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专题 02 建议信
刷大题、提能力
1．（江苏省2023-2024学年高三学情调研试题）假定你是李华，你的笔友Tom给你来信说他下学期将到
北京的一所高中做交换生，向你请教如何提升汉语口语水平。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 表示关注；
2. 提出建议；
3. 期待进步。
注意:
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is everything going? Knowing you would like to improve your spoken Chinese, I am offering you the
following suggestions.
First of all, try exposing yourself to some Chinese programmes, thus improving your pronunciation gradually.
Besides, it is advisable to read Chinese newspapers, magazines or novels in your spare time. In this way, you can
not only enlarge your vocabulary, but also learn to use Chinese as we native speakers do. Last but not least, you
should be brave and make use of every opportunity to practise speaking Chinese aloud.
Looking forward to your progress.
Yours,
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给笔友Tom写一封回信，就如何提升汉语口语水平给他一些
建议，并表达对他的期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion →advice
此外：besides → what’s more
充分利用：make use of →make the most of
机会：opportunity →chance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Knowing you would like to improve your spoken Chinese, I am offering you the following suggestions.
拓展句：Because I know you would like to improve your spoken Chinese, I am offering you the following
suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, try exposing yourself to some Chinese programmes, thus improving your
pronunciation gradually.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
【高分句型2】In this way, you can not only enlarge your vocabulary, but also learn to use Chinese as we native
speakers do.（运用了“not only…but also…”连接两个并列结构以及as引导的方式状语从句）
2．（重庆市南开中学2023-2024学年高三试题）假定你是李华，你的外国留学生朋友James想在中国进行
社会实践，现有如下两种选择：博物馆讲解员或乡村中学志愿者。James来信向你寻求建议，请你给他回
信，内容包括：
1.建议其中一项活动；
2.说明至少两点理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear James,
How is everything going?
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear James,
How is everything going? Based on your interests, I would recommend you to become a museum guide.
Firstly, working as a museum guide will provide you with a unique opportunity to soak yourself in Chinese
history and culture, offering insights into the country’s past and present. What’s more, by engaging in daily
conversations with tourists and explaining the cultural significance of the artifacts in Chinese, you’ll have ample
chance to practice and enhance your language proficiency.
Hopefully, my suggestions will be of help to you and feel free to reach out if you need further guidance.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外国留学生朋友James写封信，给他提出在中国进行社会
实践的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先：firstly→in the first place
提供：offer→provide
充当：work as→serve as
另外：what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, working as a museum guide will provide you with a unique opportunity to soak yourself in Chinese
history and culture, offering insights into the country’s past and present.
拓展句：Firstly, working as a museum guide will provide you with a unique opportunity to soak yourself in
Chinese history and culture, which will offer insights into the country’s past and present.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Based on your interests, I would recommend you to become a museum guide. (运用了过去
分词作状语)
[高分句型2] Hopefully, my suggestions will be of help to you and feel free to reach out if you need further
guidance. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
3．（广东省广东省四校联考2023-2024学年高三试题）假如你是李华，你的好友Caroline即将参加你们学
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】校举办的留学生中文写作大赛的决赛，写信询问你的建议。请你给她写封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表达祝贺；2. 提供建议；3. 表达祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Caroline,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Caroline,
I am more than delighted to know that you have entered the Chinese composition final. Congratulations! To
help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows.
First of all, it is recommended that your handwriting should be tidy and beautiful so as to leave a good
impression on the judges. What’s more, in order to catch the judges’ eyes, you’d better make your writing content
as real and interesting as possible. In addition, it’s a good idea for the language to be vivid and humorous, enabling
your composition to stand out easily.
Hopefully, you can find my suggestions helpful. Wish you a great success in the final.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给即将参加留学生中文写作大赛的决赛的好友Caroline
写信，需向她表示祝贺，分享建议，并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→happy, pleased, glad
建议：suggestion→advice
比赛：composition→match, contest
给某人留下好印象：leave a good impression on sb→make a good impression on sb, give sb a good impression
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】此外：in addition→besides, furthermore, additionally
使能够：enable→allow
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I am more than delighted to know that you have entered the Chinese composition final.
拓展句：Knowing that you have entered the Chinese composition final, I am more than delighted.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows.
(运用了不定式短语To help…作目的状语、which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In addition, it’s a good idea for the language to be vivid and humorous, enabling your composition to
stand out easily. (运用了现在分词短语enabling…作结果状语)
4．（2024届云南省昆明市第一中学高中新课标高三摸底试题）假定你是李华，外教Mr. Smith正筹划一场
辩论比赛，他向同学们征集建议以期有所创新，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 辩论主题；
2. 创新建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Smith,
Hoping this email finds you well. It would be delightful if my suggestions for the debate competition could
help.
