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江苏省盐城市五校联考2025-2026学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The last lesson of the day was PE class. Mary was skipping rope on the
playground, surrounded by several classmates watching her (过去分词做后置定语). It
was her best sport. The rope spun quickly as she jumped . When time was up ,
the counter showed 201 skips. Smiling (现在分词做伴随动作), Mary flashed a victory
sign to the crowd. Just then, the school bell rang-class was over. Mary packed
up her skipping rope. It was time to give her answer to Ms. White.
That morning, Ms. White had asked her if she would be willing to take
charge of the class bulletin board (板报) for the upcoming competition. The
student who usually handled it, Lily, was out sick, and someone needed to
step in. Mary was shocked that Ms. White had chosen her. She responded
nervously, insisting (现在分词做伴随动作) that her handwriting was terrible. But Ms.
White reassured her, saying (现在分词做伴随动作) she believed in her ability and
encouraged her to think it over and let her know her decision after school.
Now, walking toward the teachers’ office (现在分词做伴随动作), Mary felt nervous.
The thought of her messy handwriting being put up on the wall for everyone to
see made her stomach turn. She had already made up her mind to say no.
With that decision in mind , she quickened her pace and ran across the sports
ground.
Mary was about to pass the sandpit when someone nearby caught her
attention . It was Tom from a different class. In her mind, Tom had never been
good at long jump, but he was practicing it. Curious (adj做主语补语), she went over to
ask what he was doing. Tom explained that no one else had signed up for
the long jump event, and without a participant , their class wouldn't get any
points in the school sports meeting. So when the headteacher asked if
anyone would give it a try, he volunteered. Mary reminded him that he
wasn't good at it, but Tom simply said that he knew that-and that it wasn't
about being the best, but about trying and doing his part for the class. Then
he went back to practicing . What a similar issue they both faced!
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Mary stood there, watching Tom practicing patiently and hard.Paragraph 2: With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office.江苏省盐城市五校联考2025-2026学年高三上学期10月月考英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The last lesson of the day was PE class. Mary was skipping rope on the
playground, surrounded by several classmates watching her. It was her best
sport. The rope spun (旋转) quickly as she jumped. When time was up, the
counter showed 201 skips. Smiling, Mary flashed a victory sign to the crowd.
Just then, the school bell rang-class was over. Mary packed up her skipping
rope. It was time to give her answer to Ms. White.
That morning, Ms. White had asked her if she would be willing to take
charge of the class bulletin board (板报) for the upcoming competition. The
student who usually handled it, Lily, was out sick, and someone needed to step
in. Mary was shocked that Ms. White had chosen her. She responded nervously,
insisting that her handwriting was terrible. But Ms. White reassured her, saying
she believed in her ability and encouraged her to think it over and let her know
her decision after school.
Now, walking toward the teachers’ office, Mary felt nervous. The thought
of her messy handwriting being put up on the wall for everyone to see made her
stomach turn. She had already made up her mind to say no. With that decision
in mind, she quickened her pace and ran across the sports ground.
Mary was about to pass the sandpit (沙坑) when someone nearby caught
her attention. It was Tom from a different class. In her mind, Tom had never
been good at long jump, but he was practicing it. Curious, she went over to ask
what he was doing. Tom explained that no one else had signed up for the long
jump event, and without a participant, their class wouldn't get any points in the
school sports meeting. So when the headteacher asked if anyone would give it a
try, he volunteered. Mary reminded him that he wasn't good at it, but Tom
simply said that he knew that-and that it wasn't about being the best, but about
trying and doing his part for the class. Then he went back to practicing. What a
similar issue they both faced!
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Mary stood there, watching Tom practicing patiently and hard.
