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02.介绍信(影视与文化)
写作类型分析
在初中英语应用文写作中,介绍类信函是一个重要的写作类型,它通常用于向他人介
绍、推荐或分享某个特定的主题或事物,而在涉及影视文化时,这类信函便成了分享观影
体验、推荐影视作品或讨论影视文化现象的绝佳方式。在初中英语学习阶段,撰写一封影
视文化介绍信函不仅是一个展示语言运用能力的好机会,也是传递个人见解和情感的方式。
1.写作特征
目的明确:介绍类信函的主要目的是向读者推荐或介绍某部影视作品,因此开篇通常
会直接点明写信的意图。
内容具体:信函中会详细描述影视作品的情节、角色、主题、视觉效果、音乐等方面,
以便读者能够全面了解作品。
语言生动:为了吸引读者的兴趣,作者会使用生动的词汇和形象的比喻来描述影视作
品中的精彩片段或感人瞬间。
情感投入:作者通常会表达自己对影视作品的感受和评价,以激发读者的共鸣。
2.写作技巧
(1)开头问候与引入
开始时,用亲切友好的语气问候收件人,如“Dear[Friend'sName],”或“Hi[Friend's
Name],”。简短介绍写信的目的,比如“I'mwritingtosharewithyouamoviethathasrecently
captivatedme.”。
(2)电影基本信息
明确指出电影的名称、类型(如动画、科幻、历史剧等)和导演(如果知名)。简要
提及电影的上映时间或你观看的时间,为接下来的内容铺垫。
(3)情节概述
用简洁明了的语言概述电影的主要情节,避免剧透关键转折点或结局。强调电影中的
一两个亮点或吸引你的特定场景。
(4)文化元素分析
深入探讨电影中的文化元素,如地域特色、历史背景、传统习俗、服饰、音乐等。解
释这些文化元素如何丰富电影内容,以及它们对故事发展的影响。
(4)个人感受与见解
分享你观看电影后的个人感受,可以是情感上的触动、思想上的启发或视觉上的震撼。提及电影给你带来的启示或教训,以及它如何与你的生活或价值观产生共鸣。
(5)邀请与结尾
邀请收件人观看这部电影,可以提出一个具体的观影计划或建议。用积极、友好的语
气结束信函,如“I'mlookingforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonit!”或“Ihopeyou'llenjoy
itasmuchasIdid!”。
(6)语言与风格
使用清晰、准确的词汇和语法,确保信函易于理解。保持语气亲切、自然,避免过于
正式或生硬。可以适当使用比喻、拟人等修辞手法,使信函更加生动有趣。
【范文示例1:推荐信】
DearTom,
Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell!Irecentlywatched"TheSecretLifeofPets"andcouldn't
waittoshareit.
It'sananimatedcomedyaboutMax,aterrierwhoseworldchangeswhenKatiebringshome
Duke.Themovieshowspets'liveswhenownersaren'taround,withvibrantanimationandfunny,
touchinginteractions.MyfavoritesceneiswhenMaxandDukejoinagroupofabandonedpets,
highlightingfriendshipandacceptance.It'ssuitableforallagesandmightchangehowyousee
yourownpets!
Giveitatryandletmeknowwhatyouthink.
Yours,
LiHua
【范文示例2:邀请函】
DearMatt,
I'mexcitedtoinviteyoutoamovienightatmyhousethisSaturday!
We'llwatch"Wonder,"aheartwarmingdramaaboutaboywithafacialdifference.Thefilm
startsat7:00PM,socomeearlyforsnacks.We'llcozyupwithblanketsandpillows."Wonder"
teacheskindness,acceptance,andempathy.Afterthemovie,let'schataboutwhatwelearned.
Pleasetellmewhetheryoucangowithme bythisFriday.Ican'twaittosharethis
specialeveningwithyou!
Yours,
LiHua
【范文示例3:介绍信】DearSam,
Iamsogladtowritetoyou!Iwanttoshareafilmthat'smorethanjustentertainment—it's
aculturaltreasure.
"Mulan"blendsChinesefolklore,history,andthemesofcourage,loyalty,andself-discovery.
