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
Li Hua
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答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them
myself with red silk threads,cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape
of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China,these knots stand for
friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them
in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the
knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further information.Thank you!
Li Hua
精彩语句 ①in the shape of呈……形状 ②stand for代表 ③Also, do let me know if
you need further information.(do放在动词前表示强调)
Writing 8 (2013重庆)
调查显示,中国长江江豚(finless porpoise)受人类活动影响而濒临灭绝,
目前总数不足1000只。假设你是李华,现请用英文给WWF(世界自然保护基金组织)写
一封信,请他们关注这一状况并提供帮助。内容应包括:
●说明写信目的
●简述江豚现状
●希望WWF如何帮助(比如:资助江豚保护项目等)
●表示感谢并期待回复
注意:(1)词数不少于80;
(2)书信格式及开头均已给出(不计入总词数)。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a student from Chongqing,China.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文属提纲类作文,在写作时要注意要点齐全、层次分明、语气委婉,基本时态为一般
现在时。
2.内容要点:
①说明写信目的;
②简述江豚现状;
③希望获得的帮助;
④表示感谢,期待回复。
3.参考词汇及句型:be endangered 面临灭绝;It’s high time that...;I would appreciate it if...。
One possible version:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I ’ m a student from Chongqing,China .I am writing to keep you informed of something about
the severe situation that finless porpoises,a kind of rare and lovely animals,are faced with
presently.
It’s because of human activities that finless porpoises are endangered.It’s amazing that there
are merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises living in China.Thus,it’s high time that immediate
measures should be taken.Don’t you think so?If possible,I hope you can help us by funding
our project aimed at protecting finless porpoises.With your financial aid,I am convinced more
finless porpoises will survive.I would appreciate it greatly if you considered my application.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Writing 9 (2012四川)
假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学
的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。
1.对英语学习的认识;
2.自己目前的英语水平;
3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题;
4.对英语教学的两点建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.信的开头和结尾已给出。
Dear Ms Li,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
Thank you!
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
1.要点齐全,涵盖题目中所列四个要点;
2.文章主要以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主;
3.参考词汇:master掌握;memorize记忆;make progress取得进步。
One possible version:
Dear Ms Li,
I ’ m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important,so
mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to
learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that
you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words.Another suggestion is to give
us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with
your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua
考点四 邮件/书信——告知/邀请
Writing 1 (2018天津)
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某
国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月
底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一
封电子邮件。
(1)比赛的时间、地点;
(2)邀请他的原因;
(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
世界青少年机器人技能竞赛the World Adolescent Robotics Competition
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要用第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来
时。
2.文章要点:
①说明写邮件的目的;②介绍比赛的时间和地点;③说明邀请他的原因;④告知Chris训
练计划将发送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition is scheduled to be
held at the end of July in Tianjin. I’m writing to invite you to join our team to prepare for it.
As far as I know, you once won a prize in a robotics competition. Therefore, I think not only
will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your great talent, but also you can offer us
guidance, which is of great significance for us to perform well in the coming competition. Our
training plan is to be sent to your e-mail box. I would appreciate it if you could give us your
personal advice after reading it.
I ’ m looking forward to your reply .
Yours,
Li Jin
精彩语句 1.精美词汇 schedule v.安排;计划 significance n. 重要性
2.出彩结构 Therefore, I think not only will it be a golden opportunity for you to show your
great talent, but also you can offer us guidance, which is of great significance for us to
perform well in the coming competition. (not only后为倒装句;which引导非限制性定语从
句)
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Writing 2 (2019课标全国Ⅱ)
假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内
容包括:
1.比赛信息;
2.赛前准备;
3.表达期待。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文是应用文。主要内容是告知队友比赛信息。
2.文章的主体时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。
3.文章可以分为三段。第一段是比赛信息;第二段是赛前准备;第三段表达期待。
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I am very pleased to inform you that we will have a friendly match with the volleyball team
of Guangming Middle School next Monday. It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where
about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch.
In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough training. So
we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6
pm. I would appreciate it much if you could participate in it on time.
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This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. Of course,
we are looking forward to winning the game. I am sure we can realize it with our effort
together.
