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13 倡议书
(2013年,安徽卷)假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明,从我做起”为主题的征文
活动,请你以“On the Way to School”为题,写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括:
1. 遵守交通法规;
2. 注意举止文明。
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4. 短文的题目已为你拟好,不计入总词数
On the way to School
【参考范文】
On the way to School
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious
harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on
the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on my way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bike, I'll always keep to the
right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk,Ill never forget to
use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile,I will regard it as my duty to help keep our
environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere,
I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will
make a difference.
【解析】这是一篇倡议性质的命题类作文,本题只给出了写作要点,要求写一篇关于遵守
交通法规的英语短文。由于此篇作文非常贴近生活,故我们大部分学生都会感觉有的可写
在写作中主要围绕内容要点选取自己熟悉的内容进行写作。写作中注意选择词汇的时候要
选择相对高级的词汇,也要运用多种句型,让文章更有变化。写作中注意应用一些比较经典的句式短语等来提高作文的文采,注意不要遗漏要点。为了使表达更有逻辑性,适当使
用序数词,连接词等。
1.我写信诚邀你参加我校组织的一次活动。
I'm writing to warmly invite you to participate in an activity organized by our school.
2.我肯定你会感兴趣的,因为你一直对运动有热情。
I'm sure it will appeal to you, for you have been enthusiastic about sports.
3.活动细节如下:Here are some details about this activity. (第一段最后一句,启下)
4. 活动将于6月21下午2:00到500:在校大厅举行。
The activity is scheduled in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21.
5.如能尽早答复,我们将不胜感激。
Your reply at the earliest convenience will be highly appreciated.
6.我相信旅行时少不了会感到兴奋与愉快。
I'm fully convinced that there will be no shortage of excitement as well as enjoyment during the
trip.
7.你的参加肯定会给我们的晚会增色,我们大家盼望着你的加入。
Your participation can surely add color to the party and we are all looking forward to your
involvement.
模板
In order to _______, _________. (开门见山地提出倡议的目的,即写出主题句). // 或者
Nowadays / Today, __________. / As is known to all, _________ . / It is obvious
that___________。(陈述某一现象可能带来的结果,即提出倡议的起因)
Therefore, there are at least three things we can do. First of all, we should ______. Second,
let’s _______. Finally, I call on all of us to ______. (注意句式的变化)
If we do as mentioned above, there is no doubt that ________. (结论句)倡议书属于应用文的一种,由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。一般用将来
时或一般现在时。题目常会给出标题、称呼、结尾、落款这四部分,考生只需完成正文即
可。这类写作的正文包括倡议的目的、内容以及呼吁。
1. 引出倡议目的
常用in order to引出的不定式短语或用with / for the purpose of引导的介词短语。如:
In order to/to offer help to the migrant kids/for the purpose of offering help to the migrant kids,
we think our government should take measures to pour more money into improving the present
situation of migrant schools. 为了帮助民工子弟,我们认为政府应该采取措施,将资金投入
到改善民工学校现状中。
2. 列举倡议内容
倡议其实就是提建议,因此,可用be supposed to (应该), it is suggested that... (建
议), it would be better if... (如果......,那就更好了)等。倡议的内容通常都不只一个,
因此可用in addition, besides, additionally, what’s more, furthermore, moreover来列
举这些内容。如:
we are supposed /required /expected to choose a healthy
倡议书1
假定你是校英语俱乐部部长李华。近期俱乐部计划面向全校学生招募新会员,请你
代表俱乐部用英语写一封招新倡议书,内容包括:
1.俱乐部的宗旨;2. 会员需具备的条件;3.报名方式及截止日期。
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
The school English Club aims to promote the use of English and involve students in
diverse language-rich activities. Recently, we are recruiting(招收) new members with
the requirements(要求) below.
Enthusiasm for English is undoubtedly a must. You are more likely to be admitted if you
are capable of(能够) organizing activities or have previous(过往的) experiences.