It'saboutagirlwhotakesherfather'splaceinthearmyandembarksonajourneythattestsher
spirit.Thefilm'svisualsarestunning,withbeautifullandscapesandvibrantcolors.What's
fascinatingisitsdeepconnectiontoChineseculture,withelementslikedragonsandtraditional
values."Mulan"showsthattruebraveryisaboutinnercourageandstandingupforwhatyou
believein.It'sastorythattranscendsgenerationsandcultures.
Wanttowatchittogether?Let'ssetadate!I'mexcitedtosharethiscinematicgemwithyou.
Yours,
LiHua
词句应用分析
“亮点”的表达方式
▲词汇选择
(1)使用高级词汇替代常见词汇,如用individuals替代people,表达“人”时更加正
式和高级;用aspect替代side,在表达“方面”时更为精确。
(2)使用强调词汇加强语气,例如,extremely、exceedingly等,这些词汇能够使表达
更加生动有力,例如,Heisextremelytalented.(他非常有才华。)。
▲短语运用
(1)采用具有文化内涵的短语,例如,peoplefromallwalksoflife表达“各行各业的
人”,这样的短语能够展现作者的文化素养和词汇积累。
(2)使用固定短语提升文章的流畅度和专业性,例如,attachimportanceto(重视)、
makeuseof(利用)等,这些短语结构紧凑,表达准确。
▲句式选用
(1)强调句,例如,“Itis…that…”结构,可以突出文章的重点,例如,Itisthe
teamworkthatledtooursuccess.(是团队合作导致了我们的成功。)。
(2)对比句,例如,“ComparedwithA,Bismore…”结构,通过对比来突出某一事
物的特点或优势,例如,Comparedwithlastyear,thisyear'ssalesaremorepromising.(与去
年相比,今年的销售额更有前景。)。(3)复合句,例如,“notonly…,butalso…”结构,能够表达复杂的思想,使文章更
加有层次和深度,例如,Heisnotonlytalented,butalsohardworking.(他不仅有才华,而且
工作努力。)。
【范文示例】
DearBeth,
Yourwrotetometoaskmetorecommendamovie.Ihavetotellyou,"Eclipseofthe
Heart"isabsolutelyincredible!
It'snotjustthestunningvisualsthatmakethismoviesospecial–it'sthestorythatreally
grabsyou.Thedirectordidanamazingjobshowingthedifferencebetweenthemaincharacter's
toughpastandthehopethatslowlyshinesthrough.Youcanreallyfeeltheemotions!Theactors
didanoutstandingjob,too,buttheleadactressstealstheshowwithherintenseperformance.She
bringssomuchfeelingtoherrole!
Alotofmoviesarejustexcitingforaminute,but"EclipseoftheHeart"isdifferent.Itdives
deepintowhatmakespeopletickandstayswithyoulongafterit'sover.Trustme,youwon't
forgetthisone.It'satruecinematicgemthatyousimplycan'tmiss!
Yours,
LiHua
【提升练习】
1.假如你是来自于英国的Linda,现在在湖南学习,请你给在英国的妈妈写一封信,
介绍一下你在中国新结交的好朋友Li Hua。
内容包括:
1. Li Hua比我文静,头发比我长,她对我很友善,常常帮助我学汉语。
2. 我们俩都喜欢打篮球,她比我打得好,我们至少一周打两次。
3. 上周末,天气晴朗,上午我们去爬山了。晚上,我们去看了电影《花木兰》。我对这部
电影的感受是……
要求:
1. 字迹工整,书写规范,语句通顺,注意单词的大小写和标点符号等;
2. 70词左右,可适当增加细节和要点,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear mother,
How is everything going? Now I am having fun studying in Hunan. Here I make a goodfriend.
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Yours,
Linda
2.假如你是Jack的笔友Peter,写信询问你喜欢的电影类型,请根据以下信息写封
回信。
种
喜剧片 动作片 卡通片
类
描
最流行 动作片更令人激动 最令人放松
述
其 上周看过,不介意看喜剧 一个月看一次,喜欢 想明天去看,最喜欢
他 片 看 看
要求:
1、文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息
2、不少于70词,所给开头不计入总词数
Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m going to share my favorite kinds of movies with you.