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩语句] 1.精美词汇 in order to为了 appreciate v.感激 keep in mind记住
2.出彩结构 ①It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students
from the two schools will come to watch. (where引导非限制性定语从句)
②So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting
from 4 pm to 6 pm.(本句使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
Writing 3 (2017课标全国Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封
邮件,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一
般将来时为主体时态。
2.文章要点:
①展览时间、地点;
②展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。
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One possible version:
Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting
exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and I’m sure you will like it.
The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists
will perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all
over the country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in
paper-cutting. I’m sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩语句] 1.精美词汇 exhibition n.展览 unforgettable adj.难忘的
2.出彩结构 If you like, you can also join in...(if引导条件状语从句)
Writing 4 (2017课标全国Ⅲ)
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封
邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1.球队活动;
2.报名方式及截止日期。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[写作提示]
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1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为
主。
2.写作要点:①导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队
员的消息;②介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;③告知Eric报名方式,
提醒他务必在截止日期前完成报名。
One possible version:
Dear Eric,
I’m writing to invite you to join our school table tennis team. I have been told that our school
team is recruiting new members. Knowing that you are keen on playing table tennis, I wonder
if you’d like to join.
Team members need to receive training after school every day and are often offered
opportunities to watch table tennis competitions, which benefit me most. What do you think
of it? If you are interested in it, you can visit the school website to sign up. The closing date is
15th June.
I hope to meet you in the school team.
Yours,
Li Hua
[精彩语句] 1.精美词汇 recruit v.吸收;招募 be keen on酷爱……,对……着迷
2.出彩结构 Knowing that you are...I wonder if....(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从
句;wonder后的if引导宾语从句)
Writing 5 (2016课标全国Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photography club)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的
英国朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:
1.主题:环境保护;
2.展览时间;
3.投稿邮箱:intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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答案
[[写作提示]]
1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。时态主要用一般现在时。
2.本文要点:①主题:环境保护;②展览时间;③投稿邮箱。
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School Student
Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June
15th and last for three weeks. Any student who is interested is welcome to participate. I know
you take good pictures and you’ve always wanted to do something for environmental
protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited
our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you
can send your photos to intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school.
(the last time引导时间状语从句)
Writing 6 (2015课标全国Ⅰ)
假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生
活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:
1.栏目介绍;
2.稿件内容;
3.稿件长度:约400词;
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4.交稿日期:6月28日前。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
答案
[写作提示]
本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态,以第一人称为主体人称;注
意要点要齐全,包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期;写作时注意恰当地使用
衔接词和过渡词,以使文章行文连贯、流畅,这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要
素。
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I ’ d like to ask you to write an article for our school ’ s English newspaper .
The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries
articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you
please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would
especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the
life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s
interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June
28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
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Li Hua
精彩语句 ①be popular among sb.受到某人欢迎 ②You can write anything relevant so
long as it’s interesting and informative.(so long as引导条件状语从句)
Writing 7 (2015课标全国Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double
Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:
1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.结语已为你写好。
Looking forward to your reply.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为应用文——电子邮件的写作,属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称,时态
主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
2.内容要点:(1)出发及返回时间;(2)在敬老院的活动:包饺子、表演节目等。
One possible version:
Dear Lucy,
I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the
Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We’ll go and make dumplings
and cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together
singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.We should be back
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around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we’ll
wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句 ...,which we hope will make them happy(which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 8 (2015北京)
第一节
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加
龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括:
1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间、地点、参加者等);
2.说明你打算参加的原因;
3.询问对方的意向。
注意: 1.词数不少于50;
2.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
提示词:龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training Camp
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
本文为提纲类作文,在写作时应主要使用第一人称和第二人称,时态包括一般将来时、一
般现在时和现在进行时。
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
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I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I intend to join a Dragon Boat
Training Camp.I wonder if you’d like to go with me.
This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers,like you and me,a chance to enjoy sports
and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it,let me know and I’ll send you more
information.
Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
1.精美词汇
intend to 打算,想要
2.出彩结构
It offers teenagers, like you and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.
(插入语,对teenagers进行举例说明)
Writing 9 (2014天津)
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将
到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:
(1)表示欢迎;
(2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);
(3)介绍本班情况;
(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。
注意:
(1)请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)词数不少于100;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
交换生exchange student
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven.
