05. 建议信——2025 年高考备考英语应用文写作快速突破
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【最新真题、模拟题、联考试题】
1．Dear Chris,
I'm Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School.It’s our great pleasure to have you visit our school and give a
lecture on western art during the coming summer vacation.
When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you could deliver
the lecture on this topic. Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden
our horizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities. It also gives us strength and hope when we are
overcoming difficulties.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice, and I hope that I can gain more knowledge through the
lecture. Looking forward to your early reply.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英方教师Chris写信，就一个有关西方艺术的讲座内容给出意见。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
做演讲：give a lecture→make a speech
提供：provide sb. with sth.→refer sb. sth.
机会：opportunity→chance
采纳建议：take one’s advice→follow one’s advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Served as a bridge, western music provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden our horizons and
have a better understanding on culture diversities.
拓展句：Western music，which is served as a bridge ，provides us teenagers with the opportunity to broaden ourhorizons and have a better understanding on culture diversities.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】When it comes to my suggestions, I am quite interested in western music, and expect that you
could deliver the lecture on this topic.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It also gives us strength and hope when we are overcoming difficulties.（运用了when引导的时
间状语从句）
2．Dear Mike,
Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m
writing to share my ideas with you.
If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture. Nowadays, you can
see modern farmers using cutting-edge technologies and devices for agricultural production, monitoring and
management. Thanks to this, the efficiency is greatly improved and the country’s grain security is guaranteed.
Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold much appeal for the
viewers.
May your entry stand out in the competition!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给准备参加“厉害了，中国”(Amazing China) 短视频大赛的交换生
Mike回一封邮件，就视频创意提出建议并阐明理由。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
想法：idea →opinion
安全：security →safety
因此：therefore →thus
确信：convinced →sure
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China, I’m
writing to share my ideas with you.
拓展句：Because I learn you’re going to sign up for the short video competition on the theme of Amazing China,I’m writing to share my ideas with you.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】If I were you, I would not hesitate to shoot a short video about China’s smart agriculture.（运用了
虚拟语气）
【高分句型2】Therefore, I’m convinced that showing the enormous changes in Chinese agriculture will hold
much appeal for the viewers.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和动名词短语作主语）
3．Dear John,
Hearing that you are in charge of holding the Chinese Culture Festival at school, I’m writing to give you
some advice.
To begin with, it’s highly recommended that the festival should consist of paper-cutting, calligraphy and
Chinese art paintings, which indicate Chinese traditional culture and convey the beauty of Chinese art. Additionally,
some Chinese activities, Lion Dancing for example, can be included to motivate students’ love for Chinese culture.
To sum up, the programme not only gives your peers deep ins ight into Chinese culture but builds up interaction
between British and Chinese people.
I hope my ad vice will be of help to you and I’m looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】
本篇书面表达是应用文。要求考生给英国朋友John回信，给出关于如何策划中国文化节的建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
首先：To begin with→Firstly
表达，传递：convey→express
此外：Additionally→Moreover
总之：To sum up→In a word
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Additionally, some Chinese activities, Lion Dancing for example, can be included to motivate students’ love
for Chinese culture.
拓展句：Additionally, what motivates students’ love for Chinese culture, Lion Dancing for example, should be
taken into account.【点睛】
【高分句型1】Hearing that you are in charge of holding the Chinese Culture Festival at school, I’m writing to
give you some advice.（运用了现在分词Hearing作原因状语以及that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】To begin with, it’s highly recommended that the festival should consist of paper-cutting,
calligraphy and Chinese art paintings, which indicate Chinese traditional culture and convey the beauty of Chinese
art. （运用了固定句型it’s highly recommended that...以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
4．
School clubs play an important role in enriching students’ campus life, promoting students’ abilities and
developing students’ interests.
In my opinion, it is best to follow some principles to join clubs. First of all, the club you choose must be
relevant to your interests and strengths. Secondly, don’t try to attend every club, which will affect your normal
study. Finally, it is better to join the club under the guidance of the teacher, so that you can avoid blindly following
the trend.
I hope all students can develop their own specialties and hobbies while studying well.
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议，要求考生按照要求用
英语写一篇短文并投稿。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
重要的：important→ significant
提升：promote→ improve
相关的：relevant→ related
参加：attend→ participate in
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Finally, it is better to join the club under the guidance of the teacher, so that you can avoid blindly following
the trend.
拓展句：Finally, to avoid blindly following the trend, you had better join the club under the guidance of the
teacher.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】In my opinion, it is best to follow some principles to join clubs.（运用了it作形式主语、不定式to follow作真正的主语）
【高分句型2】Secondly, don’t try to attend every club, which will affect your normal study. （运用了which引
导的非限制性定语从句）
5．Dear William,
Having learnt you are interested in Chinese culture and that you cannot decide whether to opt for the Treasures
of the Forbidden City or the Exploring Chinese Cuisine, I am writing to put forward my own idea that the second
option might be more suitable for you.
The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects. To begin with, as is
universally acknowledged, delicious cuisine is always a popular topic around the whole world. In this programme,
you will be introduced the process of making Chinese traditional food, which is also a part of the Chinese culture.
In addition, it won't cost you much time since it is presented by short video, so that you can choose your time
freely. Last but not least, although the programme is spoken in Chinese, there are English subtitles for you to have a
full understanding of the content.
To sum up, it is advisable that you choose the second one. Hope the above might be of any help to you. Thank
you for your time and wish you a great success in learning about the Chinese culture.
Yours,
Zhao Lei
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国朋友William写一封邮件，给他提一些关于了解中国文化节目
的选择建议。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
选择：option→choice
总之：to sum up→in short
普遍地：universally→widely
有帮助的：be of help→be helpful
2.句式拓展
改为复合句
原句：The reasons behind the choice, as far as I can see, can be analyzed in three aspects.
拓展句：The reasons why I made the choice can be analyzed in three aspects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Having learnt you are interested in Chinese culture and that you cannot decide whether to opt for
the Treasures of the Forbidden City or the Exploring Chinese Cuisine, I am writing to put forward my own idea that
the second option might be more suitable for you.(运用了现在分词短语作状语和idea后that引导的同位语从
句)
【高分句型2】To begin with, as is universally acknowledged, delicious cuisine is always a popular topic around
the whole world.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句)