I propose “Social Media-Pros or Cons” as the topic. Given the significance of social media, this topic will
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】spark insightful discussions on its impact and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives. Apart
from regular arguments presenting and debating rounds, I suggest introducing an “Audience Questions” session to
create an interactive atmosphere.
The topic and novel session will hopefully make the event educational and engaging. Best wishes for
organizing it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，外教Mr. Smith正筹划一场辩论比赛，他向同学们征
集建议以期有所创新，请考生给他写一封邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
令人愉快的：delightful→ enjoyable
建议：suggestion → advice
各种各样的：various→ a variety of
除了，此外：Apart from→ In addition to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and
consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives.
拓展句：Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact and
consequences, which can encourage exploration of various perspectives.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It would be delightful if my suggestions for the debate competition could help.（运用了
if引导的条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】Given the significance of social media, this topic will spark insightful discussions on its impact
and consequences, encouraging exploration of various perspectives.（运用了现在分词作状语）
5．（湖南省常德市第一中学2023-2024学年高三试题）假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Chris要私下存钱购
买智能手机，用于打游戏。请你给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Chris,
I heard that you want to save money secretly to buy a phone for gaming. I think it’s not a good idea. It’s
important to prioritize your needs and make wise decisions. Spending all your money on gaming may not be
beneficial in the long run.
Instead, I suggest considering other options. You could save money for something that can contribute to your
personal development, such as educational materials or a hobby that can provide valuable skills. It’s also important
to find a balance between leisure activities and your responsibilities. I encourage you to explore different forms of
entertainment that don’t rely solely on technology. Engaging in outdoor activities, sports, or joining clubs can
provide enjoyment and help you develop new skills. It’s also a great way to expand your social circle.
I think if you can be a little bit smarter now, your will have a brighter future. Good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份就美国笔友Chris要私下存钱购买智能手机
并用于打游戏一事，给他写封信，指出他的错误并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
想要：want to→ would like to
攒钱：save → put aside
购买：buy→ purchase
提供：provide→offer
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You could save money for something that can contribute to your personal development, such as educational
materials or a hobby that can provide valuable skills.
拓展句：It is advisable that you save money for something that can contribute to your personal development, such
as educational materials or a hobby that can provide valuable skills.
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】【点睛】【高分句型1】Spending all your money on gaming may not be beneficial in the long run.（动名词短
语做主语）
【高分句型2】I encourage you to explore different forms of entertainment that don’t rely solely on technology.
（使用了that引导定语从句，先行词为entertainment）
6．（海南中学白沙学校2023年试题）假定你是李华，你的同学Dave感觉学习压力大，焦虑，通过玩网络
游戏才能感觉到放松，你认为这存在问题。请你给同学写一封邮件，内容包括：1. 说明问题；2. 提出建
议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
4. 可适当增加细节使内容连贯。
Dear Dave,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】
Dear Dave,
I’m sorry to hear that you are addicted to playing computer games. I can understand how upset and stressed
you must be, but I think it will surely harm to your health. Here are a few things you can do.
First, if I were you, I would try my best to limit the time spent on video games each day, so I could spend more
time on other meaningful activities and hobbies. Another step would be finding purpose in reality, from enjoying
face-to-face conversations with your family and friends to taking a walk in the sunshine. Immerse yourself in the
pleasure of real life instead of a virtual world.
I am sure that with persistence, you’ll definitely get rid of your video game addiction. Looking forward to your
good news.
Yours,
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。要求学生给Dave写一封建议信，因为他感觉学习压力大，焦虑，
通过玩网络游戏才能感觉到放松。给他写信提出问题，并给予建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
伤害：harm→do harm to/be harmful to
使沉浸于：immerse→absorb/bury
摆脱：get rid of→cast off/break away from
焦虑的：stressed→anxious/worried
2.句式拓展：
同义句转换
原句：First, if I were you, I would try my best to limit the time spent on video games each day, so I could spend
more time on other meaningful activities and hobbies.
拓展句：First, were I you, I would try my best to limit the time spent on video games each day, so I could spend
more time on other meaningful activities and hobbies.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, if I were you, I would try my best to limit the time spent on video games each day,
so I could spend more time on other meaningful activities and hobbies.(运用了虚拟语气和)
【高分句型2】Here are a few things you can do.(运用了倒装句)
7．（湖南省岳阳县第一中学2023-2024学年高三试题）假定你是红星中学的学生李华，你校来自美国的交
换生John在学校网站上发布了一份求助信，称自己由于中文不好，与同学们的日常交流存在障碍，想求助
大家如何学好中文。请你给他发一封邮件，给他一些学习中文的建议，内容包括：
1.自我介绍并表明写信目的；
2.提出学习中文的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
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资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m your schoolmate Li Hua. I have learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, and I would like to give
you some advice on this.