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3.假如你是李华,现在你有两张《长津湖》的电影票。你的同学Linda 对这部电影很
感兴趣,你想邀请她一起观看。请你根据下面的信息提示给她写一封英文邀请信。
提示:
1. 电影名称:The Battle at Lake Changjin
2. 观看时间:这周六下午4:30
3. 观看地点:Bubugao Theater
4. 观看理由:讲述中国历史的一次战役故事,有教育意义,令人愉快
要求:
1. 包含表格所提供的所有信息;
2. 语法正确、上下文连贯,可适当补充;
3. 60 词左右,可适当发挥;开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:battle 战役
Dear Linda,
I know you like watching movies.
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Yours,
Li Hua
4.根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。
假如你是李华,你参加了学校年度社团招新活动并决定参加电影俱乐部。你希望好朋
友交换生Tom能和你一起参加这个俱乐部。请给Tom写一封信,简单介绍电影俱乐部的活
动时间和地点、活动内容,以及你希望他参加电影俱乐部的原因。
提示词语:
movie club, watch movies, discuss, meaningful
提示问题:
1.When and where do you attend the club?
2.What do you do in the movie club?
3.Why do you want Tom to join the club?
Dear Tom,
I am writing to tell you something about the movie
club.___________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
5.假如你是来自美国的交换生David,请给你在美国的祖母写一封信!介绍一下你
在中国交的好朋友Wang Lin。
Appearance(外
高个子,短直发
貌)
Personality(性
比我更外向、更风趣
格)
①我们俩都喜欢运动,我们每天放学后打篮球。
②.我们都喜欢看动作片电影。Wang Lin最喜欢看新闻,不喜欢肥皂
Other information
剧,(至少一条理由)
(其他信息)
③上周日,Wang Lin 带我去Town Cinema 看电影,影片很精彩。
我觉得这是镇上最好的一家影院,有最舒适的座位和最佳的音效。
注意:1. 信的内容必须包含表格中的所有信息,并适当增加细节。2. 开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数。
3. 词数: 80 词左右。
Dear grandma,
How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend, Wang
Lin.______________
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
David
6.2022年岁末,电影《阿凡达·水之道》上映,场景从森林转向了海洋,电影中既
能看到庄子的鲲鹏现世,又能感受到老子的上善若水,足见中国文化影响力之深远。假如
你是李华,你校将举办中国传统文化展(The Traditional Chinese Culture Fair)。请你发邮件
给外教Mr. Black,邀请他参加。
参考要点:1.时间和地点:周日下午2:30―5:30,学校艺术中心;
2.展会宗旨:通过参观展品、学习剪纸和欣赏关于传统节日的英文演讲以及精彩的戏剧表
演,让更多人了解中国优秀的传统文化;
3.展出内容:古诗词相关书籍、名家书法作品图片、剪纸、汉服等。写作要求:1.100-120词。
2.文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校名称,
Dear Mr. Black,
How is everything going? I’m honored and pleased to hear that you are very interested in
the traditional Chinese culture.
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Yours,
Li Hua
7.假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Mike给你写了一封电子邮件,向你询问了一些问
题,希望你和他谈谈有关电影的话题,请浏览他的邮件后,给他回一封邮件。
注意事项:
(1)词数80 左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
(2)回复Mike 的问题,也可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mike,
Glad to get your email. Everything goes well.
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.假如你是李华,你的笔友Lucy写邮件询问你如何缓解学习压力,对音乐和电影有
何偏好,请根据表格内容,写一封邮件给她。
在上学前和放学后经常听一些音乐令自己放松;喜欢听歌词优美的歌
听音乐
曲。
看电影 在周末,看一些有意义的电影。
和朋友聊
和朋友聊天并说出烦恼。
天
要求:
1. 参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数80-100 左右。(作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。)
Dear Lucy,
How are you these days?
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.假如你是李平,请根据以下《流浪地球》的电影海报给外教 Maggie写一封邮件,
简单介绍该电影的主要剧情,并询问她是否愿意在本星期六下午跟你一起去观看4:30场的
电影。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 文章必须要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4. 条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
Dear Maggie,
I hear that a new film is on these
days.__________________________________________________________________________
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Hope to see you then.
