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06.倡议书(环保与行动) 写作类型分析 初中八年级英语写作中有关倡议书（环保与行动）的应用文写作，旨在通过文字的力 量，唤起同学们对环境保护的关注，并鼓励大家采取实际行动。这类倡议书通常包含 环保 问题的紧迫性、具体行动方案、行动的意义以及呼吁参与 等要素，旨在引导青少年从小事 做起，共同守护地球家园。 结构 功能 例句 ‌Greeting‌ 建立身份认同 Dear‌Green‌Warriors‌of‌Class‌2 See‌those‌plastic‌bottles‌rolling‌like‌tumbleweeds‌ ‌Problem‌ 用生活场景引发共鸣 in‌our‌schoolyard? 阶梯式行动计划（个人→小 1.‌Pack‌lunches‌in‌reusable‌boxes ‌Solutions‌ 组→班级） 2.‌Team‌up‌for‌Friday‌Recycle‌Rush Let's‌track‌progress‌on‌our‌'Eco-Heroes'‌wall‌–‌ ‌Call‌to‌Action‌ 创造仪式感与成就感 your‌cactus‌doodle‌counts! Together,‌we'll‌make‌Class‌2‌the‌green‌heartbeat‌of‌ ‌Closing‌ 联结环保与集体荣誉 our‌school! 【 范文示例】 ‌Earth‌Guardians’‌Action‌Plan‌ Dear‌Classmates, Have‌you‌noticed‌the‌snack‌wrappers‌choking‌our‌school's‌rose‌bushes?‌Each‌plastic‌bag‌we‌ discard‌hurts‌our‌planet.‌‌Here’s‌our‌mission:‌ 1.‌Carry‌fabric‌snack‌pouches‌‌(decorate‌them‌in‌art‌class!) 2.‌Join‌the‌"Bin‌Guardians"‌team‌‌–‌sort‌recyclables‌during‌lunch‌breaks 3.‌Create‌leaf-print‌notebooks‌‌from‌scrap‌paper‌every‌Monday Our‌classroom‌will‌display‌a‌“Green‌Points‌Leaderboard”‌‌–‌10‌points‌for‌bringing‌a‌reusable‌ bottle,‌20‌for‌teaching‌a‌junior‌student‌recycling! Let's‌become‌the‌eco-heroes‌our‌school‌needs!‌Sign‌up‌by‌the‌blackboard‌and‌earn‌your‌ seedling‌badge‌today. Yours‌, The‌Eco-Committee 结构表达分析词句应用分析 如何写作加强校园垃圾分类的倡议书 结构要素 功能 例句 写作技巧 使用动词短语，激发 标题 明确倡议主题 Let's‌Sort‌Trash,‌Save‌Our‌Campus! 行动力 称呼 建立读者联系 Dear‌classmates, 简洁亲切，直呼身份 Did‌you‌know?‌60%‌of‌waste‌in‌our‌school‌ 引言 引发情感共鸣 用数据/提问吸引注意 can‌be‌recycled! 分点说明行动 First,‌clearly‌label‌bins:‌blue‌for‌paper,‌ 主体段落 用序数词连接逻辑 方案 green‌for‌food‌waste... When‌you‌finish‌lunch,‌take‌10‌seconds‌to‌ 具体化动作+时间量 呼吁行动 激励集体参与 check‌the‌bin‌labels! 化 Our‌small‌actions‌today‌will‌create‌a‌ 结尾 强化使命感 用we增强归属感 greener‌future! 【参考范文】 ‌Let’s‌Be‌Trash‌Heroes!‌ Dear‌friends, Look‌around—plastic‌bottles‌lie‌near‌the‌basketball‌court,‌banana‌peels‌mix‌with‌notebooks‌ in‌bins.‌This‌hurts‌our‌Earth!‌‌Here’s‌our‌plan:‌ 1.‌Color-code‌bins‌‌(Red:‌harmful‌waste;‌Blue:‌recyclables;‌Green:‌kitchen‌waste)2.‌Weekly‌monitor‌teams‌‌will‌check‌bins‌every‌Friday‌lunch‌break. 3.‌Earn‌"Eco-Star"‌badges‌‌for‌consistent‌sorting—display‌them‌on‌class‌boards! Last‌month,‌Class‌3‌recycled‌50kg‌paper‌=‌saving‌8‌trees!‌‌Join‌the‌"One-Minute‌Sorting‌ Challenge"‌‌after‌meals.‌Together,‌we’ll‌turn‌trash‌into‌treasure! Yours, Green‌Team 【提升练习】 1．今年3月28日是第27个中国中小学生安全教育日，教育部会同公安部治安管理 局印发《关于开展全国中小学生安全教育日活动的通知》，请你就安全问题写一封倡议书 从交通、饮食、运动、防溺水等方面向全校同学发出安全倡议。提示词：traffic rules， healthy food，hurt，swim alone 要求： （1）词数80个左右； （2）字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。 How to Keep Ourselves Safe _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 2．健康的身体是幸福生活的源泉，拥有良好的生活习惯和饮食习惯对人体健康是非 常重要的，请根据以下提示，以Keeping Healthy为题写一篇英语倡议书，呼吁大家平常养 成良好的习惯来保持健康。提示：regular（有规律的） 要求： 1.字数80词左右； 2.所给的提示需全部用上，可适当发挥； 3.语句通顺，语法正确，书写工整； 4.不可出现真实的个人信息。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 3．请你根据提示及要求，以Let’s help our parents do chores为题，写一篇英文倡议书。 要点提示： （1）父母工作繁忙，我们应该分担家务； （2）我们可以做的家务有：整理床铺、打扫房间，洗衣服，洗餐具、倒垃圾等。 写作要求： （1）包括所有要点提示，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （2）80词左右 (开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。Let’s help our parents do chores Dear students, Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores. 4．书面表达 当前，你们学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”的活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给 的信息，以“Growing up with good books”为题，用英语写一份倡议书，向全校同学发出倡 议。 读书的益处 获取知识，增长见识，变得快乐 存在的现象 读书时间少，花大量时间听音乐、看电视、上网玩游戏 意识到读书的重要性，养成读书的好习惯，多读经典书籍，让读书成为 发出的倡议 生活中的一部分 要求： 1．倡议书应包含所有要点； 2．词数80左右。倡议书的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 词汇：knowledge知识；open one’s mind增长见识；classics经典作品 Growing up with good books Dear Friends, Reading is very important. Let’s start reading now. 5．学会自我保护（self-protection）是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。近年来， 青少年安全一直是人们关注的焦点。我们应如何有效地自我保护，免受伤害？假设你是李 康，请以“How to protect ourselves”为题，从交通安全，校园安全，食品安全等多个方面，向身边的朋友写一篇倡议短文。 要求：1. 内容积极向上，完整连贯； 2. 逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名； 4. 词数不少于100。 （参考词汇：交通traffic；安全safety；珍爱生命treasure one’s life；头盔helmet） How to protect ourselves Dear friends, Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___ Li Kang 6．为了增强同学们的安全意识，学校发出了“做自己的首席安全官——平安校园 行”的倡议。你校的English Newsletter正以“Keep Safety in Mind”为题举行征文活动，请 从食物、运动和网络等方面写一篇征文。 注意： 1. 词数80左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ 7．近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正 日益凸显。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰，落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能 独善其身。作为达州的一名学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢？请以“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向达州的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最 大的努力保护环境！ 写作要点： 1. 了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性； 2. 在日常生活中节约用水、节约能源； 3. 为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学； 4. 学会垃圾分类，少用塑料袋。 写作要求： 1. 要点齐全并适当发挥； 2. 词数不少于80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 条理清晰，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确； 4. 卷面整洁。 参考词汇：l. reduce减少；2. sort the garbage垃圾分类；3. four categories四类垃圾： recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste Let’s try our best to protect the environment Dear friends, I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. As we know, we have only one Earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the Earth and unusual weather appeared very often. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. As students in Dazhou, what should we do? _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best! A student worrying about the environment 8．某学校将每年的3月5日定为爱心志愿者活动日，今年活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子 献爱心”。请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点包括： 许多孩子因贫困而上不起学；（too…to…）； 在冬天，很多孩子没有暖的衣服穿。他们没有足够的书籍，没有书包； 有些学校离家很远，每天很早就起床，要花费一个半小时的时间到达学校。（far away, it takes …to do ）； 我们能为他们做的是……（至少2点）。 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要求60词左右。 Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. ______ ___ ___ __ ___ Thanks for your joining! Students’ Union 9．书面表达为了节能环保及方便出行，提高生活质量，靖江市政府最近在很多地段为市民免费提供自 行车服务，但部分市民对此了解不够。请你写一篇文章，告诉他们关于免费使用自行车的 情况。 标题: Something about using bikes for free 原因: 1.汽车的数量越来越多，因此，路上经常堵车 2.人们在市里四处转转要花费很长时间 3.政府采取行动解决这一问题 4.目前有1500辆自行车已经投入使用 注意点: 骑车时要注意安全 爱惜自行车 ……(至少写一点) 发出倡议: 保护环境 减少污染 …… ……(至少写两点) 要求：1. 文章内容必须包括以上提示，可适当发挥； 2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；写一篇100字左右的文章。文章开头已经给出，不计入 总词数。 参考词汇：投入使用be in use, 减少reduce Something about using bikes for free For saving energy and protecting environment and convenient travel, improve the quality of life, Jingjiang government recently has provided free bikes in many places. I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Jingjiang. _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________ __________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________ 10．书面表达 某市教育局将每年9月1日定为爱心慈善日（今年活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子献爱 心”）。请你以学生会的名义写一封倡议书，内容要点如下：（括号中的词汇可供参考） 1．许多孩子因贫困而上不起学。(too…to…) 2．他们没有足够的学习用品和衣服。 3．每个孩子都有上学的权利。(have the right to do sth) 4．我们应当尽最大的努力去帮他们，比如…… (try one’s best to…) 5．希望他们和我们一样享有在学校接受教育的机会。(the same…as…, get an education) 注意：(1)文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；(2)词数：70左右。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________参考答案 1． How to Keep Ourselves Safe Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe. First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Second, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruit and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Besides, we should be careful when we make fiends online. Don’t tell our personal information to strangers. If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming alone without permission. In short, safety must come first! It’s important to remember these for us all. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、 无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，介绍保持安全的必要性； 第二步，从交通安全、食品安全、网络交友、防溺水等方面展开阐述如何保持安全； 第三步，阐述你的感想，呼应标题。 [亮点词汇] ①obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则 ②personal information 个人信息 ③in danger 有危险 ④without permission 未经允许 [高分句型] ①Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. (祈使句；when引导时间状语从句) ②If we are in danger, we should call the police for help in time. (If引导的条件状语从句)2． Keeping healthy It is very important for us to keep healthy. First, we need to have good living habits. For example, we need to change clothes and wash hands more often and open windows to keep the air fresh. Also, sports are good for us, but remember not to do sports after meals. And it is important to have enough sleep for everybody. So don’t stay up too late. Second, we need to have healthy eating habits. It is not good for our health to go to school without breakfast. And we should eat regularly. We’d better eat more vegetables and fruit and drink more water. Remember to keep away from junk food. If we can do these things, I believe we will have a healthy and happy life. 【写作解析】 1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求你以Keeping Healthy为题写一篇英语倡议书，呼 吁大家平常养成良好的习惯来保持健康。主要围绕材料所给的饮食习惯和生活习惯展开。 2. 写作指导：本文是倡议书，人称以第一人称复数进行呼吁和建议，时态以一般现在时为 主。所给提示分两类全用上，每个类别再适当补充一两点展开描述。注意文章层次要分明， 条理要清晰。 3． Let’s help our parents do choresDear students, Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. Our parents are always busy with work. They are tired after work, but they still have to do chores. If we help them do some chores, they will have more time to rest. And sharing housework can help us understand our parents better. So we should help them do housework as much as we can. In fact, we can do lots of housework at home. For example, we could make the bed, clean up the room, wash clothes, do the dishes and take out the trash. Doing chores is not difficult, but it means a lot. From now on, let’s help our parents do chores. 【写作解析】 1.题干解读：题目要求以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题，根据写作要点写一篇倡议 书，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：首先第一部分，指明要帮助父母做家务的原因以及做家务的好处，此处人称主要为第三人称；其次第二部分，谈谈我们日常生活中可以做的家务有哪些，此处人称主 要为第一人称；最后总结感受，此处文章已给出结尾。全文时态主要为一般现在时，行文 时要涵盖要点提示，表达准确，思路清晰，层次分明。 4． Growing up with good books Dear friends, Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn, and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world. Let's start reading now. And let it become a part of our life! 【写作解析】 1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文。文章围绕成长与读书来展开，主要讲读书的益处，现在 同学中存在的读书问题以及提出倡导。题目中把要点已列出来，写作时要包括这些要点， 但不能逐字逐句翻译，要将其有机的组织起来。比如用一些连接词和承启句，增强文章的 逻辑性。这是一篇倡议书，可以用第一人称，语言可以有号召性些。 2.点评：这是一篇比较优秀的。紧扣题目要求，根据提示要点进行写作，并进行了适当的 发挥。简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。 3.高分亮点： 单词和短语：however；through；suggest；especially；not only … but also …；the +比较级， the +比较级；spend some time in doing sth.；go online；would like to。 句型：if引导的条件状语从句；that引导的宾语从句；so that引导的目的状语从句；祈使句。 5． How to protect ourselves Dear friends, Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. Here are some tips to help us stay safe. First, in traffic safety, always follow the rules. Wear a helmet when riding a bike and lookboth ways before crossing the street. Second, in school safety, avoid conflicts and report any bullying to teachers. Third, in food safety, eat healthy meals and avoid junk food. Last, always be aware of your surroundings, especially when you are alone. Avoid walking in dark or isolated areas. If you feel threatened, seek help immediately from trusted adults. Let’s treasure our lives and protect ourselves every day! Li Kang 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从交通安全，校园安全，食品安全等介绍如何保护自己； 第二步，发出呼吁。 [亮点词汇] ①follow the rules遵守规则 ②avoid conflicts避免冲突 ③be aware of意识到 [高分句型] ①Last, always be aware of your surroundings, especially when you are alone.（时间状语从句） ②If you feel threatened, seek help immediately from trusted adults.（条件状语从句） 6． Keep Safety in Mind Safety is very important in our life. We should always keep safety in mind. Here are some suggestions to stay safe. First, be cautious about the food you eat. Always check the expiration date and avoid eating food that looks or smells bad. Second, when doing sports, make sure to wear the proper gear and follow the rules to prevent injuries. Third, be careful when using the internet. Do not share personal information with strangers and avoid meeting online friends alone. In a word, keeping safety in mind can help us live a healthier and happier life. 