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高考作文精讲2:热点主题深度拆解,高分范文助你突破写作瓶颈
写作任务
为了丰富校园生活、增强学生体质,校学生会在本周三组织了高三年级男子网球赛。请你就本次活动写一篇新闻报道,向校英文广播站投稿,内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容简介。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
思路
此题属于半开放提纲类作文,要求考生根据要点提示,合理添加细节,进行适当拓展。
此题写作要点和拓展可以归纳为:(1)高三年级举办男子网球赛;(2)比赛时间、地点;(3)比赛过程;(4)比赛结果。写作过程中避免使用冗长繁杂句式;要点要全面,表达要准确,适当发挥拓展;句、段之间的衔接要自然,尽可能使用多样化的句式。
根据题目要求及要点提示,正文可分为三段:第一段说明组织高三男子网球赛;第二段简要介绍网球赛的时间、地点及比赛过程;第三段陈述比赛结果和比赛意义。
范文
I’d like to share with you a piece of big news—a tennis game was held among Senior Three boy students to enrich the campus life.
The match was held on Wednesday and lasted four hours. It was organized by the Students’ Union. That morning the tennis court was crowded with the audience and the eight final players. When a player scored, the audience would applaud excitedly.
At last, a player from Class 1 became the biggest winner. The game was really excellent. It not only enriched our school life, but also helped us relax. We wish we could have more such games in the future.
其他可用表达
1. The Students’ Union held a tennis game with the intention of enriching our school life and building up our body.
2. In order to enrich our campus life and help us keep fit, theStudents’ Union organized a tennis game.
3. This Wednesday morning witnessed an exciting tennis game which lasted for four hours.
4. With eight competitors fighting for the final victory, this game attracted a lot of attention.
5. Finally, after four-hour fierce fighting, a tall boy from Class 1 won the game, receiving warm claps and cheers.
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