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10.议论文(态度与情绪) 写作类型分析 初中八年级英语中有关‌态度与情感的议论文写作‌要求围绕“心态对学习或生活的影 响”展开辩证论述，核心是通过逻辑论证（如举例、引用数据）和情感共鸣（如描述情绪 困境）阐明积极态度（如乐观、坚持）或情绪管理的重要性。写作需明确观点（如“情绪 管理比天赋更重要”），结合正反论据，使用一般现在时、连接词（however, therefore）和 呼吁性语言，最终总结价值观或行动建议。 【要素分析】 ‌要素‌ ‌写作要点‌ ‌典型例句 A positive attitude is the foundation of overcoming ‌核心论点‌ 明确态度/情绪对结果的影响 challenges in learning. 使用个人经历、名人案例或科 Research shows that students who manage stress well ‌论据支持‌ 学数据 score 20% higher in exams. ‌反驳与回 承认反面观点（如“天赋更重 Some say talent matters most, but without effort, even 应‌ 要”），但用逻辑推翻 genius fails. ‌呼吁与总 As Thomas Edison said, ‘Genius is 1% inspiration and 用号召性语言或名言强化观点 结‌ 99% perspiration.’ Let’s act now! 【范文示例】 Why Attitude Shapes Success Many believe talent guarantees success, but I argue that attitude matters more. When I failed math last year, I cried for days. Then my teacher told me, "Mistakes are proof you’re trying." I decided to face challenges calmly. I practiced daily, asked for help, and celebrated small wins. Surprisingly, my score rose by 30%! Some say luck decides everything, but how can luck explain my progress? Even Thomas Edison failed 1,000 times before inventing the light bulb. Remember: Success isn’t about avoiding falls—it’s about rising every time. 结构表达分析词句应用分析 如何写有关面对学习过程中的挑战的议论文 ‌写作方法‌ ‌具体应用‌ ‌主题词句‌ 开篇直接提出核 ‌词汇‌：challenges（挑战）, strategies（策略）, perseverance（坚 ‌1.‌明确论 心观点（如“应 持）, obstacles（障碍）, growth（成长） 点‌ 对挑战需要策略 例句：Facing challenges bravely is the first step to growth. 与积极心态”） ‌论据类型‌： 用不同角度论据 个人：When I struggled with math, I broke problems into smaller ‌2.‌论据分 支持观点（个人 steps. 层‌ 经历、科学数 数据：Studies show 80% of students improve by asking teachers for 据、名人案例） help. ‌3.‌辩证反 承认反面观点 ‌反驳句式‌：（如“逃避更容 Some say avoiding challenges saves time, but it only delays failure. 驳‌ 易”）并用逻辑 Giving up may feel easy, yet it kills opportunities. 推翻 ‌拓展句式‌： ‌4.‌升华结 用比喻或名言强 Challenges are like stairs—each step lifts you higher. 论‌ 调行动价值 As Helen Keller said, “Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.” 【参考范文】 How to Turn Challenges into Strength Learning is never smooth. Last year, I almost failed physics because complex formulas scared me. Instead of hiding, I asked my teacher for a study plan. I divided each chapter into daily tasks and practiced for 30 minutes after school. When I felt stuck, I reminded myself: "Every mistake teaches something." Three months later, my physics score jumped from 55 to 85! Some argue that avoiding hard tasks reduces stress, but how can we grow without effort? Remember: Challenges are not walls to stop us—they are doors waiting to be opened. Face them, and you’ll find your power. 【提升练习】 1．少年强，则中国强。但据报道，我国青少年的健康状况令人担忧。作为一名中学 生，你将如何提高身体素养？请以“My plan to be healthier” 为题，谈谈自己的打算。 要点提示：‌enough sleep；healthy diet；‌more exercise；be happy My plan to be healthier It is reported that many Chinese teenagers are becoming unfit and weak. In order to be healthier and stronger, I will _________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________ 2．俗话说：有压力才会有动力。适当的压力可以转化为让人前进的动力，可是压力 多了也会产生反效果。英语课上，老师组织全班同学就“如何对抗压力”这一话题进行了 分组讨论。请你结合本卷试题阅读理解C篇文章，按下面表格要求用英语写一篇发言稿， 向全班同学汇报你们小组的讨论结果。 写作要点 具体内容 1. Health problems resulting from stress 根据阅读理解C篇概括(不得照搬原文)2. Ways of fighting stress ①________②________ … 要求： 1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥： 2.词数80-120。发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________ 3．英国作家萨克雷曾说：“播种习惯收获性格，播种性格收获命运。”‌在生活中， 一定有好的习惯伴随你的成长。请你以“Good habits make me ________”为题写一篇短文 （词数80—100）。 要求： 1.补全标题（参考词汇：better, happier, healthier, stronger等）； 2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范； 3.鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出，不计入词数。 Good habits make me ________ Good habits are important in our lives. They influence (影响) us a lot in many ways. I think _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如你是李华，下周你们班级要召开一次以“My changes”为主题的英语班会。请 你写一篇100词左右的英语短文，介绍你在外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面的变化。 要求： 1.书写规范，表达连贯，可根据内容适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 5．法国作家雨果曾经说活: “善良的心就是太阳”。某报正在以“Kindness”为主题， 举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语故事及体会来投稿。‌ 要求: 1. 写一个自身或其他人的故事; 2. 适当增加细节, 行文连贯; 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和校名。 