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Unit 6 Rain or Shine. (话题写作指导）
【话题分析】
本单元的话题为“天气”，要求能围绕这一话题写一篇有关天气情况、人们正在进行的活
动和人们感受的短文。在写作过程中，首先要能准确使用描述天气的形容词及句型，并要能
正确使用现在进行时描述人们正在进行的活动。
常用句型：
How's the weather in...?
What's the weather like in...?
It's...
The weather in...is...
...am/is/are doing sth.
Now...are having a good time.
【写作实例】
“一轮皎洁月当空，佳节团圆欢笑多”。假如你是李华，Jane是你的笔友。今天是中秋
节，请写一封信告诉Jane你如何度过中秋节，并根据以下提示完成本文。
内容包括：1.天气情况；
2.中秋节所做的事情；
3.你的感受。
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【思路点拨】【教材典句】
1、Climbing is hard...(SB,1b)
2、I’m sunbathing at the moment!(SA,2a)
3、...many people here are still in high spirits.(SB,1b)
4、Is the weather making Grandpa Sad ?(SA,1c)
【经典范文】
Dear Jane,
Today is our traditional Mid-Autumn Festival.
Getting together with our family is really exciting! It's a cool autumn night. The moon is
shining in the sky.
We are eating a big dinner now. My grand-parents are looking at the moon. My parents are
talking with each other. My younger brother is eating mooncakes at the moment. He is in high
spirits!
When it is Mid-Autumn Festival, everyone is enjoying their wonderful time! The Mid-Autumn
Festival makes everyone happy.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点评】
用动名词(短语)作主语概述中秋节的特点。
用现在进行时结构 be doing 和时间状语 at the moment描述中秋节活动。
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用 be in high spirits 描述“我”的弟弟的情绪状态。
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④"make sb adj."描述中秋节给大家的感受。
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【同步检测】
1．假如你是魏华，你正在加拿大的姑妈家度假。请根据下表信息，给你上海的同学李涛写一封信，
不少于60词。
Where Weather Activities FeelingsCanad visit my aunt; ski; make a
cold; snowing relaxed; have a good time
a snowman
Dear Li Tao,
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Yours,
Wei Hua
【答案】
Dear Li Tao,
How is it going with you? I’m visiting my aunt in Canada. It’s winter here now. It’s cold and it’s snowing
really hard. What a beautiful white world it is! The weather here is just right for playing with snow. So I am skiing
and making a snowman with my cousins. We are having a good time in the snow. We are really relaxed. What’s
the weather like in Shanghai? Are you studying hard or having fun?
Please write back to me soon.
Yours,
Wei Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，属于书信作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“现在进行时” ；
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提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给出的词汇或短语，适当添加细节，突出写作
②
重点。
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[写作步骤]
第一步，向同学问好，说明自己所在的地方及活动；
第二步，阐明天气情况，正在进行的活动及内心的感受；
第三步，询问同学所在地的天气及同学的活动情况，并请他尽快回信。
[亮点词汇]
snow hard 下雪下得大
be just right for 正适合……
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really 确实
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[高分句型]
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What a beautiful white world it is! (感叹句)
2．假设今天是周日，现在是下午五点，外面正在下雨。你和你的家人正在做什么呢？请你根据下面
的提示，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文来描述你们的活动。
提示：
1.What are your family doing?
2.What do you think of rainy days?
要求：1.语句通顺，符合逻辑；
2.包含提示中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now.
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【答案】
Today is Sunday. It’s five o’clock in the afternoon now. It’s raining outside, and all of my family are at
home. My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. My grandparents are playing chess in the living
room. My brother Dale is making a model plane in his room. He likes making things very much. My mother is
cooking in the kitchen for us. And I’m watching TV with my sister Susan in the bedroom.
I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together.
