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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼(五)
一:原文重现
After Henry delivered all the newspapers, he pedaled fast to The Gazette offices by 8: 30.
The chief editor had something important to tell him. He parked his bike and bounded up two
nights of stairs to the chief editor's door.21*cnjy*com
Mr. Trotta greeted him."About those papers," he paused, "no good way to deliver bad news,"
Henry’s smile faded. "Were closing shop Saturday. Advertising is down. Television is how people
get their news today, Mr. Trotta shrugged, "You won't have to get up early on weekends." "No,"
said Henry, "but I like waking up early and meeting people on my route. It's sad People won't get
their neighborhood news any more.”
As Henry rode past the familiar houses, he saw Mr Grady on his porch (门廊) holding a
broom (扫把). "Mr. Grady, wait," Henry called, setting down his bike. He led Mr. Grady to a chair
and took the broom. In minutes, the porch was clean. "Now, Mr, Grady, anytime you have chores
(家务) call me." They sat for a while as Mr. Grady recalled how happy he’d been moving his
family to 26 Maple. He sounded lonely.
A week after closing, Henry wondered if his customers missed The Gazette as much as he did.
He thought of a way to find out.
He started out on his old route with a notebook. First stop: Mr, Jonas, 17 Oak. When Henry
asked him about the paper, Mr. Jonas answered, "I sure liked reading the week's happenings. By
the way, I have a pile of old comics from The Gazette. Think someone would want them?"
“I’ll ask around." Henry made a note in his notebook.
He stopped at Mrs. Burke's, 27 Maple. She opened the door holding two babies. Her other
two kids held on to her legs. Henry stared. "You could use a babysitter." "Definitely. I meant to
put an ad in The Gazette, but....Know any neighbors with experience?”
Mr Simon was next door, carrying his violin out to his car. "Hey, Henry. My band is having a
concert in the park next Friday. Tell all your friends.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
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二:文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Henry发放宪报给各位邻居,日复一日,他
好奇会不会有人和他一样在乎看报纸这件事,他询问每位邻居,每位邻居都有在报纸上刊
登广告的需求,他准备为邻居出版一种报纸,找到了新的方式和邻居建立联系。
【详解】1.段落续写:
由第一段首句内容“随着亨利记下更多笔记,一个想法开始在他脑海中形成。”可知,
第一段可描写Henry计划创建一种新报纸,并将想法告诉了自己的朋友,得到了朋友的支
持的经过。
由第二段首句内容“客户们都很支持Henry的想法,并帮助提供了新闻。”可知,第
二段可描写Henry开始筹办报纸编辑工作,将邻居的需求刊登在报纸上,获得了成功。
2.续写线索:提出想法——告诉朋友——得到支持——开始广告刊登——受到欢迎
3.词汇激活
行为类
提出想法:come up with/form an idea
告诉:inform/tell
支持:support/cheer
刊登:advertise/put sth. on the newspaper
高分句型
1. Miss Roberts advertised that she needed a teenager to help clean her basement.
(由连接词that引导的宾语从句作advertised的宾语)
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2.The new family who just moved in invited neighbors to a “Meet the John sons’
party. (由关系代词who引导定语从句)
三:续写单句训练1. 随着亨利做了更多的笔记,他的脑海里开始形成了一个想法。
2. 也许他可以为邻居创建一个新闻页面。但他会怎么打印出来呢?
3. 他骑车去学校,向他的好朋友解释了一切。
4. “让我们一起解决吧。他所有的朋友都同意帮忙。
5. 第二天,好消息来了。
6. 珍妮帮助买了一台二手彩色打印机,鲍勃的父亲承诺免费为他们免费提供纸张。“完
美的!””亨利说。
7. 顾客们为亨利的想法欢呼,并帮助提供了新闻。
8. 罗伯茨小姐做广告说,她需要一个十几岁的孩子来帮助打扫她的地下室。
9. 刚搬进来的新家庭邀请邻居参加“见约翰逊”聚会。
10. 亨利补充道:“枫树26号的友好的绅士讲的故事。顺便聊天。
11. 亨利输入了新闻,复印了照片,并在周六发布了第一个树街新闻。
12. 在那之后,邻居们做赠品广告,要求提供书籍和音乐。
13. 亨利错过了他以前的公报工作,但他也发起了一些事情。他在讲新闻,联系邻居。
四:佳作展现
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五:课后练笔
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写
的词数应为150左右。
It was somewhere between spring and summer,my mom and I were driving through
the countryside.Back then,I was 13 years old,and always felt unhappy with Mom.But little
did I know that this trip was going to be a special one.
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A pot of flowers sat in the back seat,whose heavenly scent filled the car.
Suddenly,in the middle of nowhere,my mom pulled over.“What are you doing?”I
cried,fearing that the car had broken down and we’ d be stuck there,so far from
home.But that wasn’t the case.My mom hopped out of the car,grabbing the flowers from
the back seat.“It’ll just be a minute,”she called back through the open windows.
My eyes impatiently skimmed the edge of the road before settling on a little sign
showing that it was a nursing home.I looked back to the building,somewhat annoyed,as
my mom reappeared—empty-handed.
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Before she started the car,curiosity drove me to ask,“ Do you know someone
there?”She shook her head.“Then what did you do with the flowers?”She smiled
slightly,“I gave them to the receptionist.”“What?”She laughed at my confusion.“I
told the receptionist to give the flowers to whoever needed them,especially who hasn’t
gotten any in a while.”
