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2022 高考英语读后续写精读精炼（九）
一：原文重现
Marty was new at school. Usually when you're the new kid, you lay low, but not Marty.
On his first day, he made a toothpick disappear. One second he was holding the toothpick,
and the next second it was gone! Everyone was asking him how he did it. “It's magic! At my old
school, they actually called me Magic Marty. " Marty said proudly. “Is he serious?" I whispered to
my friend Brian. “I don't know, but that was pretty cool, "Brian said, still watching Marty. I knew
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Another time, Marty pulled a water bottle out of his bag, along with a cup and carefully
poured water into it. Marty got a handful of ice cubes! Applause filled the hallway. When asked
how he did it, he just smiled," Sorry, but that's the first law of magic. A magician never reveals his
secrets. "
Well he won't have to, I thought to myself. I'll reveal his secrets for him.
That night, at home, I sat at the kitchen table for almost an hour, trying to figure out the trick.
" At it again, honey?” My mom watched me wiggle (摆动） my fingers hopelessly over a cup of
water. "He's tricking people!" I cried. " Sounds as if he's trying to make friends. "My mom patted
my arm.
Magic Marty had me stumped (把…难住）, but the next day I caught a lucky break. At
lunch, Marty was going on about how he could make things float. He had a ring in one hand and a
pencil in the other. That's when I saw it: a thin piece of fishing line tied around the end of the
pencil and attached to a button on Marty's shirt! Sure enough, he made the ring “float” by sliding
it over the pencil and hanging it from the line. No one else noticed, and soon the whole cafeteria
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注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
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It was time to put an end to the Magic Marty show.
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“Wait!” Marty jumped in front of me.
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二：文本解析
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者班级新来了一位叫Marty的同学，会变
魔术，吸引了大家的关注，但作者觉得这些魔术都是假的，骗人的，所以想揭穿 Marty，
但作者最终没有揭穿Marty，而是和Marty组成了一个魔术组合，一起表演魔术并成为了好
朋友。（第一个版本）
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“魔术马蒂秀是时候结束了。”可知，第一段可描写作者想要揭
穿Marty。
②由第二段首句内容“‘等等!’马蒂跳到我前面。”可知，第二段可描写马蒂邀请我
和他一起表演魔术。
2.续写线索：走过去——想要揭穿马蒂——看见他紧张——作者犹豫——作者什么都
没说——和马蒂一起表演魔术——成为朋友
3.词汇激活
行为类
①低语：whisper /murmur/speak in a low voice
②揭露：reveal/ disclose
③证明是：turn out/ prove
情绪类
①紧张地：nervously / tensely
②开心地：joyfully/happily/with pleasure
高分句型
1.That's how the Magic Marty and Mysterious Matt Lunch Show began. （由连接词
how引导的表语从句）
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2 .And since I became a fellow magician, Marty has let me in on some of his other
tricks.（由连接词since引导的时间状语从句）
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三：续写单句训练1. 是时候结束魔术师马蒂的表演了。
2. 我走了过去。“那是钓鱼线。我冷笑着，皱起双臂。
3. 马蒂潜意识地用手指指着钓鱼线，紧张地低声说：“那么，你要告诉人们吗？”
4. 看到他眼中的恐慌，不知怎么的，我犹豫了一下。
5. 如果我透露这个秘密，马蒂可能会失去他的新朋友。
6. 最后，我挣扎了一会儿，我回答说：“不，我什么也不说。”
7. 马蒂松了一口气，我转身走开了。
8. “等等！马蒂跳到了我面前。
9. 出乎意料的是，他拍了拍我的胳膊，咧嘴说：“你对魔法很敏锐。想和我在一起去
吗？”我高兴地点了点头。
10. 这就是魔术师马蒂和神秘的马特午餐节目的开始。
11. 现在我们已经成为一个魔术队已经三个月了。
12. 自从我成为魔术师，马蒂让我参与他的其他把戏。
13. 事实证明，马蒂不再是一个假的魔术师，而不是一个真正的朋友。
四：佳作展现
It was time to put an end to the Magic Marty show. 21·世纪*教育网
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“Wait!” Marty jumped in front of me.
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五：课后练笔
My husband, Donald, took our daughter Sarah out for some ice cream the night before
driving her to college. As they were walking back to the car, they saw a young man sitting on
the ground and giving his puppy a cone.
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“A cute dog,” Donald said as they walked by. “A free dog,” the young man
replied. Donald asked him what he meant by that and the man explained. He was moving
away from Vermont and did not think the travel would be good for the dog. He had
raised her from a small puppy. The man said she was a 6-month-old cross between the
Doberman and the Labrador named Rhubarb. Donald took his phone number. The rest, as
they say, is history.