Sincerely,
Li Ping
10.假如你是王红,在今天的班会上,同学们讨论了“我最喜爱的电影”,并针对在
电影院里,如何做一个文明的(well-mannered) 中学生交流了想法。你的班主任李老师对
班会的内容很感兴趣,请你根据以下内容,给李老师写一封电子邮件。
写作要点:
1. 所有同学都参加了今天的班会。
2. 同学们最喜爱的电影:
(1)刘平:喜剧片
(2)周雷:功夫片
3. 说一说在电影院里,如何做一个文明的(well-mannered) 中学生。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和校名;
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰;
4. 至少80词。
Dear Mr. Li,
How is everything going?
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hong
11.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom 想了解中国的卡通电影,同时他对孙悟空特
别感兴趣。请你根据以下提示,给Tom 回一封电子邮件。内容包括:
1.中国卡通电影的历史(在20 世纪60 年代和80 年代出现了很多好的卡通电影)。《大
闹天宫》是最为著名的一部;
2.介绍孙悟空:他是《西游记》的主要人物之一;他有一根神奇的棍子;他会七十二变;
……(请自己补充一点)
3. 你对当下中国卡通电影的评价。
提示词汇:卡通电影:animated film;《西游记》Journey to the West;《大闹天宫》The
Monkey King
Dear Tom,
I am glad that you are interested in China’s animated films.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12.电影《新喜剧之王》在中国火热上映。影片讲述了当了十几年的龙套的小镇大龄女青年如梦努力追逐演员梦想的故事。你的笔友 Demon观看后, 印象深刻, 给你写了一封
邮件。请你根据邮件内容结合你的情况, 用英语回复。
To: LiHua@China.com
From: Demon@America.com
Subject: Your life and dream
Dear Li Hua,
How are you? I hope you are well. I have watched a movie called The New King of
Comedy. I am deeply moved by those characters in the film who never give up their dreams. As
my Chinese pen pal, I'd like to know something about you. Would you please tell me the
following things?
What are your hobbies? Which of them do you like best and why?
Who do you admire most and what do you think of him/her?
What do you want to be when you grow up?
What do you think dream is?
Please write back and tell me everything.
Best wishes,
Demon
注意:1.词数90左右, 开头和结尾已经写好, 不计入总词数;
2.回复必须包括所有要点, 可适当发挥, 使短文连贯、通顺;
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Demon,
I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well.
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Please write to me and tell me your view.
Yours,Li Hua
13.假如你是九年级的李华,为了做好"校园电影节"(Campus Movie Festival)的准
备工作,英语俱乐部的外教Mr.Green安排你做了一项关于"你喜欢的电影种类"的调查.请
你把调查的结果,以电子邮件的形式发送给Mr.Green,并表达同学们对电影节的期待.
写作要点:
1.同学们都积极地表达了自己的观点。
2.介绍调查结果:
(1)大多数同学喜欢喜剧片。
(2)20%的同学喜欢功夫片。
(3)几个同学喜欢纪录片。
3.谈一谈你喜欢的电影种类并说明喜欢它们的原因。
写作要求:
1.不得使用真实姓名、地点和班级、学校名。
2.适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词.
Dear Mr.Green,
I made a survey on "Your favourite movie" around our school._____________________.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1.
Dear mother,
How is everything going? Now I am having fun studying in Hunan. Here I make a good
friend, Li Hua. She is quieter than me and has longer hair. She is very kind to me and often helpsme with my Chinese.
We both like playing basketball, but she plays better than me. We play at least twice a week.
Last weekend, the weather was sunny. In the morning, we went climbing. In the evening, we
watched the movie “Mulan”. I think it’s an exciting and inspiring movie. It tells us that girls can
also be brave and strong.
I miss you very much and hope everything is fine with you.
Yours,
Linda
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
②时态:主要使用“一般现在时”,描述上周末的活动时使用“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,包括Li Hua的外貌特征、性格、对我的帮助、共同爱好、上周
末的活动等,考生需围绕这些要点进行描述,注意适当增加细节,使内容更加丰富和连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开头简短问候母亲并介绍自己现在的学习情况,引出新朋友Li
Hua;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。详细描述Li Hua的外貌特征,性格,她对我的帮助,我们的
共同爱好,以及上周末我们一起做的活动,并表达自己对电影的感受;
第三步,书写结语。表达对母亲的思念和希望她一切安好的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①quieter than 比……更安静
②be kind to 对……友好
③play better 玩得更好
④exciting and inspiring 激动人心且鼓舞人心的
⑤miss 思念
[高分句型]
①She is very kind to me and often helps me with my Chinese.(and连接两个并列的句子,结
构清晰)
②I think it’s an exciting and inspiring movie.(宾语从句)
③It tells us that girls can also be brave and strong.(宾语从句)
2.Dear Peter,
How’s it going? I’m going to share my favorite kinds of movies with you. I think
comedies are the most popular movies. I don’t mind them. Last week I watched a comedy. I like
action movies better than comedies. I think they’re more exciting than comedy. I watch them once
a month. But I like cartoons best. I think they’re the most relaxing. I want to watch them
tomorrow.
