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10 咨询信
(2014年，全国卷I）假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广
告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）
注意：1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
参考词汇：住宿—accommodation
【参考范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school
during the vacation.I’ve seen your ad,and I’d like to know something more about your
six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are
there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I’d also
like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is
included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【写作解析】
李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不
清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项，考生要清楚这是一封信，要符合信的格式。这是考
生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。考生要注意动词时态的变化，以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，比如：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、
流畅。使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。
【范文点评】
短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：plan to do sth ;would like to do
sth;pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章
过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：I’d also like to know how
much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用
了虚拟语气，增加了文章的亮点。
开头句
1.I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding /
concerning…我写信想看看您是否能提供一些关于……的具体信息。
2.I would lie to know whether you can tell me something about…我想写信看看是您否能告诉
我有关……的情况。
3. I am … I wonder if you could provide me some specific information about…我是……我想
知道您是否能够提供一些关于……的具体信息。
4. I wonder/ am wondering if you could / would let me know something about…不知道您能否
告知有关……的情况。
5. I’d like to acquire all the information relative to …我想获得关于……的信息。
6. I’m writing to ask you some relevant questions.我写信向您询问一些相关的问题。
中间句
1.I would also like to acquire… 我想知道关于……一些的事情。/ 我还想咨询……
2. Another point I am not certain about is… 我还不确定的另外一点是……
3. I’d also like some help / information on… 我还想知道一些有关……的帮助/信息。
4. The questions I need answering are listed as follows… 下列是我想咨询的问题。
5. I would appreciate it if you could inform me… 如果你能告诉我……，我将不胜感激。
结尾句
1.Could you be so kind as to send me some…on the above-mentioned aspects?能否针对上述
问题寄些相关的……给我？2.Thank you for your kindness and your timely attention to this letter will be highly
appreciated.谢谢您的善意，对于这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。
3.I’m looking forward to / eagerly waiting for a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.我
盼望着您尽早回复。
4.May I have your reply by…（日期），if possible(语气更委婉)？如果可能，我可否
在……（日期）之前收到您的回复？
5.I would greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience.请在方便的时候
尽早回复，我将不胜感激。
模板
开头：
1. ___________your advertisement in the paper, I am interested ________ it.
拜读了你们在报纸上做的广告，我很感兴趣。
2. Now I am writing for some detailed information.
正文：
1._________________, I would like to know …. 首先，我想知道……
2.I ’m also interested in knowing ….
3.而且，我不知道newsletters是否会额外收费（至少3种表达）。
_________________________________________________________________________
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4.就价钱而言，学生有优惠吗？
_______ the price, do you have discounts for students?
As for the price, I ’m wondering _____________________________________.
5.最后，不知道学生是否有优惠。
Finally, it is still not clear to me whether there is a reduced membership fee for students.
结尾：
I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
Or: Your timely reply would be much appreciated.
Or: I am looking forward very much to hearing from you soon.开头：表达写信咨询的原因
With the winter holiday around the corner, we plan to pay a visit to China. I’m writing to see
if it is possible for you to provide me with specific information regarding your country.