Additionally, a strong sense of responsibility and good teamwork spirit(良好的团队精
神) are highly appreciated.(表示品质和能力的词也可以用在申请信)
If you are interested, please submit your application before April 30.
The English Club倡议书2
假设你是高三学生李华,请你写一封倡议书,号召同学们在高考结束后捐出旧书,
送给需要的同学。内容包括:1. 捐书的种类:参考书、课本等2. 捐书的意义。
【参考范文】
Dear fellow students,
Soon we are going to bid farewell to(说再见) middle school and become freshmen
in universities. How to deal with loads of used reference books? I urge(力劝) that after
the National College Entrance Examination, we collect the books and donate them to those
who need them. By doing so, we can not only bring warmth to those in need of books, but
also give the second-hand books a new life, which is far more environment-friendly than
throwing them into the dustbins.
Let’s act hand in hand!
Li Hua
倡议书3
你校学生会办的《英语月报》举行“为建设节约型社会献一计”活动,你提出一个倡
议;鼓励毕业学生把参考书以及课本留给下一届学生使用。
你的理由是;
1. 可以节约资源,减少浪费,2.书上的笔记很有用,
3. 国外(如澳大利亚)已有成功的做法,4,其他
注意:1.词数100左右 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文流畅
参考词汇:节约型社会energy-saving society
【参考范文】
As we know, when senior students graduate from school, most of their reference books (as
well as textbooks) which are still in good condition are thrown away. What a great waste it is!
I suggest that we should recycle these books . On the one hand, recycling them can save a lot of
natural resources, which can be reused to make textbooks. On the other hand, senior students may
have made plenty of useful notes on the pages. They are very helpful to the following users.
At present, the whole nation is called on to build an energy-saving society. I think it’s certainly
meaningful to our long-term interests. In fact, in Australia and some other countries, recycling
textbooks is popular, which gives us a good example.1.假如你是李华,最近你校学生会发起了“绿色地球,从我做起”的主题活动,作为学生
会成员,请你为该活动写一封倡议书。内容要点如下:
1. 活动目的;
2. 提出建议;
3. 发出呼吁。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
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2.你校将以“Care for Ourselves, Care for Our Eyes”为主题,举办一场英语征文比赛,请你
写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 保护眼睛的重要性;
2. 培养良好用眼习惯的方法;
3. 保护眼睛的倡议。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Care for Ourselves, Care for Our Eyes
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3.假定你是校学生会主席李华。最近,有些学生经常以零食代替正餐。请你以学生会名义
为学校英文报校园生活专栏写封倡议书,呼吁同学们养成健康饮食习惯。内容包括:
1. 描述现象;
2. 阐明危害;
3. 发出号召。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear students,
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Students’ Union
4.近年来,露营活动逐渐兴起,但也带来了环境和安全等方面的问题。假定你是李华,请
写一封倡议书,号召大家在休闲娱乐的同时爱护环境,内容包括:
1. 露营造成的问题;
2. 爱护环境的倡议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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_5.假定你是某高中学生会成员之一李华,获悉你们社区正在创建文明单位,请你以学生会
名义写一篇倡议书,号召大家积极为创建文明单位做出努力,内容包括:
1. 倡议的目的;
2. 倡议的具体内容(如:遵纪守法,爱护公共环境,为社区志愿服务等);
3. 号召同学们共同参与。
注意:
1. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计算入总词数;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:文明社区a civilized community 志愿服务volunteer service
Dear fellow students,
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Thank you!
The Student Union
6.假定你是班级英语课代表李华,请参照以下提示,用英文写一份倡议书,提倡全班同学
学会用英语传播中国文化。
要点提示:1.提出倡议:
2.用英语传播中国文化的意义:
3.用英语传播中国文化的方法。
注意:1.写作字数应为80左右:
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7.假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际,学校向全校学生发出安全倡议,请你代表校英文俱乐
部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。内容包括:
1.倡议目的;
2.倡议内容;
3.发出呼吁。
注意:
1.写作词数应为100左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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8.节约是中华民族的传统美德。然而,当前餐桌上的浪费现象却十分严重。假定你是校学
生会主席李华,请你代表学生会给你校英语报投稿,写一封主题为“光盘行动”的倡议书,
内容包括:
1. 简述你校食堂餐桌浪费现象;
2. 提出解决办法;
3. 倡议共同行动。
注意:1. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数100左右(开头已经给出,但不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:节约 thrift; 光盘行动 “Clean Your Plate” campaign
Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union.
