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08 求助信
(2018年11月，浙江卷）假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失。
请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：
1. 行程信息；
2. 钱包特征；
3. 联系方式。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to report the loss of my wallet. On 1st November, 2018 I flew business class on
your flight 753 from China to London.
I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However, on arrival in
London Heathrow Airport, I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocket during
the flight. It is a black leather one with around 200 dollars, my ID card, and 2 credit cards in it.
Along with the items mentioned above, the wallet contains a family photo, my precious memory.
As you can imagine, these matter a lot to me.
Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at xxx@googlemail.com
Thank you for your time and support.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇考查的写作类型是求助信
第一步：根据提示可知，本文是一封求助信。李华乘坐 FL753航班抵达伦教后发现钱包遗失，要求给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括：1.行程信息；2. 钱包特
征；3. 联系方式。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组），如：I am writing to report the loss of my wallet.
boarded the plane, on arrival…, I found it gone. it must have……Has anybody happened to find
it? Thank you for your time and support.
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般
现在时为主，一般过去时为辅。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清
晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【高分句型1】
What’s worse, my cash, ID card, and 2 credit cards were in it. 更糟的是，里面有我的现金，身
份证和两张信用卡。What’s worse意为“更糟糕的是”，连接并列两个坏的东西，且后面
一个更严重。
【高分句型2】
I’d appreciate it if you could help me to get it back. 如果你能帮我把它拿回来，我会很感激的。
I’d appreciate it if…如果……我会很感激的。
首段：请求帮助
1.Now I am writing to ask you to give me a hand/do me a favor/lend me a hand.
现在我写信请你帮我一个忙。
2.Iam writing in the hope that you will be kind enough to do me a favor.
我希望你能帮我一个忙。
3.I wonder if you could do me a fvour, this is the first time that my uncle visits us.
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙，这是我叔叔第一次来访，所以我希望你能到机场接他。
4.Iwonder if you some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads,
cloth and otherbmaterials.
我想知道你是否能帮我出售一些中国结，这是我自己用 红丝线、布等材料做的
5.Would you like to do me a favor to have my draft polished?
你愿意帮我润色草稿吗？
中间段：描述具体困难1.1am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,… What’s more,
… What troubles me most is …
我遇到的三个间题很困扰我，首先 ……另外……最困扰我的是……
2.Unfortunately,I find/feel it quite/extremely difficult/hard to do with(使用形式宾语)
不幸的是，我觉得做某事十分/非常难。
3.lt is difficult/challenging for me to do sth.
做某事是困难的/有挑战性的。
4.Thave trouble/difficulty/problems (in)doing sth.
我做某事有困难。
5.Domg sth.is another terrible headache for me.(使用动名词做主语）
做某事是另一件让我很头痛的事。
6.I find myself struggling with sth.(使用find复合结构）
我发现自己做某事有困难。
7.Faced with the above problems,I am anxious to get your help. Would you please
offer me some advice on...?
面对上述问题，我渴望得到你的帮助。请你给我一些建议。
结尾段：希望得到帮助：
1.Iwonder if can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me ?
我想知道你能不能帮我解决这些困难。如果你能帮助我，我真的很感激。
2.I would appreciate it very much if you can offer me some necessary/timely
help(give/lend me some practical/valuable advice)
如果你能给我一些必要的帮助/及时的帮助（给我一些实用的/有价值的建议）。我会很感激。
常见困难：
【生活方面】
与人相处
get along well with my classmates/ the new teacher / my parents.
和我的同学/新老师/父母相处
把握时间
arrange and make good use of my everyday time for valuable things.
安排和利用每天的时间去做有意义的事情
明确目标know the purpose of my life and the destination of my future in order
to passionately live a purpose-driven life everyday.
知道我生命的目的和未来的目标，以便每天充满激情地过着“目标驱动”的生活
【学习方面】
不懂语法
have trouble in mastering the advanced grammar rules and put them into
use in my speaking and writing.