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Yours,
Li Jin
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为提纲类作文,在写作时以第一人称为主。时态以一般现在时态为主。
2.内容要点:
1)表示欢迎;
2)介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);
3)介绍本班情况;
4)希望Chris做一些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。
3.参考词汇:experience Chinese culture,get along with,exchange student
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I ’ m Li Jin,monitor of Class One,Grade Eleven. I’m delighted to hear that you will come to our
class as an exchange student next term.I feel it an honor for us to study with you.Now I have
something to tell you.Firstly,with the climate changing,you should prepare enough
clothes.Then it is different kinds of foods and snacks that give you the chance to experience
abundant Chinese food culture.In addition,every student in our class can be in harmony with
foreign friends,which makes it easy for you to get along with them.
Last but not least,we can do what we can to help you,but you must get prepared to meet all
kinds of difficulties.During your stay here,I hope you can tell us more about American
culture.Only by understanding and learning from each other can we spend those days together
happily.
Yours,
Li Jin
Writing 10 (2012大纲全国Ⅱ)
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假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参
加,要点包括:
1.时间:周五晚8点至9点
2.地点:学生俱乐部
3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
4.要求:备小礼物
注意:
1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hi Susan,
We’re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming’s birthday.
答案
[写作提示]
本文属于书信体文章(邀请信)。主要是邀请外教参加小明的生日聚会。写作要点如下:
时间:周五晚8点至9点
地点:学生俱乐部
内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等
要求:备小礼物
建议使用第一人称,时态以一般将来时为主。
参考短语及句型:would like to invite sb.to someplace
It’ll be nice to see how excited he will be.
have a good time at the party
gather at/prepare a little present/light the candles/sing “Happy Birthday”
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One possible version:
Hi Susan,
We ’ re throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming ’ s birthday .We’d like to invite you to the
party.We want to give him a surprise,so please keep it secret.We’ll gather at the Students’
Club at 8 pm this Friday,after the evening classes.And it’s going to last about an hour.We
each will prepare a little present.When he comes,we’ll light the candles and sing“Happy
Birthday”together for him.Then the cake will be cut and we’ll sing songs and play games.It’ll
be nice to see how excited he will be.I’m sure you’ll have a good time at the party,too.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 11 (2012天津)
假设你是李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他热爱中国文化,特别
是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2:00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英
台》。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。
◇提出邀请并简述原因;
◇提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等);
◇请求对方回复。
注意:
1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
越剧Shaoxing Opera 《梁山伯与祝英台》Butterfly Lovers 天津大剧院Tianjin Grand
Theater
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.
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Yours,
Li Jin
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文属于书信体文章(邀请信)。建议使用第一人称,时态以一般将来时为主。
2.写作要点:提出邀请并简述原因;提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆
等);请求对方回复。
3.参考词汇:would like to invite sb.to do sth.想邀请某人做某事;be on show在上映;appeal
to sb.吸引某人。
One possible version:
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you.A Shaoxing Opera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in
Tianjin Grand Theater,which was just completed,at 2:00 p.m.on August 5th.It is because I
know you like the culture of China,especially drama,that I would like to invite you to admire
it.
As we all know,Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama,telling about two young persons’
moving love story.After watching it,shall we visit some places nearby,such as the art
museum,in which lots of rich art will appeal to you enormously?
I will be very glad if you come.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
考点五 邮件/书信——申请/求职
Writing 1 (2015陕西)
假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅
读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
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Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15—17,2015,is now looking for 20
student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If
you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at
chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点:
1.表达写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:
1.邮件词数不少于100;
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;
3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;
4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms Chen,
I’m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
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1.本文为提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第一人称,时态主要包括一般现在时和一般将来
时。
2.内容要点:(1)表达写信意图;(2)陈述应征目的;(3)说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
One possible version:
Dear Ms Chen,
I ’ m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student
volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able
to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in
speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good command
of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a
helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by
both teachers and my classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give
me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
Writing 2 (2015四川)
假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通
话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮
件。
1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿;
2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由;
3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议;
4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。
注意:
1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
Hi,Sharon,
This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.
Li Xia
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为提纲类作文,在写作时使用第一人称,时态主要包括一般过去时、一般现在时和
一般将来时。
2.内容要点:
(1)向Sharon表达帮助她学习普通话的意愿;
(2)说明自己能胜任的理由;
(3)给出讲好普通话的两点建议;
(4)提出自己学习英语的具体需求。
One possible version:
Hi,Sharon,
This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am more
than willing to lend a helping hand to you.