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The Student Union
9.假定你是李华,请你向学校英语报投稿,写一篇关于“主动学习”的倡议书。内容包括:
(1)分析好处;
(2)建议措施;
(3)发出倡议。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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10.假如你是某校学生会主席,请你以该校学生会的名义以“校园拒绝零食”为主题,根
据下面的内容,给全校学生写一封倡议书,给学校英语广播节目投稿。内容如下:
1. 目前学校里吃零食现象的情况;
2. 同学们对此现象的态度;
3. 你的看法和建议。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数;
3. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear fellow students,
Our school has a program to help students develop good habits.
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11.假设你是红星中学学生会负责人李华。学校发起“减塑捡塑,共创美好家园”活动。
为了号召更多学生参与该活动,请你用英文给国际部留学生写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1. 你对该口号的理解;
2. 具体倡议。
注意:1. 词数 100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear fellow students,
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12.假定你是某国际学校体育俱乐部的负责人李华,你们俱乐部最近发起了“每天锻炼1
小时”活动。请你结合以下要点写封倡议书,号召全校同学动起来。
1.活动目的;
2.具体做法;
3.发出倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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就此写一封英文倡议信,内容包括:
1.活动目的; 2.活动内容; 3.活动倡议。
注意:
1. 写作词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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14.今年“世界地球日”的主题是“众生的地球(Earth for All)”。请你代表学生会为下
周日举行的植树活动在你校英文报上写一封倡议书,内容包括:
1.树木的重要性;
2.植树的倡议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Students,
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Students’ Union
15.假如你是某国际学校学生李华,最近你校学生会发起了“绿色地球,从我做起”的主
题活动,作为学生会成员,请你为该活动写一封倡议书。内容要点如下:1. 活动目的;
2. 提出建议;
3. 发出呼吁。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
Dear students,
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The Student Union
16.假定你是某国际中学的学生会主席李华。最近,有很多同学睡眠不足,已严重影响到
他们的学习。请你代表学生会用英语写一封倡议书,倡议大家健康作息,高效学习。内容
包括:
1. 陈述现象;
2. 说明健康睡眠的重要性;
3. 提出倡议。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1.Dear students,
Recently we’ve launched an activity themed on “Going Green Starts with Us”, thus raising
environmental awareness. Here highlight two simple ways in which we students can save the
earth.
To begin with, using sustainable products, like glass containers instead of single-use plastics,
and incorporating them into daily life can go a long way to making a difference. It’s also
suggested that you reduce energy wastage by turning off lights when leaving, as most of the
electricity has a connection to fossil fuels whose use leads to environmental damage.
Don’t hesitate to join us and keep looking for new innovative ways to protect our
environment!
Li Hua
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生为校学生会发起的“绿色地球,从
我做起”主题活动写一封倡议书,需说明活动目的,向学生提出建议,并发出呼吁。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
发起:launch→initiate, organize
强调:highlight→emphasize, spotlight
首先:to begin with→in the first place, at first
建议:suggest→advise, advocate
导致:lead to→cause, bring about, give rise to
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Recently we’ve launched an activity themed on “Going Green Starts with Us”, thus raising
environmental awareness.