What about you? please write to me soon.
Yours,
Jack
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,引出本文主题;
第二步,介绍自己喜欢的电影类型;
第三步,询问对方的情况。
[亮点词汇]
①once a month一个月一次
②want to do sth想要做某事
③write to sb给某人写信
[高分句型]
①I think comedies are the most popular movies.(宾语从句)
3.
Dear Linda
I know you like watching movies. And I’m sure you would like to see this movie The Battle
at Lake Changjin. The movie will be on at the Bubugao Theater, at half past four this Saturday
afternoon. It mainly describes about a battle story of Chinese history. It’s such an educational one.
I think we can find it enjoyable.
I have two tickets and I’d like to invite you to watch the movie with me. If you are interested
in it, please let me know.Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇应用文;
时态:时态主要用“一般现在时”;
提示:要求包含所有提示内容,注意书信的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步,具体阐述电影的目的、时间、地点以及理由;
第二步,阐述写这封信的目的,发出邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①such an educational one(such修饰名词词组)
②be sure确定
[高分句型]
①And I’m sure you would like to see this movie The Battle at Lake Changjin.(宾语从句)
②I think we can find it enjoyable.(宾语从句)
③If you are interested in it, please let me know.(条件状语从句)
4.
Dear Tom,
I am writing to invite you to our movie club. Our movie club is held in the art hall of our
school from 6: 00 to 9: 00 every Friday evening. In our club, we always watch movies together,
and the movies include many types, just like scared, funny, love, movement, criminal. We believe
you would find your favourite movies in this club. Recently, our club has various films like
Transformer II, The Iron Man on the list. We all get very excited and we are waiting anxiously
for the days when they’ll be put on, because we are all interested in science fiction films.
I know you like watching these movies. So I want to invite you to our movie club. We hope
to see you, so we can all enjoy these movies together. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;③提示:根据提示材料介绍电影俱乐部的活动时间和地点、活动内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出本文主题,想告诉汤姆一些关于电影俱乐部的事情。
第二步,介绍俱乐部活动时间和地点、活动内容。
第三步,介绍希望他参加电影俱乐部的原因。
[亮点词汇]
① put on 上演
② be interested in 对……感兴趣
③ want to do sth 想要做某事
[高分句型]
① We believe you would find your favourite movies in this club(that引导的宾语从句,that已
省略)
② So I want to invite you to our movie club.(动词不定式作宾补)
5.
Dear grandma,
How is everything going? Now I am studying in China. I have a good friend, Wang Lin.
She is a tall girl with short straight hair. She is more outgoing and more interesting than me. Both
of us like sports. We play basketball after school. We both like action movies. Wang Lin is more
interested in watching news, because she thinks news is educational. However, she doesn’t like
soap operas. She thinks they are really boring.
Last Sunday, Wang Lin took me to Town Cinema. We watched a movie called Toy Story. It
was fantastic. I believe that is the best movie theater in town. It has the most comfortable seats and
the best sound.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
David
1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求介绍自
己的好朋友王琳的外貌和性格;讲述她的兴趣爱好,她和自己的共同点;讲述二人去看电
影的经历;最后讲述自己对电影院的看法。
2.写作指导:本文用第三人称来写作,时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主,讲述自己
朋友的外貌性格和喜好,介绍二人的共同爱好和一起看电影的经历,叙述完整,条理清晰。6.
Dear Mr. Black,
How is everything going? I’m honored and pleased to hear that you are very interested in the
traditional Chinese culture.
I am writing to invite you to attend the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair which will be held in
our school’s art center from 2:30 p.m. to 5:30 p.m. this Sunday. The fair aims to help more people
understand the rich and excellent traditional Chinese culture through a series of activities
including visiting exhibits, learning paper-cutting and enjoying English speeches about traditional
Chinese festivals, as well as fascinating drama performances.