【写作解析】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点(食物、运动和网络)，要适当补充，使文章内 容充实；行文时多用第一人称和第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接 词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体说明安全意识的重要性； 第二步，具体从三个方面介绍如何保持安全，食品安全、运动安全和网络安全； 第三步，最后再次呼吁同学们要保持安全。 [亮点词汇] ①be cautious about对……小心 ②expiration date保质期 ③proper gear合适的装备 ④personal information个人信息 [高分句型] ①Always check the expiration date and avoid eating food that looks or smells bad.(定语从句) ②Do not share personal information with strangers and avoid meeting online friends alone.(祈使 句) 7．One possible version: Let’s try our best to protect the environment Dear friends, I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. As we know, we have only one Earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the Earth and unusual weather appeared very often. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. As students in Dazhou, what should we do? First, we should spread something unusual to protect our environment. For example, we can give talks on how important the environment is. Second, we should save water and electricity in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it’s better to go to school by bus or bike or on foot. Fourth, we can sort the garbage into four categories: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. And we can reuse bags instead of plastic bags.If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best! A student worrying about the environment 【写作解析】 题干解读：这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“Let’s try our best to protect the environment” 和提示内容写一篇作文，倡议达州的学生保护环境。 写作指导：本文应用第一人称，时态选用一般现在时；写作时承接开头，阐述作为中学生 具体可以从哪些方面来保护环境。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句 子之间的连接与过渡，涵盖所给提示。 8．Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don't have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will have the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school. Thanks for your joining! Students’ Union 【写作解析】 试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语 把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内 容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一 致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【亮点说明】这篇短文进行了较为全面的说明，能用简短的词汇表达出提纲的内容，并且 进行了适当的处理，准确的添加自己的观点，同时使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增 色不少。使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 考点：应用文作文。 9．Something about using bikes for free For saving energy and protecting environment and convenient travel, improve the quality of life, Jingjiang government recently has provided free bikes in many places. I'm glad to tell you something about using bikes for free in Jingjiang. The number of the cars is becoming bigger and bigger. As a result, there is a lot of traffic on theroad. People must spend a long time travelling around the city. The government takes action to work out the problem. Now 1500 bikes have been in use in Jingjiang. When we ride the bike on the road, we must keep ourselves safe from the traffic accidents. We should take good care of the bike and we must return it in an hour. I hope more people can ride bikes in the city. Riding bikes help protect the environment. It can also reduce the pollution. To keep healthy, let’s ride the bike. And you can enjoy the beauty of the city slowly. 【写作解析】 试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、 人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合 事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。 【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢 记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。 考点：提纲作文。 10．略 【写作解析】 试题分析：本文的写作所给出的提示非常多，对于学做的难度大大的降低了。首先表达许 多孩子因为贫困而不能上学可用too…to…来表达，并陈述他们没有足够多的衣服和学习用 品enough clothes and study things来表达，然后表达他们也有上学的权利have the right to go to school,同时表达我们应尽最大的努力来帮助他们try our best to help them,最后表示希望他 们和我们一样享有教育的机会the same opportunity as ours to get an education.来表达。