拓展句:Recently we’ve launched an activity that is themed on “Going Green Starts with Us”,
which has raised environmental awareness.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Here highlight two simple ways in which we students can save the earth. (运用了
“介词+关系代词”引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] To begin with, using sustainable products, like glass containers instead of single-use
plastics, and incorporating them into daily life can go a long way to making a difference. (运用了
动名词短语using sustainable products…作主语)[高分句型3] It’s also suggested that you reduce energy wastage by turning off lights when
leaving, as most of the electricity has a connection to fossil fuels whose use leads to
environmental damage. (运用了that引导主语从句并使用了虚拟语气、as引导原因状语从句、
whose引导定语从句)
2.Care for Ourselves, Care for Our Eyes
As we all know, eyes are the windows of the mind. Without eyes, we couldn’t see this
colorful and fantastic world. When walking with our eyes closed, we will feel uneasy or even
frightened. So eyes are of great significance in our daily life.
Here are some approaches to using our eyes correctly. To begin with, pay attention to eye
health. Don’t rub our eyes with dirty hands. Besides, a regular eye examination should be
performed every year. Last but not least, avoid playing computer games or using digital devices
for too long, which is harmful to our eyes.
In conclusion, we need to take care of our eyes carefully.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校即将举办的以“Care for
Ourselves, Care for Our Eyes”为主题英语征文比赛,写一篇短文投稿。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
极好的:fantastic→ excellent
重要性:significance → importance
首先:to begin with→ first of all
照顾:take care of→ care for
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are some approaches to using our eyes correctly.
拓展句:Here are some approaches which help us know how to use our eyes correctly.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】When walking with our eyes closed, we will feel uneasy or even frightened.
(运用了状语从句的省略结构)
【高分句型2】 Last but not least, avoid playing computer games or using digital devices for too
long, which is harmful to our eyes.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.Dear students,
Some students in our school have the habit of eating snacks instead of meals, which isharmful to their health. We’d like to call on all students to develop healthy eating habits.
As we all know, if we eat snacks frequently, the chemicals they contain will build up inside
our body and harm our body. Besides, snacks don’t provide enough nutrients that our body needs
to function well for the whole day. Therefore, we would call on you to take meals instead of
snacks.
Let’s have a healthy diet from now on. Let’s eat more fruit and vegetables every day to
prevent diseases so that we can keep healthy.
Students’ Union
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是校学生会主席李华。最近,有些学生经
常以零食代替正餐。请你以学生会名义为学校英文报校园生活专栏写封倡议书,呼吁同学
们养成健康饮食习惯。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
有害:be harmful to→do harm to
呼吁:call on→appeal to
疾病:disease→sickness
保持健康:keep healthy→keep fit
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Let’s have a healthy diet from now on.
拓展句:Let’s have a healthy diet from now on, which will benefit us.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Some students in our school have the habit of eating snacks instead of meals, which
is harmful to their health. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] As we all know, if we eat snacks frequently, the chemicals they contain will build up
inside our body and harm our body. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
4.Recently, camping activities are gradually emerging, but they also bring environmental and
safety issues.
Firstly, the scattered garbage around the camp garbage bin is piled up into small hills, with
bamboo sticks, fruit peel paper scraps, plastic bags, etc. casually thrown onto the grass. In
addition, many people are enthusiastic about doing outdoor barbecues and hot pot in campsites,and the fire also poses a hidden danger to these camping areas near forests and grasslands. If the
charcoal after the open fire is mishandled and mixed with flammable waste, it is likely to cause a
fire during the hot and dry seasons of spring and summer. Let’s join our hands and take action
immediately in an environmentally friendly way. Only in this way can we make the world a better
place to live in.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的倡议书。要求考生写一封倡议书,号召大
家在露营的同时爱护环境。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→ first of all/initially
此外:in addition→ what’s more/besides
导致:cause → lead to/contribute to
立即:immediately→ instantly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Let’s join our hands and take action immediately in an environmentally friendly way.
拓展句:Let’s join our hands and take action immediately in the way which is environmentally
friendly.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】If the charcoal after the open fire is mishandled and mixed with flammable waste,
it is likely to cause a fire during the hot and dry seasons of spring and summer.(运用了if引导的
状语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we make the world a better place to live in.(运用了
only+状语放到句首构成部分倒装结构)
5.