At the fair, you will find various items on display, such as books on ancient Chinese poetry,
pictures of famous calligraphy works, paper-cutting art, and Hanfu clothing. I believe you will
enjoy this cultural journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是邮件;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一
阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸听到你对中国传统文化非常感兴趣。”来引出重
点介绍的内容(已给出);
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——举办的时间和地点、展会宗旨和展
出内容等均要一一阐述;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
②on display展出
[高分句型]
①I believe you will enjoy this cultural journey. (宾语从句)
②I am writing to invite you to attend the Traditional Chinese Culture Fair which will be held inour school’s art center from 2:30 p.m. to 5:30 p.m. this Sunday. (定语从句)
7.
Dear Mike,
Glad to get your email. Everything goes well.
I usually go to the movies once a month. My favorite theater is the Grand Cinema because
it has comfortable seats and great sound. I often watch movies with my friends or family. During
the National Day holiday, I watched Avatar. It’s a science fiction film about Pandora and the
Na’vi people. I love it because of its stunning visual effects and engaging story. Looking forward
to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,依据要点,介绍去看电影的相关问题;
第二步,书写总结,期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①once a month一月一次
②science fiction film科幻电影
③engaging迷人的
[高分句型]
My favorite theater is the Grand Cinema because it has comfortable seats and great sound.(原因
状语从句)
8.
Dear Lucy,
How are you these days? I’m writing to tell you how I deal with study pressure and what kind
of music and movies I like.
To relax, I often listen to music before and after school. It helps me feel calm. I really enjoy
songs with nice lyrics. On weekends, I watch movies that are meaningful. They’re not just for fun,but also help me think. Talking to my friends also helps. We share our problems and give each
other advice. It makes me feel less stressed. Music and movies are great ways to take my mind off
things and make me happy. They help me forget about stress and focus on positive things.
I hope these tips can help you too. I’m looking forward to hearing from
you.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作方向已给出,写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容,注意表述清晰,逻辑连贯,做
到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体说明要写邮件的目的;
第二步,具体分享了缓解压力的方法;
第三步,写出对朋友的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②help sb. do sth.帮助某人做某事
③make sb. do sth.让某人干某事
④focus on专注
⑤look forward to注意
[高分句型]
①On weekends, I watch movies that are meaningful. (that引导的定语从句)
②They’re not just for fun, but also help me think. (not just…but also…不仅……而且……)
9.
Dear Maggie,
I hear that a new film is on these days. It’s called “The Wandering Earth”. This movie is
based on a popular Chinese science fiction novel and it tells the story of a future where the Sun is
dying, and humans have to build giant engines to move the Earth out of the solar system to find anew home. It’s an epic space adventure with stunning special effects and a thrilling storyline. In
order to save our home, our country works together with other countries. I am wondering if you
will be interested in watching this movie with me this Saturday afternoon. The 4:30 show seems to
be a good time. Let me know if you’re available and if you’d like to join me.
Hope to see you then.
Sincerely,
Li Ping
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作方向已给出,写作时注意不要遗漏提示内容,注意表述清晰,逻辑连贯,做
到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍电影的主要剧情;
第二步,说明去看电影的时间以及发出一起去看电影的诚挚邀请;
第三步,表达一起去看电影的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be called被叫作
②in order to do sth.为了做某事
③be interested in doing sth.有兴趣做某事
④hope to do sth.希望做某事
[高分句型]
①In order to save our home, our country works together with other countries.(in order to do sth.
为了做某事)
② Let me know if you’re available and if you’d like to join me.(if引导的宾语从句)
10.
Dear Mr. Li,
How is everything going? Now let me introduce the class meeting of today to you.