【总体分析】 题材：本文为材料作文，描述自己的家人正在做的事情；
时态：现在进行时；
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提示：写作要点已经给出，考生不要遗漏要点；可适当添加语句，使文章连贯。
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【写作步骤】第一步，描述家庭成员们各自正在做的事情；
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第二步，描述自己对下雨天的看法。
【亮点词汇】 rain下雨
all所有的
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play chess下棋
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very much非常
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watch TV看电视
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because因为
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【高分句型】 My father is using the computer to do his work in his study. (use sth. to do使用某物做某事)
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I like rainy days because we can have a good time staying at home together. (because引导的原因状语从句)
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3．假设你是李华。上周Anna给你写了一封信。 Anna在信中介绍了她的家乡并希望收到你的回信。
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请根据以下表格内容提示，给网友Anna写一封e-mail，向她介绍广州冬天的情况以及你和家人过春节的
活动和感受，并邀请她来广州。
天
不冷，从不下雪，有时会下雨
气
活
爬白云山，逛花市，喝早茶
动
感
请自行补充
受
要求：
1. 字数：不少于60词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总字数）；2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥；
3. 条理清楚，语句还顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
Dear Anna,
I was happy to hear from you last week.
Winter is coming. In winter, Guangzhou is a beautiful city.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Anna,
I was happy to hear from you last week.
Winter is coming. In winter, Guangzhou is a beautiful city. It’s not cold here. It never snows here, but it rains
sometimes. We climbed Baiyun Mountain, visited the flower market and had morning tea. During this festival,
people in China get together and have a big meal. In many places people like to set off firecrackers and fireworks
to celebrate it. And dumplings are the most traditional food during the festival. It is my favorite festival because I
don’t have to go to school, and I can get some new clothes, eat a lot of delicious food, get some red envelopes, too.
I’m very happy.
Welcome to Guangzhou. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件。
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
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提示：根据提示材料介绍广州冬天的情况以及春节的活动。
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[写作步骤]
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第一步，介绍广州冬天的天气。
第二步，介绍春节的活动。
第三步，介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
set off firecrackers 放鞭炮
a lot of 许多
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look forward to doing sth 期待做某事
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[高分句型]
③In many places people like to set off firecrackers and fireworks to celebrate it（动词不定式作宾语）
It is my favorite festival because I don’t have to go to school, and I can get some new clothes, eat a lot of
①
delicious food, get some red envelopes, too（because引导原因状语从句）
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4．请从下面两幅图中选择一幅图进行描写。
要求：
1. 认真观察图画，把观察到的内容写成一段通顺的话。
2. 可以给图中人物起名字，展开合理的想象。
3. 作文内容逻辑合理，语篇完整，关联性强，才可以得满分。
4. 不少于五句话，注意规范书写。
图1 图2
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【答案】
Today is Sunday. It’s sunny. I am playing in the park with my friends. Look! Mary is playing the violin and
Kate is singing songs. Peter is taking pictures of trees. Lily is riding her bike. Mike and Sarah are playing role-
play. Mike is acting the doctor. Sarah is acting the patient. We are all happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
时态：时态以“现在进行时”为主；
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提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主，注意时态的正确使用。
②
[写作步骤]
③
第一步，介绍今天是星期日，天气很好；
第二步，具体描绘公园里每个人正在做些什么；
第三步，最后进行总结，今天很开心。
[亮点词汇]
in the park在公园
take pictures of拍……的照片
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ride one’s bike骑自行车
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[高分句型]
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Look! Mary is playing the violin and Kate is singing songs.（and并列句）5．现在是晚上八点钟，外面正在下雨。假如你是李梅，你正给你的朋友写一张明信片，介绍下今天
的天气，你和你的家人正在做什么以及你的感受。
要求：语法规范，语句连贯，60个词左右。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Mei
【答案】
Dear Jim,
It’s 8:00 pm. And it is raining heavily outside. We all stay at home. My grandparents are watching TV. They
are laughing happily. My father is reading newspaper in the living room. My mother is doing the dishes in the
kitchen. What am I doing? Of course, I am writing to you. We all happy and relaxed at this moment. What will
you do on a rainy day?
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。写信给Jim告知家人的活动。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用现在进行时。先介绍此时的天气，紧接着描述家人的活动信息，最后表达自己
的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
【真题链接】
1． （21-22七年级下·河北唐山·期末）
下面是公园一角人们的活动场景。请你根据提示和图画内容，用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友 Jane
和人们的活动。
提示：
(1) How’s the weather today?