进步太慢
find myself making progress not as fast as before, which has been annoying
me for a long time.
精力有限
can’t be passionate and energetic all day long so as to make every mom
ent meaningful and splendid.
模板①
Dear ______ ,
I am writing to formally request to ______ （ 请 求 的 内 容 ） .The reason for
_____________is that_____________（给出原因）. I___________ , so I _____________（给
出细节）.I would also like to request ___________（提出进一步的要求）. I am sorry for any
inconvenience I have caused. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any
questions, do not hesitate to contact me at __________（电话号码）.
I look forward to a favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
模板②
Dear________,
My name is _______________(自我介绍). I’m writing a letter to you to ask for somehelp. I have met difficulty in _______________(求助内容). First, I find ___________(困难
1). Besides, ________(困难2). What’s more, __________(困难3).
Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to
____________(委婉提出请求)？In the meanwhile, I beg you to (请求内容) so that
___________(请求目的). Also, I would like you to (请求内容).
I’m sure that I can make great progress in _____________(表达期待).
Yours,
Li Hua
1．假定你是李华，为了向外国朋友介绍你的家乡。你拍摄了一段展示家乡风景和文化的视
频。给你的外教 Mr.Smith 写一封邮件，请他帮助修改你已写好的英文解说词。内容包括：
1.请求帮助；
2.修改要求；
3.表达感谢。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.邮件的首句已经为你写好。
参考词汇：解说词—narration
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m planning to make a video to introduce my hometown to my foreign friends.
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Yours,Li Hua
2．假如你是李华，最近你在学习上遇到了问题，你无法解决，你给你校的外籍心理医生
Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下：
1. 描述事件的起因、经过和结果；
2. 希望得到Kate的帮助。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Kate,
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Yours,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的
外教John写一封电子邮件，请他帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。内容
包括：
1. 写信原因；
2. 你的困惑；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
提示词汇Charming China(魅力中国)
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4．假定你是李华，下周一你校将组织以“梦想”为主题的“英文诗歌创作”比赛。请你给
外教老师Jim写一封求助信，请求批改相关语法和诗歌规则的内容。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你市下个月将举办中学生英语演讲比赛，主题为“共创未来”
（Together for a shared future）。你打算参加该比赛，但在准备过程中遇到一些问题，请给
外教Chris写一封邮件寻求帮助，内容包括：
1.写信目的；2.求助内容；3.期待回复。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的外教Cheslie 写一封电子邮件，请她帮助润色你的演讲稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。
内容包括：
1. 写信原因；
2. 你的困惑；
3. 请求帮助。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Cheslie,
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.
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Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
7．假如你是李华，你的美国笔友David准备组织一个“了解中国传统美食（Into Chinese
traditional cuisine）”的活动，写信向你求助。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 推荐某一种中国传统美食（比如：饺子、粽子或南京盐水鸭等）；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 建议活动形式。
参考词汇：饺子 Dumplings 粽子 Zongzi 南京盐水鸭 Nanjing salted duck
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike刚进高中，最近遇到了一些困惑和烦恼。他写信向
你倾诉，寻求帮助。现用英文给他写一封回信给予帮助，提供一些建议。
注意：
1．词数80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假如你是李华，最近收到了你的英国笔友 Jack 的来信。他在信中说，由于刚进入高中，
不知道如何去交朋友，因而感到孤独、情绪低落。请你根据以下要点给他回信。要点包括：
1.表示问候和慰问；
2.提出以下建议：
①放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；
②你的同学遇到麻烦时，你主动帮助他们；
③你遇到困难时向同学求助。
3.表达祝愿
注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
提示：交朋友 make friends； 参加活动 take part in activities； 遇到麻烦 be in trouble；
向某人求助 ask sb. for help。
Dear Jack,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是校英语报Talking Teens栏目的编辑李华，近日收到Terry的一封求助信。他在
信中诉说学习上遇到的困难并感到很焦虑。请你回信，内容包括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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11．假如你是李华，你的朋友国际交换生John报名参加了学校科技读书节的中文演讲比赛，
比赛主题是 “低碳生活，绿色家园”。他很重视这个活动，但不知如何准备，故写信向你
求助。请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2. 具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 考词汇：科技读书节 Science Technology and Reading Festival
低碳生活，绿色家园 Low carbon Life, Green Home
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12．假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter正在学习汉语但遇到了一些困难，他写信向你求助，