Kindness _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 6．你校人生规划课程组将要组织一次征文比赛活动，主题是“My dream job”，请写 一篇征文稿，包括你的理想职业，你选择此职业的原因及如何实现你的职业理想等。 注意： 1. 不得出现真实的校名、地名和人名； 2. 不少于80 词。 My dream job _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________ 7．健康的身体是我们学习的保障，但是网络抢走了我们锻炼的时间，垃圾食品威胁 着我们的健康。请以“How to keep healthy”为题写一篇短文。 要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁、词数不少于60词； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3.将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________ 8．国家启动了“文明餐桌行动”，号召全体人民“文明用餐，节俭惜福”。我们中 学生应当在这些行为中该做些什么呢？请根据下列要求，联系实际，适当发挥。以“Save Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。 要求：1、条理清晰，有表明自己观点的句子。 2、书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。 3、不能出现真实的人名、地名。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ 9．八年级的学习生活即将结束，这一年来，一定有过许多让你开心的事情，如做一 次家务、读一本书、参加一次活动、一次与父母的交流、一次参观或旅行……请以 “________ Made Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享这件事或者这次经历，谈谈你 的收获或感悟。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ________ Made MeHappy_________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________ 10．请从下面描述心情的词中选择一个，以“I Feel ______ These Days”为题，写一 篇小短文。 写作要求： 1. 可选词汇为: lonely, upset, happy, unhappy, angry, disappointed, excited, frightened, worried 2. 意思连贯、通顺，词数在80—90之间； 3. 适当发挥，注意写出为什么、怎么样以及后来怎么样等。 I Feel ______ These Days _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________ 11．幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目 光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是……请以‌My happiness为话题，写一件曾 经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。 要求： 1.文中不要出现真实的人名； 2.词数‌80左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 12．在你的生活和学习中，一定有帮助过你的人。请以‌Say Thanks to ________ 为 题，写一篇文章，写下你和他/她的感恩故事。 要求： （1）请把题目补充完整再作答，如“Say Thanks to My Friend”，“Say Thanks to My Teacher”，“Say Thanks to My Parents”等。 （2）注意紧扣主题、语言通顺、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80词。 （3）文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计。 （4）抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． My plan to be healthier It is reported that many Chinese teenagers are becoming unfit and weak. In order to be healthier and stronger, I will take the following actions. First of all, I think it is necessary to have enough sleep. It is suggested that we should sleepfor at least 8 hours every day. At the same time, I want to have a healthy diet. I plan to have more fruits and vegetables, and eat less meat. What’s more, I decide to spend more time exercising instead of playing computer games all the time. In addition, I believe it is meaningful to do eye exercises. In this way, I can protect my eyes well. In a word, I will follow my plan to become healthier. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“如何提高身体素养”来引出下文中对具体方法的介绍； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“充足的睡眠、适当的锻炼、健康饮食和其他”四方面 入手，重点介绍如何提高身体素养； ③第三步，书写结语。将遵循计划，以保持健康。 [亮点词汇] ①first of all 首先 ②at least 至少 ③at the same time 同时 ④what’s more 此外 ⑤instead of 代替 ⑥all the time 一直 ⑦in addition 另外 ⑧in a word 总之 [高分句型] ①First of all, I think it is necessary to have enough sleep.（宾语从句） ②It is suggested that we should sleep for at least 8 hours every day.（that引导的主语从句） 2． Good morning, everybody. As we all know, everyone gets stressed from time to time. However, too much stress can cause you lots of health problems. Stress can make you feel physically sick. It can also put you in a bad mood for a long time. It can even cause you somemental illnesses. When you’re under stress, don’t be afraid. You should try to fight it bravely. The following ways can help. First, you can turn to people you trust. You can ask your parents, your friends or even your teachers for help. They might have similar experiences, and they can give you some useful advice. Second, you have to get to the root of the problem. You need to find out what exactly causes you to get stressed. Third, you should be positive. Remember stress does go away, especially when you start working on solving the problem. Next time you feel stressed, try the above ways. Stay happy, and stay healthy. That’s all. Thanks for your listening. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇发言稿； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示内容；具体内容不得照搬C篇原 文，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要阐述过多压力会引起诸多方面的健康问题； 第二步，分条列点，详细阐述应对压力的方法。 [亮点词汇] ①in a bad mood心情不好 ②under stress处于压力下‌ ③turn to sb.求助于某人 ④get to the root of the problem找到问题的根源 [高分句型] ①First, you can turn to people you trust.(定语从句) ②You need to find out what exactly causes you to get stressed.(what引导的宾语从句) 3．One possible version: Good habits make me healthy Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways. I think good habits make me healthy. As we all know, good habits and good health are twins. Good habits can make people healthy, for example, getting enough sleep, having breakfast, and doing exerciseregularly. I had such a experience, in the past, I often went to bed very late at night. So I felt very tired and sleepy the next day. I couldn’t pay attention to what my teachers said, so I couldn’t learn well. Later, my mother asked me to go to bed before 10 o’clock and little by little, I have developed this habit. Now I feel much better, I can follow my teachers in class and learn well. From my experience, I know having good habits are so important that I take up forming more good habits. I believe I will certainly have good health. Good habits will also make me better and better. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：根据以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：已给出部分作文标题及参考词汇，考生可根据给出的提示写出符合题目要求“好 的习惯对人的影响”的作文，注意单词的正确拼写，避免出现语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接表达自己的个人观点。以“好的习惯让我健康”这个观点为开头，简单举例 说明好习惯有哪些； 第二步，具体阐述关于“好的习惯让我健康”的个人经历。以过去的坏习惯（熬夜）和现 在的好习惯（早睡）来形成对比，突显出好的习惯对自己的好处； 第三步，书写总结。表达对于“好习惯”的认同和“自己会养成更多好习惯”的决心。 [亮点词汇] ①as we all know正如我们所知 ②for example例如 ③in the past在过去 ④little by little逐渐地 ⑤take up doing sth.开始做某事 ⑥better and better 越来越好 [高分句型] ①I couldn’t pay attention to what my teachers said, so I couldn’t learn well.（“pay attention to sth.” 句型，及what引导的宾语从句） ②Later, my mother asked me to go to bed before 10 o’clock and little by little, I have developedthis habit.（“ask sb. to do sth.” 句型） ③From my experience, I know having good habits are so important that I take up forming more good habits.（“so+形容词+that+结果状语从句） 4．One possible version: My changes How time flies! I have changed a lot in the past two years! I used to be heavy, but now I have lost my weight because I joined the school volleyball team. In the past, I was shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing and enjoy talking with others. As for my study, my English has improved a lot. By reading stories and keeping a diary in English, I get good grades in exams. The biggest change is my hobby. I used to play computer games all the time, but now I fall in love with books. Books are my friends, which gives me knowledge and strength. What never changes is the change itself. I’m glad that I have changed to be a better person. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据题干要求，谈谈自己在外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面的变化；写作时注意 适当增加细节，完善表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，根据所给要点，依次从外貌、性格、学习、爱好等方面描述自己的变化，将过去 与现在进行对比； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ① used to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ② in the past 在过去 ③ as for 至于 [高分句型] ① Books are my friends, which gives me knowledge and strength.（which引导的非限制性定语 从句）② I’m glad that I have changed to be a better person.（that引导的宾语从句） 5． Kindness Kindness can show a person’s character, which is important for everyone. It was a sunny day, I decided to see a film to relax myself. The cinema was far away from my home so it was a best way to get there by bus. While I was waiting for a bus, I noticed an old beggar. Suddenly, a little boy came happily and gave all his snacks to the old man. I thought the little boy was alone, but then I saw his parents standing nearby, smiling kindly. I felt the power of kindness in them. A little effort towards being kind to people you meet can make a difference. Remember, being kind is the way of making our society more beautiful. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作的要点提示已给出，考生应围绕要点来展开写作，注意用词，避免出现单词 拼写和语法方面的错误；行文时尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文 连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，阐述善良的重要性； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述关于善良的感人故事； 第三步，书写结语。阐述关于善良的感受。 [亮点词汇] ① be important for someone 对……是重要的 ② decide to 决定‌…… ③ far away from 远离 [高分句型] ①Kindness can show a person’s character, which is important for everyone.（which引导的非限 定性定语从句） ② While I was waiting for a bus, I noticed an old beggar.（while引导的时间状语从句） 6．参考My dream job Everyone has a dream, so do I. I want to be a teacher. I’m going to work in Beijing and teach math in a middle school. Do you know why I want to be a teacher? Because we can learn all kinds of knowledge with the help of the teachers. When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us. They do many things for us as our parents do. We all like them very much. My teachers are also very kind and care about me. So it’s my dream to be a teacher. How can I make my dream come true? First, I must try my best to study hard at all subjects. Second, I will read more books, such as math, English, history, science and so on. Finally, I’m going to enter a good university to study math. I must work hard to realize my dream. I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it. Let’s fight for our dreams! 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下 文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直切主题。介绍自己理想的职业和喜欢这个职业的原因； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。阐述你将如何实现自己的理想； 第三步，书写结语，表达期待。 [亮点词汇] ①with the help of sb.在某人的帮助下 ②care about关心 ③come true实现 ④try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大努力做某事 [高分句型] ①When we are in trouble, teachers always take good care of us. (When引导的时间状语从句) ②I believe my dream can come true if I put my heart into it. (if引导的条件状语从句) 7．How to Keep Healthy It’s important for us to keep healthy. As middle school students, we should have healthy lifestyle. Here is some advice. First, we should do exercise at least one hour a day, such as running and walking. Second, we should have a healthy diet. We can eat more fruit and vegetables, and try not to eat junk food. Third, we shouldn’t spend too much time surfing online. It is bad for our eyes and study. Fourth, we should go to bed early and don’t stay up too late because enough sleep is good for our health. Finally, we should be happy as possible as we can and learn to smile at any time. If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①‌题材：本文是一篇说明文； ②‌时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③‌提示：根据题目“How to keep healthy”完成写作，可适当发挥，保持语言连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出健康很重要； 第二步，具体介绍应该如何保持健康； 第三步，书写结语。表明“如果我们这样做，我们就能保持健康”。 [亮点词汇] ①at least至少 ②such as例如 ③be bad for对……有害 [高分句型] ①Fourth, we should go to bed early and don’t stay up too late because enough sleep is good for our health.（because引导原因状语从句） ②If we do so, I believe we can keep healthy.（if引导条件状语从句；省略引导词that的宾语 从句） 8．‌ Save Food and Eat Healthily Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. As middle school students, it’s out duty to do something for it.To save food, we should remember that at any time we should eat up all the food and shouldn’t waste any food. Especially when we dine out, we should order the food that we can rightly eat. Because many people in our country don’t have enough food to eat. To eat healthily we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time. At last we hope that we all work together at once. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①‌题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②‌时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③‌提示：考生应注意结合题目和实际生活梳理出写作要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重 点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明“节约粮食，健康饮食”的观点； 第二步，具体说明应该如何做到节约粮食和健康饮食； 第三步，表达“希望大家一起努力”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① called on 号召 ② instead of 而不是 ③ eat a balanced diet 均衡饮食 [高分句型] ① Our government has called on the people to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life.（so that引导目的状语从句） ② To save food, we should remember that at any time we should eat up all the food and shouldn’t waste any food.（动词不定式作目的状语，that引导宾语从句） ③ Especially when we dine out, we should order the food that we can rightly eat.