Dear fellow students,
We are thrilled to inform you that our community is in the process of creating a civilized
community. It is designed to foster a clean and pleasant environment and enhance the quality of
community life.
To achieve this, we propose the following steps. First of all, let’s be law-abiding citizens and
always act in accordance with the rules and regulations of our society. Secondly, those common
areas should always be taken care of, such as parks, streets, and public facilities. Please make sureto dispose of waste properly and keep these areas clean and tidy. What’s more, if possible, let’s
organize and participate in various voluntary activities. By dedicating our time and effort, we can
make a positive impact on the well-being of our community.
Remember, by working together, we can create a harmonious and thriving community that
we can all be proud of.
Thank you!
The Student Union
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生以学生会名义写一篇倡议书,号召
大家积极为社区创建文明单位做出努力,需要说明倡议的目的,介绍倡议的具体内容,并
号召同学们共同参与。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的:thrilled→exhilarated/excited
旨在:be designed to→be meant to/ aim to
提高:enhance→improve
首先:first of all→to begin with/in the first place
此外:what’s more→in addition/additionally/ moreover
参与:participate in→join in/ take part in
繁荣的:thriving→prosperous/flourishing
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Please make sure to dispose of waste properly and keep these areas clean and tidy.
拓展句:Please make sure that you dispose of waste properly and keep these areas clean and tidy.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] We are thrilled to inform you that our community is in the process of creating a
civilized community. (运用了that引导宾语从句、动名词短语creating…作介词of的宾语)
[高分句型2] Remember, by working together, we can create a harmonious and thriving
community that we can all be proud of. (运用了动名词短语working…作介词by的宾语、that
引导定语从句)
6.Dear fellow students,
Since China has been one of the most important countries in the world today, I advocate that
all of us do our part to spread Chinese culture in English.As the most widely used language, English can serve as a good tool to make Chinese culture
accessible to people around the globe, thus improving the image and expanding the influence of
our country. Also, in the process of transmitting (v.传播) it, our cultural confidence can be better
strengthened/boosted (v. 促进).
In an attempt to spread Chinese culture in English, we can set up a website where students
are free to post classic and modern moral stories in English.
Considering all the above, I appeal to everyone to take an active part in it!
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生用英文写一份倡议书,提倡全班同学学
会用英语传播中 国文化。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
因此:thus→hence
过程:process→course
呼吁某人做某事:appeal to sb. to do→call on sb. to do sth.
参加:take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As the most widely used language, English can serve as a good tool to make Chinese
culture accessible to people around the globe, thus improving the image and expanding the
influence of our country.
拓展句:As the most widely used language, English can serve as a good tool to make Chinese
culture accessible to people around the globe, which can improve the image and expanding the
influence of our country.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] Since China has been one of the most important countries in the world today, I
advocate that all of us do our part to spread Chinese culture in English. (运用了since引导的原因
状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] In an attempt to spread Chinese culture in English, we can set up a website where
students are free to post classic and modern moral stories in English. (运用了where引导的限制
性定语从句)
7.Possible versions:
[1]Dear students,
Summer vocation always comes along with people’s great concern over safety, especially
when drowning remains a significant cause of death among young people. In order to call on
everyone to prioritize safety, we propose:
Whenever you participate in water-related activities, remember to have a friend or family
member with you, in case an emergency arises. And do observe water safety rules, paying
attention to warning signs and follow lifeguards’ instructions. More importantly, using appropriate
safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if you are not a confident swimmer.
Remember, prevention is the key. By taking these simple precautions, we can significantly
reduce the risk of drowning incidents and enjoy a safer summer holiday.
English Club
[2]
Dear students,
With summer holidays around the corner, water activities will be getting more and more
popular. To protect ourselves from getting drowned, we make the following proposals.
First, a licensed water pool is always our No. 1 choice. What’s more, never do water sports
without an adult’s company. Life jackets are strongly recommended, whether you are an expert or
a green hand. Last but not least, try to spread knowledge about drowning prevention, which can
help more people.