随着寒假的临近，我们计划去中国旅游。我写信是想知道你是否能给我提供有关贵国
的具体信息。
中间：分点叙述咨询内容
1.询问的第一点内容：什么时候课程开始。
To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell mewhen the course will start . 首先，你能告诉我
课程什么时候开始吗？用这种彬彬有礼的句子来询问，肯定会得到非常细致的回复。
2. 询问的第二点内容，学费和住宿
In addition, it is still unclear to me how much I have to pay for the course and whether
accommodation is included. 另外，我还不清楚我需要支付多少学费，是否包括住宿。
3.最后，询问课程的内容
Lastly, I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the content of the course in
details so that I can make proper arrangements.最后，如果您能将课程内容详细告知我，我将
不胜感激，以便我做出适当的安排。
结尾再次表达感谢，期待回信
Your immediate attention to this letter would be highly appreciated. May you be blessed in
everything you do.如能立即收到这封信，将不胜感激。愿你万事亨通。
1．假定你是李华，你报名参加了国外的一项夏令营活动，下个星期要进行面试。请你用英
语给交换生James写一封邮件，咨询面试技巧，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.描述现状；
3.期待回复。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_______________________________________________________________________________
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2．假定你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手下周将到你市演出。最近你准备和几个同学成立一个歌
迷俱乐部。请你给你的英国网友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他询问一些建议。内容要点如下：
1.喜欢该歌手的原因；
2.咨询如何办好歌迷俱乐部。
注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，当你得知你校和另外一所国际学校计划共同筹办一场
“最美中国”现场书画比赛，号召书画爱好者踊跃参加，你有意参加此次活动，请你给组
委会用英文写封咨询信，内容包括：
1.参赛作品种类
2.是否自备书画工具
3.其他需要询问的内容
注意：词数100词左右
Dear Sir/Madam，
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Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
4．假如你是李华，一名高二学生，因痴迷看小说，熬夜，严重影响了健康和学习。希望有
所改变，写信向老师咨询建议。内容包括：
1. 陈述所受影响；
2. 表达期望和感激。
注意：1. 写作词数在80词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节使行文流畅。
Dear Mr. Li,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5．假如你是学生会主席李华，你所就读的高中准备举办心理健康月系列活动。你得知美国
笔友Rogers最近组织过类似的活动，请你写一封电子邮件，向Rogers咨询以下内容：
1.活动准备；
2.活动安排；
3.注意事项。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：心理健康月Month of Psychological Health
Dear Rogers,
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。通过网上得知英国一所中学正在全球范围内向高中学
生征集画作进行展出。请写一封邮件咨询相关事项，内容包括：
1.写信目的;
2.咨询相关信息(主题，作品形式，提交方式等，……);
3.表示感谢。
注意：
1.词数150左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，了解到你校国际部正在招募儒家思想宣传大使志愿者，在暑期面向外国
友人宣传中国传统文化。你对这个活动很感兴趣，准备报名参加。由于活动信息不太明确，
你准备写一封咨询信，询问相关信息。
内容包括：
(1)活动的时间、地点;
(2)参选的要求;(3)期待回复并表示感谢。
注意：
(1)词数100词左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
(3)参考词汇：儒家思想Confucianism
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8．假定你是李华，最近你的视力下降严重，看不清楚周边的事物。为此你感到十分焦虑。
请你给美国外教Miss Evans写封信，咨询她如何保护视力。
要点：
1.陈述视力下降的原因；2. 询问保护视力的建议。
注意：
1.词数80词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Miss Evans,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9．假设你是高中生李华，你热爱英语学习，但在学习过程中发现自己看不懂一些英语笑话。
请给一名英文报刊的编辑写一封信，就此问题进行咨询。内容包括：
1.热爱英语学习；
2.不能理解英语笑话的幽默之处；
3.询问原因，寻求建议。注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：笑话 joke 幽默 humour
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior high school student.
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假定你是红旗中学高二年级学生李华，你在网站看到了亚青会(the Asian Youth Games)
志愿者招募的消息，你有兴趣报名参加。请你向负责人Mr. Li写一封电子邮件，内容主要
包括：
1. 自我介绍；
2. 咨询相关情况(招募条件，有何类别志愿者，报名时间和方式等)；
3. 期待回复。
注意：1. 词数100词左右；
2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文流畅；
3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
参考词汇：招募recruit
Dear Mr. Li,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部在校园网上发布了一则有关“英语微电影大赛”的活
动启事，你对此非常感兴趣。请你给该俱乐部的负责人Brown外教写一封邮件，申请参加
比赛，要点包括：
1．咨询比赛信息(时间、地点、要求等)；
2．你的优势；
3．期待回复。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Brown,
Hearing the English Micro Film Competition will be held in our school, I’m writing to apply
to enter it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear James,
I’m delighted to tell you that I’ll take part in a summer camp. However, there will be an
interview next week, which makes me worried. I am wondering if you could tell me some
interview skills.
As you know, my spoken English is not good. It makes the communication difficult with
native speakers. I think the question is that I am always flooded with a sense of nervousness whentalking. So I’m extremely afraid to fail now. I hope to pass the interview successfully and there is
an opportunity to make more friends and know about the local culture.