（when引导时 间状语从句，that引导定语从句） 9． Reading Made Me Happy What made me happy was that I fell in love with reading. When I was in Grade Seven, I was weak in Chinese. I got low grades in the Chinese exams.This made me very worried. On a cold winter afternoon, my Chinese teacher Mr.Wang asked me to go to his office after school. He gave me some advice on how to study Chinese well. The best advice was reading every day. From then on, I began reading all kinds of interesting books and magazines. What’s more, I wrote down some beautiful sentences from them. With the help of reading, my Chinese improved a lot and I was so glad about that. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要 点。‌ [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求填入短文标题“________ Made Me Happy”。 第二步，分享这件事情的经历过程，谈谈自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with 爱上…… ②from then on 从那时起 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 [高分句型] ①What made me happy was that I fell in love with reading.（主语从句和表语从句） ②When I was in Grade Seven, I was weak in Chinese.（时间状语从句） 10．参考: I Feel Unhappy These Days Last Sunday, Lin Tao and I went to the gym. When we did exercise, I fell down on the ground. I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising. So we had to go back. Because I was hurt, I couldn’t walk, and we had to take a bus. When I got off the bus, I fell down once again. Oh, my God! In the end, I had to go to the hospital. The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. My classmates came to visit me, and they brought me some flowers. They also helped me with my study. Their coming pleased me, and now I am feeling much better. 【写作解析】 [总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：介绍这段时间的心情如何，并说明为什么会这样；注意阐述清楚导致该心情的事 件发生的原因、过程和结果；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全标题； 第二步，具体介绍导致这一心情的事件，发生的原因、过程和结果。 [亮点词汇] ①fall down 摔倒 ②go on 继续 ③get off 下车 ④stay in bed 躺在床上 [高分句型] ①I got hurt so badly that we couldn’t go on exercising.（so ... that引导的结果状语从句） ②The doctor told me that I must stay in bed for three days. （宾语从句） 11． My happiness Happiness is important in our life. In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it. I will never forget one thing. Once, I had a bad mark in a math test. I was shy and afraid to face my parents. But when I got back home late, my parents had known what happened, they said to me, “It doesn’t matter, dear. Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help. We believe you can be better next time. Never give up!” I was moved and made up my mind to work harder and harder. I feel happy. Whenever I am in trouble, I can feel my parents’ love. I want to be a good child for my parents. 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意紧扣话题，适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。[写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题，强调幸福的重要性； 第二步，详细讲述曾经发生过的令我感到幸福的事情； 第三步，写出我的感受和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①be afraid to do害怕做某事 ②make up one’s mind下定决心 ③be in trouble处于麻烦之中 [高分句型] ①In fact, happiness is always around you if you put your heart into it.（if引导条件状语从句） ②Remember we’ll be always beside you when you need help.（when引导时间状语从句） 12．范文： Say Thanks to My Teacher I really want to express thanks to my English teacher, Miss Wang! She’s so smart and fair and friendly. She’s got big eyes and long dark hair. I enjoy her each lesson every day. With her kindness, she gets my attention. Every day she’s planting a seed, helping all of us. I still remember the day when I had a low mark in English, I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at. Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries. She’s a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future. I’ll write a poem for her to show all my thanks. I’ll let everyone know she’s great and I’m grateful to have her as my teacher． 【写作解析】 [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重 点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者最想感激的人； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。具体讲述作者最感激的英语王老师对作者的帮助； 第三步，书写结语。总结作者对王老师的感激之情。[亮点词汇] ①be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事 ②hide away from sb. 躲避 ③spend time (in) doing sth. 花时间做某事 ④help with sth. 帮助做某事 [高分句型] ①I still remember the day when I had a low mark in English, I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at. (定语从句；because引导原因状语从句) ②Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries. (含有that的宾语从句) ③She’s a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future. (定语从句；并列句)