现在请你写封回信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；2. 提出建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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13．假设你叫李华，你的朋友John沉迷于网络而不能自拔且遭遇了个人信息泄露等问题，
因此写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他写一封建议信。内容包括：
1. 表示理解和关心；
2. 提出具体建议（如何合理、负责任地谨慎使用互联网）。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear John,
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Yours, sincerely
Li Hua
14．假如你是李华。你的美国网友Mike最近因学习压力太大患上了轻度焦虑症（anxiety
disorders），他写信向你求助。请你用英文给他回信，就如何处理压力提出一些建议。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．假如你是李华，你的朋友小东给你写了一封邮件，说他进入高中以来，感觉学习压很
大，不适应新的生活和学习环境。请你给他会封邮件，给他提一些建议。
要点：1.向你的老师和同学求助；
2.多做运动，放松大脑，释放压力；
3.保持自信 ，坚持探索。
要求：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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16．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友David作为交换生到中国学习。目前，他感到有点难以
适应新的学习生活，发邮件向你求助。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.表达你的祝愿。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m planning to make a video to introduce my hometown to my foreign friends. I have shot a
cuisine video where I recorded the whole process of cooking my favorite dish.
My family are content with the video and I hope to win the match. However, there is one
thing that upsets me. I’m having difficulty writing an English introduction to the video. Till now, I
haven’t got a clue about it. Would you do me a favour? I will be grateful to you if you’re so kind
as to tell me how to get started.
Looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的求助信。要求考生给外教 Mr.Smith 写一
封邮件，请他帮助修改你为一段展示家乡风景和文化的视频而写的英文解说词【写作分析】1.词汇积累
满意的：content→ satisfied
做某事有困难：have difficulty (in) doing sth. → have trouble (in) doing sth.
到目前为止：till now → up to now/to date
感激的：grateful→ thankful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：However, there is one thing that upsets me. I’m having difficulty writing an English
introduction to the video.
拓展句：However, there is one thing upsetting me that I’m having difficulty writing an English
introduction to the video.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I have shot a cuisine video where I recorded the whole process of cooking my
favorite dish.（运用了where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】I will be grateful to you if you’re so kind as to tell me how to get started.（运用
了if引导的状语从句）
2．One possible version:
Dear Kate,
I’m very nervous these days, and I found it quite hard to concentrate on my study. So I’m
writing to turn to you for help.
As the mid-term examination is coming, I’m always under great pressure with the high
expectation from my parents and the teachers, which makes it difficult for me to fall asleep almost
every night. As a result, I can’t focus on what the teacher says in class and become worried day by
day.
I’m anxious to get your help. Could you please give me some advice on how to solve the
problem? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生就学习上无法解决的问题给校外籍
心理医生Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助，需描述事件的起因、经过和结果，并表达希望得到
Kate的帮助。【写作分析】1.词汇积累
困难的：hard→difficult, tough, demanding
专心于：concentrate on→focus on, pay attention to
临近：come→approach, near
因此，结果：as a result→as a consequence, consequently
渴望：be anxious to→be eager to, long to
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Could you please give me some advice on how to solve the problem?
拓展句：Could you please give me some advice on how I can solve the problem?
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] As the mid-term examination is coming, I’m always under great pressure with the
high expectation from my parents and the teachers, which makes it difficult for me to fall asleep
almost every night. (运用了as引导时间状语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As a result, I can’t focus on what the teacher says in class and become worried day
by day. (运用了what引导名词性从句作介词on的宾语)
3．Dear John,
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I’ll participate in an English speech
contest with the title “Charming China”. I’ve finished my speech draft, but I find it far from
satisfactory.