All the students took part in the class meeting. The topic we discussed was “My favorite
movie”. Liu Ping likes watching comedies because they make him feel relaxed. Zhou Lei likes
kung fu movies because he thinks that they are very exciting. We also exchanged the ideas abouthow to be a well-mannered middle school student in the cinema. I think we should follow the rules
in the cinema. People can’t talk loudly or talk on the phone while watching a movie. We should
keep the cinema clean as well. The above are all about the class meeting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Hong
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:以“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点中所提及到的班会内容——所有同学
参加了班会、同学们喜欢的电影及如何在电影院里做一个文明的中学生,可适当添加细节,
完善邮件内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接表明邮件主题。在简单的问候后,直接表明邮件主题为“介绍今天班会内
容”;
第二步,具体阐述班会内容。就“参加班会的人员”、“班会的讨论主题及结果”、“在
电影院里,如何做一个文明的中学生的建议”作出详细说明;
第三步,书写结语。表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
① take part in 参加
② make sb. feel+形容词使某人感到……
③ as well 也
[高分句型]
① Zhou Lei likes kung fu movies because he thinks that they are very exciting.(because引导原
因状语从句,及that引导宾语从句)
② We also exchanged the ideas about how to be a well-mannered middle school student in the
cinema.(“疑问词+to do sth.”作宾语)
11.参考范文:
Dear Tom,
I am glad that you are interested in China’s animated films. As we all know, China’s
animated films have a long history. In the 1960s and 1980s, there were many good animated films.Monkey King is one of the main characters in Journey to the West. He has a magic stick
which can be put into his ears. In addition, he can also turn himself into seventy-two different
images. What’s more, he is so confident and he never gives up easily when he faces difficulties.
In summary, China’s animated films are becoming better and better. I hope you will have
chances to enjoy more Chinese films.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份给Tom写信,为他介绍中国卡通电影的情
况。题目中给出了具体的写作内容,包括对卡通电影《大闹天宫》及主要人物孙悟空的介
绍以及对中国动画电影的评价等,学生们可以此为提纲,增加更多的细节信息,然后用正
确的英语表达出来。
2.写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态叙述,注意谓
语动词的正确形式。注意将题目中给出的提示内容都包括在文章中,不要遗漏要点。英语
句式结构和汉语的表达习惯是不同的,不要逐词翻译,可以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列
句、复合句和其他句式,提升作文档次。同时注意上下文意的衔接,使文章表达流畅,意
思连贯。
12.
Dear Demon,
I'm glad that you like the film. Indeed, I have learned a lot from it as well.
I have many hobbies, such as playing basketball, singing and reading. Among them, I like
playing basketball best because it brings me much happiness. Also, it can make me stronger and
healthier.
I admire Spud Webb most. He is one of the greatest basketball players in the world. He is a
person who never gives up his dream. That’s why I want to be a basketball player like him. I think
dream is just like a bridge that connects us with the future. We can realize our dreams as long as
we work hard.
Please write to me and tell me your view.
Yours,
Li Hua
题干解读:这是一篇书信作文,根据所给的材料内容可知文章主要用一般现在时,用第一
人称和第三人称。首先要注意书信格式,对来信中的问题进行答复,同时在开始动笔写作时,要注意与已经所给的开头和结尾衔接,保持文章的连贯性,层次要清楚,要点需分明。
点评:考生自己写的部分中,第一段主要讲述爱好及原因,第二段主要讲述最崇拜的人,
对他的看法以及理想,最后谈及对梦想的理解,题目所要求的要点以及问题全部包含在内,
并且行文连贯,组织合理,词汇和句型比较多样。
高分亮点:
短语:one of+可数名词复数;give up;realize one’s dream;as long as;work hard。
句型:定语从句;状语从句;That’s why…;I think dream is just like a bridge that connects us
with the future.
13.
Dear Mr. Green,
I made a survey on "Your favourite movie" around our school. The students expressed their
opinions positively. Different people have different opinions.(点题)
Most students like comedies because they think they will make them relax.【高分句型一】
20% of students like kung fu movies because they are exciting. Only a few students like
documentaries because most of the students think they are boring. (调查结果)I like
educational movies, such as cartoons. Although cartoons look simple, they are meaningful and can
teach people how to face difficulties.【高分句型二】(我喜欢的电影及原因)
Yours,
Li Hua
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。分别描述了调查的结果,及介绍了我喜欢的电影类型
和原因。
2.点评:本文主要采用的是第三人称,时态采用的是一般现在时。逻辑性强,条理清楚,
语句表达通顺。
3.高分亮点:
短语:most of “大多数”;make sb+形容词,“使某人……”;such as “例如”。
句型:Most students like comedies because they think they will make them relax句中because引
导原因状语从句。Although cartoons look simple, they are meaningful and can teach people how
to face difficulties句中although引导让步状语从句。