Firstly, listen to Chinese as often as possible. The first step in learning a new language is to get accustomed to
the pronunciation. Secondly,devote time to memorizing characters. Characters are to Chinese what words are to
English. Spend at least half an hour memorizing characters every day. Thirdly, read a lot. You can read Chinese
newspapers and magazines that interest you.
I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生以李华的身份给你校来自美国的交换生John发一封邮件，给他一些学
习中文的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：learn→ be informed of
建议：advice →recommendation
听：listen→ lend an ear to
有益的：be helpful→ be beneficial
2.句式拓展
同义句改写
原句：I have learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, and I would like to give you some advice on this.
拓展句：Having learned that you have difficulty learning Chinese, I would like to give you some advice on this.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The first step in learning a new language is to get accustomed to the pronunciation.（介
词短语做后置定语）
【高分句型2】You can read Chinese newspapers and magazines that interest you.（that引导的定语从句，先行
词为newspapers and magazines）
8．（广东省河源市开学联考2023-2024学年高三联考试题）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Margaux写信向
你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之间的关系。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】1. 告知收到来信，得知情况；
2. 给出合理建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Margaux,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Margaux,
I heard that you love photography but have been struggling to balance your study with pursuing your interests.
I’m glad to offer my advice!
First of all, you’d better prioritize your time. Make a list of all the things that you need to do, assign each task
in order of importance. Additionally, schedule blocks of time for study and photography. Lastly, take a good rest.
With these tips, you can find a balance which will allow you time for your classes, hobbies and rest.
I wish my suggestions would be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Margaux写信向你询问如何平衡学习和摄影爱好之
间的关系。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括：1. 告知收到来信，得知情况；2. 给出合理建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
建议：advice→suggestion/tip
此外：Additionally→In addition
有帮助的：of some help →helpful
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Lastly, take a good rest.
拓展句：Lastly, take a good rest, which can make you energetic.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I heard that you love photography but have been struggling to balance your study with
pursuing your interests.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Make a list of all the things that you need to do, assign each task in order of importance.(运用了
that引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】With these tips, you can find a balance which will allow you time for your classes, hobbies and
rest.(运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
9．（安徽省池州市贵池区池州市第一中学2023年高三试题）池州日报创刊五十周年之际，向广大读者征
求增加栏目的建议。请你以李华的名义写一封信给编辑，内容包括：
1. 写信的目的；
2. 希望增加两个栏目及原因；
3. 期望和祝福。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear editor,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear editor,
Time flies in the blink of an eye! It is fifty years since Chizhou Daily came out.
As a faithful reader, I’m writing to recommend two sections I prefer to be included. One is the sayings from
famous people. These sayings, reflecting their wisdom of life, can encourage people to become better persons. The
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】other can be stories of average people, which will surely appeal to more citizens.
Sincerely hoping Chizhou Daily, with more valuable articles and wonderful content, will become increasingly
popular.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。池州日报创刊五十周年之际，向广大读者征求增加栏目的建议。请你
以李华的名义写一封信给编辑。
【详解】1.词汇积累
出名的：famous→well-known
鼓励：encourage→hearten
忠实的：faithful→loyal
宝贵的：valuable→precious
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：These sayings, reflecting their wisdom of life, can encourage people to become better persons.
拓展句：These sayings, which reflect their wisdom of life, can encourage people to become better persons.
【点睛】[高分句型1] These sayings, reflecting their wisdom of life, can encourage people to become better
persons. (运用了现在分词作定语)
[高分句型2] The other can be stories of average people, which will surely appeal to more citizens. (运用了which
引导非限制性定语从句)
10．（湖南省娄底市涟源市第一中学等3校2023年高三试题）假定你是校英语报Talking Teens栏目的编辑
李华，近日收到Terry的一封求助信。他在信中诉说学习上遇到的困难并感到很焦虑。请你回信，内容包
括：
1.表示理解；
2.提出建议；
3.表达祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Terry,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in learning. I know exactly how you feel. However, it’s easy to
improve the current situation if you follow my advice.
First, keep focused in class and listen to your teacher carefully. Second, turn to your teacher for help if you
can’t work out some problems. At last, take regular exercise and build up your body.
I hope you’ll find the tips useful and have a good performance at school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封信，安慰Terry并提出建议，帮他解决学习上遇到的
困难。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难：difficulty→trouble
在课堂上保持专注：keep focused in class→ concentrate one’s attention in class
进行有规律的运动：take regular exercise→ engage in regular exercise
现在的：current→present
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First, keep focused in class and listen to your teacher carefully.
拓展句：First, you should keep focused in class and listen to your teacher carefully.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, it’s easy to improve the current situation if you follow my advice.（运用了if
引导的条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】I hope you’ll find the tips useful and have a good performance at school.（运用了省略that的宾
语从句）
资料整理【淘宝店铺：向阳百分百】