I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I have such a good command of
Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our school,but I
also won the second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year.When it comes to
improving Mandarin,my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice
speaking it whenever possible.Just as the saying goes,practice makes perfect.
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By the way,I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability,especially the
proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Xia
考点六 邮件/书信——沟通/交流
Writing 1(2013辽宁)
一个英文网站面向中学生征稿。请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日
里的主要活动。
写作要点:
1.它是中国的传统节日之一;
2.家人团聚;
3.赏月、吃月饼;
4.还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中秋节the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历lunar calendar
赏月enjoy the full moon 月饼moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar
calendar.
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答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为提纲类的说明文;人称为第一人称;基本时态为一般现在时。
2.内容要点:
(1)介绍中秋节是中国的传统节日之一;
(2)描写家人团聚;
(3)描写赏月和吃月饼的情景;
(4)描写旅游、访友等其他活动。
3.参考词汇和短语:
中秋节the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月enjoy the full moon 月饼moon cake
走亲访友visit relatives or friends
One possible version:
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar
calendar.As one of the traditional Chinese festivals,it has been enjoying great popularity in
our country.Usually,no matter how far away or how busy we are,we will try to come home for
the celebration.The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month.What we
love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together.With the beautiful moon up in the
sky,we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit,sharing our stories.In addition to these
traditional activities,we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our
relatives or friends.
Writing 2(2012辽宁)
假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使
用的英语教材的看法,内容主要包括:
优点:1.话题广泛;
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2.图片丰富;
3.有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议:适当降低词汇难度。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your
house.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文属于应用文,书信类。建议以第一人称给出版社的编辑写一封信,时态为一般现在
时。
2.内容要点:围绕现在使用的英语教材,从教材的优点和建议方面进行阐述。优点:话题广
泛,图片丰富,有助于提高学习兴趣;建议:适当降低词汇难度。
3.参考词汇和短语:advantage,a variety of topics,be interested in,what’s more,however。
One possible version:
Dear Editor,
As a student reader,I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your
house.These books have many advantages.One of them is that we can find a variety of
topics,such as science,culture and history.These topics,I think,are very popular with us
students.What’s more,along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful
pictures,which can help us understand English better.Even the students who used to dislike
English have turned out to be interested in the subject.However,some of the texts have too
many new words and expressions which are hard for us.Therefore,I’d like to suggest changing
them into easier ones.
Best regards,
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Li Hua
Writing 3(2012山东)
假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报
请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英
语写一篇短文:
1.参加英语角的益处;
2.坚持写英语日记的作用;
3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。
注意:
1.词数:120~150;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为说明文,介绍自己学习英语的经验,主体时态为一般现在时。
2.内容做到要点齐全。
3.注意词数限制及不能出现真实校名、姓名。
4.参考词汇:English contest;get the first place;the experience in learning English;English
corner;English diary。
One possible version:
My name is Li Hua,a student from Xinhua Middle School.I got the first place in the English
contest held by our school not long ago.Here I’d like to share my experience in learning
English with you.
First of all,attending the English corner is of great help to improve my oral English,so
whenever there is an opportunity,I’ll grasp it.Secondly,I keep writing English diaries,which
enables me to express what happens in daily life and in this way I can practice my written
English.Thirdly,I also surf EnjoyReading on the Internet.As we all know,we need extensive
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reading to enlarge our vision,so we’d better develop a good habit of reading English materials
every day.
Of course,Rome was not built in a day.Only when we stick to what we have decided to do
will we achieve the goal.
考点七 邮件/书信——感谢/道歉
Writing 1(2021北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不
能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为应用文写作——道歉信,要注意书信类格式以及回信特点。
2.主要采用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
3.道歉信的首段陈述道歉的原因,表达歉意;主体段落引出道歉的原因并给予解释;结尾段
落可以提出补救的措施并给出理由。
4.道歉的原因要合情合理,符合现实生活情境,便于对方接受。
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One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I am indeed sorry that I can’t go sightseeing with you this weekend as scheduled. I do
apologize for it and want you to know what happened.
Just now, my cousin, Li Jun, who left for America for his further study last year, informed me
that he would return this weekend and asked me to pick him up at the airport. You know, we
haven’t seen each other for nearly a year.
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology. I wonder if it is possible that we postpone the
trip instead of canceling it. I will be available in the following two weekends. What about
you?