Paragraph 2: With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office.一、类型分析与构思思路
项目 内容
读后续写类
心理成长类 / 自我突破类 / 勇于承担责任线
型
面对自我不安与责任的选择,主人公通过观察他人获得勇气,最终
主题核心
实现自我成长。
Mary(主角,跳绳好但怕写字丑)、Tom(触发灵感的平凡勇
主要人物
士)、Ms. White(引导者)
主要任务 是否承担板报任务(核心冲突:自我怀疑 vs. 责任担当)
续写主旨方通过Tom的行为获得启发,勇敢面对不完美,承担责任,实现心理
向 成长。
文章价值观勇气来自责任感;尝试比完美更重要。
二、构思思路与布局步骤
构思阶段 内容要点 写作策略
Mary站在一旁,看Tom努力练习 用心理描写+细节描写+类比
1. 承接首句
——情绪由好奇转向反思 形成“触动与启发”的桥段
2. 内心冲突展 对比自己逃避板报与Tom勇于尝 使用反问句、动作犹豫、回忆
开 试,形成心理转折点 Ms. White鼓励等
由“他都能试,我也能”转向“我 用比喻或内心独白强化成长意
3. 决心形成
愿意承担” 识
4. 第二段(行 走进办公室→坦率说明自己的担忧 动作+语言+神态描写体现成
动落实) →表达承担意愿→教师鼓励 长与自信
用象征性句子(如“她感觉阳光更
5. 收尾 保持呼应与升华
暖”“像Tom一样”)收束主题
三、故事山结构(Story Mountain)
阶段 内容 对应原文或续写
开端 (Exposition) Mary被选做板报负责人,心生畏惧 原文前半段阶段 内容 对应原文或续写
发展 (Rising Paragraph 1 起
她决定拒绝,但看到Tom努力练习
Action) 点
内心反思:“他都能为班级努力,我为什 Paragraph 1 结
高潮 (Climax)
么不试试?” 尾
下降 (Falling
下定决心,去见Ms. White表达想法 Paragraph 2
Action)
Paragraph 2 结
结局 (Resolution) 被老师鼓励,重拾自信,接受任务
尾
四、原文衔接与关键线索分析表
分析
内容说明 原文反应句
角度
人物 Mary:有能力但缺乏自信;Tom: “Mary felt nervous.” / “Tom explained
刻画 普通却勇敢。 that no one else had signed up…”
“She had already made up her mind to
情感
紧张→犹豫→触动→觉悟→自信 say no.” / “What a similar issue they
层次
both faced!”
关键 ① 被委托任务;② 拒绝想法;③
“She quickened her pace and ran…” /
情节 看见Tom;④ 心理转变;⑤ 主动
“Tom simply said that he knew that...”
点 承担。
“She responded nervously…” / “He
语言 用对比和内心独白体现成长主题;
knew that—and that it wasn’t about
特色 语言平实自然。
being the best…”
关键
skip rope, nervous, believe, try,
词分 暗示主题转向“勇于尝试”
responsibility, courage
析
心理 对自我怀疑、羞怯、被触动的细节 “The thought of her messy handwriting
描写 要放大 made her stomach turn.”
动作 Tom练习长跳;Mary驻足、思考、“Tom was practicing it.” / “Mary stood分析
内容说明 原文反应句
角度
描写 转身走向办公室 there…”
环境 操场—阳光、沙坑、体育氛围,象 “On the playground… near the
描写 征“努力与成长” sandpit…”
隐含 勇于尝试、自我成长、责任与团队 “It wasn’t about being the best, but
主题 意识 about trying…”
情感
被动逃避→被触动启发→主动承担 由Tom的态度触发转折点
转折
空间 “Mary stood there…” → “Mary stepped
操场 → 教师办公室
转换 into the teachers’ office.”
时间 After school → during PE → walking
平滑自然的时序发展
过渡 to office → at the end of the day
五、伏笔与冲突分析
项目 内容
Ms. White早前“believed in her ability”——信任伏笔,为后文接受任务
伏笔处
做心理铺垫。
冲突点 Mary的恐惧与责任感的对抗(怕丢脸 vs. 想帮助老师)。
隐含线 “Tom volunteered though he wasn’t good at it”——影射“尝试比完美更重
索 要”。
解决方
被他人榜样激励,行动中完成自我突破与情感升华。
案
六、续写设计技巧建议
写作环
技巧与提醒
节
承接首 用动词 + 感官描写 + 内心触动,如 “Her eyes followed his every
句 move, and a thought suddenly struck her.”
情感过
使用心理转折词:However, Yet, All at once, Suddenly, Deep inside写作环
技巧与提醒
节
渡
升华主 结尾可用象征或对比句式,如:“The letters on the board weren’t perfect,
题 but they were written with courage.”
语言层
注意句型变化:反问句、倒装句、分词短语,避免平铺直叙。
次
逻辑衔
前后呼应——“Tom’s spirit” → “She wanted to try, too.”