(2) What are people doing?
(3) What does Jane look like?
(4) What is Jane doing?要求:
（1）短文须包含所有提示内容。
（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数不少于60词。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
It is Sunday today.
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【答案】
It is Sunday today. It’s sunny and warm. There are many people in the park. Look, some boys are playing
basketball. Some are playing soccer. They are playing happily. There is a man and two women standing under the
tree. They are watching boys playing basketball. Where is my friend Jane? Can you find her? She has big eyes and
short curly hair. Oh, I see her. She is eating an apple and she is talking with a boy right now. Next to Jane, a girl is
reading a book. How happy they are!
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；内容是根据提示和图画内容，
用英语写一篇短文描述你的好友 Jane 和人们的活动。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述作文内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；首先从今天的天气入手；
其次描写人们在公园里的活动；接着描述简的外貌和活动。保证行文连贯，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错
误。
2．（20-21七年级下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末）假如你是来自澳大利亚的Alice，暑假期间你正在哈尔滨
旅游，请向你的妈妈介绍一下你在哈尔滨的情况，并向她介绍你的新朋友。
写作要点：
1.现在哈尔滨是夏天。
2.介绍今天的一些情况：
(1)今天天气晴朗但有风；
(2)你正在公园里踢足球；
(3)一个女孩正在拍江边的照片、一些男孩正在江里游泳。
3.介绍你的新朋友王莹（外貌、衣着、爱好等）。
写作要求：
1.内容完整、合理；语句正确；行文连贯；
2.字迹工整、书写规范；
3.60词以上；
4.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
Dear Mom,
How are you? I am in Harbin now. _________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Alice
【答案】
Dear Mom,
How are you? I am in Harbin now. I will introduce you to my life here.
Now Harbin is in summer. The weather is fine today, but windy. I feel very comfortable. I am playing
football in the park. I see a girl taking pictures. Some boys are swimming in the river. I make a new friend here.
Her name is Wang Ying. Wang Ying looks very beautiful. She is wearing a yellow dress. She likes to sing.
I am fine here, you do not need to worry.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Alice
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要是根据题干提示向妈妈介绍自己在哈尔滨的旅游情况以及自己交到的新朋友，可适
当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。第一段进行总述；第二段描述天
气、今天的活动以及介绍自己的朋友；第三段告诉妈妈自己很好，不用担心。在介绍内容时，力求语言准
确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
3．（20-21七年级下·河北石家庄·期中）假设你正在和你爸爸妈妈，妹妹在三亚度假，你在朋友圈晒
的旅行照片被你的美国朋友Jim看到。他对你去的地方很感兴趣，发微信让你给他简单介绍一下，要求包
括以下内容：
天气 晴朗，有风
时间 暑假(summer vacation)
地点 Sanya
活动 画画，唱歌，游泳，做游戏等
观点 ……（你认为你的旅游怎么样? ）
要求：
1．条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
2．词数：80 词左右。
3．可适当发挥。________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Hello, Jim! I am on summer vacation in Sanya with my parents. We are having a great time here. Let me tell
you something about Sanya.
The weather here is sunny and windy. It’s comfortable to travel here. Now we are taking a walk and we can
go swimming in the afternoon. Sometimes I draw pictures on the beach. And my mother sings songs with other
tourists. There are many people on the beach. We can also play games together.