Sorry again for the inconvenience and I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2(2016课标全国Ⅲ)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内
容包括:
1.表示歉意;
2.说明原因;
3.另约时间。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
[[写作提示]]
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1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文——电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称,时态主要用一
般现在时。
2.文章要点为告诉对方你不能赴约的原因并表示歉意和另约时间,虽然题干中已经给出
要点,但重在适当地发挥。
One possible version:
Dear Bob,
I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just
found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will
not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read
and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not,
let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
精彩语句
cause sb. too much trouble带给某人太多麻烦 be convenient for sb.对某人来说方便
考点八 通知/演讲/欢迎词
Writing 1(2014陕西)
假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一
项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。
写作要点:
1.表示对客人的欢迎;
2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);
3.表达对客人的祝愿。
写作要求:
1.词数不少于100;
2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear American guests,
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答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为一篇欢迎词,体裁属于应用文,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主,在介
绍活动时应用一般将来时。
2.内容要点:
(1)表示对客人的欢迎;
(2)介绍此项活动;
(3)表达对客人的祝愿。
One possible version:
Dear American guests,
On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to
have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled,we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to
develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The
programme consists of the following activities:recitation,singing,word spelling,story-telling
and so on.The Show will begin at two o’clock this afternoon at the Student Centre.Dear
guests,you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from
your presence.
I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.
Writing 2(2014江西)
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华,母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn
in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动,特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据
以下提纲准备一份英语发言稿。
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1.学会学习:方法、习惯等;
2.学会做人:真诚、友善等;
3.其他方面:考生自拟。
注意:1.词数120左右;
2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone!It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to
learn in senior high school.
Thank you!
答案
[写作提示]
1.介绍自身经历时需以一般过去时为主,人称为第一人称;
2.介绍在今后三年高中生活中应注意的事项时应该以一般将来时或“情态动词+动词原
形”为主;
3.参考词汇:学会高效地学习learn to learn efficiently。
One possible version:
Good morning,everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to
learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years,our school life will be challenging. Firstly,we should learn to learn
efficiently. Personally,I used to try effective methods to achieve my academic goals.
Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview
lessons,get actively involved in class,and review what had been taught after class.
In addition,we should learn how to get along well with others. In school,I respected teachers
and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a
harmonious atmosphere.
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Finally,we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really
helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
No pains,no gains. I am sure that with your great efforts,you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful
life here.
Thank you!
Writing 3(2013天津)
假设你是某大学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组
织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
◇个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);
◇组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等);
◇组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等);
◇表达当选的愿望。
注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.请勿提及真实学校名称;
3.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
4.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
副主席 vice president
竞选 run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends.
My name is Li Jin.
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Thank you.
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文可分三段。第一段开门见山,指出自己要竞选副主席一职;第二段根据提示介绍自
己的个人优势及工作设想;第三段介绍当选愿望。
2.人称需用第一人称,时态以现在时、过去时为主。
3.参考短语:have strengths in,hold lectures。
One possible version:
Good afternoon, my dear friends.
My name is Li Jin.It’s I who would like to run for the position,vice president of our school
English club.
As is known to everyone,I once served as monitor in high school and won the top monitor in
Senior 2,so I have strengths in management.In order to make our school life more abundant
and colorful,I can manage to hold some interesting lectures and English parties.What’s more,I
shall hold some competitions,such as a debate on how to study efficiently and an English
speech contest to improve our ability to communicate with each other.
I’d appreciate it if I could be chosen;I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.
Thank you.
Writing 4(2012安徽)
假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请
你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。
注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.词数120左右;
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。
参考词汇:文科arts;理科science
Good afternoon,everyone,
Welcome to our school!
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Thanks!
答案
[写作提示]
1.本文为应用文——发言稿;人称:第一人称;基本时态:一般现在时。
2.内容要点:
(1)介绍自己的选择;
(2)陈述理由或原因;
(3)总结概括。
3.参考词汇及句型:
be faced with 面对;careful consideration 仔细考虑;major主修(学科);The reasons are as
follows.理由如下。
One possible version:
Good afternoon,everyone,
Welcome to our school!High school students are faced with a choice between arts and
science.It was not an easy choice for me to make.After careful consideration,though,I decided
on science as my main subject of study.The reasons are as follows.
First,science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China.Second,the science
major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist.Third,my parents
wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a
science student.Last but not least,my physics teacher is my role model,whose influence on me
had a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.
Thanks!
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