Firstly, I’m not sure of some proper expressions in English and not aware of the mistakes in
grammar and sentence structures. Would you please go through the attachment to this email and
then help me correct the mistakes and polish the speech draft? Besides, I am pretty nervous about
the speech, so I’d like you to offer me some presentation skills, which can improve my
performance.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华。最近你校英语俱乐部将举办主题
为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛，请给你的外教John写一封电子邮件，请他帮助润色你的演讲
稿并给予你有关演讲技巧的指导。【写作分析】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
满意的：satisfactory→content
首先：firstly→to begin with
感激：appreciate→be grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Would you please go through the attachment to this email and then help me correct the
mistakes and polish the speech draft?
拓展句：I would be grateful if you go through the attachment to this email and then help me
correct the mistakes and polish the speech draft.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. (运用了if引导条件状语从
句)
[高分句型2] Besides, I am pretty nervous about the speech, so I’d like you to offer me some
presentation skills, which can improve my performance. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Jim,
Our school will organize an “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of
“Dream” for our students next Monday. Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty
in formulating the rules and evaluating entries. I hope you can help me out of your busy schedule.
Because of your professionalism, you can not only take responsibility for modifying the
grammar and poetry rules of entries, but also give me some suggestions. I believe with your help,
this competition will be a complete success.
I would greatly appreciate it if I could get your help.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为了你校下周一组织的以“梦想”为主
题的“英文诗歌创作”比赛给外教老师吉姆写一封求助信，请求他批改相关语法和诗歌规
则的内容。【写作分析】1.词汇积累
困难： difficulty→ trouble
负责：take responsibility for → be responsible for
比赛：competition→match
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
主动语态变被动语态
原句：Our school will organize an “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of
“Dream” for our students next Monday.
拓展句：An “English Poetry Creation” competition with the theme of “Dream” will be organized
by our school for our students next Monday.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】 I believe with your help, this competition will be a complete success.（运用了
省略从属连词that引导的宾语从句作动词believe的宾语）
【高分句型2】Being the organizer of this competition, I have difficulty in formulating the rules
and evaluating entries.（运用了现在分词作状语和动名词作宾语）
5．Dear Chris,
An English speech contest themed “Together for a shared future” will be held in my city next
month. I am writing to ask for your help.
It is the first time that I have taken part in the English speech contest, and I don’t have much
experience. Since you are an expert in language, I would like to turn to you for help. Would you
please give me some suggestions on how to make my speech powerful? I will be grateful if you
can check my draft when I finish it.
I am sure your expertise will be of great help to me. I would appreciate it if you could give
me an early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就在准备中学生英语演讲比赛的过程中
遇到的一些问题给外教Chris写一封邮件寻求帮助。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition参加：take part in→join in
建议：suggestion→advice
有帮助：be of great help→be very helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Would you please give me some suggestions on how to make my speech powerful?
拓展句：Would you please give me some suggestions on how I can make my speech powerful?
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Since you are an expert in language, I would like to turn to you for help.（运用
了since引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】I will be grateful if you can check my draft when I finish it.（运用了if引导的条
件状语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）
6．Dear Cheslie,
I’m Li Hua. I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. I’ll participate in an English speech
contest with the title “Charming China”. I’ve finished my speech draft, but I find it far from
satisfactory.
Firstly, I’m not sure of some proper expressions in English and not aware of the mistakes in
grammar and sentence structures. Would you please go through the attachment to this email and
then help me correct the mistakes and polish the speech draft? Besides, I am pretty nervous about
the speech, so I’d like you to offer me some presentation skills, which can improve my
performance. I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Cheslie 写一封电子邮件，请她帮助润色主
题为“魅力中国”的演讲比赛的演讲稿并给予有关演讲技巧的指导。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
比赛：contest→competition
首先：firstly→first of all
此外：besides→what’s more2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’ll participate in an English speech contest with the title “Charming China”.
