夜雨聆风通用写作规则（必记）
1. 时态优先：一般现在时（介绍类）、一般过去时（叙事类）、一般将来时（计划类）
2. 结构统一：开头引入→中间细节→结尾感受（三段式，考场标准格式）
3. 书写要求：单词首字母、专有名词大写，句末加标点，字数控制5–8句话。
一、万能通用三段式框架（所有作文均可套用）
基础版
开头句（1句）：点明主题，简单引入
中间句（3–5句）：写人/事/物、活动、地点、时间
结尾句（1句）：表达心情、喜好、总结
进阶版（优生提分，句式丰富）
开头：引出主题+简单评价
中间：分点描述（用 First/Then/And 衔接）
结尾：总结+升华情感/祝福
二、八大高频作文主题 专属模板+范文+替换词
主题1：自我介绍 / 介绍他人（一般现在时）
适用题目：Myself / My Friend / My Classmate
模板（基础版）
Hello! My name is ______. I am ______ years old.
I am in Grade Six. I am ______（外貌/性格）.
I like ______ and ______（爱好）.
I often ______ after school.
I like making friends. I am very happy every day.
模板（提升版）
Everyone! Let me introduce myself.
My name is ______. I am twelve. I am a lovely boy/girl.
My hobbies are ______ and ______. I usually do them in my free time.
I am friendly to others. I enjoy my school life.
替换词（直接填空）
年龄：twelve / eleven
外貌：tall, short, thin, fat
性格：friendly, kind, clever, quiet
爱好：reading books, playing football, drawing, swimming
例句填空示范
Hello! My name is Amy. I am twelve years old. I am in Grade Six. I am thin and friendly. I like reading books and drawing. I often draw pictures after school. I like making friends. I am very happy every day.
主题2：我的家庭 My Family（一般现在时）
适用题目：My Family / My Parents
模板（基础版）
This is my family. There are ______ people in my family.
They are my ______, my ______ and me.
My father is a ______. My mother is a ______.
We often ______ together.
I love my family very much.
替换词
人数：three / four
家庭成员：father, mother, grandpa, grandma
职业：doctor, teacher, driver, farmer
日常活动：watch TV, play games, have dinner
完整范文
This is my family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a driver. My mother is a teacher. We often watch TV together. I love my family very much.
主题3：我的爱好 My Hobby（一般现在时，课本重点）
适用题目：My Hobby / My Favourite Hobby
模板（基础版）
I have many hobbies. My favourite hobby is ______.
I like it very much. I often ______ at the weekend.
It is very ______（感受）.
Hobbies make me happy.
模板（提升版）
Different people have different hobbies.
I like ______ best. I do this hobby with my friends sometimes.
It is interesting and fun. I learn a lot from it.
I will keep this hobby forever.
替换词
爱好：collecting stamps, taking photos, riding a bike, playing basketball
感受：interesting, fun, great
完整范文
I have many hobbies. My favourite hobby is collecting stamps. I like it very much. I often collect stamps at the weekend. It is very interesting. Hobbies make me happy.
主题4：我的房间/教室 My Room / My Classroom（there be 句型）
适用题目：My Room
模板（基础版）
This is my ______. It is big and clean.
There is a ______ and a ______ in it.
There are some ______ on the desk.
I often ______ here.
I like my ______ very much.
替换词
地点：room, classroom
物品：bed, desk, chair, book, bag
动作：read books, do homework
完整范文
This is my room. It is big and clean. There is a bed and a desk in it. There are some books on the desk. I often read books here. I like my room very much.
主题5：我的周末/假期计划（一般将来时 be going to）
适用题目：My Weekend / My Holiday Plan
模板（基础版）
I am going to have a busy ______.
On Saturday morning, I am going to ______.
In the afternoon, I am going to ______.
On Sunday, I am going to ______.
I will have a good time.
替换词
时间：weekend, holiday
活动：visit grandparents, go to the park, play football, read books, go shopping
完整范文
I am going to have a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to read books. In the afternoon, I am going to play football. On Sunday, I am going to visit my grandparents. I will have a good time.
主题6：难忘的一天/一次活动（一般过去时，高频难点）
适用题目：A Happy Day / My Happy Sunday / School Sports Day
模板（基础版）
Yesterday was ______. I ______ with my ______.
We went there by ______.
We ______ and ______.
We had a great time. It was a happy day.
替换词
时间：Sunday, Saturday, Sports Day
同行人：parents, friends
交通：bus, bike
活动：went to the park, took photos, played games
完整范文
Yesterday was Sunday. I went to the park with my parents. We went there by bus. We played games and took photos. We had a great time. It was a happy day.
主题7：我最喜欢的节日 My Favourite Festival（一般现在时）
适用题目：My Favourite Festival
模板（基础版）
My favourite festival is ______.
It comes in ______（季节/时间）.
We eat ______ and wear new clothes.
We have a big family dinner.
I love this festival so much.
替换词
节日：the Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day, Christmas
季节：winter, autumn
食物：dumplings, mooncakes
完整范文
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It comes in winter. We eat dumplings and wear new clothes. We have a big family dinner. I love this festival so much.
主题8：书信/毕业留言（混合时态，压轴题型）
适用题目：Write a letter to your friend
模板（基础版）
Dear ______,
You are my best friend. We had happy days together.
We often ______ at school. Thank you for helping me.
I will miss you. Good luck!
Yours,
完整范文
Dear Tom,
You are my best friend. We had happy days together. We often played football at school. Thank you for helping me. I will miss you. Good luck!
Yours,
Li Ming
三、万能过渡词&加分句型（全作文通用，背诵即可）
1. 衔接过渡词（让作文更连贯，必加）
• First 首先
• Then 然后
• And 并且
• Sometimes 有时
• At the weekend 在周末
• In the morning / In the afternoon 在上午/下午
2. 开头万能句（任选一句使用）
1. Hello everyone. Let me talk about myself.
2. This is my happy family.
3. I want to tell you something about my hobby.
4. I have a great plan for my weekend.
3. 结尾万能句（所有作文通用，保底收尾）
1. I like it very much.
2. I have a good time.
3. I love my ... so much.
4. It is a wonderful day.
4. 高分替换句（替换简单句，提升档次）
• 原句：I am happy. → 升级：I feel very happy.
• 原句：It is fun. → 升级：It is very interesting.
• 原句：We play together. → 升级：We play together happily.
四、考场避错清单（高频失分点，反复强调）
1. 时态不乱换
介绍类用一般现在时；写计划用be going to；写过去的事用动词过去式。
2. 名词单复数
hobby → hobbies, photo → photos, noodle 只用 noodles。
3. 大小写规范
星期、月份、节日、人名首字母必须大写；句首单词首字母大写。
4. 固定搭配
play football（球类不加the）；play the piano（乐器加the）。
5. 句子完整性
每句话以句号结尾，不要连续写长句。
五、极简背诵版（浓缩模板，适合短期突击默写）适合最后两周复习，精简成填空短句，学生直接背框架+关键词：
1. 介绍类
My name is ___. I am ___. I like ___. I am happy.
2. 计划类
I am going to ___. I will have fun.
3. 叙事类
Yesterday I ___. We were happy.
4. 节日/爱好
My favourite ___ is ___. It is great.