Always give the highest priority to safety while enjoying ourselves.
English Club
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华。在暑假来临之际,学校向全校学
生发出安全倡议,请你代表校英文俱乐部写一封防溺水(Drowning Prevention)倡议书。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
为了:In order to→ So as to
参加:participate in → take part in
注意:pay attention to→ take notice of
更重要的是:More importantly→ Above all
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed, especially if youare not a confident swimmer.
拓展句:More importantly, it is highly proposed that appropriate safety equipment should be
used, especially if you are not a confident swimmer.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Whenever you participate in water-related activities, remember to have a friend or
family member with you, in case an emergency arises.(运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句
和in case引导的目的状语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, using appropriate safety equipment is highly proposed,
especially if you are not a confident swimmer. (运用了动名词作主语,if引导的条件状语从
句)
8.Dear fellow students,
I am Li Hua, president of the Student Union. Recently, we have noticed that food waste in
our school is very serious. Many students leave a certain amount of food in their plates. What’s
worse, some even leave the food untouched. It is high time that we took measures.
In order to put an end to this phenomenon, we should do as follows. We should behave
ourselves only buying what we need, which is of great importance. Besides, each class is expected
to arrange for a person to supervise dining situation. Once spotted wasting, he/she will be given an
immediate warning.
As we know, thrift is a traditional virtue of our country, so we should carry it forward. We
hope that all the students can take an active part in the “Clean Your Plate” campaign. Let’s try our
best together.
The Student Union
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会给校英语报投稿,就当前餐
桌上浪费严重这一现象写一封主题为“光盘行动”的倡议书。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
更糟糕的是:what’s worse→worse still
非常重要的:of great importance→greatly important
此外:besides→what’s more
积极参加:take an active part in→actively participate in
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换原句:As we know, thrift is a traditional virtue of our country, so we should carry it forward.
拓展句:We all know that thrift is a traditional virtue of our country, so we should carry it
forward.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】We should behave ourselves only buying what we need, which is of great
importance. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We hope that all the students can take an active part in the “Clean Your Plate”
campaign. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
9.参考范文
Obviously, active learning not only makes us students effectively take part in learning
process, but also increases the chance to learn something new.
In order to become active learners, we should take some measures. Taking notes is a must. It
helps us focus on what we are learning. Besides, we had better reflect on our mistakes, which can
stop us from making them again. Of course, it’s an otherwise choice to learn in groups. With
questions discussed, we can learn many new solutions.
Therefore, it’s time for us to take action! As long as we stick to above ways, we are sure to
make fantastic progress.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,请你向学校英语报投稿,写一篇
关于“主动学习”的倡议书。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
为了:in order to→so as to
参加:take part in→participate in
显然:obviously→apparently
此外:besides→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to become active learners, we should take some measures.
拓展句:If we would like to become active learners, we should take some measures.
【典型句式】
[高分句型1] In order to become active learners, we should take some measures. (运用了不定式
作目的状语)[高分句型2] Besides, we had better reflect on our mistakes, which can stop us from making them
again. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
10.Dear fellow students,
Our school has a program to help students develop good habits. But there is a serious
phenomenon in our school—some students are spending too much money on snacks. Eating
snacks is a waste of money, which is also a bad habit that we should get rid of. In addition, most
snacks have too much fat and sugar. We all agree that eating too much of the unhealthy food may
lead to being overweight and diseases. What is worse, some students throw the wrappers
everywhere, which makes a majority of students unhappy. As high school students, we shouldn’t
act like children any more.
Dear fellow students, let’s form good eating habits and say no to snacks!
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给全校学生写一封倡议书,陈述目前学
校里吃零食现象的情况以及同学们对此现象的态度,并提出看法和建议。
【写作分析】1. 词汇积累
养成好习惯:develop good habits→ form/get into good habits
摆脱:get rid of→ shake off/rid oneself of
此外:in addition→ besides/what’s more/furthermore
导致:lead to→ result in/cause
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Eating snacks is a waste of money, which is also a bad habit that we should get rid of.