拓展句：I’ll participate in an English speech contest whose title is “Charming China”.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Besides, I am pretty nervous about the speech, so I’d like you to offer me some
presentation skills, which can improve my performance.（由which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance.（运用了固定句型I’d
appreciate it if...）
7．Dear David,
Hearing you meet some difficulty when planning to hold an activity called Into Chinese
traditional cuisine, I’m writing to recommend Zongzi to you.
Zongzi enjoys great popularity for its special flavor of reed leaves. Besides, its diverse
fillings, such as meat, peanut, egg yolk, cater to people’s different needs. To hold the activity
successfully, it is advisable to engage all your classmates in making it. I believe every one of you
will enjoy the process!
Hope my suggestion will be helpful and wish you every success in your activity.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的推荐信。要求考生向美国笔友David写信，
向其推荐一种中国传统美食，以帮助他进行一个“了解中国传统美食”的活动。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
计划：plan → intend
此外：besides → what’s more
各种各样的：diverse → various/a variety of
有帮助的：be helpful → be of help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To hold the activity successfully, it is advisable to engage all your classmates in making it.
拓展句：If you want to hold the activity successfully, it is advisable to engage all your classmates
in making it.【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Hearing you meet some difficulty when planning to hold an activity called Into
Chinese traditional cuisine, I’m writing to recommend Zongzi to you. (运用了现在分词作状语，
过去分词作定语和省略引导词that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe every one of you will enjoy the process! (运用了省略引导词that的宾
语从句)
8．Dear Mike,
You wrote that your parents won’t listen when you tell them things. I understand that quite
well that you are puzzled or a little dissatisfied. You think that your parents can’t understand you
because they are adults.
I recommend that you talk to your parents about your anxiety. It is better I believe to be
straightforward and honest than to repress your feelings and keep them inside. Most parents don’t
listen to their kids because they fail to see that their child is growing up and is becoming more
mature as the days pass by. Probably the best way to tackle this is by keeping your cool.
Remember that no matter how angry they can get, they still love you. Staying calm helps you
maintain your understanding and trying to convince them in a calm state of mind goes a long way
in helping you prove your point. It will also make you sound far more superior to them when you
are in calm mood despite the tense situation.
I am sure that you will develop better relationship with your parents.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike刚进高中，最
近遇到了一些困惑和烦恼。他写信向你倾诉，寻求帮助。现用英文给他写一封回信给予帮
助，提供一些建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
建议：recommend→advise
无法：fail to→be unable to
困惑的：puzzled→confused
培养：develop→foster
2.句式拓展同义句转换
原句：Probably the best way to tackle this is by keeping your cool.
拓展句：It is the best way for you to keep your cool to tackle this.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I recommend that you talk to your parents about your anxiety. (运用了that引导宾
语从句)
[高分句型2] Most parents don’t listen to their kids because they fail to see that their child is
growing up and is becoming more mature as the days pass by. (运用了because引导原因状语从
句)
9．Dear Jack,
I’m really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others after entering the
high school. I’d like to talk about it with you. I hope that my advice will be helpful to you.
In fact, there is also something that you can do to change this situation. First, it will help you
understand each other better to invite your classmates to take part in some activities after school.
Then, try to help your classmates when they are in trouble and ask them to help you when you
have difficulty.
I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的建议信。要求考生向英国笔友Jack写信，
就如何交朋友给出一些建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
做某事有困难：have trouble doing sth. → have difficulty doing sth.
有帮助的：be helpful → be of help
首先：first → first of all/initially
许多：many → a lot of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I believe you will make many new friends and have a happy school life there.
拓展句：I hold the belief that you will make many new friends and have a happy school life
there.【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’m really sorry to hear that you have trouble making friends with others after
entering the high school. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】In fact, there is also something that you can do to change this situation. (运用了
that引导的限制性定语从句)
10．One possible version:
Dear Terry,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in learning. I know exactly how you feel. However,
it’s easy to improve the current situation if you follow my advice.