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你报名参加了国外的一项夏令营
活动，下个星期要进行面试。请你用英语给交换生James写一封邮件，咨询面试技巧。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→glad
参加：take part in→participate in
担心的：worried→concerned
机会：opportunity→chance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I hope to pass the interview successfully and there is an opportunity to make more friends
and know about the local culture.
拓展句：I hope to pass the interview successfully so that I can have an opportunity to make more
friends and know about the local culture.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] However, there will be an interview next week, which makes me worried. (运用了
which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I think the question is that I am always flooded with a sense of nervousness when
talking. (运用了状语从句的省略和that引导表语从句)
2．Dear Jack,
I’m glad to tell you that my favourite singer will come to our city to perform next week.
I’m so pleased at the news that I decide to set up a music fan club with some of my
classmates. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic!
His songs are great, which not only sound nice but can also touch our heart. We can sing most of
his songs and would like to know more about him. But we don’t know how to start a music fan
club and what activities a fan club should have. Could you give us some good advice?
Looking forward to your reply soon!Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手下周将到你市演出。最近你
准备和几个同学成立一个歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的英国网友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他询
问一些建议。内容要点如下：1.喜欢该歌手的原因；2.咨询如何办好歌迷俱乐部。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
迷人的：charming→attractive
创立：start→found
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句：All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic!
拓展句：He is so charming and fantastic that all of us like him and enjoy his songs very much.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’m glad to tell you that my favourite singer will come to our city to perform next
week.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I’m so pleased at the news that I decide to set up a music fan club with some of
my classmates. (运用了so...that引导的状语从句)
【高分句型3】His songs are great, which not only sound nice but can also touch our heart.(运用
了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3．Dear Sir/Madam，
I heard that our school and another international school planed to jointly organize a “most
beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition. Most of the students think highly of
this live painting competition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China
and experience the charm of Chinese art. I also want to participate in it. I am writing to ask about
the information.
First, I want to know the different kinds of the painting entries. Second, I would like to know
whether we should take the painting tools with us. Last but not least, I want to know when the
results will be announced.
I would appreciate it if you can offer me some relevant information.Yours faithfully，
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一封咨询信，询问学校和另外
一所国际学校计划共同筹办一场“最美中国”现场书画比赛的情况。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
计划做某事：plan to do sth.→be scheduled to do sth.
比赛：competition→contest
提供：provide→offer
参加：participate in→take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to ask about the information.
拓展句:I am writing to ask about the information, which is useful for me.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Most of the students think highly of this live painting competition, which
provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese
art. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Second, I would like to know whether we should take the painting tools with us.
（运用了whether引导的宾语从句）
4．Dear Mr. Li,
I’m Li hua, a senior two student. Suffering from poor health and worsening academic
performance due to my addiction to reading novels. I am writing to seek your attainable advice on
how to handle the problem.
I always find it a big struggle to set aside the novels at hand. So absorbed am I in reading
novels that I will seize every opportunity to read them, in class or after class, especially deep into
the night, which unavoidably brings severe damage to my health on the one hand and
inattentiveness and inefficiency in class on the other hand with sleep shortage. Faced with the
problem , I am attempting to have my health restored and my academic performance improved
with a balance made between my reading , attending class and sleeping.
I would appreciate it a lot if you will give me some productive advice, with which I believe I
will change for the better.Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生因痴迷看小说，熬夜，严重影响了健康和学习，
要求考生写信向老师寻求建议。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
解决：handle→tackle
巨大的：big→huge
抓住：seize→grasp
有效的：productive→effective
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I always find it a big struggle to set aside the novels at hand.
拓展句：I always find that it is a big struggle to set aside the novels at hand.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】So absorbed am I in reading novels that I will seize every opportunity to read
them, in class or after class, especially deep into the night, which unavoidably brings severe
damage to my health on the one hand and inattentiveness and inefficiency in class on the other
hand with sleep shortage.(运用了that引导结果状语从句和which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I would appreciate it a lot if you will give me some productive advice, with which
I believe I will change for the better.(运用了which引导定语从句和省略连词that的宾语从句)
5．Dear Rogers,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union. My high school is going to organize a series of
activities during Month of Psychological Health. I heard you recently organized a similar event.