I kept silent for a moment.Not long after we continued our driving,I spoke
again,“Did you leave your name?”To this she answered instantly,“No.Leaving flowersthere for someone who will appreciate them makes me feel good,which is enough of a
thank-you for me.”
Suddenly,still thinking about Mom’s deeds,I heard something burst loudly.It was our
car that broke down!Nothing could be worse,because neither my mom nor I understood
how to repair it,and we didn’t know where the garage was.It also seemed impossible to
wait for any passer-by,since we had seen so few along the way.
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We were worrying about what could be done.
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As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.
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六:单句训练
1.我们一直在担心能做些什么。
2.但在等待了相当长的一段时间后,我和妈妈决定走回疗养院寻求帮助。
3.天知道我们开了多远了!
4.当我们到达时,接待员很惊讶,但还是热情地帮助我们联系了车库。
5.在那里,收到鲜花的老人们很兴奋地见到我们,谈论着那一天有多棒。6.令我惊讶的是,随机的善意对接受善意的人有什么意义。
7.正当我们笑着愉快地说话的时候,车库把我们的车修好了。
8.当我们开车走时,路上看见了一家花店。
9.我让妈妈停下来,飞快地进花店踱去,一束盛开的红色花朵引起了我的注意。
10.在目睹了善良的影响后,我决定把甜蜜的花送给妈妈。
11.很快,天堂般的气味再次充满了汽车。
12.妈妈试图掩饰她的兴奋感,但闪闪发光的眼泪使她失望了。
13.在这次旅行中,我发现,尽管我偶尔会对她生气,但我还是为她感到骄傲。
14.这是我生命中的一次旅程。
参考答案
三:单句训练
1) As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head.
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2) Maybe he could create a news page for the neighbors.
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3) But how would he print it?4) He pedaled to school and explained everything to his good friends.
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5) “Let’s work it out together.” All his friends agreed to help.
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6) The next day, good news came.
7) Jenny helped to get a second-hand color printer and Bob’s father promised to
supply paper to them for free. “Perfect!” Henry said.
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8) Customers cheered Henry's idea and helped supply the news.
9) Miss Roberts advertised that she needed a teenager to help clean her basement.
10) The new family who just moved in invited neighbors to a “Meet the Johnsons”
party.
11) Henry added: “Stories told by friendly gentleman at 26 Maple. Stop by to chat.”
12) Henry typed the news, made photocopies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News
on Saturday.
13) After that, neighbors advertised giveaways, and requested books and music.
14) Henry missed his old Gazette job, but he had launched something too. He was
making news and connecting neighbors.
六:单句训练
1.We were worrying about what could be done.
2.But after waiting in vain for a considerable time,Mom and I decided to walk back the
road to the nursing home and seek for help.
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3.God knows how far we had driven!
4.When we arrived,the receptionist was surprised,but warmly helped us contact the garage.
5.There,the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet us,talking about
how great that day was.
6.It amazed me what random actions of kindness could mean to the people who received it.
7.While we were laughing and talking merrily,the garage got our car repaired.
8.As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.
9.I asked Mom to stop and paced quickly into the flower shop,where a bunch of flowers
glowing red in full bloom caught my eye.
10.Having witnessed the effect of kindness,I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers.
11.Soon,the heavenly scent filled the car again.
12.Mom tried to conceal her excitement,but the glittering tears failed her.13.Through this trip,I discovered that,despite my occasional anger towards her,I actually
felt proud of her.
14.This was the trip of my life.
四:佳作展现
(一)
As Henry made more notes, an idea started forming in his head. Maybe he could
create a news page for the neighbors. But how would he print it? He pedaled to school
and explained everything to his good friends. “Let’s work it out together.” All his
friends agreed to help. The next day, good news came. Jenny helped to get a second-hand
color printer and Bob’s father promised to supply paper to them for free. “Perfect!”
Henry said.
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Customers cheered Henry's idea and helped supply the news. Miss Roberts
advertised that she needed a teenager to help clean her basement. The new family who
just moved in invited neighbors to a “Meet the Johnsons” party. Henry added: “Stories
told by friendly gentleman at 26 Maple. Stop by to chat.” Henry typed the news, made
photocopies, and delivered the first Tree Streets News on Saturday. After that, neighbors
advertised giveaways, and requested books and music. Henry missed his old Gazette job,
but he had launched something too. He was making news and connecting neighbors.
(二)
We were worrying about what could be done.But after waiting in vain for a considerable
time,Mom and I decided to walk back the road to the nursing home and seek for help.God knows
how far we had driven!When we arrived,the receptionist was surprised,but warmly helped us
contact the garage.There,the old men who had received the flowers were excited to meet
us,talking about how great that day was.It amazed me what random actions of kindness could
mean to the people who received it.While we were laughing and talking merrily,the garage got our
car repaired.
As we drove along,a flower shop came into sight on the road.I asked Mom to stop and paced
quickly into the flower shop,where a bunch of flowers glowing red in full bloom caught my
eye.Having witnessed the effect of kindness,I decided to send Mom the sweet flowers.Soon,theheavenly scent filled the car again.Mom tried to conceal her excitement,but the glittering tears
failed her.Through this trip,I discovered that,despite my occasional anger towards her,I actually
felt proud of her.This was the trip of my life.