First, keep focused in class and listen to your teacher carefully. Second, turn to your teacher
for help if you can’t work out some problems. At last, take regular exercise and build up your
body.
I hope you’ll find the tips useful and have a good performance at school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信，安慰Terry并提出建议，帮他
解决学习上遇到的困难。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
困难：difficulty→trouble
在课堂上保持专注：keep focused in class→ concentrate one’s attention in class
进行有规律的运动：take regular exercise→ engage in regular exercise
现在的：current→present
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First, keep focused in class and listen to your teacher carefully.
拓展句：First, you should keep focused in class and listen to your teacher carefully.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】However, it’s easy to improve the current situation if you follow my advice.（运
用了if引导的条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you’ll find the tips useful and have a good performance at school.（运用
了省略that的宾语从句）11．Dear John,
I’m glad to hear you’ll take part in the “Low carbon Life, Green Home” Chinese speech
contest of Science Technology and Reading Festival. I’d like to offer you some practical
suggestions.
As for the topic, I would like to recommend you talk about the protection of the environment
in our daily life, such as electricity saving, water saving, fuel-efficient and so on. Besides, the
global warming gets increasingly attention. The climate is becoming worse and worse day by day.
What can we do to live in low carbon? To do it well, how and what are we supposed to put the low
carbon lifestyle into further practice? What’s more, it would be wise to practise your spoken
Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently.
I hope you will find my suggestions useful. Wish you a great success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本文是应用文。假如你是李华，你的朋友国际交换生John报名参加了学校科
技读书节的中文演讲比赛，比赛主题是 “低碳生活，绿色家园”。他很重视这个活动，但
不知如何准备，故写信向你求助。请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括：1. 表示支持；2.
具体建议；3. 表达祝愿。注意：
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestions→advice
此外：Besides→In addition
应该：be supposed to→should
有用的：useful→helpful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions.
拓展句：I’d like to offer you some practical suggestions, which can help you.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to hear you’ll take part in the “Low carbon Life, Green Home” Chinese
speech contest of Science Technology and Reading Festival. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s more, it would be wise to practise your spoken Chinese to express
yourself more clearly and fluently. (运用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式)12．Dear Peter,
I am delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice with regard to how to learn
Chinese. It’s true that Chinese is not easy to learn, but there is no need to feel anxious. I will give
you some advice.
To start with, it’s best to choose a good Chinese teacher, with whose help you can make great
progress. In addition, you may as well make friends with the Chinese students in your school.
Were I you, I would find a Chinese friend with common interest. Last but not the least, as a
famous saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”, keep in mind that you need practice more. Don’t be
frightened by the seemingly hard task. Break your main task into smaller goals and you will
realize your dream in the end.
I sincerely hope my suggestions are of benefit to you and you will be getting on better with
your Chinese.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Peter写一封信，告诉他一些
学习汉语的建议并表达祝愿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
焦虑的：anxious→nervous
此外：in addition→what’s more
真诚地：sincerely→genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, you may as well make friends with the Chinese students in your school.
拓展句：In addition, you may as well make friends with the Chinese students in your school,
which will give you more opportunities to practice Chinese.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】To start with, it’s best to choose a good Chinese teacher, with whose help you can
make great progress.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I sincerely hope my suggestions are of benefit to you and you will be getting on
better with your Chinese.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略了that）13．Dear John,
I’m more than sorry to know that you are addicted to the Internet and become a victim of
online theft of personal information. I’m very concerned about you. Now I’m writing to offer you
some practical advice.
Firstly, you should never browse websites which could present potential danger and be aware
of signs that warn us of viruses. Secondly, you should not easily trust some strangers you meet on
the Internet. Last but not least, your private information must be kept safe, such as our phone
numbers, address, bank accounts and so on.
Hopefully, my advice will be of some help to you.