To get some relevant information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event. I’m
wondering on the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us
make better preparations and promote our arrangements. Besides, what matters need paying
attention to.
It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国笔友Rogers写一封电子邮件，表
示咨询他组织过的“心理健康月”的相关事宜。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
获得：get→obtain
促进：promote→advance
需要：need→require
感激的：appreciated→grateful
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：To get some relevant information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the
event.
拓展句：Because I want to get some relevant information, I’m writing to make some inquiries
concerning the event.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] I heard you recently organized a similar event. (运用了宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I’m wondering on the specific activities throughout the week, because the
information can help us make better preparations and promote our arrangements. (运用了because
引导状语从句)
6．Dear sir/madam,
Recently, I learned through the Internet that your school is collecting paintings from high
school students around the world for exhibition. As a lover of painting, I am very interested in this
activity. So with the aim of getting to know some more specific information, I’m writing the letter.
First of all, in order to make good preparations for the painting, I am eager to know about what
the subject of this painting is? As for my collections, my painting contents are more extensive, so I
have to choose paintings that are most fit for the theme of this activity. Secondly, what is the main
form of the work to be submitted or is it unlimited in form? Furthermore, it’s vital for me to know
the way to submit my paintings. Should I submit it by email or just log on to your website and
submit it online?
Thank you so much for taking the time to respond to my questions above and I’m look forward
to hearing from you soon. (171)Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【写作指导】这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封邮件，咨询英国一所中学正在全球范围内
向高中学生征集画作进行展出的相关事项。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
近来：recently → lately
全世界：around the world → throughout the world
目的：aim → purpose
渴望：be eager to → be anxious to
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：So with the aim of getting to know some more specific information, I’m writing the letter.
转换句：I’m writing the letter to know some more specific information.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】
Recently, I learned through the Internet that your school is collecting paintings from high school
students around the world for exhibition. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】
As for my collections, my painting contents are more extensive, so I have to choose paintings that
are most fit for the theme of this activity. （运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
7．Dear Madam or Sir,
The great joy is beyond expression upon learning that you are recruiting volunteers to
promote Confucianism, and I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to inform me of relevant
information regarding the event.
To get myself fully prepared and highly functional, I would appreciate it if you could inform
me of the specific time and the place of the long-anticipated activity. Considering we are going to
serve as the promoter of Confucianism, another point I would also like to inquire is the
requirements for each volunteer, namely our knowledge about the main principles of
Confucianism or the language competence to communicate with foreigners. Furthermore, what
deserves my special attention is whether there is a dress code when trying out for the program.I would be extremely grateful if you could be so kind as to provide me with the information
above and I’m eagerly waiting for your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学校国际部写一封咨询信，了解关于
招募儒家思想宣传大使志愿者，在暑期面向外国友人宣传中国传统文化活动的相关信息，
包含了解活动的时间、地点，参选的要求，期待回复表示感谢。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
关于：regarding →concerning →about
准备好：prepared → ready
充当，担当：serve as →act as
此外：furthermore →what’s more
2.句式拓展
不定式作目的状语变为目的状语从句作状语
原句：To get myself fully prepared and highly functional, I would appreciate it if you could
inform me of the specific time and the place of the long-anticipated activity.
拓展句：In order that I can get myself fully prepared and highly functional, I would appreciate it
if you could inform me of the specific time and the place of the long-anticipated activity.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】The great joy is beyond expression upon learning that you are recruiting
volunteers to promote Confucianism, and I’m wondering if it is convenient for you to inform me
of relevant information regarding the event（运用了that和if引导的宾语从句以及it作形式主
语，不定式作真正主语）
【高分句型2】Furthermore, what deserves my special attention is whether there is a dress code
when trying out for the program.（运用了what引导的主语从句，whether引导的表语从句以
及省略句）
8．Dear Miss Evans,
I am sorry to trouble you, for I want to get some helpful suggestions from you.
