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初中英语写作指导:感谢信

初中英语写作指导:感谢信
【写作任务】Write a thank-you email.
假设你是中国广州中学生李华,刚刚从英国伦敦做交流生回来,决定给你的寄宿家庭Smith一家写封感谢信。内容包括:

Greetings and beginning of the email

Your appreciation and gratitude

  • Things you are grateful for
  • Things you enjoyed most about the trip
  • Things you learnt during your stay in London (e.g. English history, English culture)

Your life and feelings after the trip

  • Things you have done since you returned to Guangzhou
  • Things you miss about London

Ending and signing off

  • Best wishes to the host family

【写作指导】

一、写作思路

题目要求写一封感谢信给英国的寄宿家庭,包含5个部分:

1. 开头问候:

Dear Smith family, / How are you?
I arrived home safely and I'm writing to say thank you.

2. 表达感谢:

具体感谢的事情(三餐、接送、照顾等)

3. 难忘的事:

最喜欢的事(参观景点、聊天等)
学到的东西(历史、文化、礼仪等)

4. 回国后的生活:

回国后做了什么(分享照片、告诉朋友等)
想念伦敦的什么(家人、食物、风景等)

5. 结尾祝福:

祝福和签名

二、写作素材

· 感谢类表达

非常感谢你  Thank you so much.
我真诚地感谢……  I sincerely appreciate...
我感激不尽  I can't thank you enough.
感谢款待  Thank you for your hospitality.
感谢你为我做的一切 Thank you for everything you did for me.

· 描述难忘经历

我最喜欢的是……  What I enjoyed most was...
我永远不会忘记……  I will never forget...
对我来说最难忘的是……  The most unforgettable thing for me was...
我喜欢做……  I loved doing...
这对我意义重大  That meant a lot to me.

· 描述学到的东西

我学到了很多关于……  I learned a lot about...
这让我对……有了更好的理解  This gave me a better understanding of...
我体验了……  I experienced...

· 描述回国后的生活

自从我回来后……  Since I returned...
我已经……  I have already...
我向我的朋友分享了……  I shared... with my friends.
我非常想念……  I miss... very much.

· 结尾祝福

替我向……问好  Give my best wishes to...
祝你们一切顺利 Wish you all the best.
保重  Take care.
希望能再见到你  Hope to see you again.
保持联系  Keep in touch.

三、范文示例

基础版

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
How are you? I arrived home safely in Guangzhou. I am writing to say thank you for everything.
Thank you for taking care of me during my stay in London. I really enjoyed the delicious breakfast you made every morning. I also loved visiting the British Museum with you. It was so interesting!
During my stay, I learned a lot about English history and culture. For example, I learned how to use a knife and fork properly.
Since I returned to Guangzhou, I have shown my friends the photos we took together. They all said London looks beautiful. I really miss the afternoon tea we had together. And I miss your lovely dog, Max.
Thank you again for everything. Please give my best wishes to everyone.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

进阶版

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
How is everything going in London? I arrived home safely last week. I'm writing to express my deepest gratitude for your kindness.
Thank you for treating me like a family member. I still miss your delicious English breakfast and our evening chats in the living room. Most of all, thank you for driving me to school every day — that meant a lot to me.
What I enjoyed most was visiting the Tower of London and Buckingham Palace. During my stay, I learned a lot about English history and culture, such as queuing politely and why British people love talking about the weather!
Since I returned to Guangzhou, I have shared my photos and stories with my classmates. I also gave a presentation about British culture at school.
I really miss walking along the Thames River and your lovely cat, Lily. Thank you again for making my trip so memorable. Please give my best wishes to everyone. I hope you can visit Guangzhou one day — I would love to be your guide!
Take care and keep in touch.
With love and gratitude,
Li Hua

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