接
细节丰 用动作(walked firmly, held her head high)+心理(her heart was still
富 beating fast)体现成长。
七、教学提示总结
核心写作任务:
让学生理解“读后续写”的本质是情感逻辑的延续与人物成长的
展示。
写作重点不在情节反转,而在心理转折与人物呼应。
课堂指导要点:
先找原文冲突与伏笔(冲突是什么?谁解决?怎么解
决?)
明确人物的“心路线”:害怕→启发→决定→成长
按故事山结构布局段落(高潮放在第一段结尾或第二段开
头)
强调呼应句式与象征性收尾。
八、动作、环境、心理描写句
【动作描写】She clenched her fists unconsciously, trying to summon her courage.
她不自觉地握紧拳头,努力鼓起勇气。
Her steps slowed down as she approached the office door.
当她走近办公室门口时,脚步渐渐放慢。
She took a deep breath and straightened her back.
她深吸一口气,挺直了背。
Her hands trembled slightly when she knocked on the door.
当她敲门时,手微微发抖。
She glanced at Tom again, determination shining in her eyes.
她又看了Tom一眼,眼中闪着决心的光。
She brushed the dust off her clothes and stepped forward.
她拍去衣服上的尘土,迈步向前。
Her lips parted, but no words came out.
她张了张嘴,却说不出话来。
She folded her skipping rope carefully, as if preparing for something serious.
她小心地叠好跳绳,仿佛在为某件严肃的事做准备。
Her heart pounded wildly as she entered the room.
她走进房间时,心脏剧烈跳动。
She nodded firmly, a faint smile playing on her lips.
她坚定地点点头,嘴角浮现出一丝微笑。
【心理描写】
A wave of anxiety washed over her.
一阵焦虑涌上心头。
Her mind was in a mess, torn between fear and responsibility.
她的思绪一片混乱,在恐惧与责任间徘徊。
She couldn’t help wondering what Ms. White would think of her.
她不禁想,White老师会怎么看她。
A tiny voice in her heart whispered, “You can do it.”
心底一个微弱的声音在说:“你可以的。”
For a moment, she felt ashamed of her hesitation.
那一刻,她为自己的犹豫感到羞愧。Something warm rose in her chest—a feeling of courage.
一种温暖的力量在她胸中升起——那是勇气。
The thought struck her like lightning: she had to try.
一个念头如闪电般击中她:她必须去尝试。
She realized that sometimes trying was more important than succeeding.
她意识到,有时尝试比成功更重要。
A sense of relief spread through her when she made up her mind.
当她下定决心时,一种轻松感涌上心头。
She felt a strange calm replacing her nervousness.
她感到一种奇异的平静取代了紧张。
【环境描写】
The afternoon sun bathed the playground in golden light.
午后的阳光给操场镀上了一层金光。
The faint smell of chalk drifted from the classrooms nearby.
附近教室飘来淡淡的粉笔味。
The soft wind stirred the leaves, carrying distant laughter.
微风拂动树叶,带来远处的笑声。
The sandpit shimmered under the sunlight.
沙坑在阳光下闪闪发亮。
Students’ voices faded away as classes ended.
下课铃响后,学生的声音渐渐消散。
The playground, once noisy, was now quiet except for Tom’s jumps.
刚才还喧闹的操场,此刻除了Tom的跳跃声一片寂静。
The school bell echoed faintly across the yard.
校园里回荡着微弱的下课铃声。
The sky was painted with soft orange clouds.
天空被柔和的橙云染成一片。
The air felt cool and refreshing after PE class.
体育课后,空气清凉又清新。
She could hear the rhythmic thud of Tom landing in the sandpit.
她能听见Tom落入沙坑时有节奏的“扑通”声。常见单词高级替换词(分场景)
表示“害怕/紧张”的高级词汇
nervous → uneasy / anxious / tense / jittery / restless
She felt uneasy about her handwriting.
Her hands grew tense as she reached the door.
表示“鼓励/启发”的高级词汇
encourage → inspire / motivate / hearten / reassure / uplift
Ms. White’s words inspired her to believe in herself.
表示“决定/下定决心”的高级词汇
decide → make up one’s mind / resolve / determine / commit / opt to
She finally resolved to take on the task.