拓展句:Eating snacks wastes money, which is also a bad habit that we should shake off.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Eating snacks is a waste of money, which is also a bad habit that we should get
rid of.(使用了动名词短语作主语、which引导非限制性定语从句和that引导限制性定语从
句)
【高分句型2】We all agree that eating too much of the unhealthy food may lead to being
overweight and diseases.(使用了that引导宾语从句、动名词短语作主语和宾语)
11.Dear fellow students,
With white pollution becoming increasingly serious, I am writing to invite all of you to
participate in the “Reduce Plastic, Collect Plastic, Create a Beautiful Home” campaign initiated byour school.
The slogan “Reduce Plastic, Collect Plastic, Create a Beautiful Home” emphasizes the
importance of using less plastic, actively picking up plastic waste in our school and community,
and contributing to a cleaner and more sustainable living environment. The following measures
may help. First, we can carry reusable bags instead of single-use plastic ones. Additionally, say no
to plastic straws and cutlery, and use alternative options like bamboo or stainless steel.
I urge you to join us in this campaign. Only with joint efforts can we make a difference!
Students’ Union
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校发起的“减塑捡塑,共创美好家
园”活动这一事,给国际部留学生写一封倡议书,陈述对该口号的理解,以及具体倡议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
参与:participate in → take part in
首先:first → first and foremost
比赛:emphasize the importance of… → highlight the significance of…
另外:additionally → in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Additionally, say no to plastic straws and cutlery, and use alternative options like bamboo
or stainless steel.
拓展句:Additionally, we can replace plastic straws and cutlery with alternative options like
bamboo or stainless steel.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】With white pollution becoming increasingly serious, I am writing to invite all of
you to participate in the “Reduce Plastic, Collect Plastic, Create a Beautiful Home” campaign
initiated by our school. (运用了现在分词作补语,动词不定式作目的状语、补语,过去分
词作后置定语)
【高分句型2】The slogan “Reduce Plastic, Collect Plastic, Create a Beautiful Home”
emphasizes the importance of using less plastic, actively picking up plastic waste in our school
and community, and contributing to a cleaner and more sustainable living environment.(运用了
动名词作宾语)
12.To encourage us students to get into shape and enrich our school life, our school sports club
has launched an activity themed “Exercise 60 minutes every day”.
Regular exercise can be highly beneficial to us. We can go jogging or running in the morning.
We recommend taking full advantage of break time at school to play jump rope, hula hoop and so
on. In addition, it’s workable to cycle or swim after school.
Only with good health can we enjoy a happy life and good academic performance. So I
appeal to all the students in our school to work out for an hour every day.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为某国际学校体育俱乐部的负责人,
你们俱乐部最近发起了“每天锻炼1小时”活动这一情况,写封倡议书,号召全校同学动
起来。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
举办:launched→ held
建议:recommend → suggest
利用:take advantage of→ make use of
此外:In addition→ What’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We recommend taking full advantage of break time at school to play jump rope, hula hoop
and so on.
拓展句:We recommend taking full advantage of break time at school so that they can play jump
rope, hula hoop and so on.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】To encourage us students to get into shape and enrich our school life, our school
sports club has launched an activity themed “Exercise 60 minutes every day”.(运用了非谓语动
词中的动词不定式作目的状语。)
【高分句型2】Only with good health can we enjoy a happy life and good academic performance
(运用了only位于句首后接介词短语,句子需用部分倒装。)
13.Dear schoolmates,
An event called “To Be a Good Man and Do Good Deeds” is to be held next week, whose
purpose is to encourage everyone to cultivate virtue and become a helpful member of society.
The activities will include some volunteer work, such as cleaning up the community andvisiting the senior center. We also call on all the students to actively participate and do what you
can to help the needy. Your participation is highly valued.
My dear friends, this is not a one-shot event. We have faith in the fact that your deeds will
make our society a better place.
