夜雨聆风
山东省中考英语作文
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连云港 “荐书稿”类作文
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【范文亮点】
结构清晰：三段式——写信目的→书籍简介→推荐理由，层次分明。
内容充实：用“From...to...”平行结构概括书中多个冒险情节，信息量大且不啰嗦。
理由有深度：不仅说“有趣”，还上升到“教会我面对选择后果、为正义而战”的价值层面。
高级词汇：a series of, talk sb. into doing, faraway, as well as, recommend。
【备考启示】
推荐类作文要避免只写“这本书很好看”。至少两条推荐理由应分别涉及“内容趣味性”和“思想启发性”，这样才能体现“善读书”的深度。
重庆 “征文投稿”类作文
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广安 “健康生活”类作文
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【范文亮点】
1.数据描述清晰：准确转述调查结果中的所有数据，用词多样（seldom...either, less than, about 2 to 6 hours, until late at night）。
2.评价客观有力：用“Obviously”引出总体评价，并用定语从句“which is bad for...”说明危害，逻辑严谨。
3.建议具体可行：两条建议（运动+早睡）直击问题核心，且用“such as”举例，增强可操作性。
4.首尾呼应：结尾号召“从现在开始养成好习惯”，升华主题。
【备考启示】
“描述数据+评价现状+提出建议”是健康类作文的经典框架。注意建议必须针对调查中发现的具体问题，不能泛泛而谈。
烟台 “交通安全”作文
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Dear David,
I'm glad to hear from you.
Last week our school held a Traffic Safety Day activity. We took part in many meaningful lessons. Teachers showed us traffic rules and reminded us to follow traffic lights when crossing roads. We also learned not to ride electric bikes alone and stay away from big vehicles. Besides, we watched safety videos and shared our own ideas in groups.
I learned a lot from this activity. Traffic safety is important for everyone. We must keep safety in mind whenever we go out.
Yours,
Li Hua
达州 英语作文
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成都 英语作文
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泸州 英语作文
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江西南昌 英语作文
真题一：Doing Housework（做家务）
考试要求：
学校英语报劳动主题征文。
内容包含：日常做家务内容、做家务的收获、未来计划。
词数：80–110，不出现真实校名、人名。
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Doing Housework
Labor is an important part of our growth. I often help my parents with housework in my free time. I sweep the floor, wash dishes after meals and water the flowers every weekend. Sometimes I also tidy my bedroom and fold my clothes.
At first, I thought housework was tiring. But gradually, I learn to take care of myself and understand how hard my parents work. It teaches me responsibility and makes our family warmer.
In the future, I will keep doing housework every day. I plan to learn simple cooking to share more housework with my family.
真题二：Growing Vegetables（种植蔬菜）
考试要求：
介绍一次种菜经历，包含：种植过程、遇到的困难与解决方法、个人感悟。
词数：80–110。
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Growing Vegetables
Last spring, I grew green vegetables on the small balcony of my home. First, I put soil into boxes and sowed seeds carefully. Then I watered them every morning and pulled out weeds regularly.
At first, few sprouts came out. I felt upset. My mom told me not to water too often. I followed her advice, and soon small leaves grew up. When I picked fresh vegetables, I was so proud.
This experience tells me that every harvest needs patience and hard work. Nothing can be gained without effort.
来源：天利初中