表示“思考/意识到”的高级词汇
think → ponder / reflect / realize / consider / contemplate
She reflected on Tom’s words.
表示“尝试/努力”的高级词汇
try → attempt / strive / endeavor / take a shot / make an effort
He endeavored to improve his long jump.
地道搭配现象 + 可积累语料解析
take charge of sth. (负责……)
词性:动词短语
意义:承担、负责
近义:be responsible for / be in charge of
反义:give up / hand over
例句:
She was asked to take charge of the bulletin board.
Tom volunteered to take charge when no one else did.
make up one’s mind (下定决心)
词性:动词短语
近义:resolve / decide firmly
反义:hesitate / waver例句:
She finally made up her mind to say yes.
It took her a while to make up her mind.
be willing to do sth. (愿意做某事)
词性:动词短语
意义:表示意愿
近义:be ready to / be prepared to
反义:be reluctant to / refuse to
例句:
Tom was willing to try even though he wasn’t good at it.
Mary wasn’t willing at first but later changed her mind.
flash a victory sign (比出胜利手势)
词性:动宾结构
意义:庆祝成功或自信
近义:raise her hand in triumph / smile with satisfaction
反义:hang one’s head / sigh in defeat
例句:
She flashed a victory sign to the crowd.
He smiled broadly and gave a victory sign.
a sense of + n. (某种情感)
常搭配:a sense of relief / pride / responsibility / courage
词性:名词短语
例句:
A sense of courage rose inside her.
She was filled with a sense of pride after finishing the task.
step into (a place) (走进……)
动词短语,表动作衔接
近义:walk into / enter / head into
反义:step out of / leave
例句:With determination, she stepped into the teachers’ office.
He stepped into the classroom, ready to face the challenge.
turn one’s stomach (让人感到不安或厌恶)
词性:习语表达
意义:感到恶心/紧张/害怕
近义:make sb. uncomfortable / upset
反义:comfort / soothe
例句:
The thought of writing in public turned her stomach.
The sight of failure used to turn his stomach.
catch one’s attention (吸引某人注意)
词性:动宾短语
近义:draw one’s attention / attract sb’s eye
反义:escape one’s notice
例句:
Tom’s efforts caught her attention.
A small movement caught his attention immediately.
no longer + v. (不再……)
词法:时间副词短语
近义:not … anymore / cease to
反义:still / continue to
例句:
She was no longer afraid to try.
He no longer hesitated to speak up.
remind sb. that / of sth. (提醒/让人想到)
词性:动词短语
近义:make sb. think of / bring to mind
反义:forget / overlook
例句:
His courage reminded her of what Ms. White had said.The scene reminded her that courage mattered more than perfection.
续写中高频心理与情绪表达语料
to one’s relief/surprise/amazement/disappointment → 令某人感到宽
慰/惊讶等
it struck her that… → 她突然想到……
with one’s heart pounding → 心跳加速地
tears welled up in her eyes → 她眼眶里涌出了泪水
her throat tightened with emotion → 她喉咙一紧,充满情绪
filled with admiration / gratitude / courage → 充满敬佩 / 感激 / 勇气
a smile spread across her face → 笑容慢慢在她脸上绽开
lost in thought → 陷入沉思
all of a sudden / out of the blue → 突然之间
she couldn’t help but… → 她情不自禁地……九、 Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1:
Mary stood there, watching Tom practicing patiently and hard. His clumsy
movements looked awkward, yet there was a kind of beauty in his persistence.
Sweat rolled down his forehead , but he didn’t stop. The sight struck Mary
(无灵主语句)
deeply. Tom wasn’t good at long jump, but he was still giving his best for his class.
Wasn’t I facing the same thing? she thought. Her heart began to race as she realized
that fear, not handwriting, was holding her back. If Tom could face his weakness,
why couldn’t I? She suddenly felt her face warm with determination. As the sun
dipped lower, she took one last look at Tom landing in the sandpit and smiled
slightly, a quiet decision forming in her heart : she would accept the challenge .
