【作文教学】初中英语作文总写不长?先让学生把一句话写完整

初中英语作文总写不长？先让学生把一句话写完整

什么才叫“一句话写完整”？

对初中生来说，“写完整”至少要做到三层。

第一层：句子结构完整

有主语、有谓语，意思能看懂。

I like reading.

第二层：信息表达清楚

能回答“谁、做什么、在哪里、什么时候、为什么”。

I like reading English books after school.

第三层：内容适当具体

能补充原因、感受、例子或结果。

I like reading English books after school, because it helps me learn new words.

从第一层到第三层，句子就慢慢“长”起来了。

可以这样教学生扩句

1. 从5个基本问题入手

让学生给句子加信息：

- Who? 谁？

- What? 做什么？

- Where? 在哪里？

- When? 什么时候？

- Why? 为什么？

比如原句是：

I play basketball.

可以逐步扩展：

I play basketball after school.

I play basketball with my friends after school.

I play basketball with my friends after school, because it makes me happy.

学生不一定每次都要写这么长，但要知道：句子是可以慢慢加内容的。

2. 用“因为、所以、但是、而且”连接

初中生写作不需要一开始就用复杂从句，先把常见连接词用稳。

提醒学生：不要为了写长而乱连句子，要先保证每一部分都通顺。

3. 给句子加“感受”

很多学生写完事实就停了，其实还可以加一句感受。

We went to the park.

We went to the park and had a great time.

We went to the park. The weather was fine, and we felt very happy.

“感受句”不一定要很高级，但能让文章更有温度。

4. 给句子加“例子”

比如写爱好：

I like sports.

I like sports, such as basketball and running.

I like sports, such as basketball and running. I often run with my father on weekends.

有了例子，句子自然就具体了。