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Rhubarb was a sweet dog and very friendly and loved everyone. Whenever someone
came to the house, she was always happy. She also got along with Willie, an older
Samoyed we had. Willie was not well and died about a year later, but, fortunately,
Rhubarb’s company helped him keep going for longer than that if he had been alone.
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But the interesting thing about Rhubarb was that she never barked. She would
sometimes get excited when she saw a chipmunk (花栗鼠) and make a little crying
sound.
One hot night when she was about 4 years old, we went to bed with the windows
open and the doors unlocked. At about 3 a. m., I woke up to the sound of Rhubarbbarking. I woke Donald and we got out of bed.
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Rhubarb was coming toward us. We turned on the lights and noticed the door to the
kitchen was open. Then we saw the door leading into the house from the garage was also
open. We quickly locked all the doors, and we did not get any sleep that night. It was
deep into the night, so we didn’t call the police.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
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My purse was right next to the door.
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六：单句训练
1．第二天，我们注意到地板上有烟灰。
2．事实上，是一个小偷进入了我们的厨房和车库。
3．这让我们松了一口气，多亏了大黄，小偷什么也没偷。
4．我报了警，报告入室盗窃。
5．我还告诉他们什么也没有被带走，但他们还是派了一名警察过来和我们谈谈。
6．事实上，最近许多当地的房屋在周末被人闯入。7．大多数人的钱包和钱包都被偷了。
8．我的钱包就在门口的旁边。
9．然而，大黄在小偷偷它之前就把它吓走了。
10．当警察离开时，他说我们应该奖励大黄一顿大的牛排晚餐。
11．大黄活到快12岁了，但那天晚上是她一生中唯一一次吠叫。
12．幸运的是，她从来没有看到有必要警告我们有任何其他的危险。
13．我们非常感谢大黄。我们像爱家里的一员一样爱她。
参考答案
三：单句训练
1) It was time to put an end to the Magic Marty show.
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2) I walked over. "It was fishing line. ” I sneered, folding my arms.
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3) Marty subconsciously fingered the fishing line and nervously whispered, “So, are you going
to tell people?”
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4) Seeing the panic in his eyes, somehow, I hesitated.
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5) Should I reveal the secret, Marty might lose his new friends.
6) Finally, after struggling for a moment, I replied, "Nah, I won't say anything. "
7) Marty let out a relieved sigh, and I turned to walk away.
8) "Wait!” Marty jumped in front of me.9) Unexpectedly, he patted my arm, grinning, "You've got a pretty good eye for magic. Want to
join me?"
10) I nodded joyfully. That's how the Magic Marty and Mysterious Matt Lunch Show began.
11) Now we've been a magic team for three months.
12) And since I became a fellow magician, Marty has let me in on some of his other tricks.
13) It turns out that instead of a fake magician, Marty is a real friend.
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六：单句训练
1．The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor.
2．Actually, it was a thief who entered our kitchen and garage.
3．Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing.
4．I called the police to report the break-in.
5．I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a police officer over to
talk with us anyway.
6．In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in on the weekend.
7．Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen.
8．My purse was right next to the door.
9．However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he or she could steal it.
10．When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big steak
dinner.
11．Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she
barked in her entire life.
12．Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger.
13．We were very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family.
四：佳作展现
（一）
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It was time to put an end to the Magic Marty show. Excited at the thought，I
couldn't resist crying out, “It was fishing line!” Totally surprised at my abruptness，all
the classmates including Marty had their attention fixed on me ， waiting for an
explanation. I pulled out the fishing line to reveal his secrets in front of the classmates.
Marty lowered his head with a burning face. Having broken the first law of his proudmagic，I was about to stalk off.
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“Wait!” Marty jumped in front of me. With lips trembling, he attempted to say
something but in vain and tears were rolling in his eyes. It suddenly occurred to me what
magic meant to him. My satisfaction vanished, turning into the shame of jealousy. To
Marty, all he had done was merely to befriend more classmates. Out of guilt and regret, I
explained my original intention and apologized. Only then did I appreciate never should
jealousy gain the upper hand at any time.
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The next day we noticed there was cigarette ash on the floor. Actually, it was a thief who
entered our kitchen and garage. Much to our relief, thanks to Rhubarb, the thief stole nothing. I
called the police to report the break-in. I also told them nothing had been taken, but they sent a
police officer over to talk with us anyway. In fact, recently many local homes had been broken in
on the weekend. Most people’s wallets and purses had been stolen.
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My purse was right next to the door. However, Rhubarb had scared the thief away before he
or she could steal it. When the police officer left, he said we should reward Rhubarb with a big
steak dinner. Rhubarb lived to be almost 12 years old, but that night was the only time she barked
in her entire life. Fortunately, she never saw the need to warn us of any other danger. We were
very thankful to Rhubarb. We loved her like a member of the family.
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