Paragraph 2:
With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office. Her hands were still
trembling, but she spoke clearly. “Ms. White, I... I’d like to try,” she said. Ms. White
looked up, a gentle smile spreading across her face . “I knew you would,
(独立主格)
Mary,” she said softly. Relief flooded through Mary’s chest. The nervousness that
once tied her tongue was gone. When she left the office, she felt lighter, the world
outside glowing with golden sunlight . She knew her handwriting might not
(独立主格)
be perfect, but her courage was. Sometimes, she realized, the best handwriting is
written not with a pen, but with the heart.
复合句 “Her heart began to race as she realized that fear, not handwriting,
was holding her back.”
非谓语短语 “Sweat rolling down his forehead, but he didn’t stop.”
地道搭配与替换:
原词 高级替换/搭配
try give it a try / have a go / make an attempt
nervous uneasy / jittery / tense
decide make up one’s mind / resolve / determine
brave show courage / summon her strength
smile a faint smile spread across her face / her lips curved into a smile情绪描写亮点: heart began to race, relief flooded through her chest, felt lighter,
face warm with determination
动作描写亮点: took one last look, stepped into, spoke clearly, left the office
积累语料:
The best handwriting is written with the heart.(象征句)
Relief flooded through her chest.(情绪流动表达)
A quiet decision forming in her heart.(心理转折句)
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
Mary stood there, watching Tom practicing patiently and hard. Each time he
failed, he simply brushed the sand off and tried again. Something about his calm
effort touched her deeply. She realized Tom wasn’t doing it for glory—he was doing
it for his class. A pang of guilt hit her. Ms. White had trusted her, but she had almost
run away. Her stomach tightened as she thought about her cowardice. For the first
time, she wanted to face her fear instead of escaping it. The wind carried Tom’s
steady breathing, like a rhythm beating in her ears, echoing courage .
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
With her rope still in hand , Mary took a deep breath and started walking toward the
teachers’ office.
Paragraph 2:
With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office. Her voice trembled
at first, but her eyes stayed firm. “Ms. White, I’ll do the bulletin board,” she said.
The teacher’s eyes lit up with approval. “I’m proud of your courage,” Ms. White
said. Warmth flooded Mary’s heart , washing away her self-doubt
(无灵主语句) (现在分词短语做伴随
. She could almost hear Tom jumping in the distance, and she smiled. That sound
动作)
was now more than just effort—it was courage echoing within her . As
(现在分词做后置定语)
she left, she imagined the bulletin board filled not only with words, but also with
her newfound confidence .
(过去分词做宾语补语)
地道搭配与替换:
原词 高级替换/搭配
run away shy away / back off / retreat from原词 高级替换/搭配
courage bravery / boldness / inner strength
proud pleased / gratified / delighted
fear anxiety / hesitation / unease
trust put faith in / believe in / rely on
情绪描写亮点: a pang of guilt hit her, warmth flooded her heart, stomach
tightened, eyes stayed firm
动作描写亮点: brushed the sand off, started walking, stepped into, imagined the
bulletin board filled
积累语料:
She wanted to face her fear instead of escaping it.
The wind carried Tom’s steady breathing, echoing courage.
Her voice trembled, but her eyes stayed firm.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
Mary stood there, watching Tom practicing patiently and hard. Each of his
jumps, though not particularly far, was executed with unwavering focus. Sweat
glistened on his forehead under the afternoon sun, and his breaths came out in
puffs of mist, yet a determined smile never left his face . The sight of him
(刻画人物衔接上文)
embracing his imperfection for the sake of the class struck a deep chord within
Mary . She thought of her own perfect 201 skips, a skill performed for
(心理描写)
personal glory , and then of the bulletin board, a task she was shying
(过去分词做后置定语)
away from for fear of personal embarrassment. Tom’s selfless act served as a
mirror, reflecting her own hesitation . His struggle was not about
(现在分词做后置定语)
winning but about participating, about contributing. Suddenly, her own problem
seemed smaller, handled by a sense of collective responsibility .
(过去分词做后置定语)
Inspired by his perseverance , she knew what she had to do.
(过去分词做原因状语)
Paragraph 2:
With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office. The air inside was
warm and carried the faint scent of books and coffee . Ms. White looked up
(环境描写)
from her desk. "Ms. White," Mary began, her voice firmer than she had expected
(独, "I've thought it over. I would be honored to take charge of the bulletin
立主格刻画人物)
board." She went on, "My handwriting might not be the best, but I will try my
hardest, just like Tom is practicing for the long jump. It's not about being
perfect; it's about doing my part for our class." A warm, approving smile spread
across Ms. White's face. "Mary, that's exactly the spirit I was hoping for," she said.