Recently, I have felt I can’t see things as clearly as before though I wear glasses, which
worries me a lot. I guess there are two causes making this happen. For one thing, I am addicted to
my mobile phone these days. Sometimes I even play games on the phone for a long time. Foranother, I lack enough exercise.
I know you have excellent eyesight. Could you put forward some practical proposals? I
would appreciate it if you can respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国外教Miss Evans写封信，咨询她
如何保护视力。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
原因：causes → reasons
建议：proposal →advice
提出：put forward →bring forward
回复：respond → reply
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I guess there are two causes making this happen.
拓展句：I guess there are two causes which make this happen.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Recently, I have felt I can’t see things as clearly as before though I wear glasses,
which worries me a lot.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从
句）
【高分句型2】I guess there are two causes making this happen.（运用了现在分词短语作后置
定语）
9．I am Li Hua, a senior high school student. I love English very much, and I am writing to ask
you for some help.
I have been learning English for about seven years. I work hard at it, and my teacher always
praises me for my progress. However, I am quite confused when I read some English jokes in
magazines or newspapers because l don’t understand them. Although I know all the words in the
jokes, I just can’t get the humour. Why is that? Would you please give me some advice on how to
understand English jokes?
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英文报刊的编辑写一封信，就学习过
程中出现的看不懂英语笑话这一问题向编辑咨询。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
困惑的：confused→puzzled
向你求助：ask you for help→seek help from you
理解：understand→comprehend
建议：advice→suggestion
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I work hard at it, and my teacher always praises me for my progress.
拓展句：My teacher always praises me for my progress as I work hard at it.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】However, I am quite confused when I read some English jokes in magazines or
newspapers because l don’t understand them.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和because引
导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】Although I know all the words in the jokes, I just can’t get the humour.（运用了
although引导的让步状语从句）
10．Dear Mr. Li,
Having learnt from the internet that you are recruiting some volunteers for the Asian Youth
Games, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information concerning how
to apply to be a member.
As the chairman of the Students’ Union, I am experienced in organizing various activities in
our school. I also have a good command of English and I can easily get along with others. Would
you be so kind as to offer me some relevant details on the application? For one thing, could you
inform me of the specific qualifications for volunteers? For another, I’d also like to know the types
of volunteer services. Moreover, I am wondering when and how I should sign up for it.
I am looking forward to a reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就申请成为亚青会志愿者一事，向负责人Mr. Li写一封电子邮件，申请该职位和询问相关信息，内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍；2.
咨询相关情况(招募条件，有何类别志愿者，报名时间和方式等)；3. 期待回复。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
招募：recruit→enlist
各种各样的：various→a variety of
此外：moreover→what’s more
报名参加：sign up for→enter for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As the chairman of the Students’ Union, I am experienced in organizing various activities
in our school.
拓展句：Because I am the chairman of the Students’ Union, I am experienced in organizing
various activities in our school.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Having learnt from the internet that you are recruiting some volunteers for the
Asian Youth Games, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information
concerning how to apply to be a member. (运用了现在分词作状语，that和if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Moreover, I am wondering when and how I should sign up for it. (运用了when
和how引导的宾语从句)
11．参考范文：
Dear Mr Brown,
Hearing the English Micro Film Competition will be held in our school, I’m writing to apply
to enter it.
First of all, I want to consult you about the competition. I wonder when and where the
competition will start and how long it will last. Besides, would you please tell me the basic
requirements of the micro film, like the length and content? As for me, I really like acting, and my
dream is to become a film actor. I’m especially good at spoken English, which may give me credit
for my performance in the film.
If I have the chance to take part, I will play to my advantage. I’m looking forward to your
reply.
Yours,Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语俱乐部负责人Brown外教写一封
邮件，申请参加“英语微电影大赛”的活动。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
比赛：competition →match
此外：besides → what’s more
喜欢：like →love
机会：chance → opportunity
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句：Hearing the English Micro Film Competition will be held in our school, I’m writing to
apply to enter it.
拓展句：Because I heard the English Micro Film Competition will be held in our school, I’m
writing to apply to enter it.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】I’m especially good at spoken English, which may give me credit for my
performance in the film.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If I have the chance to take part, I will play to my advantage.（运用了if引导的
条件状语从句）