The School English Club
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语俱乐部即将举办的“争做好人好
事”的活动写一封倡议信,内容包括活动目的、活动内容和活动倡议。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
参加:participate→join
相信:have faith in → be convinced of
目的:purpose→goal
鼓励:encourage→ inspire
2.句式拓展
简单句变强调句
原句: Your participation is highly valued.
拓展句:It is your participation that is highly valued.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】An event called “To Be a Good Man and Do Good Deeds” is to be held next
week, whose purpose is to encourage everyone to cultivate virtue and become a helpful member of
society.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We have faith in the fact that your deeds will make our society a better place.(运
用that引导的同位语从句)
14.Dear Students,
As is known to us, trees are very significant to the environment and humans. They play a
vital role in enhancing air quality and battling against climate change. Besides, trees supply
habitats and food for numerous species of wildlife.
Our school will hold a tree planting activity next Sunday, whose aim is to encourage us to
plant more trees. We should each take an active part in the volumetric tree planning activity to do
our bit. With persistence and joint effects, we will be able to make the environment better.
Students’ Union【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书,介绍树木的重要性并呼
吁大家参加植树活动。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
有意义的:significant→meaningful
此外:besides→what’s more
提供给某人某物:supply sth. for sb.→provide sb. with sth.
参加:take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With persistence and joint effects, we will be able to make the environment better.
拓展句:With persistence and joint effects, we will be able to make the environment better, which
benefits ourselves and our generations.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】As is known to us, trees are very significant to the environment and humans.(运
用了As引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Our school will hold a tree planting activity next Sunday, whose aim is to
encourage us to plant more trees.(运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句)
15.Dear students,
With the aim of protecting the environment, we have launched an activity on the theme of
“Building a green Earth starts from me”.
Ambitious as the mission seems, some simple acts do make a difference. Firstly, remember to
save electricity by turning off the electric devices once you stop using them. Secondly, give away
your old things such as textbooks that are still in good condition for reuse. Last but not least, you
should learn to sort the garbage scientifically so that it can be dealt with more effectively.
In a word, reduce, reuse and recycle. Every bit counts and let’s join hands and take
immediate action from now on.
The Student Union
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校学生会发起的“绿色地球,从我做
起”主题活动写一封倡议书。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
目的:aim→purpose记得:remember→keep in mind
捐赠:give away→donate
总之:in a word→in all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the aim of protecting the environment, we have launched an activity on the theme of
“Building a green Earth starts from me”.
拓展句:We have launched an activity on the theme of “Building a green Earth starts from me”,
whose aim is to protect the environment.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】Ambitious as the mission seems, some simple acts do make a difference.(运用
了as引导的让步状语从句的倒装结构)
【高分句型2】Secondly, give away your old things such as textbooks that are still in good
condition for reuse.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型3】Last but not least, you should learn to sort the garbage scientifically so that it can
be dealt with more effectively.(运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
16. Recently, it has been common that some students don’t have enough sleep.
Many students stay up late for varieties of reasons, such as heavy homework or being addicted to
digital devices.
It’s important to sleep regularly and get enough sleep, which helps you stay healthy and
concentrate on your study. If you stay up late frequently, you will find it hard to get up on time.
Keeping active in class also becomes difficult. Besides, your own health will be harmed seriously.
Plan your time for homework, take physical exercise, and keep away from digital devices
before sleep, and you will enjoy a healthy life.
【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会用英语写一封倡议书,倡议
大家健康作息,高效学习。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
各种各样的:varieties of→various
重要的:be important→be of importance
集中精力:concentrate on→focus on
此外:besides→what’s more2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Besides, your own health will be harmed seriously.
拓展句:Besides, it is your own health that will be harmed seriously.
【典型句式】
【高分句型1】It’s important to sleep regularly and get enough sleep, which helps you stay
healthy and concentrate on your study.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you stay up late frequently, you will find it hard to get up on time.(运用了if
引导条件状语从句)