Yours, sincerely
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。外国朋友John沉迷于网络而不能自拔且遭遇了个
人信息泄露等问题，要求考生写一封建议信，表示理解和关心，并针对John的问题提出建
议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
建议：advice→suggestions
浏览：browse→glance over
遇见：meet→come across
安全的：safe→secure
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m very concerned about you. Now I’m writing to offer you some practical advice.
拓展句：Since I’m very concerned about you, now I’m writing to offer you some practical
advice.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’m more than sorry to know that you are addicted to the Internet and become a
victim of online theft of personal information.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Firstly, you should never browse websites which could present potential danger
and be aware of signs that warn us of viruses. （运用了which和that引导的限制性定语从句）
14．Dear Mike,
I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorders due to that great stress ofstudying. Here I’d like to give you some suggestions.
Firstly, you should learn to relax and don’t give yourself too much stress. As an old saying
goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” When you are tired, you can go for a walk or
do some sports. Secondly, I think it would be beneficial if you could share some of your inner
emotions with your friends, parents or teachers.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours,
Li hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国网友Mike回信，就如何处理压力
提出一些建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
由于：due to→because of
建议：suggestion→advice
压力：stress→pressure
散步：go for a walk→take a walk
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, you should learn to relax and don’t give yourself too much stress.
拓展句：What comes first is that you should learn to relax and don’t give yourself too much
stress.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I am sorry to hear that you are suffering from anxiety disorders due to that great
stress of studying.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】When you are tired, you can go for a walk or do some sports. （运用了when引
导的时间状语从句）
15．Dear Xiao Dong,
Knowing that you have trouble with high school life, I am really concerned. Therefore, I am
writing to offer you some advice.
First, why not turn to your teachers and classmates? If you do this, I am sure you will soon
improve yourself. Second, taking more exercise can not only rest your brain but also help you
concentrate on study. Last but no least, it is a good way to believe in yourself and keep exploring.That way you will gain more confidence.
I hope you find these tips helpful to you.
Yous,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友小东回信，就如何适应新的生
活和学习环境提出建议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
担心的：concerned→worried
提供某人某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.
首先：first→to begin with
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：Last but no least, it is a good way to believe in yourself and keep exploring. That way you
will gain more confidence.
拓展句：Last but no least, it is a good way to believe in yourself and keep exploring, which will
help you gain more confidence.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1]
Knowing that you have trouble with high school life, I am really concerned.（运用了现在分词作
状语，that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]
If you do this, I am sure you will soon improve yourself.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）
16．范文：
Dear David,
Learning that you have trouble adapting to the new school life, I am writing to put forward
some advice.
To begin with, I would like to suggest that you take an active part in various activities,
through which you may make more Chinese friends. Besides, you had better spend time learning
about the cultural differences between Chinese and English, because it can help you conquer
cultural misunderstandings. In addition, it is a good idea/choice to ask the teachers or the School’sHelping Center for help. Last but not least, it is of great importance to learn to speak Chinese well,
since it can contribute you to communicating with the Chinese more freely.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions would be helpful and practical to you. May you adapt to
the new school life quickly and have a wonderful experience in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友David回复邮件，对于他作
为交换生到中国学习感到有点难以适应新的学习生活提出建议并表达祝愿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
积极参加：take an active part in→participate in actively
各种各样的：various→a variety of/all kinds of
克服：conquer→overcome
向某人求助：ask sb for help→turn to sb for help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In addition, it is a good idea/choice to ask the teachers or the School’s Helping Center for
help.
拓展句：In addition, what is considered as a good idea/choice is to ask the teachers or the
School’s Helping Center for help.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Learning that you have trouble adapting to the new school life, I am writing to
put forward some advice.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】To begin with, I would like to suggest that you take an active part in various
activities, through which you may make more Chinese friends.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和
“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】Last but not least, it is of great importance to learn to speak Chinese well, since it
can contribute you to communicating with the Chinese more freely.（运用了since引导的原因状
语从句）