At that moment, any lingering anxiety in Mary's heart was replaced by a clear,
purposeful calm, ready to face the challenge not for herself, but for
(adj短语做主语补语)
everyone.
地道搭配、近义词与替换词
分类 原文表达 近义词/替换词
struck a deep chord (深深触
动词短语 resonated deeply with, touched a nerve
动)
shying away from (躲避) avoiding, evading, retreating from
served as a mirror (像一面镜 acted as a reflection, presented a clear
子) picture
overshadowed by (被...掩盖) eclipsed by, paled in comparison to
burgeoning sense of (萌发
growing, emerging, developing
的...感)
personal achievement, individual
名词短语 personal glory (个人荣耀)
triumph
personal embarrassment (个 personal humiliation, self-
人难堪) consciousness
stark new light (全新的角度) a new perspective, a different angle
collective responsibility (集
team spirit, sense of community
体责任)分类 原文表达 近义词/替换词
resolute demeanor (坚决的态
determined attitude, firm posture
度)
lingering anxiety (挥之不去 remaining worry, persistent
的焦虑) nervousness
2. 亮点词汇与例句(情绪/动作描写)
情绪描写:
Unwavering (adj.) 坚定不移的
近义词:steadfast, resolute, determined
反义词:hesitant, wavering, uncertain
例句:With unwavering focus, he continued his practice against all
odds./Her unwavering belief in the team boosted everyone's morale.
Glisten (v.) 闪烁
近义词:gleam, shimmer, sparkle
反义词:be dull, be matte
例句:Sweat glistened on his skin under the bright lights./Tears glistened in her eyes
as she listened to the moving story.
Burgeoning (adj.) 迅速增长的,萌芽的
近义词:growing, expanding, developing
反义词:dwindling, shrinking, declining
例句:A burgeoning sense of excitement filled the air before the festival./She felt
a burgeoning curiosity about the unknown culture.
Lingering (adj.) 挥之不去的
近义词:persistent, remaining, enduring
反义词:fleeting, temporary, brief例句:The lingering sweetness of the dessert was delightful./He felt
no lingering resentment towards his old friend.
动作描写:
Execute (v.) 执行,完成
近义词:perform, carry out, accomplish
例句:The gymnast executed a perfect flip on the balance beam./The plan was
flawlessly executed by the team.
Embrace (v.) 拥抱,接受
近义词:accept, welcome, adopt
反义词:reject, shun, avoid
例句:She decided to embrace the new challenge with an open mind./We
should embrace different opinions in a discussion.
Shy away from (phr.v.) 回避,退缩
近义词:avoid, evade, retreat from
反义词:confront, face up to, embrace
例句:Never shy away from your responsibilities./He shied away from making the
difficult decision.官方:
Mary stood there, watching Tom practicing patiently and hard . Every
time he jumped , he would stumble a little, but he never stopped. He wiped
the sweat from his forehead and adjusted his posture, then tried again.
Mary thought about how Tom was willing to take on something he wasn’t
good at just to help his class. She felt a little ashamed of herself—she was
scared of showing her bad handwriting, but what if she could try her best like
Tom ? Maybe the bulletin board wouldn’t be perfect, but she could put her
heart into it. The nervous feeling in her stomach slowly faded, and a new
sense of determination took its place. She turned around and headed
straight for the teachers’ office, her steps no longer hesitant (独立主格刻画人物心理).
With determination, Mary stepped into the teachers’ office. Ms. White
was sitting at her desk, grading papers (现在分词短语做伴随动作). When she saw Mary , she
looked up and smiled, “Have you made your decision?” Mary took a deep
breath and nodded firmly, “Yes, Ms. White. I’d like to take charge of the
class bulletin board.” She then added, “My handwriting isn’t good, but I’ll
practice and do my best to make it nice. I want to help our class, just like
Tom is helping his.” Ms. White’s eyes lit up with pride. She stood up and
patted Mary’s shoulder, “That’s what I wanted to hear, Mary. Bravery to try
is more important than being perfect. I’ll be right here to help you.” Mary
left the office with a big smile on her face , already looking forward to (现在分词短语做
伴随动作) starting her new task.