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初中英语作文写作技巧
发布时间：2026-10-11 18:32:03 最近访问：2026-10-11 18:32:03
2. 看人称：第一人称I/we，还是第二人称you4. 圈要点：题目给的提示词一条都不能少，缺要点直接扣分。- I want to tell you something about…- It’s my great pleasure to…- What a wonderful experience!- 顺序：First, Next, Then, Finally- 补充：Besides, What’s more- many → a lot of / plenty of- good → wonderful / great- very important → of great importance- I think… → In my opinion,…5. 大小写、标点（英语只用英文句号 . ，不要中文句号）I’m … I am … years old. I am outgoing and helpful.I like … because … I hope we can get along well.2. 建议类（Getting along 人际交往话题）It’s important to get on well with friends.First, you should … What’s more, don’t …I hope my advice can help you.I’m glad to receive your letter.1. 中文式英语：逐字翻译（如：I very like English ❌ → I like English very much ✅）题目：请写短文介绍你自己，包含：年龄、性格、爱好、希望交到新朋友。My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old. I am friendly and easy-going. I like reading and playing basketball. I often read books in my free time. I want to make new friends at school. I hope we can get along well.书面表达：请写一段短文，谈谈如何和同学友好相处（Unit2 Getting along），不少于60词。作文题目
请写一段短文，谈谈如何和同学友好相处，不少于60词。（外研八上 Unit2 Getting along）
参考范文
It is important for us to get along well with our classmates. Here is my advice.
First, we should be polite to others and be ready to help people in need. What’s more, we need to listen to our classmates carefully when they talk. Don’t be angry when we have different ideas. We can talk about them patiently.
If we follow these ways, we will have good friends and enjoy our school life.
✍范文解析
1. 时态：全文一般现在时，贴合话题
2. 过渡词：First, What’s more 结构清晰，阅卷加分
3. 要点全覆盖：礼貌、乐于助人、学会倾听、理性处理分歧
4. 词数：80词左右，符合初中写作要求
✏低分版对比（给学生看，知道哪里容易错）
❌ Bad example：
I like my classmates. We should nice. Help others. When you have problem, don’t angry. Talk with them.
（缺少谓语、名词单复数错误、句子零散，中式英语）