I like Sanya. It’s really beautiful and relaxing. I think my summer vacation is wonderful.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己暑假在三亚旅游的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用
正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容
时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
4．（21-22七年级下·河北邯郸·期末）在夏季，你的家乡天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都在做什
么？请写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
注意事项：
(1)80词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范。
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名。
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【答案】
It’s summer now. The weather in my hometown is very hot and rainy. So it is very wet. People are wearing
sunglasses and cool clothes. In the park, my classmates and I are having a good time. Some girls are singing and
dancing. Some boys are playing soccer. I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos. A little
boy is eating an ice cream.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
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提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍家乡的天气，适当添加细节，并突出
②
写作重点。
③[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍家乡天气”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“夏季家乡天气怎么样和人们在这样的天气里都在做什么”两个方面重点介
绍。
[亮点词汇]
have a good time玩得开心
take photos拍照
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[高分句型]
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I am swimming in a river and my best friend Tom is taking photos.（and连接并列句）
5．（23-24七年级下·山东烟台·期末）假如你是李华，你和你的美国朋友Helen正在网上聊天，她
想知道你的家人正在做什么，请你根据表格中的提示写一段话向她介绍相关情况。
要求：
1.内容须包含表格内所有信息，可适当发挥。
2.60词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3.不得出现真实校名、班名及姓名。
4.有卷面分。
爷爷 在公园散步
奶奶 在客厅浇花
爸爸 在客厅读报纸
妈妈 在厨房洗碗
妹妹 在卧室做作业
提示词组：water the flowers
Hi, Helen, good evening. Now,
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【答案】
Hi, Helen, good evening. Now, my grandfather isn’t at home. He is taking a walk in the park. My
grandmother likes flowers very much, and she is watering the flowers in the living room. My father is in the living
room, too. He is reading a newspaper. My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. My sister is doing her
homework in our bedroom. She always studies hard.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
①
②提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作
重点。
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[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍家人现在正在做什么；
第二步，具体介绍家人现在正在做什么；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
at home在家
very much非常
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read a newspaper读报纸
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study hard努力学习
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[高分句型]
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He is taking a walk in the park. (运用现在进行时)
My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. (介词短语作地点状语)
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6．（22-23七年级下·山东烟台·期末）请根据表格中的信息，进行场景描述，字数不少于50，可适当
②
扩展。
时间 周日下午 地点 公园
天气 晴朗，有点热 人物 王华一家
场景 爸爸与哥哥在树下下棋；王华和弟弟在踢球；妈妈在拍照。
心情 快乐
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【答案】
Today is Sunday. It is sunny and a bit hot. In the afternoon, Wang Hua’s family go to the park near his house
to play.
His father and his elder brother are playing chess under the tree. His father plays chess very well. His father
often teaches his elder brother how to play chess. Wang Hua and his little brother are playing football. This is
Wang Hua’s favorite sport. What is his mother doing? Oh, his mother is taking photos. She likes taking photos and
she always takes some beautiful photos.
They are all very happy. They all have a great time.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
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提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
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③逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍周日的天气情况并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍王华一家人在公园的活动情况；
第三步，最后总结他们玩得很开心。
[亮点词汇]
play chess下棋
take photos拍照
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have a great time玩得开心
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[高分句型]
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What is his mother doing? （特殊疑问句）
She likes taking photos and she always takes some beautiful photos. （and连接的并列句）
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7．（22-23七年级下·山东青岛·期末）
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看图说话。请你仔细观察上面的图画，之后以 “A Happy Sunday” 为题写一篇英语短文，向大家简要
介绍一下图片中的内容，包括天气情况、地点、人们正在进行的各种活动。
部分参考词汇：
遛狗：walk the dog；野餐：have a picnic；照相：take photos；放无人机：fly a drone；长凳：bench；躺：
lie；草地：grass；在湖边：by the lake
要求：
1、对图片中的活动可以有选择地加以描述，不必面面俱到。
2、文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。
3、词数在80左右。
A Happy Sunday
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【答案】
A Happy Sunday
It’s Sunday today, and it’s also sunny. There are many people in the park. What are they doing? A man is
running, and two women are walking their dogs. A man and a woman are having a picnic (with their dog) by the
lake. Two men are playing the guitar, and a woman is singing. A small boy is flying a kite. A boy and a girl are
riding bikes. An old man is reading a newspaper on the bench. A man and a woman are lying on the grass. Oh,
they are flying a drone. There is also a man taking photos! They are all very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；
时态：时态为“现在进行时”；
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提示：考生注意根据图片内容描写，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
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[写作步骤]
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第一步，总述图片内容；
第二步，具体介绍图片上人物的行为；
第三步，书写结语，总结图片上人物表现出的感受。
[亮点词汇]
by the lake湖边
on the beach在沙滩上
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lie on the grass躺在草地上
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take photos照相
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[高分句型]
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There are many people in the park. (运用there be句型)
Two men are playing the guitar, and a woman is singing. (运用现在进行时)
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